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At 12/6/04 04:38 PM, Lysaer wrote: *He reached back and threw Mattox like a javelin across the sky, flying towards mountains that were off in the distance. LeChuck quickly raced off and returned with a boulder the size of Epcott Center, and threw that at a faster speed than Mattox was going. It would be there to hopefully ensure his crushing impact into the mountain.*

*Mattox was soaring through the air. As much as it was a frieghtning experience, it was an exhilerating one. Like flying. As Mattox was closning to the mountain, he realized he was going face first. Spinning i nthe air he truned his body and impacted deep into the mountain back first. It was almost like an explosion he hit the mountain so hard.*
*Slowly opening his eyes, he noticed a massive boulder coming towards him. It was too late to move, and ha had almost been swallowed by the mounatain... he was stuck.*
*Mattox closed his eyes and tightened his body, face and every aching muscle just before the boulder made contact with him.*
*As the boulder hit him, he felt his rib cage crumble inside him. His nose bend to one side and his fingers break into small peices. He tired to yell from the horrifying pain, but he couldnt even move his broken jaw. His ribs peirced his lungs and he struggled to breat jeven a little. He could not heal without the proper oxygen entering his body. He had not the strength to push of the boulder. Mattox felt that this was his end, and for what? He had not even found out who he really was.*

Perfect ending... he thought to himself. Even thinking hurt. The pain was unbearable. Every bone crushed. Every muscle torn. Every thought... a strain.

(I will post whether or not he dies a little later, i got to go for a bit.)

I Psoted this in the Book Club... i just wanted everyone to see it and tell me what they think. Be honest, because i ont want t owaste my time if no one is interested i nreading ir and discussing it. If it is a go, i am looking for one other person to do the same.

Here is what i am thinking. I can write an online, continuous story. So i will come up with an idea and write a new chapter every week or something. Or new 'episode'. It would be kind of like RPGing, but only for me. And for others it would be a read. Maybe someone else would want to do it too and we can get two going. Since this club(Book Club) needs some help, we can have one going here and the other going in WG. Each week, people review the story: commenting etc or discuss with others what they liked about it. Maybe even give ideas on what they think should eventually happen, though, ultimately, it would be up to the writer.
Hmm, i dunno? good or bad idea?

At 12/6/04 04:27 PM, LordSkeletor wrote: Well I think its gonna be three that wins

Unless you can make it so its not a book a week .. i just cant find that much time for reading. As much as i'd like to. I bet everyone would agree that 1 was a great idea, i just dont know if i can hack it.

At 12/6/04 04:29 PM, LordSkeletor wrote: Ok i gotta go now maybe be back later cya for now

Okay.. see ya around. We will miss ya. : P : )

What is your favoutite Cheech and Chong moment/movie/stand-up routine?

At 12/6/04 04:21 PM, Lysaer wrote: "Amateur"
*LeChuck reached his foot back and powered it in between Mattox's legs, sending him blasting sky-high directly upwards. LeChuck had a good laugh before he turned his attention back to finding Farlander*

*Moments later Mattox lands on one knee. The dust of the ground pillowing around him as he made contact with the ground. Looking up at LeChuck in the distance, Mattox's eyes glazed over a pitch black. His eyes as dark and heat-filled as coal.*
*Mattox noticed that Zanzibar was still making his way back, Mattox thought a quick tumble with LeChuck wouldn;t hurt. Speeding off towards LeChuck, Mattox suddenly stops in front of him.*
Mattox: Where ya going, mate?
*Mattox soon spins his entire body around with his fist out. The back of Mattox's fist made contact with Lechuck's face. The crunch was deathly. Mattox grabbed LeChuck's garments with both hands and jumped up into the air. Over thrity stories high, Mattox uses all his strength to throw LeChuck back into the ground.*

wow! Really, really old thread.

Hey LordSkeletor. You mind if i kind of swipe your idea for Writer's Guild.

Here is what i am thinking. I can write an online, continuous story. So i will come up with an idea and write a new chapter every week or something. Or new 'episode'. It would be kind of like RPGing, but only for me. And for others it would be a read. Maybe someone else would want to do it too and we can two going. Since this club needs some help, we can have one going here and the other going in WG. Each week, people review the story: commenting etc or discuss with others what they liked about it. Maybe even give ideas on what they think should eventually happen, though, ultimately, it would be up to the writer.
Hmm, i dunno? good or bad idea?

At 12/6/04 04:04 PM, OZSEM wrote: How do you know she's 24?

I dont know how old she is, but she deffiently does not look 16.

I wouldnt mind doing the read a book thing, as long as we can all agree and get it. However, i just cant do it in a week, and i guess i would be holding everyone back. I liked that idea tho...

