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5 Forum Posts by "Mfmess98N64"

Response to: Short Stories...1. 4G Posted July 5th, 2014 in Writing
At 7/5/14 01:57 AM, Troisnyx wrote: Judging by the way he ended that story, what happens to Hitomi is up for interpretation...

Indeed, but that sounds bad for me. A great writing like that deserves to have a continuation.

Response to: Short Stories...1. 4G Posted July 4th, 2014 in Writing

I would like to read a continuation of that story. It was really enjoyable. Besides, I'm wondering what will happen to Hitomi.

Response to: Sendu Yudai? Posted July 4th, 2014 in Writing

Well, the name didn't sound weird for me. To be honest, even if a name sounds weird but it has a good meaning as god-like or brave, it can be used with no doubt. My opinion is to keep that name.

Response to: Poem: Nights After Days Posted July 4th, 2014 in Writing

I can clearly see your point. I don't speak and write English very well, so a few mistakes might appear in my writings. But in fact, you're more than right about my poem. I appreciate your opinion and your version of my poem. I should take them as a help for my next posts.

Poem: Nights After Days Posted July 4th, 2014 in Writing

Here comes the night
The light is now fading
And the dark prevailing
Blinding my sight
Lost in this forest I am
Trying to go away
But in the next day
I am traped again
The voices say always
"You choosed wrong path"
So I'm walking to my death
Nights after days