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I didn't see that, but i have seen some pretty other funny things textd. P.S. That new girl (not really new anymore) that does MOD is pretty hot. She just needs to back off on the blush and she'd be smokin.

lol, and ya, i liked the comment about Much Music actually plays music. : P 'Tis true. MTV sucks. No effence.

At 1/28/05 04:50 PM, YoinK_VineS wrote: good luck on getting your 20 reviews this weekend...

Thanks!

and yes.. sometimes some flash submissions get deleted which means that everyone who has reviewed...

Ya, i recently learned about that. lol. But it wasn't that. I havn't reviewed a movie under 3.00 in quite a while. Maybe it was one of my past ones from a year ago that finally went off the map, can that happen?

At 1/28/05 05:05 PM, Tremour- wrote: I know that. I can't help but act like an ass, it's a problem I'm dealing with.

lol, i have a problem confronting those who have similar problems as yours with a smile in hopes to better them. ^_^

I love it too. Then again, we all love our own countries, right ? Unless of course a trendy rock band tells you not to.

lol, ya. I love Canada. As do i Scotland. As do it England. As do i America. My 4 fav countires.

At 1/28/05 04:57 PM, Smithercell wrote: its not like im prejudiced againts low level people. But how about you have to be at least level 9.

May be a good idea. It shows comitment to NG. I think level 10 really shows comitmement, but that may be too strict.

Another, is have at least past 500 post.

Shows comitment to the BBS, good idea. Thus we know they won't just go all inactive right away. I wouldn't make it any less then that to be honest.

One more is to prove yourself by making the next 30 post with intelligence, maturity, and equality. Make sure that there post are informative, relative, and if they are trying to be funny, it should be funny.

We would have to assign someone to moniter newcomers then. Monitor their 30 posts that is. Also a decent idea.

(maybe that last one was harsh, but its up to you) So....what do you think?

It isn't up to me. lol. ^_^
Though i am curious to know what the VPs and Noir- think about al lthis and the other ideas i proposed in my last thread.

At 1/28/05 04:55 PM, Coop83 wrote: Long periods of time? Yo have barely given yourself enough time to breathe in there.

Well ,to me, it is lots of time really. I dunno, i write alot. I have a passion for it.

I hope to have finished, complete to publication, the first of these novels of mine by maybe 2008 or 2009. I'm just playing with ballpark figures at the moment, so I could be way out.

That is quite a ways awaym but at least you have an idea. ^_^

Mind you, if you will be a student, you will suddenly find that you have loads more free time than someone like me.

Very true. Univeristy i also have planned out. For every three hours of class time: 2 hours studying, 1 hour writing. Any other time is free time, which can be used for writing. We wil lsee how it goes. Iam not sure how much studying Uni take syet. : P

If only I'd have found out I had this kind of creative streak when I was at Uni, rather than drinking, shagging and playing on the PS2 all the time. I might have made something of my time there, otherwise.

Maybe, but maybe not. : P

At 1/28/05 04:55 PM, Manic_streetpreacher wrote: well aint you the busy body myst.

Indeed! : )

How the hell you can even plan that stuff out Ill ever know.

With my brains.

Wiritng is just spontaneous to me.

Remember what i said, a novel is planned. ; )
Shorts and poems are spontaneous to me too, but if you want an intriguing plot an encapturing storyline you need it planned or you will never be satisfied and will always be going back to change things, thus, too many changed equal bad for a book. I have learnt from experience.

I may edit thigns afterwards but I cant plan stuff for the life of me.

Well, if you want to write novels, i feel you may have to. The idea is spontaneous, yes, but how you get to that idea must be planned. Unless it is in first person and present tense, then you can create as if you are going through the adventure, however, that would end up having a hell of a lot of editing to be done.

I pity you for having to actually plan all that out.

Pity? Are you kidding me. Planning out the novel is funnest part for me. It is writing it that sometimes has its down-time. And i did not have to plan it out. I feel it gives a higher quality to my books and helps me brainstorm much better. A bok you never plan has all the good ideas come when you finish, thus, alot of changes and backtracking is done. A book that is planned has al lthe good ideas come as it is written, makign life easier for the writer and the reader... for it is fluent for both.

At 1/28/05 04:21 PM, carmelhadinosaur wrote: Sorry, must say it again before going to sleep...

Goodnight.

LETS SHAMPOO US SELENIUM!!!
OMGOMG i have the spirit to beat the record now :P

lol!

Good night!! Hopefully when im getting up, 138 will immated to sign in ^__^

Hopefully thanks for basically taking care of the list. I appreciate it man.