At 12/6/04 03:59 PM, D0gg wrote: your running and me Tsasal and karhien are on a boat

So Karess is trying to jump onto the boat before it casts off?
If that is right, tell me, so i can post. : )

At 12/6/04 09:29 AM, Baderact wrote: Zanzibar threw the bodies which a much higher speed towards Mattox yet again. Right before they reached Mattox though, they exploded from the inside.
"Meet the blood wisps."
Flying towards Mattox at a speed much faster than a normal wisp could go, the blood wisps were clearly visible. "Becareful, those will really sting..."

(I guess everyone noticed The Docotr is banned, but i am just stating it so everyone knows. I noticed some charcters are fighting Farlander, but The Doctor wont be back until later this week to defend himself.)

*Mattox, dazed and in mid-healing, notices the bodies come tumbling towards him. Surrounding him and thumping on contact with the ground. Suddenly one body came down on Mattox like a tonf of bricks. Nearly crushing the bone sin his body. Mattox moaned fro mthe pain and pushed the body off of him. he laid for a moment to let his body heal.*
*Lying on his back he suddenly sees men floating in the air behind him. They were suspended in the air as if they had been hung. Suddenly their necks jerked back and the wisps dived inside them. They came hurling towards Mattox. Mattox sped clear.*
*When Zanzibar finally reached where Mattox had been lying, he realized Mattox was not there. Mattox had lifted himself onto his feet and sped away. Mattox was faster then light, it was as if time would stop when Mattox moved at is highest speed.*
*Mattox was still injured, but he was in a fighting mood. The rage deep inside him burned like a fiery adrenaline. Mattox was behind Zanzibar.*
Mattox: Aye, you guys are a bloody pain. I am assuming you are undead too then?
*As Zanazibar turned around to face Mattox, Mattox grabbed his shaulders and threw straight into the ground. Mattox took one step forward, and with all his speed and might, kicked Zanzibar's body. The force of Mattox's kick sent Zanzibar flying off nearly a football field lengths away.*
Mattox: Oooeee, damn thats good look'in.

(Sorry, i am not 100% sure what wisps are, so i may be a little confused in this post. Before your next post, just give a brief idea of what a wisp is to me. Thanks.)

Sorry i was dealing with the immature moron above. What did i miss? Karess is broken free and a fight started... that it?

At 12/6/04 01:05 PM, DroopyA wrote:

I didn't really read what you posted, i kind of skimmed through it, because you seem to take up alot of room and time and frankly, i am bored with you.

More ambitious? I'm a human, not a god.

Sadly, ambition doesn't take being a god.

Regardless of what you think, I do require time to eat and relax. Programming is as taxing on the mind as construction is on the body and I don't think a 5 or 10 minute break every now and then is going to break m...

I know all about running a business, i own one. So you do not need to give me a lecture on happy employers.

Legg Mason handles all of my investments before I even get my paycheck. I ...

I am sorry to hear that.

Yes, I still have house payments to make. The point is, the home is in my name. I'm not renting. I think 99.9% of the world would consider that "own".

Not me. I guess my ambition is 'godly-like' then. Oh, and true fact, it is 92% of the world who are in the rat race.

You have a good start, but no drive it seems.

Yet at 23 I've already graduated from college, got a job, moved out, and bought a home and 2 new cars. Yeah, I'm a lazy fuck...

Hmm, i am not even in University yet, but i have my own car, my own business, a writing career and high school to deal with. It is funny how you 6 years older then me and i am more successful. I plan on graduating with an honors degree a few months after i turn 22 if that is of interest to you. Since we are throwing out these facts and al.

How? I created an imaginary character and I rollplay with him just like you. The only diffrenece is that I don't make Zorthos walk into other peoples stories. If you really want me too, I will, but don't expect me to take ..

Wow, you ARE dense. I said that IF it were in the C & C section it would be abuse. Because you are not following the club rules. Your not so bright eh. I have said it three times.

So? I'm annoyed by a lot of people on this site but that doesn't mean they should all be ...

Then you know how i am feeling. Grow up and be a man. If you don't like being annoyed by people, then don't annoy me.

My story is just a little "off the wall", so what? Isn't that what imagination and fantasy is all about? I mean, it's ok for you to create an entire world and six countries but it's not alright for me to create a character who's obsessed with having clean hair?

I am not even going to dignify that, because you're only being an idiot, thus proving your immaturity.

Then tell them to shut the fuck up. What do they want you to do about it, Kill me?

I AM 17... GROW UP!

How am I rude? Maybe you and you're "friends" need to put down their multi sided dice long enough to gain some self confidence.

