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thanks for the info guys

no i think i would be a writer. but i lack experienced so a second writer with expierence with writing a comic strip would be nice. its my idea so i wont to be able to make it not just supervise it or something like that

I'm reading your blood storm story, its amazing i hope to see more of it.

I'm planning to waste between a $100-$200 on a microphone. I'm a death vocalist, I'm looking to know what microphone would work well for me. does anyone have experience or advice on this kind of situation?

thank you for that. it worked, here is the story. spirit gurdian
i misspelled the title again on the page :( i have trouble with he one word, but the rest of the story is proofread. at this point its only a summary of the first story arc

basically its about characters with "spirits" which are like these ghostly things that follow them around and have many different designs and names that usually reflect their human counter part for examples: Justice,Murder,Hero,Malevolent are some of the names Ive used. the idea came to me as a kid when i watched zatch bell. i hated the show i thought it would have been a better idea of the guys controlling the puppets fought to, and so came this idea but o f course radically different. ill explain the concept more to anyone who want to hear about it.

oh man i suck at this. i made a new topic by accident. here's the earlier message about why i posted this :S

iv been brainstorming a comic idea I'm looking for writers and artists :D PM or just post here. a little bit to know about me is i don't have a lot of writing experience but iv spent the past two weeks writing free hand like crazy because these ideas don't stop and i want to keep writing for a while. which is the reason why i joined newgrounds recently

basically its about characters with "spirits" which are like these ghostly things that follow them around and have many different designs and names that usually reflect their human counter part for examples: Justice,Murder,Hero,Malevolent are some of the names Ive used. the idea came to me as a kid when i watched zatch bell. i hated the show i thought it would have been a better idea of the guys controlling the puppets fought to, and so came this idea but o f course radically different. ill explain the concept more to anyone who want to hear about it.

iv been brainstorming a comic idea I'm looking for writers and artists :D PM or just post here. a little bit to know about me is i don't have a lot of writing experience but iv spent the past two weeks writing free hand like crazy because these ideas don't stop and i want to keep writing for a while. which is the reason why i joined newgrounds recently

well this post isn't about music its lyrics :S

it wasn't like that i spent about two weeks writing it on paper :S im sorry

At 12/29/10 08:18 AM, NapalmDTH wrote: a rough story idea that i have been brewing in my mind for years. this is what i consider the first story arc. when all this is finished ill be writing scripts that will hopefully be used for a web comic and/or possibly a web animation. ill be having short character introductions before each chapter. i didnt have time to check grammar at this moment so ill be putting a second post soon. feel free to ask questions. i had to post on face book because there is not enough room here.

im sorry i think this will fix the problem. i my account is open so everyone should be able to read it. im in a bit of a rush. if anyone can suggest a site where i can post without a character limits and security that would be helpful

Spirit Guardians

I ma truly sorry i was in a rush to get this posted this morning cuase i had to go somewhere early and i spent all night typing this. i dont know why the link doesnt work but i put my settings to open so anyone should be able to read these witout adding me :S

a rough story idea if ideas that have been brewing in my mind for years. this is what i consider the first story arc. when all this is finished ill be writing scripts that will hopefully be used for a web comic and/or possibly a web animation. ill be having short character introductions before each chapter. i wont have to to check grammar at this moment so ill be putting a second post soon. feel free to ask questions. i had to post on face book because there is not enough room here.

Spirit Guardain

thanks i didnt think of that

thank you that helps. iv only written in a format that I'm use to reading lyrics in. often in death core the lyrics are written this way so when the person is singing it they can visualize they're own rhythm instead of following whats written. but ill try and stuck to the format i wrote in the last song

amazing i agree with all of this. also another reason i don't believe is because of the stars. if you take the time to learn about them you'll discover that we are so insignificant compared to their long lives. everything in space has a much bigger impact then anything that happens on earth the stars were here long before humans even come up with the concept of god. the stars are truly mind blowing things.

that was pretty good. i dont get the final message though. are you saying religion sucks? cuase if so your not the only one that thinks so. this is very good writing keep at it.

just some amateur writings of mine
Apocalypse is within me
I've had terrible dreams of what i will become. premonitions of a world consumed by a dark wrath invade my sleep. I'm torn from the inside. Ive seen what will happen to this world. a black sun will mark the beginning of the end. i will become deformed spawning wings and fang. apocalypse is near. i fear my fate. against my will i am destined to destroy the world. iv seen it in my dreams the end is near. this world is doomed by my hand. my life curses this world. i must end this nightmare. this world can be saved by my shortens life. i see it in my dreams. this gun to my head will be humanities salvation.

