Okay, I'll add more frames, I had an idea to show the guy standing over a pile of dead zombies, with a city in the background.
As of now, I've changed the backround when he cocks the gun, and update the zombies and backrounds aswell as the look of the shot gun
Okay , cool, well my part is almost done, i might change the art but this is basically what it's gonna look like.
Once again, Can I have a part?
Please Can I have a part? I don't have any animations, but my other account does, PyroSpriteProduction.
I had an idea for using a section of "Wanted Dread & Alive" with an animated group of zombies walking
Can I have a part?
on her wrists.,She kicks the next man and slams his face against the fountain,before shooting the next body guard, More kicks and punches until she gets to the final guard,after being shot,he is picked up again and hit with the end of the gun,AND KNOCKED OUT.
She gets up and walks towards the enterance.She takes off the belt with her guns on the ground left behind her.
When she passes through the smoke,flames and rubble,she is greeted by weaver.
There Weaver stands over the CORPSE of Tamahasi,Who lays there mutilated in a pool of blood.Weaver clenches his fist,he picks up and squeezes Tamahsi's bloody,and disfigured face,
Weaver:
The Old fuck wanted to die.I granted him his wish.Now c'mon I'm wait'n..
Oasis runs at him ready to go in for the kill before-
GUNSHOT!
Weaver shoots Oasis in her torso.She falls to the ground.
Weaver:
You stupid little cunt.
He throws the gun on the ground and removes a knife from his jacket,and places it against her throat,just as he did to her sister.
Weaver:
Like De'ja vu.
Weaver is shot in the chest,by the body-guard.
He slit's the throat of Oasis,and is shot to death.
THE END.
She writes the name Luke Weaver on a sheet of paper along side King and Tamahasi.She takes Patrick's wallet, and his Uzi,which she uses to kill King.
Oasis,walks out of the mens room Uzi in hand,She lights a cigarette in slow motion, before walking towards the bar.she sits on the stool,She takes a puff of her cigarette and blows it in the bartender's face.
Oasis:
shot a'tequila and keep the shit coming..
Bartender:
Your a kid,
She removes her gun and aims it at him.
Oasis:
Listen asshole!You give me the Tequila or I'll be drinking a bloody-mary, y'catch my drift?
Bartender:
Alright fine..Look here's your drink just don't shoot.
He slides the shot across the table towards him,Oasis drinks it,she twitches once before shooting him in the knee-cap.The Bartender falls against the assortment of wine bottles,covering the floor with blood and liquor,before he slides down the wall and onto the puddle and floor.All while screaming hysterically.She writes down her phone number on a peice of paper.
oasis:
Anyone comes in who mentions a man named,Luke Weaver,Loyed Tamahasi,or Patrick Gains,Call this number.You got that?
Across the room a man sitting alone at a table opens his cell-phone.He dials a number and begins to speak making his best effort to hide it.As oasis walks out the door.
Man:
Mr.Indigo,we have a problem.Some little bitch was in here,Asian about 15 killed Patrick in the bathroom.She shot the bartender wants to know where some of our guys our,sounds like real fucking bad news.Better go look after King..
Mr.Inigo:
God damn it!Follow her!
The man runs after her,and sticks his head outside the bar.He walks around looking down alleyWays.
man:
Fuck!She's gone.
Thread #7.
Oasis wakes up in the trunk of a car,touching her disfigured face.She tries to scream,but her mouth has been sewn up.She bashes the roof of the trunk.Her hands and feet have been taped together.We hear voices on the outside,one of which being Al,the other being Mr.Indigo.
Mr.Indigo:
Can't we just drop her into a river?
Al:
Fuck you!You wanna buy me a new car?So what?There's no difference,We drive down to the shore,Open it up and carry her over the brige into the lake.
Mr.Indigo:
Relax,I just did'nt understand why we should put in the extra effort.
Al:
And I just explained it to you.It's my god damn car!You wanna bring your rusty old peice of shit down here and push it into the river,fine.I like my fucking car.
Mr.Indigo:
For one,My car ain't no peice of shit.And second of all,the money your gonna make,you can buy 2 cars.so relax mother-fucker.
Al:
So on three we let go,kay?
During this next section we cut to Oasis as she tries to unwravel the tape.
Mr.Indigo:
I never liked that expression,kinda missleading.
Al:
Well,Shit-head,do you want me to break it down for you?
Mr.Indigo:
On 3,or on 4?
Al:
On 3 there's only 3 god-damn numbers!
Mr.Indigo:
Yeah.I know but do i go after 3 or on 3?