Wow, you are immature. Proven again. First off, i just learnt yesterday what multi sided dice was even for. I have never played D&D in my life. Thanks for the prejedicial and immature remark.
Second off, i am self-confident. I am a motivational speaker part-time with my father. I stand in front over 500 people at a time. Not only that, but i have a wonderful life. My confidence could not be higher... although it does not need to be too high to realize i am better then you.

Then I would like a Mod to explain to me what I'm doing wrong. I don't recall "being diffrent" against the rules. I've avoided foul language, personal insults, and needless sex. I haven't interfeared with you, or anybody else in this post. I've yet to do anybody any harm o...

I didn't read that paragraph, it was too repedative to your last few paragraphs.

I didn't want to reply because I didn't want to ruin the thread with a pointless flame war. The only reason I eventually broke down was to explain the following:

oh.. i better read the following then, i skipped it last time. Hopefully is was not a mental brake down you are refering to.

Just because my writing is "diffrent" doesn't mean it's abusive or against the rules. Just because you or the majority of the people here hate my story doesn't mean I shouldn't be allowed to write. I'm roleplaying just like you and you have the same oportunity to interact with me as you do everybody else. I avoid taking the first step into your story because I understand that a lot of you probably hate my character and want nothing to do with him. I don't want to ruin your ...

Wow, repedative again. Okay well, i am not going to explain for the fourth time how it is abusive. So start your own thread. If we dont want to interact with you and find your 'writing' offensive, out of play, or immature. Then start your own thread, grow up and let us do our own thing.
Simple as that.
Problem solved.

Geez, 6 years older then me... and in your shoes. It pathetic.

Um, i vote 3 also. Because i have waaay too much on my plate to read a book a week. More like a boo ka month with me. And that is if i am really into it. I got soo much to do, and WOr is killing most of my spare time. Which i dont mind. : )

At 12/5/04 11:45 PM, G-MAN490 wrote: BTW myst I copy and pasted your descriptions about WOR on my website. is that ok? just making sure, I'll remove it if you dont want it on there, but you probably dont mind do you?

No, i dont mind. I dont see why it would be a problem.

At 12/5/04 11:34 PM, I_Love_Canada wrote: Anyway, I think it's time to close this thread down. We had a good run going about three or four months ago, but now it's all over. To all the members who actually participated in this awesome thread and didn't just sign up and leave, thanks.

Well that sucks, i just joined. : (

I am going to bed all. See ya tomorrow. This sick kid needs his rest.

Quick note: In WOR do not be another charcter. A few people have done, but i cenetred out immortaldarkness today and he is not the only one. It is a rule, do not do it unless given permission.

Anything else i can discuss tomorrow when i aint feeling like im gonna barf... well i aint that sick, but i am achin. Major headache.

Night.

(sorry i gotta go, i will post one tomorrow morning. And, you should not control other charcters, only your own. A thread rule so you know. Also, i cannot gaurantee that the other charcters will get kidnapped, only you can gauantee your own. I am only saying this, because you speak for others quite a bit. It is okay once and while when it is crucual and you need to move on, but you cannot be other charcters.)

(Anyway, goodnight. I am still kinda sick and need to recover.)

At 12/5/04 08:49 PM, Noctroler wrote: Excuse my tone, please. I'm getting a little edgy when I work like I am today and chose to release a little anger. A litte immature of myself.

Well, i have grown alot of respect for you because of that post. Most people would start flaming or arguing. I am sorry i snapped also. You seem like a decent guy, i get a little too serious about writing too.

) Apologies both ways.

At 12/5/04 08:46 PM, Miles_ wrote:

At 12/5/04 08:45 PM, Myst_Williams wrote: *blushes*

you wrote out that you blush?

/HOMOSEXUAL

Um, well your clever. Thanks for the prejedicial remark. Oh and dumbass, grow up. Im playing around.

P.S. No one cares.

At 12/5/04 08:45 PM, Myst_Williams wrote: The smallville girl - Lana. *blushes* she is f'n gorgeous. OOOO Lois is hot tooo!

too bad im taken... because i know she wants me. ; )

The smallville girl - Lana. *blushes* she is f'n gorgeous. OOOO Lois is hot tooo!

At 12/5/04 07:54 PM, Noctroler wrote: This is what SITUATIONAL DESCRIPTORS DO.

John slowly opened his eyes, the sun breaking into vision like splinter breaks the skin. As he strained his muscles to move himself upright, a figure caught his wavering attention...

Please, stop getting so uptight. Also, splinters in an eye. Not very pleaseing to read. More awkward and upsetting. I know that is not what you meant, but your eyes first meeting the sun in the morning does not feel like a splinter. A very bad simile.

