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STOKAL
based on a true story

Part 19
by Nintendoobsessed

The wind power picked up. Said Klaskel. It spun around me, exploding the head of the men around me. The brains formed together. A man had been wearing a cloak. The wind took it with 2 limbless arms, it created a monster. Sarah gasped.

Stylop enterd the lone cafetiara-incept for headless policemen. My sensors tell me Commander Computer is heading for the 2nd floor. He walked down the hallway to the gym.

Cant we just stay down there? Cried Ryan. We...have...to...get...urk!...out...of here. Said Mario. At the current moment, they were climbing up the wall with a grappling hook made out of many things. Finnaly, he pushed Ryan up to the office, then he climbed out. We better get out of here soon. They headed for the gym. They saw Susie. A girl! HEY! Called Mario. Susie thought it was a robot. she ran to the 2nd floor of the gym. After her! Yelled Mario as he ran after her.

Come. Said Mother Brain. They came to the 2nd floor. Now...you let the CRYSTAL ONE ESCAPE? I didnt mean to Mother Brain! Please! That Stokal you let escape contained so much life! Im really sorry Mother Brain! I had been listening to the whole thing. A life container? We barely have any Stokals left! And they are for the Ulti-borgs process! And we still cant find the g- Susie barged in just at the wrong moment. A ESCAPED, UNCULTRIZED 2ND GRADE GIRL? THATS IT! She struck Commander Computer in the face. She left, just in time for Mario, and Ryan to show up. The door shut. I will have to kill all of you to relieve status. His fist smashed into the ground rumbling the room, everyone falling. Commander Computer roared. Stylop jumped threw the open window, falling flat on his face. Muffled swear words came from Stylop. Ryan! YOU! Said Commander Computer. YOU HAVE ESCAPED! This SHOWDOWN STARTS NOWWWWW!

Next Time: The showdown of Commander Computer starts NOWWW! Part 20

To be continued...

STOKAL
based on a true story.

Part 18
by Nintendoobsessed

Get rid of her. Throw her in the labs to-oh! His process has started. Leave her anyway. Commander Computer threw her there. Now continuing... said Mother Brain.... have you found IT yet? The MCP started shaking. Wh-Wh-What are you talking about? Mother Brains Brain quiverd. YOU DID FIND IT, RIGHT? Said Mother Brain. I um, had uhh... interuptions. INTERUPTIONS? Unacceptible! Well, this child- I DONT CARE! THROW HIM IN THE MAZE! "We already did that." I'll talk with you later. I have to talk to Commander about the middle schooler escapee? Commander could tell that this wasent going to end well.

Stylop walked down a hall mumbling. Stupid Klamkel, couldent build a *amn- loud muffles came from another room. Stylop opended it and- Ms. Ball was tied to a chair. The skinner robot was watching her. WHAT are you doing?! Asked Styloph. "I was uh... decoultrizing her sir." said the skinner robot. She is the one you wanted me to...right? Stylop mumbled and left the room. He needed to find Commander Computer. Then.

Over the hills, a helicopter appeard. Many. They were carrying a giant tank! It smashed to the pavement! Voices came from the tank. YOU CANT-THERES A SCHOOL IN NEED! YOUR GONNA BLOW UP THE WHOLE *AMN SCHOOL. As if a nightmare, the tank crept closer.

The generator had been lost. As I got near its location, the townsfolk attacked. I couldent stop them. They called me "monster" and "freak". And the terrible happend.

"Ryan" said Mario. "We have to get out of here." He grabbed at the metal. "My head hurts too much" said Ryan.

I headed too the second floor of the gym. I sat down, tired. I fell asleep.

Next Time: More Stylop action! Part 19!

To be continued...

I didn't even know there was a British dub- I only knew about MXC and a Subbed version. So I guess the answer is: British Dub?

STOKAL
based on a true story.

Part 17
by Nintendoobsessed

Unbeliveably, Susie was actully thinking. Her screaming was a hope it would drop her. Why would it give its name? she thought. She stopped screaming, and listend to the mumbling of Mother Brain. She was very tired, and she mumbled. "Phase Qlockern" and "*amn mountians". Susie looked around. They were heading for the MCPs room.

A robot that FAINTED? That was impossible. The situation was impossible too. It awoke. Sarah jumped, but nerved down. "Its here" It said. Or Klaskel. Mother Brain... that means... the time continuam must continue... What? Said Sarah. The destiny, requires, travel... Klaskel got up. What...do you mean?, Said Sarah. Where are you from? She asked suldleny. It took a pause.... Klamkel.