Al:
Your serious?
Mr.Indigo:
Damn fucking right I'm serious.
Al:
Look,When I get ready to let go,you get ready to let go.Simple as that.
Mr.Indigo:
Alright.
Al and Mr.Indigo walk towards the trunk and open it up.Oasis atatacks Al and breaks his nose,Mr.Indigo goes for his gun before Oasis grabs it and breaks his hand,she holds the gun on him and shoots him in the gut,and pistol whips Al in the face.after a long fight with many punches and kicks he is knocked unconcious.She takes his car,and drives off.
Thread #8:
Thread begins in Mr.Tamahasi's Manision,It is verry plush with very little taste there is an bar in the corner,with a large tv.screen and a leather sofa,it is a nice house.
Tamahasi pours himself a drink and rubs his forehead before letting out a sigh.He removes his gun from his pants and puts it on the table,he proceeds to stare at it,focusing on the barrel.He aims it at his frhead staring through the barrel admiring the horror and power,of the gun.
Weaver walks through the door,catching Tamahasi off guard.He has blood on his shit and a scar above his eye
Weaver:
Mr.Tamahasi,I've got some bad news.
Tamahasi:
What happened Weaver?
Weaver:
The girl who was with King the night we roughed him up,her sister's raging a fucking vendetta against us.She's already got our main guys;Al,Indigo,King,Gains,Brooks,hell even Lucheria.
Tamahasi:
Christ,half our guys dead in 2 nights.This is our last defence,All because of a fucking school girl,it's over.
Weaver:
No it's not.We got a shit load of body guards,clear the way while we get the hell out of here in your chopper.She's just a kid.
We cut to Oasis,putting on face paint in the form of a Bagua,using black and white paint.
Tamahasi:
Kid?No.She's a fucking psycho.She won't stop until We're dead..christ,Of all the little whores who could'a been there,this is the one we get backlash from.We should've never been there..
Weaver:
So what are we gonna do?
Tamahasi:
We killed alot of inocent people.Maybe we deserve it. Maybe this is karma finally catching up to us.Y'know,It's just a matter of fate.
Weaver:
Bull-Shit!Look!We can't give up now!It's just a little kid.We kill her just like we did to her sister,then we move on.
Tamahasi:
It's not that simple!It's over.We're fucked!
Weaver:
NO We're not!jesus,if you don't want to leave I will,shit!We gotta!
Tamahasi:
She deserves her revenge,and so do we!it's a matter of fate.neither one of us can deny it.
Weaver:
Than what the fuck do we do!You wanna die?Fine!Don't drag me into it!
Tamahasi:
Don't give me that!Your as guilty as I am!Hell!You raped her!Your way mor-
Weaver:
I don't mean that!I just don't want to be a part of your fucking suicide pacht okay!Fuck!
Tamahasi:
Tonight we leave it to fait,We get the body-guards on high alert,some people are gonna die,but fait will decide who.
Weaver:
Are you fucking insane?!
Tamahasi:
We don't deserve to live!
We cut back to Weaver and Tamahasi walking down a large flight of stairs,Weaver removes a large revolver from his pocket and reloads.When they get to the bottom of the stare case they turn right through a door into a room with several telivision scrrens monitoring the courtyard and drive way.
Tamahasi grabs a sub machine gun from under the desk,and fires it destroying all of the telivision screens
weaver:
What the fuc-
Tamahasi:
Justice,fait; what do they have in common?
Weaver:
Wha-
Tamahasi Grabs Weaver towards him.
Tamahasi:
They are blind.
Weaver gives him a stare of awe.He heads towards the microphone around the destroyed peices of hardware,
Tamahasi:
I want all guards inside now..
He hangs up.
Weaver:
I'm sorry sir..
Weaver raises his fist,but is'nt fast enough,bafore he is counter attacked and knocked unconcience.He picks him up and carries him into the closet,and locks him up.
Thirteen body guards come into the lobby waiting for instructions.
Tamahasi:
Wait here.No questions..
Cut to Oasis driving the car,she has some gasoline,a lighter,an empty bottle,and some cloth on the seat next to her,She assembles a molitov cocktail,after pulling the car over.She has 2 holisters and bullets attached to belts forming an X across her torso.
She stops when she reaches the mansion and opens the door,however she stays inside,she removes the seat belt,and lights the Molitov Cocktail before speeding foreward,after afew seconds she jumps out,molitov in hand,and throws it at the speeding car,
it crashes into the main entrance and explodes,Inside the bodyguards flee and try to get a sense of what has happened.Ready to shoot,while Tamahasi stands on top of the stairs awaiting his death
His fists clench as tears roll down his face.