At 1/28/05 05:00 PM, da_pope wrote: I STOLE THIS FROM SOME CHICKS PROFILE ON A CANADIAN SITE

calm yourself. ^_^

If I knew that she got it off Ricks Monday Report (Great Show By The Way) then I would have given him credit.

lol, aha, it wasn't from MR, it was from one of his stand-up routines. And i was only saying, i was blaming. ^_^ Love, not hate my fellow canadian.

At 1/28/05 04:56 PM, Tremour- wrote: Oh look, another "my country is better than yours" thread.

Oh look, another complainer. It is just a joke. No need to be negative about it.

Of course, the country I live in is the best. Don't agree with me ? You're just jealous, apparantly.

P.S. Scotalnd is pretty cool. I love it there. ^_^

Speakign of stealing jokes off Rick Mercer, did anyone see that specific stand up routine? It was pretty hilarious.

And da_pope, you should at least give Mercer credit for his jokes, he is a comic genious.

And, esentially, we are on top, because north is up. No way around it. You don't go down, to go north. The world rotates east to west (or west to east.. uhh, i forget), no north to south or south to north. So north is up. That was for the guy who tried to be smart about it.

At 1/28/05 04:29 PM, da_pope wrote: Thats Right Canada Ownz:

That is funny, but you stole that joke off of Rick Mercer (canadian comedian).

At 1/28/05 04:24 PM, Quisty wrote: You didn't read it, did you? Because I said that Nightwish wrote it, not me >.<

I didn't know who that was so i assumed it was a singer you based your ballad on. I thought he was like your inspiration. Ig uess i got confused. I read through quickly, so i probably interpreted your first line wrong. Meh, uhh then good job to Nightwish.. whoever that is... is that an Ng user?

At 1/28/05 04:22 PM, Coop83 wrote: Yay, I'm still popular ^___^

<3

On a lighter note, I'm also working my arse off, to get this chapter finished. I've written about 2000 words in the past 2 days, which is more than I've written in about 2 months.

I motivate well.

Thanks for your patience

No problem.

Just thought i'd post this. This is my current Novel list and the dates are simply when i set my deadlines. In italics is just my comments for you guys (not actually apart of the list i have saved as a .doc).

Current Novel List
These are obviously apart of a series.
04/04/06 – Evemortal: The Heart of Echoes
09/01/06 – Evemortal : The Tide of Fate
04/01/07 – Evemortal : The Test of Faith

These are also apart of the evemortal series. The first two are based before the evemortal series takes place, while the third starts 20 years before and end 20 years after, so it involves a quick recap of the first three novels half way through.
09/01/07 – Michael of the Night
04/04/08 – Demon of the Curse
09/01/08 – The Story of the Wing-Eater

That book is semi-based on me and my fathers relationship and semi-fictional. The Poem book's numbers (17-20) is just how old i was when i wrote the poems in it. I stil lgot two more years to go really.
04/04/09 – A Father in Me
04/04/09 – Dream in Verse: Experiment (17 – 20)

Notice the big gap? Yes, this one will be a doozy, i got big plans and i need alot of time to suite this one up. P.S. I will be in University during the creation of most these books, thus the long periods of time i have given myself.
04/04/11 – The Myth of Death
04/04/11 – Dream in Verse: Experiment (21-23)

I am slacking on reviewing for sure. So tomorrow is review day/record thread say. Nothing else. I plan o ndoing 20 reviews this weekend. So like 15 tomorrow and 5 sunday.

Congrats T_C for 200 posts, i am nearing it myself. : )

View Your Reviews (119)
(With Responses Only (33))

I know this seems weird, but i swear i was at 120 yesterday.

At 1/28/05 04:21 PM, Toocool100 wrote: but the negative comments are bumping up the topic so more people can see

lol. bump positively.

Plus, i will be here most the night to bump. I havn't any plans tonight or tomorrow (specifically dedicated to this thread). So i will bumpng galore. ^_^

(some people may be confused as to what is going on, well, now, as am i. I had a big scheme to pretend to side with Arcturus and then get him when he least expected it, but i don't really want to go that route anymore and i am kind of sick of controlling an assasin, so just bear with me as Raze and I try and find our place in the immortal world. Expect a few weird outcomes coming up in the next couple days as i try and cope and just go along with them. Maybe a death will soon arise.)