The roof crumbled, and a purplish man like thing jumped through. What a fine body, it said. "Leader must be heading for the Master crnotrol room". He went.

"Yes, Mother Brain is here." said Mario. Mother Brain? Asked Ryan. Yes. The monster that attacked...

I was created by Dr. G.L. Klamkel. He was the first scientest who had the theory of Artificial intelligance. He created me by the generator. Something about this generator I wanted to find it. I pinpointed its exact location.

Mother Brain enterd the room. The screen was gray. Hmm...she said. The transformation is obviously complete. A purpleish figure enterd. Sorry im...-LATE? Commander Computer stomped in. Ahh...2 leaders. Comander Computer bowed, showing respect to his 2 leaders. Get up Commander. Said Mother Brain. I hope you 2 realize a kid is still without formation? Whaa... MCP was nervous to ask but he did. Where have you, been leader? I am known as Mother Brain! She threw Susie to the ground of the lab

Next Time: An evil meeting? Uh-oh. PART 18

To be continued...

What's funnier: the original Takashi's Castle or the redubbed MXC?

STOKAL
based on a true story.

Part 16
by Nintendoobsessed

*AMN! *AMN! *AMN!!! Stylop punched Klamkel in the face, and threw him to the ground. SHES HERE!

Sarah rememberd when she was normal. Back in middle school. A big robot with spikes put chips in the kids. She had been thrown in a dungeon for unknown reasons. She dug out before the robots came back. She was lucky. Very lucky.

"Nerver mind" said Stylop. BUILD. NOW. So, the great Dr. Klamkel built the weapon.

The robot teleported into a 4th grade room with a girl in it. The robot didnt want to leave, it was a girl. Who-oo-Are you? Asked Sarah. My name is...Klaskel. Said the robot, embarrssed. She liked him. He liked her too. Stomps from far away made Klaskel twitch. I...he?fainted?

Mario woke up, a kid whos head had been skinned was next to him. Mario realized what had happend. Did you see a giant monstrous brain? Yes said Ryan. Whats your name? He asked. "Ryan" he said.

I followed the robot. But he dissapeard. I was in the lunchroom. It was empty. One policeman was on the floor though. A kid! Thank god he said. Whats happening here? It was too late. A hand smashed through a door. It grabbed his head, and ripped it off. It took the head away to who knows where. I ran for the gym. No one was thier. I had to find Susie.

Susie tried to open the hatch, but it didnt work. She finnaly got through, hitting the ground hard. A headless policeman lyaed on the floor. She headed for the gym but tripped. A horryfying head thing appeard. "I am Mother Brain." it said, and grabbed her. She shrieked, but no one but Mother Brain could hear her shrieks. Her scared shrieks.

Ryan cried in the prison.

Next Time: MOTHER BRAIN STORY? NOPE, but, plot starts to come together! Part 17

To be continued...

STOKAL
based on a true story

Part 15
by Nintendoobsessed

The wind power was building up, causing a chip of window to fly out. Sarah backed away, in surprise. "The wind power must be extremely strong" thought Sarah. Another, and another. Eventually, a 4th grader crawled through. Eventually, all of the 4th graders were gone. Sarah was alone in the room.

So, she left me in charge of you robots. Said Mario. It doesn't matter by now, said Mario. The leader is coming. With that, the robot shoved him down a hole, done.

The lone robot walked through the empty hallways. He knew nothing about the leader. Obvously, the leader was MCPs boss. He knew that for sure. He used a complicated code and went outside. The parents were gone. The wind and rain straighnted, and started to blind his senses. Some kind of form was coming.

I went deeper into the lunchroom. I turned and fell backward. A robot watched me. The robot backed away and started running.

Ryans head throbbed. The skinning was over. Lets getcha outta here. The leader is arriving. In one quick shove, Ryan was back in the office.

The figure hit the ground. It walked through the door, leaving the confused robot outside. She looked toward the office, seeing a skinned headed boy in there. She said with her one jaw. Sessho-Maru. 2 hands smashed out of her brain head, and went into the office. Ryan jumped back into the hole. The hands grabbed his head, but retreated beacause of the door. He felllllllllllllll.