Tamahasi:
I-I am not afraid of my angel of death.
Cut to the body guards making their way past the flames guns in hand,Oasis hides behind a fountain waitiing for them.We see she has taped blades to her wrists as weapons.In her hands is 2 revolvers.
BodyGuard1:
What the fuck?
bodyGuard2:
Who was that?
BodyGuard1:
I think the boss knew it was gonna happen.
Bodygaurd2:
That does'nt explain shit!
When they get to the fountain,Oasis spings out shooting one,before slitting 2's throat with the blades
to the warehouse.You fuck this up, you ,your kids,Your fucking dead!Hear me,
King: F-fuck you!
Tamahasi punches him in the chest,knocks his breath out.
Tamahasi: Hey! Weaver! Bring the little Asian bitch out here, I got an example to make,
Weaver does so, She is sobbing her pants barely clinging on,he is still holding the knife against her throat..She looks horrible,
gerard: Oh, for fuck sake,man, you did'nt cum in her did you?
Weaver: of course I did!What difference does it make?, she don't got long..Time to perform an abortion,eh?Little chicky?2 birds, just one fucking
stone!Make it good and messy..
King:I swear to god! I'll do it! You can trust me!
Tamahasi: It's too late, Weaver go ahead!
Weaver slits her throat as blood spills out,she falls to the ground as blood stains the carpet..
King: Why? Sh-she was inocent!A fucking school-girl!
Tamahasi: now you know I mean buisness..
Tamahasi removes a tranq gun from his pocket
Tamahasi: This here, is a Tranq gun, put you to sleep while we take you to a safe location,The cops are gonna be look'n for you..
King: W-what?What did I-
Tamahasi: You raped and murdered a little girl! God just look'n at you, makes me fucking sick..
Tamahsi shoots him as the screen cuts to black..
Thread #5.
A police officer knocks on a wooden door, he is at an orphange..A nun answers the door
Sister Claire:
Oh-Good day officer..how may I help you today..
Seargent Wilson:
I got some bad news..A little girl her name was Alicia Hikira 15, asian..
Sister Claire:
Oh lord..What happened?She ws out late!I knew it!She was supposed to be baby siting,she left yesterday
Seargent Wilson:
But we know who did it..A man 23 years old named Damian King..Seamen sampl-
Sister Claire:
Seaman-Oh lord was she..did-
Seargent Wilson:
I'm afraid so..I understand this might be hard to take in..
Sister Claire:
Oh god..No..Where was she..
Seargent wilson:
In the man's house..no one heard anything,no witnesses..
Sister Claire:
She had a younger sister she never spoke to anyone,she calls herself oasis,you can try to talk to her if you want..
Seargent Wilson:
Would that be okay?
Wilson enters the orphanage he walks up the stairs past the sad faces of many a child..Ahead of him is Sister Claire
Sister Claire:
She's been here for 9 years, when she was 6 her parents killed themselves together.Aparently because they could not pay the local mob boss,their 2 children Alicia, and Oasis.oasis is 13..She won't answer to anything else,She never talks to the other children or any of our staff she never eats,from what we've hweard she only ever interacts with her sister, but I guess she'll hsve to adapt sooner or later..I don't know how to tell her what happened..
Wilson:
Don't worry about it.I'll handle it..
Sister Claire:
The last time someone insulted her..She murdered him..She is a very dangerous young lady..I'd be careful..
Wilson:
I'm sure everything will be fine,she's just a little girl.
Sister Claire:
Don't underestimate her,She's been around alot of death.She is perfectly comfortable with killing..She has no emotion, no pity,I feel as if the lord has abandoned her,The devil has taken over..Purely chilling..
Wilson:
Nothing against you but I don't really buy all of that Devil crap..
Sister Claire:
Do you belive in god?
Wilson:
No offence Sister,But not exactly..I like the idea of being in control of my own life...
Sister Claire:
Well I guess your on your own..Good luck..
Wilson:
I'm sure I'll be fine thank you..
Sister Claire:
I sugest you leave your gun with me..
Wilson:
If she is as angry and hostile as you sa-
Sister Claire:
No!If she feels threatened she will kill you without a second thought.If You make her angry she will kill you.Your not getting anywhere if you shoot her.Your as bad as the killers if you do that.Look,I know you don't believe in god but I think it's good for you to have a fall back,follow his word, "Thow shall not kill"..