Also, you can note the positives and still note the bads. You are quite rude about it. I know i am not speaking for LordSkeletor, but for the general population of the club. People like COSTRUCTIVE critisizm. Not someone yelling at them. For every bad noted, note a good, because you are quite rude.
And quite honestly you dont have the audacity or place to critisize in such a way. Exspecially since i have been published more then you. You are not some kind of god at writing compared to the rest of us. If you are going to be in our club, then be respectable.
All i ask is that you point out the good as wel las the bad and be more kind about noting the bad.

At 12/5/04 07:54 PM, Haloman wrote: Mina: I don't know about this Karess, somthing about this whole party doesn't seem right.......i don't know, im probably just being stupid. You know me, Mrs. Worry about everything. I just hope everything goes ok.

*Karess looks over at Mina and speaks quietly.*
Karess: I know what you mean. The Elder's are acting all nice to me as if noting is going on. And i have agut feeling that something is waiting to happen.

*Dinner finally ends and everyone gathers as Lihahn pulls Karess aside.*
Lihahn: Watch yourself. We may have been friends, but business is most important to me.
Karess: I can never forgive you for what you did. Your presence disgusts me.
*Lihahn is called by a few of the Elders and takes the front of the room.*
Lihahn: Well, it seems we have been having more fun then worrying about the task at hand. Our good man, Sir Kahn, is retiring in less then a months time. As much as this is a farwell party, it is a welcoming party for Karess. Please Karess, take the stage.
*Karess walks up throught the crowd lookiing over at Mina, then Karhein, then Tsasal, then Blaze, and then Zack. They were all spread out throughout the large room.*
*Karess grew a little nervous at the front of the room. Everyone's eyes on him. It wasn't that he did not like talking in front of a crowd, it was that he was afraid of what he would say.*
Karess: I am honoured to be here today. To be your next Senior Council Member in the footsteps of my father. It is an amazing experience, however, things have changed. I truly believe in Lionelle, but i do feel the system is corrupt. Rumours spread about the Elders, i do intend on finding out which are true and which are false..
*Lihahn interupts Karess.*
Lihahn: STOP! This is ludacris, we do not have to listen to accusations. You are one of our key council members, why do you jeperdize that at such a crucial time?
Karess: because, i beleive in Niotsa.
*The crowd stirs with a slight hush of whispers.*
Karess: I beleive that the Elders are using society for their greed, or that they are being manipulated by a higher power. I know that a war is about to break out. I know that the Spirit Keep has been tried to be pentrated over the past few months. I know th...
Lihahn: Lies!! False Acusations! Niotsa was a traitor, who now lies dead. The war is just, for the suffering of others has caused a stir between societies. The war will stop and rid evil.
Karess: RID YOU I HOPE!
*Everyone gasps at the words.*
Lihahn: You dare speak that way to an Elder?
Karess: You are a murderer! And you know it! I Will never forgive you for your deeds you BASTARD!
Father Kahn: THIS IS ENOUGH! Guards, take Karess Kahn away.
Karess: But, father...
Father Kahn: A traitor is no son of mine.
*Everyone watched as the guard's took Karess towards the door. Karess looked at Karhein as he passed.*
Karess: I am sorry. Emotions and past wounds took the best of me. I am sorry.
*No one knew who Karess was yelling at except Karhein. Karess yelled at the walls to not inciminate Karhein.*
Karess: Lihahn, you fucking murderer! You bloody fucking merdurer!
*The room begins to grow with worrysome voices. Although Karess knew half of them were about him being a traitor, the other half were about the unspoken war that Lihahn just admited to in his haste and anger.

At 12/5/04 07:38 PM, Zerok wrote:

At 12/5/04 07:31 PM, Myst_Williams wrote: I never understood how MODs were chosen? Anyone know?

Every seven moons (marked by piconjo invasions), a group of postworthy users are selected ...

lol! Sounds like hefty competition.
You guys must have to donate alot of time to the forum. : P

I never understood how MODs were chosen? Anyone know?

At 12/5/04 06:45 PM, Canadian-Beer wrote: i would make a good mod and everybody knows it

um.. i dont think so.

How did you become anyway? Did they just email you?

I Love you. Thanks for the link.

At 12/5/04 06:16 PM, Noctroler wrote: This club seems to be pretty perimated with fantasy. I'll try to post a chapter of my story "Fate" within the next few days. Maybe add a little balance.

Sure go for it. I'll be sure to read it.
I like how you aren't one of those who posts once or twice and then we never hear from'em again.
A new regular is exactly what we need. I wish you had of been around when i posted my poetry.