At 6/3/09 12:37 AM, scottmale24 wrote:

At 6/3/09 12:23 AM, Little-Eise wrote: Jackson: retrieve arms from backpack.

You've already got arms, dipshit!

awesome, thanks

Must've torn off his sleeves to look more macho...

Second one!!

Just a few things I did since I got photoshop...First one is my first completed work...second one is a WIP, and then that's it...Not much, but eh...

More progress, started on a rough background, fixed his hand, tried to fix the chest area (not so good).

Not much of an opportunity to add his junk, unless I was to make it unrealistically large...His skin tone seems sort of at odds with the background, I think I'll work on that a bit.

Any more critique?

At 4/27/09 09:58 PM, Captain-Ben wrote:

At 4/27/09 09:29 PM, reality-monkey wrote: I just want some criticism, things I may be overlooking, anatomy off that I might be missing, things in a nutshell I'm not paying much attention to, but a few things first. I will polish it later, I will add hair later, I will do the background later, I will make the face better later, and I will do the spear later. Right now just focus on the guy (but if you have suggestions that could benefit me later on in the process, they wouldn't be overlooked, they would be appreciated). Thanks.

Also, ReNaeNae is a hell of a good mod...Fast anyway...

Man RM that is sick, since it's still rough i won't be to nit picky, but the shading in this fingers on the hand closest to us could be a little stronger, to make the foreshortening in his fingers a little more obvious. Also something seems off about his chest/neck area, i want to say his neck is a bit too thick but i really can't put my finger on it, i think it's that the bottom of the neck needs to curve inwards not outwords. Also like you said he's a naked guy, so give him some manhood!

Don't be shy

Feel free to be quite nit picky, worse case scenario you spot things I already see and plan on fixing, it's the stuff I don't see that would benefit me...I mean you don't have to note a brush stroke out of line, but things you think may be a flaw but have doubts about it, put it down anyway because it could be a flaw I overlooked. These notes were useful and helped me out a bit, so if you had more in mind put them down...I added a penor (fairly hidden between the legs, requires you to be looking for penor to really see it) Worked with the chest and neck, as well as the hand...Find anything else stick it on here please.

I just want some criticism, things I may be overlooking, anatomy off that I might be missing, things in a nutshell I'm not paying much attention to, but a few things first. I will polish it later, I will add hair later, I will do the background later, I will make the face better later, and I will do the spear later. Right now just focus on the guy (but if you have suggestions that could benefit me later on in the process, they wouldn't be overlooked, they would be appreciated). Thanks.

Also, ReNaeNae is a hell of a good mod...Fast anyway...

The feet are off, so is the bottle's shadow and tons of other little things that add up to something that doesn't feel quite correct...I'm trying to fix that with the painting, but I'm not as good at painting as I'd like...especially skin...

My scanner isn't hooked up to my computer, so scanning isn't as easy as just popping in a picture, I have to go to people with working scanners...And I do have more stuff...it's in my post history...older, less good, and I look back on the comments sometimes and think "why did I even bother saying things in this forum" But I'm not posting all that stuff again (it's deleted, and I don't want to make work for myself.)

And responded really fast...

It's a picture.

Sorta kinda going to be finished I hope...The basic 4 are there, and there are 3 victims/enemies.

At 9/24/08 09:45 PM, El-Presidente wrote: R-M, nice to see you back up on Newgrounds. I don't know why I was looking through our stuff to find that link of the helicopter you did a while back, but it's all good, I'll find it some other time. Looks like you're drawings have gotten even better, we'll have to finish up some of those game ideas sometime.

I would if I could even finish some of my own damn ideas...this next one has alot of work put into it (I have a timeline and a whole story and everything) so I'm hoping this one gets done...speaking of which, I have to go work on it now...

R-M

At 9/24/08 08:51 PM, DooDooMeaT wrote:

At 9/24/08 07:49 PM, reality-monkey wrote: New friend...shiny headed blender raped weird coated bald man...Whiff glasses!

R-M

The shading is great but the face needs some work...

It was actually a pick up of a much older drawing that I found floating on my desktop...I do better faces now, but I liked his head shape too much to mess with it...

R-M

New friend...shiny headed blender raped weird coated bald man...Whiff glasses!

R-M

At 9/24/08 07:31 AM, Lare wrote: Awesome. Needs a little coloring though...

Outta crayons...
R-M

I have spent my free time maturing and drawing...thus I no longer feel the need to randomly spam anything I make on this site...So any picture I leave her from here on out, odds are, that I made it just for posting here... (for fun or practice or whatever my reasons are).

I leave you with angry dual scythe man...(you insulted his sister, kiss and make up now while your head is still yours).

R-M (ya, I sign my posts now, what of it?)

Go make a half million more...come back with your shiny new skills, scanner, not stupid picture subject, good paper...