The storm
peace is a lie. a delusion of this world.it only comes for brief moments. it is the calming before the storm. thunder will tear away the memories and when the storm is done the calming begins again.

salting the wound
I've been betrayed by my friends. the emotions are building up. but I'm getting past it. i can stand on my own again and try to find the right path. since day one it has felt like Ive been falling and everyone is pulling their parachute but mine inst working. its tough to answer the questions in life on our won but I'm getting past new challenges everyday. I'm soar from the separation but i feel like one day it will make me stronger. i was scared to hit the bottom but i know ill just pick myself back up again. one day life will make sense again and this time it'll be on my own. there's a flame inside us all that will keep us going no matter what. some times its hard to stay warm in this fucking cold world but i feel the flame their either way. i know I'm not the only one in distress we are all seeking answer and trying to feed the flames. the answers are within ourselves.

Back stabber
Thrown against the wall, you try to fight me but i wont relinquish my grip on you. I'll stick this knife into your back and twist it. do you know what it's like to have your stabbed by your best friend, by the one that always claimed to be by your side, you will soon. you must understand thihs. you were the one i looked up to when i thought i needed someone. what you did destroyed my life and now its time to pay it back.

Zombie
I'm losing track of myself again. i don't remember what i was suppose to be. this is all bullshit that's all i know. I'm feeling sick again, its because i gained an illness called life. i don't want it anymore. i need to find the cure. I'm filled with so much disgust over this. i don't mean to offend anyone but life is to sickening. you can have it cause i don't want it anymore. its yours to take I'm only asking for oblivion in return is that to much to ask, for a place where i can put all emotions and thought to rest?

De Oliveira
Whats happiness without you? it doesn't make sense to me. its not enough to be around you, you need to know I'm in love.i hope you can accept that. everyone here wears a beautiful mask, i believe your face is real. you hide nothing you stand out to me because your true. all time is wasted on anyone else. it's just you and me, oh i wish that was true. even if it was only us would you accept me? or would you let the species die because I'm not good enough. please come put my mind at ease. I'm nothing if i don't try. I think I'm stuck somewhere between being a boy and a ma. how much longer can i take. when will i be ready for you. I'm cursed to never have you. let me be free break the malediction placed by your wonderful eyes. all my time is wasted except when i am with you so that's why i cant give up. what will you think of me when you read these words or hear this song?

Blood Art
I am a shameless numb human in seek of blood. in cold nights I've ripped open the insides of lonely travelers. I've cut the tongues of beautiful girls and torn out the eyes of foolish boys. I am not a murderer. i kill with purpose. i kill for the art. the true beauty in life is witnessing the transition from living to lifeless. these walls are painted red they hold the taste of true beauty covered in blood i see what i truly am, not a monster an angel of death a artist of beauty. these eyes see halos above all heads. your all portraits waiting to be painted by my knife. you cant stop the course of true beauty

Perception
Imagine a world broken and torn look around you. reality hits you and you realize this is your home.
What is seen cannot be unseen all around you people are blind. They witness the world as a whole
but you now see what it truly is. Scattered like rose pedals thrown against the wind.Humanity is like a machine with broken gears.Never moving, always trapped in time.In time society falls too and the earth is left to crumble.This knowledge frees you, blindness leaves you, But what good is this revelation? A polished gear cannot run a machine on its own.We are doomed, why can't we admit it?

Genocider: The Plague against Man
Cities are burning within my grasp
With the flick of my wrists the cities and its populations vanish
There is no trace of what was once here
My footprints blacken the earth
I suffocate all life in the soil with my presence
Earth will cease to breath
I am the ultimate greed of man
Every life I take makes me more powerful, youthful, Immortal
I am the end of men women and children
I am the end of all life on this planet
This is a time of revelations
There are no flaming horses
There will be no rapture
And no time of judgment
Only the end of man and its presence
I am infected with a disease more powerful then any man made nuclear weapon
I am the lord of terror
God of destruction
I will choke Earth of all its living resources
I will drain the lives of all life into my hands
I will obtain ultimate power