The Ultiborg turned to the sound of kids. 4th graders had fallen through the secret Outside hole. Where are we asked one. It was too late. They were devoured, and became part of the body. A voice within them said: TRANSFORM BEGIN! The Jonah head started puking out slimeish bodys. The useless ones. It fell to the floor and started shrieking. It echoed through the lab.

Next Time: SARAHS STORY! Part 16.

To be continued. . .

STOKAL
based on a true story

Part 14
by Nintendoobsessed

The robot grabbed a chunk of metal. As if it were clay, he molded it into a robin. He put it next to his other figuirines.

I climbed up some stairs. I was in the ?Lunchroom? caftirea lady's room. I could hear robot clanks. Somewhere else.

The parents were getting more desperate. Then, a war cannon from out of the school ripped open 8 parents. People screamed, confusion, disspear. More cannons fired. People fleed away from the school.

So there it was, the M.C.P. Then, leader left for "important matters" leaving me with the responsibility of the MCP, Said Mario.

The rain was strong. Sarah watched the rain from out the window. All the other kids did was try to escape. Someone had eaten all the paste. No one knew what had happend to the teacher. "He just left out the door" said a small girl. "Before the lazers were activated", though Sarah. What do the teachers have to do with this?

CRACK! CRRRACCCK!!! OW! Time is running out! The leader is coming! The thunder and WIND sense it. "OF course", thought Klamkel, "the wind". She will want to be pleased by the weapon! HURRY UP! The wind power started going up. The lights flickered. "*amn*" said Stylop. Shes coming faster then I expected. Klamkel grimeced.

Ryan was still in the prison. A robot came down, flying. We need to make you more appetizing for the leader. She has been gone for quite awhile. He took out a sharp knife. What are you going to do with that? Asked Ryan. The robot pierced his head skin, an was skinning his head. He screamed. It echoed. Even the Commander Computer was worried, he summoned a robot. Go greet the leader he said worrly. The robot left. The leader was coming.

Next Time: Leader is coming... Part 15.

To be continued....

STOKAL
based on a true story

Stylop pronounced Stylof

Part 13
by Nintendoobsessed

Deep, in a unknown part of the school, to most people, demands were called forth. Do in now Klamkel! The Stylop XL was angry. VERY angry. *AMN IT KLAMKEL! ONE OF THEM EVEN HAS A SWORD! The scientest sighed, pulling a crank. DO YOU WANT ME TO WHIP YOU? Crontol your sensors Stylop! I made you! Thou forget? DO YOU FORGET? MCP GAVE THE ORDERS!

I ran down the hallway. Something bad had happend. Something VERY BAD. I didnt notice a hungry Ulti-borg sludgeing after me.

That girl, Sarah. She smashed through the window after the horriyfying screams on the roof. She was in a classroom. Mrs. Kovachs room or something. Kids were there crying. A thought flashed through Sarahs mind. The window..it wasent sealed like at... A kid came crying up to her. Was going on? he asked her. She ignored him and asked another kid where thier teacher was. She was too scared to reply. It was too late anyway. The window was sealed, the door was blocked by a lazer. *AMN! She yelled. You said a naughty word! Said a kid.

And so it orderd me to build a MCP. I built the outside. And then..."A man I did not recognize built the Artifical intteligance."

The purplish man grabbed Susie. She screamed and was pulled to a lazer field. She screamed louder.

The parents were worried. Ladders, and many things. Nothing would work. Nothing was going right.

Ryan was STILL in the dungeon. CRYYING. YEAHHHH.

Next Time: A NEW Character. Coming... Part 14.

It's cool- although you should keep in mind that most modern poetry avoids rhyme schemes. The event you're reading at probably isn't too formal, though.

Take a look at the globe or just a regular world map-

What are some places or countries you've never noticed before? I was looking at a globe and I noticed a bunch of mysterious islands north of Russia such as "Franz Josef Land" and "Novaya Zemlya". I guess they're part of Russia but there's nothing there.

What are some weird places you've spotted?

STOKAL
based on a true story

Part 12
Season 1 Finale.
by Nintendoobsessed

I was amazed. So many pieces, codes and diffrent types of heats added to the body. Then details of metaphors added. The computer was building a body.

I made a deal with it. She could steal all that I knew of after I built her a world crontrol machine. MCP.

Susie stared at the body...so much data..... Then, Susie realized what was happening. She screamed VERY Loudly.

The girl started running. She came upon the school and looked up. Screams came from the roof. D***, she said. She tried to climb up the roof, but it pinched and she couldet reach the top.

