Thanks Frax, that's a big help :)
Here's a little constructive criticism is you wish to take it :)
This was put together by certain people who shall remain nameless at the moment :D You can choose to leave it as it is if you wish or if you don't have time, but following this would bump up the score a bit. Just read the bit that applies to you if you please, and remember we are just suggesting things that could be done, not saying your part isn't good enough.
Part1: Needs more movements instead of just one thing going round and a round and add a background because it's a little too plain.
Part2: Add more different scenes instead of one scene with some little extra to it. Again this parts needs more movements and change the black background. It should have more colorful schemes.
Part3: Good use of background in the first scene. The second scene should have a new bg with some shadings just like the same thing in the first scene. The robot is going up and down a little too fast slow him down a little bit.
Part4: The part where it says the cake is a lie and that the girl is holding a box the hand anatomy should be worked out better. A little rough drawings but that's it supposed to be (I think).
Part5: This part needs more movements or add a lipsynching to the woman. Maybe some good ol' fashioned filtered text coming in time. Because this part seemed a bit too plain. Also, http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/250708/5 6985_that_was_great.JPG
Part6: This part seemed to done way to quickly. The tween movements should be better and the drawings should've been smoother. Change the gray colour scheme and don't rush on it to fast.
Part7: a bit too blank
Part 8: there didn't seem to be anything there
Part9: a bit hollow
Part10: Background's too plain. Add a vcam so we can feel that she is going up and down etc. IF you can add a some sort of a robot that is saying everything i.e. in the background where you see a red window saying the text in a robotic sort of font.
Part11: This part was a bit boring and plain it should have more things going in the part. Like robots, glados, the cake, boxes a good background etc. and then when goodbye comes it goes black since ths part should have a blasting end.
This wasn't made by me btw, but i pretty much agree with most things said here :) good luck guys! Thankyou all for taking part, it looks like it might be finished pretty soon now :D