*Raze was soon airborne once more and Lion noticed his sudden drive for life. Raze was pacing and thinking deeply, his adrenaline obviously no aloowing him to rest; both physically and mentally.*

Lion: Raze, What is it?
Raze: What is what?
Lion: What are you so worked up about?
Raze: Just got alot on my mind. Iam thinking of backing out.
Lion: Backing out of what? Killing Arcturus or killing our employer?
Raze: Both.
Lion: Wha?
Raze: Do you like who we are?
Lion: Well, it is all i have ever known since you took me in.
Raze: But do you like it?
Lion: At first i wasn't keen, but i have become acustom since.
Raze: I found LeChuck.
Lion: The man who killed your mentor.
Raze: Not a man, but a spirit of some kind. And he was not my mentor, but a friend.
Lion: So, what are you going to do about it?
Raze: I am not sure. He is with the Jovians.
Lion: The Jovians?
Raze: Aye.
Lion: You have to be crazy to get into that.

*Raze paced more as he pondered his actions. LeChuck could only be stronger and Raze couldn't beat him before. What made him think he could now? *

Raze: We go to Jovia II. EQ, did you process my request.
EQ: Yessir.
Raze: Acknowledge.
EQ: Yessir.

*The ship suddenly changed courses. And Raze then left a short message for Arcturus that Arcturus would recieve at his leaisure.*
Arcturus, this Raze. Let us forget my past threats, assumptions, accustions, and propositions. I feel it is time that i settled old wounds. I will, first, kill the man who wants you dead, to leave your concious at ease. You won't have to worry about that matter. Then i will attend to my own needs and if i am lucky, we will one day meet again. You are a strong minded-man and i have learnt much from you from our recent discomforts. Please accept this message as my personal apology for all the mental anguish or faulteries that i may have caused you.

*Raze then spoke once more.*
Raze: EQ, forget Jovia II - for now-, take us back to Ceroos!
EQ: Yessir.

Note Newcomers

If you arn't going to be there, then we realyl don't care unless you are going to somehow get around (aka leave your browser open and GG)... i don't like how people keep saying, 'i won't be here' etc... obviously we are here to find out who will be here. Did i ver ask who wouldn't? No, so stop wasting our time and spamming it up with negative energy. We want positive comments only towards tomorrow. Unless of course, the nagative comments are only for jokes.

P.S. That is funny about the all-time low. lol.

Nice poems Quisty, Ramagi, BonusSatage, oh, ya me ; ).... and even you MARCUS. Nothing new from me today, but i enjoyed reading everyone elses. Good stuff.

At 1/27/05 09:25 PM, deathtuna wrote: Hey Myst, Im working on that poem a bit here and there, just not enough time to really get it done, this weeked ill finish it up and post it.

No probelm ,get it whenever you can, don't rush, i want it to be good. ; )

At 1/28/05 03:30 PM, Coop83 wrote: Sounds like sex, to me. Correct?

Actually i used sex as a metaphor fro relationships. So some of it refers to sex, while some parts don't. Nicely picked up on though. The sex part was not supposed to be its strongest feature, more one of the subtle ones, but you picked up on it right away. lol.

I'm now no longer Myst's favourite person on the BBS, as I'm going to delay the posting of Chapter 2 for a few more days until I'm satisfied with it. As soon as it is ready, there will be an email winging its way to you via email, so check your inbox daily, Myst.

You are still my fav *huggles* *blushes*, but i will be checking my email everyday. And don't bother rushing if you got other shit to do lol. Don't let my excitement get the best of you. : )

Sorry i missed so much, was writing an exam which i did well on too. ^_^

First off, congrats to Malice- and Chromius, i just noticed now that the voting was over. Ended quicker then ithought. Thanks to all who voted for me as well. ^_^

Second off, i am still trying to develop the member list. A few changes have been made, but i am trying to get rid of the alt accounts (i'd prefer to only show main accounts) as well as i am trying to put together that potentials list to add on to the bottom. For the people who haven't been given an answer or are inactive etc. Am still not sure who to put down for that part, maybe it is empty right now, or?

Idea
Also, i thought. If someone is inactive, they can be nominated to the potentials list. Now, a nomination only counts if a Vp or Noir- okays it. If they are on the potential list for two weeks without word, they lose their member list and i will keep a seperate list (non-posted) of retired members, just incase they want back in, we have a record of their past neglijance (spell?). If that is a good idea, make sure you tell me.

Also, i think we need to discuss the routes of becoming a member, now that we are jam packed, we mind as well make it harder and more elite to get in. Newcomers need to prove themselves, any ideas how?

Next, i also feel that newcomers should be voted in after proving their worth. After they pass their 'probation' then the members have one week or something to vote 'yes' or 'no' Where as Noir- and the vps can count as two votes and brothers count for one vote (that gives vp more authority and a better role to have, adds fu nto it. ^_^). If they get more yesses then nos the they are in. Good idea?