Other than all of those things, it's good.

At 8/11/08 12:44 AM, SirSeraphdeFallen wrote: That looks pretty good. I can understand the chin comment, there is a bit of confusion at the neck junction. other than that it is pretty decent. any plans to color?

Nope.

At 8/10/08 09:09 PM, thedo12 wrote: looks great!

although I may not be in any position to critiqe the underside of the chin looks a little weird

That's called a neck...and yes it is...still trying to work on stuff like that, but the face is pretty much done...

Haven't been here for a while (quite frankly, I bought a sketchbook, decided to hate scanners {especially my broken one} and haven't been drawing on the cp much)

This is the latest I made...No reference or anything, collaborated with a friend a bit, this is my product...Not bad

Oooh...looks nice...some of the shading needs work, but overall the picture is very nice.

Apparently the reasonn I stopped posting here, is if I post something incomplete...it stays that way...

Newgrounds kills my inspiration if I post my own stuff!! I'll start only posting finished stuff (If I start posting at all again...not really recent, but I will eventually...

At 7/1/08 01:04 AM, Shinryudan wrote: Looking very awesome, although the fingers on the left hand seems quite bigger then i thought they would be, but still very kickass, love the expression/warcry

That's cause they are further forward (things get bigger as they get closer) I would show that by the arm shadow over his face, and the blurriness that comes.

AAAH!! Fuzzy!! Resize. FUCK!! Quality problems...file too big...TWEAK!! Better...(sorta)

Started as ugly man...ended up a dwarf...And I know, my stuff is usually unfinished but that's because I don't intend to finish them when I start, I start to get some particular peice of information or practice...For this guy I was practicing wrinkles, 'staches, and fugly toothes...I may finish this guy (cause he's just s'damn handsome I feel he should be completed)...COMMENTS! CRITIQUE! DONATIONS! I take em all...

You may have already seen fugly here in another thread I posted in earlier...(forgot where, why, but it was less completed than he is now, I do know that...)

At 6/30/08 11:52 PM, UMREE wrote: umm... i think that you should study up a bit, read a book or two instead of practicing...

That's like giving a toddler a calculator and telling him to see how far it is to the sun, what he needs to do is work until the lines come out the way he wants them to. Once he can make good enough pictures he should look into research... So he needs practice, alot (no offense, just the truth) and don't go for cartoony right off the bat, work on realism, for long term success it is the best way to go...once you have a good grasp of all that you can start on choosing a style (and with all that experience you are getting, odds are you will choose your own style anyway) PRACTICE!! (you really don't have to put everything you make on here, cause you will just get more of the same comment until you substantially improve.

At 6/30/08 09:55 PM, VhsTapeclock wrote:

At 6/30/08 09:34 PM, ChillyCheese wrote:

At 6/30/08 09:28 PM, VhsTapeclock wrote:

At 6/30/08 09:05 PM, SpencerMann wrote: The background looks mediocre and the coloring on the line work that apparently isn't yours looks as if it took no effort at all.

Gee, thanks. -_-;
Then again, I suppose I never asked for constructive critisism...

If you don't want criticism, don't post shit on the forums, post it on DA.

I did.
And also, I do want critisim. I was pointing out that it was not helpful at all.

YOU DIDN'T EVEN DO THE LINEART. Which was the only decent (although I still didn't like it) thing about this pic...you really need to just leave...How difficult was that little paintbucket tool to use huh? Bet it was a huge problem wasn't it...

Well a certain amount of effort should be put in to criticize it...Did you look at it yourself? that water looks awful (I'm guessing it's water) there are no clouds in the sky, it just looks bad...

How evil are we talking here...like just kinda creepy, or more for that "cool" evil feel, or stuff so horrific you kinda have to not breathe for a moment when you see it...I can do children's parties too...

What program do you use? These are very nice...

At 6/30/08 01:43 AM, whosniffedme wrote:

At 6/30/08 01:39 AM, reality-monkey wrote:

At 6/30/08 01:37 AM, whosniffedme wrote: Ugh fine. Rid of this topic or what have you I don't care.
I guess asking for advise in an art forum is just an excuse for some assholes to throw the rules in your face.
No offense to you UMREE.

Oh shutup, you didn't draw a damn thing to be criticized, and we are throwing rules at your face because apparently when they are politely in front of you, you can't see them....they need to be closer to your face...

I wasn't asking for critique on a particular drawing. I was going to ask for advise for stenciling in general. The kind off asshole I'm talking about is perfectly portrayed by your reply. So if I may be so bold, just shut the fuck up and delete the topic already/

And you are the perfect resemblance of someone who thinks they are too good for the rules, and if the rules don't conform to them, then the rules are the problem, not their stupidity...It even says in the rules (which you would know if you read them) even if you are asking about a vague concept, you need an example pic. I'm not the one who needs to shut up here.