Wilson:
Alright then.I'll hand you my gun..
Wilson does so as Claire quickly puts the gun on the table in front of a cross.She makes a silent prayer and looks around frantically for the children.
Sister Claire:
She's in lock-up.Down that hall...Be careful..
Sergent Wilson walks down the hall followed by Claire, carrying the key.
A small hand with boney fingers grasps the gun and removes it from the holister before disapeering off camera.
We go back to Claire and wilson who Stand outside the cell door while Claire tries to find the key
Wilson:
Why do you lock-up the children?
Claire:
well, this used to be a prison back in the 70's rapists crack-heads the unholiest of those on this earth all lived in these cells,when we got a hold of it they tore alot of the cells out turned the bars into walls with wooden doors, too much money spent there and we could'nt afford to have this taken out..I always found it kind of well not funny,I don't know what you'd call it..It's just that it used to be a place of monsters and crime and drugs and killing, now it's a house of god,where these unfortunate kids live..I just wish we could clean it up..But not enough money.Y'know how it is..
She unlocks the cell and pushes the door open,we hear a large creak and an echo.Both of them come toward the door looking around.The cell is empty, with light creaking through with shadows of the two of them.
Wilson:
Where is she?
Sister Claire:
Oh god..No..Where did she go?
Claire runs towards the stairs looking around.she grabs the guns holister it is empty,she continues to look around followed by Wilson,
Wilson:
What happened?Who took my gun?
Sister Claire:
We`ve got to check the whole building!
Claire and Wilson head downstairs towards the main enterance where the lock has been broken and the main door has been opened.leading into an open courtyard with dead grass and a rusty metal gate also open, amongst the tall buildings and smauge.
Wilson:
Sister,I think we've got an escaped prisoner...
Thread #6.
Oasis writes the name of Damien King on a peice of paper.she folds it up and puts it in her bra,Since she is dressed in a school uniform.Gun in hand she emerges from an alleyway past groups of homeless people and buildings which have been boarded up,and continues down the street.,
Int.Bar 9.PM.
2 men sit together at the table, smoking cigarettes,
Man1's name is Patrick Gains,he has a goate and is in his mid-50's we've seen him before,he was Body guard #2 who helped with the "Convincing" of King.
Patrick:
God damn..The whole cities going to hell..It's all under control from the mafia,What's his fucking name again
Man2:
Tamahasi, Loyd Tamahasi,he's a bastard,did'nt you used to work with him?
Patrick:
Yeah,I quit yesterday,I just could'nt handle the guilt anymore..It's horrible,Y'know where I was yesterday?
Man2:Where?
Patrick:
Beating the shit out of some guy I used to work with..While the guy next to me raped a little kid..
Man2:
Oh..God!What the-Why would you say that..
Patrick:
Like your mister high and mighty..Give me a fucking break..Your just as guilty as I am.
man2:
Look I did'nt-
Patrick:
Save it! I gotta take a piss..
Patrick wals out towards the restroom,The bar is full of rough looking men and women,He pushes open the door,and walks past a closed stall,Where Oasis is hiding.He walks towards the urinal and does so,Before a knife slides against his throat,Not peircing the skin,He does'nt move,he is frozen in shock.
Patrick:
Who are you?You look familiar..
Oasis:
I should,You really have to learn how to keep a secret,Mr.Gains,Where were you last night?
Patrick:
You already know..Look I had nothing to do with her..Why do you care?
oasis:
Because she was my sister..Where's Damien King?
Patrick:
Look it was'nt me!I never touched her..King?He's at 250 block 670 falconer drive.Okay?
Oasis:
Then who did?
Patrick:
One of my old co-workers!Look!Don't do this!His name is Weaver,Luke Weaver!Don't k-
Before he can get the words out she slits his throat as he hits the ground with blood splashing on the wall and on the floor,
Oasis:
Bastard.
She writes the name Luke Weaver on a sheet of paper along side King a
Thread #4.
A young Asian girl, knocks on a suburban houses doorway 3 times,she resembles Oasis,However she is not.A young white lady opens the door carying an infant.
Mother:
Oh, hello Alicia..I was just about to leave..There's 20 bucks on the kitchen table,it's yours.Uh-That's about it,Y'know,Keep the kids out of the liquor cabnet(Chuckles) I'm just kidding,You'll be fine
The Mother sticks he head in and calls her kids
Mother:
Carla!Maurice! Get down here!
Maurice:
Who's this
Mother:
This is Alicia,She's you new babysiter
Carla:
She looks weird..
