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At 10/14/09 12:56 AM, Shishizurui wrote: Thanks I also noticed it a bit with the upper arms size and the length wasn't proportional to the forearm. i changed the feet fixed a lil with the face shape and its looking way better!

i can't wait to refine it some more tomorow

probly more face issues. and body language.

Right foot has something wrong with it, you might want to fix that . If you dont know what i mean pay close attention to it and stand on that pose and you will see what i mean .

At 10/14/09 01:20 AM, sumguy720 wrote:

At 10/13/09 11:32 PM, scriptfx wrote: I gues nobody likes it .

That's too bad. :(

I like your shading and composition. Overall this is a nice drawing. A couple things strike me as strange, though. It seems like her rib cage is showing a little too much... she's not thin enough that we would be able to see it that clearly, and her bowstring is slacked. Why is it slacked if it's strung?! SHE SHOULD BE BATTLE READY

Otherwise everything looks really nice-- a little proportion obscurities here and there, but I'll let someone comment on that who actually knows what they're talking about.

Keep up the good work.

Yeah i've notice that for a little while now lol, i rushed the sketch too much that wasnt really paying attention. But defenetly i see what you mean ima try to fix those mistakes, Thats why i like posting stuff up since people critiques do help a lot Thanks for the time.Ima restart that portion of that sketch to fix those area probably ..

ok im guessing ur using painter or some sort of program around that area correct ?
well first always start of a sketch before heading on to painting a full drawing or what ever your doing.
Make sure to use old resources with shapes And basic color foundation,shading, light source, etc...
Im sure of it that you've been drawing for a little while, i can see that from the pic u posted up . So basically you wont need much but a lot of practice and patience, When i first started i was just like you Didnt know much, but time after time my skills kept improving. I did this with a lot of practice 5-8 hrs max almost everyday and each time i learned something new . Always remember to save your work, That way you can always go back and compare how much your skills have elevated . This helps you learn from all your mistakes and to see if you corrected them through your time of learning .
If you have access to a library or are able to buy book's buy books with art classes or books of great artist, You can really pick up great ideas and learned a lot from them also .
ok now with that said let me know what u need help on and maybe i can do a tutorial for you maybe that might help you .

I gues nobody likes it .

First pic u posted is reall dope looks like a great tattoo piece for someone . Well actually thats my favorite one.

some of these are really nice, is it ok if i give it a try ?

Random work of mine, i call it Sea hunting im not quite finish with it since im planning to add some sea monsters somewhere around there or maybe a giant squid destroying a ship behind her...

bigger version looks better so check my art portal . Oh and you can take a look at some of my other work also If interested .