The Enchanted Cave 2
Delve into a strange cave with a seemingly endless supply of treasure, strategically choos
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COMPLETE edition of the interactive "choose next panel" comic
4.09 / 5.00 12,195 ViewsAlso, here is the actual drawing. And I'm kinda running into artist's block, if anyone has any suggestions for the blank buildings, they would be much appreciated. And to explain the pic, we had to use different mediums, so it fades from value to color.
Ok, so I'm having some trouble with a perspective drawing that I'm making. I know how to actually draw the one point perspective, but this one figure is giving me trouble! Here's his outline, any suggestions on how I can make him look right without tracing?
At 4/4/08 06:02 PM, Maxxor wrote: The index finger is far too short on the first hand, the second one is good and the third one is.... fucked up.
About the third hand, you're missing knuckles! that's all. Other than that, good work on everything.
Love the sculpture! It's totally awesome! About the body on the board: the pecs are too low. <a>http://www.infovisual.info/03/008_en.
html<\a> I think you're trying to show sagginess, but they should still line up with the armpits. Also, the shoulder muscles are too big. Hope this helps a bit, though if it were my pic, i'd probably be too lazy to fix it. Maybe you could do it when you change the paint color... ;)
Hey, your work is pretty good, even if it doesn't receive much recognition. I especially like the pencil and paper stuff at the top of the second page! If you think your work is posed and unnatural, try just drawing people doing everyday things, just as sketches, doesn't have to be anything special. It might help you learn how people move normally.
Do something using perspective so I'm not the only dork in the world slaving over it's stupidness! Also, maybe something with a background, because everything you've done pretty much seems to be single figures. Might be something new to try, eh?
At 3/31/08 09:19 PM, kernalphage wrote: the last one's a bit... uneven.
that's it i can describe it as. the pants are wavier than folds should be, the shoulders don't match up... it't not bad, just scribbly.
Actually, I think it's quite fine for being a sketch. The shoulders shouldn't match up because the dude's standing at an angle. However, the legs do need a bit of work, i think they're too curved or something.
Maybe something more on the rest of the letters? The shading around the o really pops, but the other letters need something to break up the pretty much solid blue. It's looking good, though!