Mother:
Hey!Be nice!She's in charge! You here me?!
Carla and Maurice (Sync):
Yes mom..
Maurice:
When's Daddy coming home?
Mother:
I don't know..Maybe when he wakes up and realizes I-uh I mean you are more important that that whore from Nor-You know what,he's coming home soon, he's on a business trip...I gotta go, you be good..
Carla:
Bye mommy
Mother:
Bye kids..
Alicia:
So..What do you guys usually do?
Carla:Me and Maurice are gonna head up stairs
Alicia:
Okay then...
Carla and Maurice play upstairs,We follow them for a short amount of time.Downstairs a man knocks on the door, Mr.King
King:Hello..
Alicia: Uh..Hi..
King:Is Michelle there?
Alicia:Uh no she is'nt here she went out..I'm the baby-sitter..
King: Really? I didn't here about that?What's your name?
Alicia: Alicia, Alicia Mennell..
King:Well, your a gorgeous young woman..
Alicia:Ummm..Thank you..Is there any thing I can help yo-
King: how old are you?
Alicia:15..
King: Look, you don't have to be worried..I have kids, a wife..Don't worry you can trust me..
Alicia:I'm afraid I ha-
King:I tried to be nice! (cough) I tried..look,let me in and I'll explain Why I'm here..
Alicia: I really do-I shouldn't it's not m-
King pulls out a knife.
King:Open the fucking door!..Those are my kids! Okay!Just open the door!
a door opens as Kings face stares through the opening he is scared and nervous..
King:Carla?Maurice?
Carla:
Who are you?
King:I'm your father..I know it might be difficult to imagine..I don't know you, but I would like to..I just..I can't I don't want you to get hurt..I know it's hard for you to understand..I hope you will learn and that maybye one day you w-wo'nt hate me..I'm sorry.
King leaves the room sobbing..
Alicia:Every Th-
King: I gotta g-
Alicia: What happened?
King:Those kids deserve better..
Alicia: wait!
King: Look! I'm just one big walking FUCK-UP! alirght!
Alicia grabs his arm and stops him,
Alicia:God Damn it! Just wait!
Those are your kids, you explained to me..They need you.If you do anything now they'll blame themselves!You owe them more than than that!
King: What the fuck does it matter to you..
Alicia has no answer..
King: I don't have to answer to you! Your a fucking school girl..I'm a dangerous man..I can't get them involved..
Alicia: Look,I know it's none of my buisness,But I can't let you do that to these kids..Call it whatever you want.It's just in-human, I don't give a flying fuck what you do for a living..It's jus-how do I say it, Inhuman to let this happen,I know it's none of my buisness,but,Do whatever you want just here me out..You owe everyone more than that, I know what your planning to do, I've seen that look,
King:You don't kno-
Alicia:My mom killed herself when I was 6..I came home for lunch one day and I saw a police car..I've been around death pleantly..
Alicia:She had that same sad, disturbed look you had coming down those stairs..Don't do it..
King: I don't deserve to li-
Alicia: But your kids deserve better..What's gonna happen..When those kids wake up to find out
there father, met them for the first time,and killed himself?What are they gonna think?Who
are they going to blame?(Alicia starts sobbing) Oh! Mommy..Why did you d-do it,Why did you do it
to me..
Alicia falls into his arms..
King;Shhhh..Your right..C'mon lets head over to the couch..
King walks Alicia over to the couch..
King: I swear I won't do it!O-okay? Does that make it better..
The mother opens the door,She is surprised,
Mother:
Damian..
King:
H-he-hello Sophia
Sophia:
What are-
King:
I came here to talk..
Sophie:
Have you been cry-
King:
ye-yeah..look I came to talk
Sophie:
What happened did you talk to the kids?
King:
yeah..L-
Sophie:
What did they say?
King:
I ne-
Sophie:
What did you-
King:
Look!I explained everything before!God damn it!I can't let-
Sophie:
I've heard it all before..You came here-for the sole purpouse of telling your kids they'll never see you again,Why?
King:
I jus-
Sophia:
Well, it's too late now..
King leaves,as Alicia comes towards Sophia trying to explain.
Alicia:
Look, I'm sorry he came here, I did'nt know what else to do..
Sophia:
Did you get the money
Alicia:
Uh- y-yeah..
Sophia:
Good,get out..
Alicia leaves trying to catch up to King..
Alicia: Wait!
King;Why..
Alicia:Wha-
King: WHy the hell did I come he-
His answer is interupted as Alicia grabs him and kisses him.