Jonah felt warm. He felt welcome in the giant body. He was the head of it! He smiled, and went to find someone to eat.

The computer... now the body was almost complete. Only the head was left to do. More information then ever went into the diabolical head. Then it was done. Then the door opened. I backed away... not sure... and ran. 5 seconds later, the computer blew up.

The head was finished, and Susie was scared. She was trapped. She could do nothing. The body was finished. What a nice body... said a familiar voice. It was the MCP. Susie shrieked.

The seasons over.
The storys not.
2 new villians.
What to do.
Read Season 2.

Next Time: The next part? Time will reveal well enough.

To be continued...

At 10/22/13 06:23 PM, Ragnarokia wrote:
Don't be like that, if you remain open to people then you should eventually find someone to love.

Even if that's true, chances are I'll have killed myself by age 35 or whatever, so, yeah...

Maybe I'll take a trip to Las Vegas just to try out a prostitute.

At 10/22/13 03:48 PM, Fluffington wrote: Save some money > Hire an escort > Find out what sex is like > ??? > Profit

It's not that hard.

Isn't prostitution illegal everywhere except Nevada though?

At 10/22/13 03:09 PM, saqwert wrote: Do you got the leukemia boy?

Nope, I've got the Ugly and Boring.

Since I'm never going to get to have sex please tell me what it's like so at least I'll know before I die.

STOKAL
based on a true story

Part 11
By Nintendoobsessed

Jonah fell to the hard floor. He was in the center of a circle of kids. Thier skin was forming. It was too high. He tried to smash through, but the skin was too tough.

I begged for mercy. I showed it that I... Mario paused. WHAT? Said the robt. Infuriated at the pause. I...I showed it this...clearing his hair.

The door to the room shut. A robotic hand that had blood on it came out of the celing, grabbing the girl. I tried to grab her, but she was pulled away, screaming. I sighed. I could do 1 thing. I turned on the computer. Then I remberd I had that weird disc. I inserted it.

Jonah screamed and screamed. The skin clogged him like thick dough. He punshed and and kicked, but it didnt work. Thier skin started to latch on to his.

WEE-OOH, WEE-OOH. The police parked thier car. It was 7:43, and many parents had showed up. The first policeman tried to open the door, but it was locked. They (the policemen) started talking. One hit the window to no avail. We will have to clim. He reached the top, and looked. The other one came up. They hurried to a open hatch.

A strange screen poped up on the computer screen. A purplish body appeard. Hmm? I said.

That girl- I forgot her name, was thrown to the roof. A policeman was entering the hatch, and turned around But the hand grabbed him back into the hatch. The hatch shut, and lazers rose from the sides of the roof. A holigraphic purple body appeared from the roof from all sides of the lazers, strange programmings, and numbers were going into a hand part of the holigraphe body. Susie screamed and backed up.

The dirt fell off as she looked at the school, swearing.

Next Time: Part 12...SEASON FINALE!

To be continued...

STOKAL
based on at true life story
10th part!

Part 10
by Nintendoobsessed

It mutterd something, and 2 hands came out of its head. It ripped off my partners heads and devoured them, Said Mario.

In the middle of the stadium was Susie. Around her were the 5th grade cyborgs, and the 2nd grade cyborgs. What are they doing? I thought. There skin touched each others. I ran to Susie who was crying. I squeezed betwwen the kids. I'm here. I said. But she kept her eyes on something behind me. What? I turned around and started running. At them. The skin had fused and they were trapping us. I kicked at the forming skin between them that ripped. We ran. We have to leave now. A brand new reason appeard. Betty smashed through the roof. Whhat? She had been...crushed.

Far away, in the forest, a hole appeard. A middle school girl crawled out. She tried to crawl more, but the preasure was too much. Its after...why didnt I realize it before? She felt the Jewl that hung around her neck. She smelled the air. They've already attacked here. It will be lucky if theres any survivors from THE CEREMONY. She grimly thought to herselve.

Questions raced in my mind as I ran. What were they doing? Are the commnity starting to notice the were gone? I ran back into the maze. I turned around. Betty through the concrete at us. She was pure iron/electronics! I ran a diffrent way. Betty followed. I hid behind a pillar; Betty stomped by. But she wasent stupid. She used her hand to smash through the hard drives that were SouthEast of her with her hand at us. I jumped, but then I realized, this was a new Betty, a STRONGER Betty. I hurried down a passage to the floor below. Giant machines galore. I dodged them and came to a room with a computer. I looked up the hall. A man who looked like he had been whiped was walking that way. Weird. I thought quickly stepping into the room.

