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At 7/9/07 03:02 PM, enquencle wrote:
Here's the final thing, i'm waiting for some comments :)
http://denvish.net/ulf/090707/50438_transform ers_collab.php

man, that looks awesome. congrats in advance on making it in!

At 7/9/07 03:23 PM, crazerfish50 wrote:

look on the bright side, i got rid of MS paint :D

ugh, the program you use doesnt affect how well you draw. didnt W-P-S start a thread that owned everyone's art in ms paint? because I thought he did...

At 7/9/07 02:53 PM, crazerfish50 wrote: simple but good.

rule one, of anything. never say your own stuff is good. instead, say something like, this was a cool simple thing that I enjoyed working on, I think it turned out alright.

the art is a little more decent than it was thirty days ago. then again, the only one that I've found to be slightly intriguing is the one with the glowing red eyes and the big greyish claw things.

oh. my. god. you my friend, are destined to be one of the most acclaimed artists of our modern era. scratch that, of all time!

bravo good sir, bravo.

fail

At 7/7/07 09:09 PM, Rego001 wrote:
you forgot the step where you stomp on it

you're silly, you only stomp on it if the keys aren't working!

I heard that if you drop it into a pool of warm mango juice, the screen will snap back into shape.

At 7/7/07 12:07 PM, wolfinator-x wrote:
Don't worry, when I have nothing to do I'll do this.

phew, all of us were REALLY worried there.

that looks fantastic, good job

stylish.

turkeybean
snype
marsupial

what would we be without you mindchamber? great preloader, looks like it'll turn out nice by the end.

you're proud of it because its A PUMPKIN!

dont apologize for anything, its great that you're smart enough put your foot down when you want to, and I dont think anyone else is going to bug you about it.

now I think they just want to argue with me :)

your art is good, it will develop and change as it does, dont worry about pushing it in any direction all at once. if you really do want to change though, look for many different kinds of influences in different styles. my favorite place to find cool stuff is threadless, and I bet if you mixed your current style with that of many other people's, you'd create something entirely your own.

At 7/5/07 08:04 PM, DFox wrote:

At 7/5/07 07:58 PM, El-Presidente wrote: Wow, what a bad day to submit. I mean seriously, with a 4.49 and 4.50 out at the same time. This portal breakout was really, really bad for your award possibilities.

Seriously :\ I feel bad for anyone who submitted on the day the sequel of possibly the greatest Flash movie ever came out. Dad's at work was really, really good, although I still think the first one offers a feeling the second one can't. With that said, the sequel is much better visually.

personally, I really hope detective grimoire gets the daily. dads at work was pretty sick, but the point and click crime scene deal was just fantastic. but yeah, defintely. parsley boobs will only get like, a fourth, and I feel really bad for the author of stick sketch, because he clearly put a lot of work into it, and because of the overshadowing 4.50's, it will get neither awards nor viewage.

its a great little animation though, check it out if you havent already.

awesome. great job with the shadow in the ground too. I like it.

At 7/5/07 07:56 PM, SmilingIdiot wrote: like this

that looks awesome, but no bright green! it just doesnt work with the darker green. stick with white.

wow, second fail within the hour.

FAIL

yeah, go back to the white tee, or match it with the pants.

At 7/5/07 07:33 PM, SmilingIdiot wrote:
well how does it look now ?

you can clearly see how you've put lots of time into the figure and not alot into the background. get rid of all the backing, and stick it in a much smaller rectangle on bbs grey, then outline the whole character with the same thick line only white, and you've got yourself one nice sticker. like, literally, you could take it somewhere to get it printed as a sticker and it would be awesome.

I like it. you should use the same thick line to define the ends of edges of the hair, try to get rid of the little dots near the end of her hair on the left side of the picture. and also, why are her two hands melded together?

can't wait to see the finished product. s'gunna be awesome. Im trying to put something little together, in case anyone cares. which they wont.

just putting that out there. good luck everyone.

At 7/5/07 02:02 PM, doomshock wrote: hey guys this i did 2day

the skull is excessively lame. the blue flames are cool, but seriously, that skull is shameful. SHAMEFUL! you should try to make it more three dee ish.

cool angle, nice style, executed well, try thicker lines..maybe. thats the only criticism I have.

At 7/5/07 06:41 PM, MindChamber wrote:
but.... he used a "4" instead of an "A' when writing Dr4wings!!

thats gotta account for something!

lm4o

to differentiate yourself from the rest of the artists who use the same style, after you finish a drawing add some sketchy lines. it's just a suggestion. I dunno, mine didnt turn out too well, but adding colorful lines will always brighten things up. good luck with future work.

ditto.

um, yeah, or maybe to show people what they've done? the art forum is supposed to be a showcase of people's individual work. if he doesnt want criticism, its not your place to say he has to.

At 7/5/07 06:25 AM, Kuoke wrote: Another;
I have no idea what I was thinking when I made this.
Again, mouse + flash. Comments/criticism?

coolest of the three. work with this style. its really quite original.

replying to gorglore and arthur here.

At 7/5/07 11:52 AM, ArthurGhostly wrote:

At 7/5/07 10:02 AM, BitmapPirate wrote: I can't take constructive criticism.

Fixed.

you're both retards.

as far as I can tell, bitmap's the only one who's actually put his foot down about you style haters. yeah, its a style that's been used before. he know's it. he enjoys drawing the way he does. clearly, to have an eight page showcase thread, he has alot of people who do enjoy his stuff, and telling him he can't take criticism is just pointless. also, usually people are more willing to take constructive criticism when its done in a positive way. if you actually care enough to want him to change his style, write nicely, instead of just going "you suck now change" if you scroll back to page three, you'll notice that he's quite open to criticism as long as its made politely.

now get back to your little cages so we dont have to listen to your childish jealousy.

there's a paint store ten minutes from me, my mom's taking me to it 2moro after the dentist's. they're needling me. meh, I'll start the stencil thread.

:) have a nice trip