Alicia: God damn it! Man up!You don`t want them involved quit your fucking job!
King:It's No-
Alicia: Bull Shit!
King is dazed he does'nt know what to say..The screen cuts to black,we here voices off screen
Mr.Tahmahasi: Youre serious?
King: Do I sound like I'm fucking joking?
King,and 3 other men are sitting at a table,
Mr.Tamahasi, a tall Asian man, and his 2 body guards (One of them being The man who fought Steve in thread 1,Name:Luke Weaver) sit at the table they all wear suits.
Mr.Tamahasi: You seriously think you can just quit?
King: I wont be a part of this, not anymore,
Mr.Weaver: Sounds like you got a tight pussy telling
you what to do
(The other guard laughs.)
Mr.Tamahasi: Relax weaver!
Mr.Tamahasi:You can't get out! not now..Don't try to fuck me over like this..You of all people know what
I'm capable of..
King:You won't threaten me! not anymore!
Weaver: I say we shoot him! Put 'em out of his
misery, just shoot him in the fucking face!
Weaver reaches into his coat pocket, we hear a long beat as it seems he is grabbing his gun..
When he removes his fist we see a box of cigarettes in his palm, he pantimines shooting a gun at King,He removes a cigarette and lights it..
Weaver:Thought I had a gun? Eh?
King says nothing and ignores him..
Weaver: Shoot you ri-
Mr.Tamahasi: I said that's enough!
Weaver gives him a stare and to king, a smirk..
Weaver:(under his breath) you wait!,You wait!..
King: Look, Mr.Tamahasi, I got kids, It's fucking dangerous!Alright?!
Tamahasi: You think Your the only one of my men,with
fucking kids.I could a len-
King: I don't want your fucking money! I don't want
any part of this shit!
Tamahasi:You really sure you wanna go down this road?
What would your kids think,
King: Don't give me that shit!I`m doing it for them!
Tamahasi: Imagine this..2 guys big as fucking houses, one night they break into your house,
your kids cry, and scream, And then-
Weaver: Bam!BAM! there fucking dead!
King Leaps across the table at weaver and Tamahasi, he knocks them to the ground,Outside of the room Alicia runs for the door,The second guard sees her.He pulls weaver to his feet and begins kicking king in the face, trying to loosen his grip on Tamahasi,
Gerard:Weaver!Get the kid!
Weaver grabs Alicia and pulls out a knife,throws her on the ground and rubs the blade against her throat, as a threat.
Outside the beating continues as the fight has changed and King is losing, he caughs up teeth and blood,We hear screaming,obvously a rape is taking place
Alicia:
NOOOOO!NOOOO!D-DO_DO`NT!NOOO!ST-STOP IT!!!NOOOOOOOOOOO!(Continues)
Tamahasi: What the fuck i-
King punches him in the face and attacks Gerard..More puching as Tamahasi tries to save Gerard and hit King,
Screaming in background stops,Weaver punches Alicia,and covers her mouth.
Weaver: Shut up you little bitch!
Tamahasi grabs King and pins him against the wall,
Tamahasi: Listen! (slaps king) Listen! Your gonna do one last job for me! After that..I'll forget you ever existed,in 2 weeks,2 of my guys are gonna come drop off some heroin,I want you to buy it, and take
OKay, No I don't have A title,I was thinking of Calling it "Dead As Dillinger" Or "Oasis".But here's the script.
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tory #1
Int. Apartment midnight.
Steve Brooks 35, enters the kitchen, he is buttoning up a collared shirt, getting ready to leave.
he is alone, or so we think, out of the darkness we here a voice.
Mr.Indigo:
Good evening,Steven..
Steven(caught off guard):
Huh? W-what?
Mr.Indigo:
mr.Tamahasi, sends his regards..
Steven:
The mob boss? W-what does he w-want with me?
Mr.Indigo:
My boss, sent me here to propose a buisness strategy..
Steven:
W-we-well you-you can forget it! I don't want any part of it!y-you people are
dangerous!
Mr.Indigo:
And since we are so "dangerous" it would be wise for you to listen to us..
as I was saying- My boss has informed me that you have recently been given
a large fortune, after your father died...
Steven:
Look-I-I Gotta-
Mr.Indigo:
Your father owes us money..A large sum at over $25,000..if you value yourself you will
pay your debt, and pay it soon..
Steve:
What th- Get out of my house! You tell your boss he is'nt getting
any of my money!