Time is running out... The season finale is coming!

To be continued...

STOKAL
based on a true life story.

Part 9
By Nintendoobsessed

More then 30 cars were outside the school. They were scared, angry, and confused parents. 5 sets had already tried to get in, plus Sasha longfield. Mother of Susie Longfield.

I woke up in a glassy area. All around, old computers and broken robots made the strange MCP lair. I stumbled to my feet, and started walking. From somewhere, I could hear below me screaming. I picked up my pace.

So, said Mario. They said and joked that it looked like a giant with a brain for a head. Thats when the door broke open."

I kept running. Diffrent ways crossed my path. I chose certin. I finnaly started to hear screaming come from the West. I went that way getting more and more nervous at the situation.

When they found her, the first of the parents, whe was sobbing at the door, talking about children, demon children grabbing her child. The mother, tried to talk sense to her, but it didnt effect her. So they tried to get in, but the door was locked. More and more parents came. Finnaly, the father of James, hit the window. It was unbreakable. So he tried more places to break in, but it didnt work.

HUMAN INTERFERANCE? Right at the time the CEREMONY is being setup? How could this happen? Said the MCP. Well, you did realize that the parents would realize something was going on right? THIS IS NOT MY PROBLEM! Its... MCP beebed. Leader did put this in my hands. Fine! Make sure those parents are eliminated now.

I ran down the hallway. The screams were getting louder. I finally got to a giant space. I gasped.

Next Time: Hmm? Bettys return! Look for Part 10!

To be continued...

I don't want to be rude but its fascinating reading your responses- you all ignored my second post. You all seem to believe that I haven't talked to her at all, which is simply not true. I would ask you to read over my second post, but I don't believe I'm going to be getting any new information here. If anyone is willing to prove me wrong ("talk to her once asshole" is not advice) go right ahead.

Here is the post most of you are ignoring:

"I have talked to her about seven times, but only when her friend is around. We tried to arrange watching a movie together (the three of us, as friends) but they never showed up. From that point it's been like I've described: I think she's scared of me so I'm scared of proceeding in a incorrect way."

Thanks, I hope you've all read it this time. :)

Hum okay.

STOKAL
based on a true story

Part 8
by Nintendoobsessed

I couldent hurt them. They were human, so Sparks didnt work. But it wapped them. I finnaly escaped from them. I ran to the office, crazed. Then I reammemberd. Susie! But the crowd was gone. I would have to save her later. I hurried to the room where I found the ROM. I smelled something familar. I grabbed a CD marked "Progect Nitro". Mrs. Ball came in and grabbed me!!! I kicked her in the kneecap and ran out the upper door. I ran across the empty gym. I was going to rescue Susie. I hurried into the computer room and-

"Okey," said Mario. It was a night. I was a 1st class marine. Some of the guys saw something weird on the radar near our base.

-I tripped onto the metal floor. I could hear laughing, and a "Foooolllll!" Shut- he picked me up with his robo claws. "You arent leaving THIS time". He said. He threw me into a mess of computers. A horrible maze.

Ryan SCREAMED in the prison.

Susies mom picked up the phone. Hello? She asked. Hmm? What are you talking about she said. What? Whos MCP? She asked. It was too late. The phone was dead.

Commander Computer picked up the phone. What? He said. A human? The MCP Will be greatly disturbed! He slamedd down the phone and went to report the disturbance.

"Im going to the school immediatly" She thought. As she got up to the school, she gasped. Her Susie was on the roof with another boy! But then Susie disapeerd from sight. She ran out of her car to the school. Right to the door. She slamed herself upon it. The door was locked with security.

Next Time: Look for maze! Look for Love! Look for Murder! LOOK for Part 9!

To be continued...

Okay, I described this situation wrong.

I have talked to her about seven times, but only when her friend is around. We tried to arrange watching a movie together (the three of us, as friends) but they never showed up. From that point it's been like I've described: I think she's scared of me so I'm scared of proceeding in a incorrect way.

Part 7
by Nintendoobsessed

5...She picked up Kennedy again. 4...She threw with true aim. 3... It hit the lazer. 2... A explosion enswed. 1.1.1.1.1.1.1! "She" screamed. The lazer was gone. Susie ran, screaming out of the room. And down the hallway to the computer room.

