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Your not breaking any rules. Idk if your trying to go for abstract drawings or short of trying to stretch reality in a sense but if that's the case ignore my next suggestion. I think you should work on proportion and anatomy. Maybe you could do a clean sketch of someone so we could see? Most of these things look like 10-15 minute sketches in your sketch book. When I was in high school art classes my teacher preached on the subject of quick sketches from your mind and surroundings, but it's also nice to finish somethings up. Again if these are finished and are just the effect your going for disregard my comments.

Idk why people have so much trouble with hands. I have problems getting facial expressions and proportions right more than I do with hands. I'm waiting to see what he does with this piece.

He gave me 10 krones for it.

He paid you $1.65? lol

I'm really confused...lol. I've trying to think of a reaction to draw and post but the situation keeps changing lol.

At first I only seen the one oh her hand and then was like " ZOMG there's more of them!" lol

Redraws of art here on newgrounds isn't all that interesting. Yea they're good but not great. THe painting of the banksy graffiti on your wall looks good but like posted earlier finish it up. Also the venom drawings are good but try to clean them up. sketchy drawings are good but finished drawings are better.

Stairs
boy

This isn't the same pose as yours but it gives you an idea of the proportions you need.
Female Propotions

Also Here is a female head/face for those proportions.
Female face/head

Also those pictures can be rotated so you should have no problem with proportions.

The answer depends on one thing...sort of.

Do you have a Graphics tablet? If yes then you can use the brush or pencil tool which ever you like. If you don't and can't draw with a mouse worth a flip, then you can try the pen tool but (if your like me) it wont turn out good.

I usually just clean my sketch up on paper. Using a ruler and pen. Make your lines the way you want them in the final drawing. Then scan and get rid of the white background and voila you have line art.

The only major things I see wrong are her head and her chest. Idk what it is about her chest but it just doesnt look right. Her head is a little bit big even for cartoon standards Imo.

For a first time this is pretty good.

Did vero's bot always have hair on its chest like that? lol

Its ok :)
Here's my character during that scene. this will give a little more info about him.

I've been posting around on other peoples art threads so figured it was time I start one of my own to show some of my "attempts" at art.

I'm practicing my shading, perspective, and proportions right now.

Starting with a Hand...

The clouds look like they wanna pet the big teddy bear. lol These drawings are really nice. I really like the rabbit one. That ones sexy. :P

Sniper- THe scope looks really huge. Even in TF2 and cartoony art there is still proportion.
MJ- Its very basic lineart. Not much detail at all. Hope this person didnt pay you alot...
Pellet art- Anyone can do this stuff its rally not that interesting.

You should deffinately work on cleaning up your art. Shading, color, proportion. But you have a good start. And if your tracing, at least be honest about it...

White flag means surrender. Ashman surrendering to Glacier now?

At 6/15/10 01:17 AM, Ryajin-Geki wrote: I will wait for your response...

Dude I was seriously just drawing those same two first frames but with my character lol

As you can see I like cell cartoon shading :P lol

I get on my reaction to this in a few. :P

Nah I loaded it up in gimp and its two seperate layers. so its all good.

I just looked at the thread and the last request was 3 days ago and they weren't paying money. lol I'm sure there's a good chance yours will be seen/picked up.

He just making a suggestion before a mod comes along and moves it anyway. No reason to get sarcasm involved.

So this thread is still going?

If so this guy wants in. R-Assassin!

I shall make you an egg in a little while. :)

At 6/12/10 02:00 PM, Sephtis wrote: Have gum asked me to post here, and since my thread got locked cus I didn't see a rule ><.
Saved it to this PSD in gimp (which can't seem to open them :/ ) Little Sister PSD
Anyways heres little sister ;) I'll colour it myself as well at a later time.

Gimp doesn't use PSD file types it uses XCF.

How about checking out the rules?

I love to draw in pencil as well, but its always fun to get down and dirty and make a mess with pastels, chalk, paint whatever. Experiment have fun make a mess. Who cares if it's a masterpiece at first. As my art teacher use to say "gotta pull out the weeds to find the flowers." Just have fun with it.

No not a complete redraw silly goose. :P The stick guy is just a place holder. I plan on actually making the guy. No sticks here my friend.

Here's my WIP. Still got alot to do...I better get busy :P

Here is my first submission. Face was hand drawn and then scanned in. Let me know if anything is wrong with it.
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