Mr.Indigo:
I've warned you..You have 7 days to give it to us,Our number is on the table
Mr.Indigo, gets up and leaves, although we do not see his face.
Steve
Wha- Hey! get your ass ba-
He leaves the house,and slams the door.
Title; 3 days later
Steven:God damn it!i've got 3 days left, think!Think!
Phone Rings, Steven answers
Steven: Hello?
*Heavy Breathing on the other line*
Steven: Hello? What the hell?
Dr.Voice: You have..4 days..Before we come for you!
Steven hangs up...Smash! A window breaks..Steve hits the deck.
Steven:Jesus!Oh, (Panting) It's just the window.
he looks outside frantically..Through the smashed windo we see nothing but an
empty alleyway.
he picks up the phone trying to trace the number, however the phone reads
000-000-000...He then dials 911
Officer:hello Mr.Brooks,
Steven: How do you know that's my name?
officer: Don't play games, we've already warned you..
Steven: Of what?! What are y-
Officer: You have 4 days..
Phone hangs up on it's own..
Steven: hello? Hello? What the hell?
hte phone is now dead,the screen is black
Steven; God damn phone does'nt work..What happened there?
Steven puts the phone down, before-GunShot, it peirces his shoulder, splurting blood..
Steven; Aughh!!
Dr.Voice:Don't bother! We cut the line! it's too late to call the police..
In an adreniline rush, steve jumps to his feet and strikes the man, revealing him to be MR.Indigo, a young
white man with blonde Hair wearing a suit.Stve knocks the gun from his hand..and begins to punch him several times.
by the thrid punch The man catches his fist and albows steve in the chest.knocking him to
the ground, a few more fists fly on both sides,before The man grabs steve and throws him against a wall, steve kicks him and knocks the breath out of him..the fight ends up in the
kitchen,where more punching, and kicking ocurs until Steven removes a knife and slashes the mans face, blood pours into his eye..
The man is off guard, steve takes the opurtunity to leave through the door..The man violently rubs his face trying t regain focus, he runs out of the door,however steven is already gone..
The man heads out onto the balcany, gun in hand,We cut to the street's where battered steve runs through traffic trying desperately to escape,
The man fires a shot at Steve, it misses,he continues,twice (both miss)
Steve heads for the phone booth, picks up the phone, and then-GUnShot smashes the glass, we do not see the wound,but we do see a body fall to the ground.
Thread #2.
Tires screach as a motercade comes to a stop,3 men get out and head towards the trunk,they open the door, a japanese woman rolls out blood drippping from her lips and nose,her name is Oasis one of the men picks her up angrily,
Al; Get up you little bitch!
The 3 men carry her through a back alley, and into an old room through a back enterance,
Int.Old diner, Abandoned and old, it has cobwebs and dust everywhere,One of the men, a large balck man, closes the door and locks it,The mans name is Al
Mr.Indigo gets a chair, he has a scar above his eye, from steven,He sits Oasis down on the chair and handCuffs her.In the corner we see a skinny asian man,
Mr.Indigo: You killed Mr.King, a Buisness partner and cousin of Boss Tamahasi-
Oasis: Go to Hell!!(Japanese)
Mr.Indigo; What did she say?
Chang; She said, "Go To Hell".
mr.Indigo: My,my, you should be more polite, little girl,or you might get hurt!
Oasis: Bring it on!MOTHER-FUCKER! (Japanese)
oasis spits in Mr.Indigo's face, he wipes it off
mr.Indigo:You got guts kiddo!I'll give you that..
Chang: She sai-
Mr.Indigo: I know what she said!Plain and simple. now.......
(mr. indigo places a gun against her temple..)
Mr.Indigo: I tried to be nice, but I think you need some persuasion..
oasis;C'mon you peice of shit! Shoot me!
Mr.Indigo: Do'nt taunt me ! I'll kill you! There!,You tell the little wide eyed bitch what I just said
Chang: (Japanese) Don't taunt him! He'll kill you!
Mr.Indigo: As I was saying, A week ago you interupted a heroin export and murdered 3 men, one of which being mr.King a buisness partner of boss Tamahasi.You cost him a shit-load of money,He is very unhappy.
Chang:(Japanese) A week ago you interupted a heroin export and murdered 3 men, one of which being mr.King a buisness partner of boss Tamahasi.You cost him a shit-load of money,Oasis: FUCK YOU! (english)
Mr.Indigo: Well, I guess you do know english...
Oasis: When I get out of here! I swear to god and Budha, that I will Fucking Kill you!!!!!!
Mr.Indigo:We'll see about that...Hey, Al!