The claw grabbed James again. He didnt escape this time.

Marios screams echoed. Tell us Mario! Tell us! Said the skinning computer. "NO!" He yelled. Fine, next....-No! Fine I will tell you. NO! said the computer. Tell me the biggining! "Not the BIGGINING!" He yelled. More screams echoed throughout the school.

I ran down the hallway. Up ahead, a little girl was sobbing she tripped to the floor. "We're all gonna dieee!" She cried. More shrieks echoed behind me. What grade are you? I asked. S-S-Second. she sobbed. So... Commander Computer only attacked that corner of the school... An idea sparked in me. We have to get to the roof I said. We would attract attention.

Ryan cried in the prison.

How DO we get onto the roof asked Susie. Mr. Scoot uses a secret passage to the roof. Follow me, Its in the Cafetaria. As we walked by the office we saw Commander Computer doing something to a phone. We snuck by to the theartre (basiclly) area, and climbed up a ladder. We found ourselves on the roof. We looked out. Only one car was coming our way. "Hey!" Said Susie. Thats my moms car! "Wave to her quick"! I said. She waved, but she screamed. She was being pulled by 78 robot kids. They attacked me too. I was pulled by the crowd. They pulled me to the floor. They crowded me, and pulled me to the floor. I was slown led by the crowd.

"Finnnneee!" Said Mario. Irll tell you...

Next Time: Look for Part 8. MCP Files!

To be continued...

At 10/17/13 05:49 PM, Jester wrote: Maybe she's avoiding you specifically

Well, that's what I was thinking. I've only had a crush three times in my life so I was desperate to have a new one. I guess it's more important not to be a creep, though.

STOKAL
based on a true life story

Part 6
by Nintendoobsessed

He was gone. My guide to the MCP. But I had a feeling he wasent telling me everything about his enounter of "the leader". There was something deeper to the story. Something fell at me. It was the robot kids! It was time to test the sorwd.

Far away, on Monroe St., Susie,s mom realized something. "Shes late...her bus hasent arrived. Little did she know Susie was trapped in her classroom. "I will call the office." She said. Everything will be fine." The sound of phone clicks echoed through the house.

"Stop touching me!" Ryan yelled. He was in the office. "A fiesty one is good" said Commander Computer. CC revealed a hole and shoved Ryan down it. The last thing Ryan heard was the ring of a phone.

I swung the sowrd at them. I smashed it in thier chests and they exploded in sparks. That worked nice. I will call this sowrd...Sparks. It was nice. A claw grabbed me and I was back in the computer room. I could hear shrieks coming from the computer office. The MPC stared. A sowrd? That must be Marios! Howwww! Yarrg! I threw the Sparks at the MCP it made a tiny dent. His giant claw grabbed the sowrd. Sparks came out of the claw. He dropped me. I grabbed Sparks and bolted out of the computer room, sheriks behind me.

In Susies 2nd grade class, her best friend, Kennedy was acting strangely. The other kids were crying, beacause freedom was blocked by a lazor that vaporized there teacher. The windows and the other doors were blocked by lazers. Then, her friend roared 10... Susie ran to the door realizing it was a bomb. 9... she realized she needed to put a lot of matter in the door. 8... she grabbed her chair and threw it at the lazer. 7... She grabbed her friend. 6... it was a bomb. She threw it. 5... It fell to the floor.

Next Time: Look for Part 7. and escape plan!

To be countinued...

Hello, I am a freshman in college and I am having my first crush since seventh grade. This crush is on a shy girl who lives in the dorm room across from mine, but she is so shy that she avoids pretty much everybody else in my dorm, and I can hardly see her except when I happen to walk by her once a week and mumble an awkward "hello".

Is there any way to progress this? I'm honestly not sure if she's scared of me or not.

Part 5
By Nintendoobsessed

It was soft. The ground I mean. I looked around. I was DEEP under the ground. It was dark. But I saw something moving! It was a man. He looked tired. Someone new? He said. Who are you? I asked. My name is...wait your a MCP spy arent you? No. I tried to stop him but... Hmph! he smirked. He mutterd something about "Physihly invincible. "How would you know that?" I said. "I helped create him". What? "You heard me" he said. Me and um, leader built him. But...what are you doing here then? I said. Its a long story. Tell me, I said. Okey, I was forced to help him. We made a deal that if he didnt- Wait, your a kid. Dont, misjudge me, I growled. Fine, -kill me for information, he would be able to kill me beacause I would know more. So I helped HER, He said. Her? I thought. "So I built it for her and her system threw me down here" he sighed. Look kid, you cant stop them. There are so many. The robots, Commander Computer, MCP, MCPs security hard drive, and leader.