Last, but not least, the list. Please, tell me of alt accounts etc, it is not fully up to date quite yet. Almost there i think. It is not in any specific order.

VP
da_pope
Chromius
Malice-

Brothers
Krowdick
DrunkenPenguin
-Juggernaut-
Myst_Williams
Kirkus
crashphreak
CrunkJuice
-king-o-games-
kreten
Otiose
Execution
-MasteR-
-SquiD
Jamie_McGuire
speedy1234
Bertuzzi44
Smithercell
psykolord
Frencher
iamnone
AngelisNoctum
WhiteTiger777
Enigma-
BioLordKuja

Thanks guys and ignore any typos in my ideas section, i am kind of in a rush and am typing fast. : P

omg, i missed two whole pages!!! All i was doing was writing an exam, which i think i killed by the way.

Wow, like 30 new members since last checked. I am impressed, thanks for all the help carmelhadinpsau (hope isaid that right). ^_^

Tomorrow is the BIG DAY!

Very obvious, but odd rhyme scheme that moves throughout each line and not just the ending. O_o

Anyway, another from me. Turned out weirder then usual. I dropped alot my classic/old english lit on this one. More me, more real life. Please comment. ^_^

Used or Defused?
Free Verse
By, K. Myst Williams

There was a time I was free;
I could be everything I wanted to be.
You remember me before all went hazy
And then all we knew shattered and cried.
White surrounding; I’m padded, I’m tied.
I tried; for you – it’s true.

I used to be the one on top.
Knowing my roles; knowing when to stop.
Feeling out my hand, respecting the flop;
Being that man, the cushion to fall to;
Now I’m drowning in the cushion I can’t even dive through.
Here’s a clue; I’m wrong – you’re strong.

Give me the hand of perpetual light,
So I can have a chance to again take flight.
Please, re-live it all; it must have felt right.
For once in my life I fully belong;
I want to take what we have and make it prolong.
Sing me a song; don’t go – make it so.

Very obvious, but odd rhyme scheme that moves throughout each line and not just the ending. O_o

Anyway, another from me. Turned out weirder then usual. I dropped alot my classic/old english lit on this one. More me, more real life. Please comment. ^_^

Used or Defused?
Free Verse
By, K. Myst Williams

There was a time I was free;
I could be everything I wanted to be.
You remember me before all went hazy
And then all we knew shattered and cried.
White surrounding; I’m padded, I’m tied.
I tried; for you – it’s true.

I used to be the one on top.
Knowing my roles; knowing when to stop.
Feeling out my hand, respecting the flop;
Being that man, the cushion to fall to;
Now I’m drowning in the cushion I can’t even dive through.
Here’s a clue; I’m wrong – you’re strong.

Give me the hand of perpetual light,
So I can have a chance to again take flight.
Please, re-live it all; it must have felt right.
For once in my life I fully belong;
I want to take what we have and make it prolong.
Sing me a song; don’t go – make it so.

At 1/27/05 04:38 PM, BioLordKuja wrote: forgot me.

Okay, i wil ladd you.

I want to note that i was the first person to vote for Malice - *bows* Therefore, i started the hype. ; )

lol, anyway, i got to get back to studying, just checking in.

Thanks for keepng the place up without me guys. Studying still. : P

At 1/27/05 03:11 PM, Manic_streetpreacher wrote: hey..........Im not that bad.............well maybe I am :-(

lol, at least you admit it. Good man. lol.

At 1/27/05 03:08 PM, Bertuzzi44 wrote: I was born a Roman Catholic; then I smartened up and quit in grade four.

Aha, i did the same. ^_^

At 1/27/05 03:03 PM, ManateeGod wrote: Holy Shit < than two days!!!

lol... that is one way to show your excitement. ; )

At 1/27/05 03:03 PM, Manic_streetpreacher wrote: Nice second part its coming along nicely. When I cna be bothered to review it properly I will :P

Ya, he is even lazier then me. : P

At 1/27/05 02:59 PM, Malice- wrote: here you go guys, my updated logo

Sick! That looks awesome...

Nice job, nothing but praise from me.

At 1/27/05 02:58 PM, EKRegulus wrote: heh myst, I also noticed that you passed my amount of posts. I saw it coming but not that fast.

Oh ya, didn't even notice. Well the Record thing (sig pic) has given me some good spammy oppertunities, plus i joined the LNL and my club the Writer's Guild has picken up dramatically lately. Not only that, but i am active again i nthe Immortal RP. So a bunch of things has sumed up me having to post mnore to keep up. ^_^

Hopefully, they will soon show us what he looks like,

Indeed.