Al: What?
Mr.Indigo: This little whore,Says "bring it on", I say we oblige her, keep her alive, but fuck herface up so bad, she can no longer be identified as a human!Do wahtever you think is necassary!
Al: Oh i'm gonna enjoy this! What's her name?
Mr.Indigo: I don't fucking know, she calls herself, 'Oasis"...Thread#3,
An elderly man gets in a car,it has a broken windsheild,he closes the door and lights a cigarette,While another man crawls in, The Elderly man is allan Brooks,Stevens father, while the other man is,Mr.Lucheria
Mr.Lucheria:Evening,mr.Brooks
Allan: My name is Allan
Mr.Lucheria:hows your kid?
Allan:Which one?
Mr.Lucheria:Steve,Steve brooks,
Allan: I don't know, he won't talk to me.I don't want to get him involved in this shit...I asked for some help from Mr.Tamahasi now I owe him way to much fucking cash..I'll never be able to pay it!I'm Fucked!Me,my family!We're all fucked!
Mr.Lucheria:Relax,it`ll all work out..
Allan:Where we going anyways?
Mr.Lucheria:Mr.Damien King,Ordered a batch of herion,adress is 250 block number 7476.
Allan: You got the suppl-
Mr.Lucheria: It`s in the seat!
Mr.Lucheria, Hands Allan a pocket knife, The car pulls up to the drive way,
A tall Black man gets out,Damien King.
King:How much do you need?
Lucheria: 5000,
King hands him the money, while Allan cuts the Passenger seat open with a pocket knige,There are 3 bags full of heroin.
Allan:Here you go..
Oasis,from thread 2 cocks her gun..She is dressed in a school uniform,18 years old.
oasis: Bastard!Oh, lord forgive me...He hurt Alicia..Hurt her bad...
She makes one final, silent prayer before entering the heart of the devil,Gun in hand she aproaches the driveway,
She is carrying an Uzi ,Screen Cuts to black as we hear gunshots and screaming.Allan falls with several gunshot wounds,
Lucheria;FUCK! Where did she come fr-
Lucheria is shot 3 times in the face
Then King runs not getting far he is shot in the kneecap, he screams,
King: Please! Mercy!
Oasis;(Japanese) Mercy? You raped and killed that girl! There shall be no mercy!
Oasis, shoots him to death.Offscreen,
Hey, Sorry to let you know that it's kind of hard for someone who does no animation to get recognized by NG, I tried it,but it was almost impossible sorry, but I think you should keep trying, and try animating at very least for a year. it really isn't that hard.. No matter what your writing quality is,NG is still a FLASH WEBSITE!Sorry to bring you down ,but the writing quality is usually just cock and fart jokes.
Wazuup with the collab guys?
At 11/5/08 11:52 PM, zappawadda wrote:At 11/5/08 12:02 PM, Nutcrackerproduction wrote: specifically where i know the background sucks but have you ever read sin city?I think Batman needs to be crouching, in the shadows, he should be blacker than the city, or look like he's part of the shadows, in that picture he's just kinda standing
im just putting him in that position so he can jum off and smash through the roof where two face is torturing hostages
im thinking about launching my own comic series but i dont know if this art is good enough
specifically where i know the background sucks but have you ever read sin city?
LOL JAMES WHAT DO U THINK
look i want some fucking egnologment tell me what u think if not screw this ill make my own flash
uh yeah heres a better version if u want to use it give me part maybye some interactive comics or something
i drew some pretty cool shit its almost done if u like it maybye hteyre could be some comics or something like that on the menu
wow this still is'nt finished
k there you get the idea the picture dose'nt do it justice however its pretty good
At 9/17/08 07:44 PM, KevnSevn wrote: Ummm, what exactly are you working on?
and can we get some pics?
okay i drew sanke so here it is
gay guy and hobo
hobo sleeping in box
gay buy with meryl during exercise
hi guys i need actors to do the voices for my metal gear solid parody
TEH ROLES:
Snake
meryl
cambell
otocon
liquid
nurse(forget name)
asian lady(forget name)
thug1
thug2
thug 3
thug 4
anderson
guy on shiter(forget name
bruce willis(hellz yeah diehard joke)
codec gps
phsyco matic(cant spell)
ness(pk thunder joke)
jiggle puff(pokemon joke)
since my joker layout did'nt work what if i make some comics thatway i can focus more on the design rather than the animation ?
what about the penguin as a british arms dealer
.
i have a batman layout witch looks pretty cool but its not quite finished yet
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