The claw grabbed James and started pulling him. He grabbed the handel again, dropping to the floor.

"Fine, youe convinced me. Mario said. "Here, I cant get out of here, but you can. He handed me a strange lokking sword. This sword contains bugs and Errors that kills computers". He said. A strange sound came from the sky. It was a monsterous claw. It grabbed Mario and took him up. Goodbye he yelled. Use the sword to stop-! "What"? I yelled. But he was too high. I sighed.

Jonah was yelling. You cant get away with this! He yelled at the MPC. Is this all you humans say? Said the MPC. A strange man was pulled up by a claw. NOW!!! said the MPC. You will tell me where the master is, or you will be skinned. I will nerver tell you what happened to- 'SLAP'! It was a child. My original group. Go and kill the child. The jumped into the hole.

Next Time: Look for Part 6. And NEW character.

To be continued...

STOKAL
based on a true life story

Part 4
By Nintendoobsessed

And...Betty triped. The tree crushed her. Um... said Jonah.

James moaned. It had been 2 hours. He stood up. The laser was still there. BAM! The claw exploded out of the toliet... again. No... moaned James.

Hmm, I will send the first person I check after him", said Comamander Computer. Now,... he grabbed a 3rd grader and inserted a chip. He buzzed and stood still. "Go after Jonah 1", the Commander said. Instantly, It ran towards the forest to a unknown fate. Then, he grabbed another, and another. Until he got to Ryan. You will be of good use for Superior. What? He said. Then Commander computer grabbed the rest. He then grabbed Ryan, and enterd the school.

Jonah had explained what had happend. The computers there taking over... I said. So, said Jonah, we have to get to the computer room? Yes, I said. We must go now. But as we started, a 3rd grader jumped on me and was Adult content! I kicked him and ran. The computer Jonah mentioned...was gone. We hurried into the school. Up near the office area, I saw Commander Computer. I hurried to the computer room. No guards I though. Odd. I finally got to the computer room (with Jonah). I got in and swore. Inside was a giant screen with a horrible face. MCP. I mutterd. You got...this far. he said. So, your the MCP? Yes. With this discration, I jumped and kicked it. Not a dent. Naughty,Naughty!, it said using robot arms sticking out its side to grab me. Goodbye it said dropping me into a hole. Jonahs face got smaller and smaller.

To be continued...

Thanks for the info.

STOKAL
based on a true life story

Part 3
By Nintendoobsessed

Will, along with some other 69 kids, were marching down the hallway. It was a normal day until some robotish guards forced the kids into the hallway. One terrible looking one was leading them outside. When the kids were all outside, the scary one started to speak. YOu are all here. Good. "Sir.", said a guard. 2 are missing! I have already sent CLAW after that one. The other one is being taken care by BET-TEE.

I swam to the shore. But then, Betty grabbed me back into the water. She had turned into a giant robo-lake monster. I couldent do anything, except swim. The mouth lunged at me, but, I swam as fast as I had ever. I felt horrible. My leg was gone.

James couldent get out of the claws grasp. He grabbed hold of the flusher, and the claw was swept way. He was wet, but okey. He collapsed to the cold floor. He was hungry. Very hungry. He noted that that laser blocked his path. He sighed falling to the ground.

Will watched, waiting. "I am Commander Computer", said the giant, scary one. All of you will be my slaves, to take crontrol over the world for the MCP. "Shut up ugly!", said Jonah. He was having a bad day. He had lost his money. "You will be first", said Commander Computer. He grabbed him with brute force. "YOU WONT HURT MY FRIEND"!, yelled Dean; who jumped on the metal beast. It stumbed, but kicked Dean brutally killing him. But Jonah got away escaping into the forest.

I escaped out of the lake and escaped to a rock, right to the playground. Its safe...at the playground. How wrong I was. Jonah came running to here. "HOW DID YOU GET HERE"?, he said. I...robot...Ms.Ball.... Nerver mind, theres this Comm-SMASH! Betty was back. She picked up a tree, and...

Far away, robot kid pieces were forming back together...

To be continued...