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At 4/20/11 08:17 PM, Kinsei01 wrote:
slightly gay..... o.o.....

Slightly?

jk but good job on the overall rune/alchemy thingy. i like the first draft the most

OK and apart from the "post in the thread" issue. This thread looks very promising and I really like your stuff. The fleeing pikachu looks cool.

As long as I don't post in this thread again, consider me saying "Cool I like it" on everything you post from now on.

Kashi meant that you should upload you pics to this thread here instead of just linking them. It will increase your chance of getting proper feedback.

Use the "Include Picture" form below the message form.

As depicted on this jpg:

OMG! Run for your life Pierre!

At 4/20/11 07:10 PM, Lundsfryd wrote: let's forget this page ever exsisted..

What page do you mean?

You may think the art forum ninja is banned.... but you can't ban ninjas.... he is just in stealth mode.

In other news, I salute to the mod responsible for frontpaging the Papertower Defense.

*salutes*

It's actually hard to review it really honestly without sounding rude. But the drawing is bad, the story is not coming forth even though you skipped some parts, e.g. "after the trip, after school". I mean, what trip are you referring to?

There are some typos that you might want to fix and some of the writing isn't really thought out.
For example: One girl says two things at a stretch "You seem so shy all the time Kate. Why is that? And you didn't have to buy the dress(...)" but then the other girl doesn't react to the first part and only answers about the dress.

If I was a potential reader I would not be interested in reading on.

Really I'm not trying to sound rude, but I don't know how to say this any nicer.

Please no drama. You already got reasonable tips and a good offer from Kakashi.

I can understand that the never-ending discussion is bothering at times, but you still got some good answers.

Really, I consider the first offer much nicer.

You do something for me, i do something for you. That's absolutely fair IF someone could use something animated.

I know what everybody is pointing out, about logo designs being costy and stuff, but we shouldn't bother the OP too much. If you don't want to do it, you can ignore the request.

Honestly I see the point, but I feel the argument is been overdone within the last few days. When I joined the forums, the requests were redirected to the request threads and that was it.

Just my two cents

At 4/19/11 04:57 PM, Luwano wrote: NG ART Pun

We put the fun in pun.

And if someone of you is playing Portal 2, come in and stream it for ya fellow art regs.

Room still going, but on the verge of death.

Ok then let's practice some spells, just to see that you didn't get rusty.

NG ART Pun

We put the fun in pun.

I missed some stuff in the lounge:

Droghead.... you are a moron. I know you said "adios" and pretend not to come back, but we all know you will read this. This is also not an insult, in your case moron is even a compliment.

Shadling was, is and will always be intending to cross lines. Everything that is still within the NG rules should be allowed, even though I agree and think some of his stuff goes to far.

But if NG deleted everything that upsets a slightly larger group then the site would be pretty empty.

At 4/19/11 12:51 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote:

At 4/19/11 12:16 PM, chainsawmurderer53 wrote: Now, onwards! To adventure!

First off, search your pockets to see what you have on you.

I'm seconding this. Let's see the inventory.

At 4/19/11 02:35 PM, Matkingos wrote: Have him come up with an original idea

This has been done many times before and will be done often in the future, I don't see a problem with that as long as the drawings keep coming and they don't get worse.

At 4/18/11 02:19 PM, M-Vero wrote: NG PsycholARTy

Test succesful:

*You have been kicked and your IP address has been blocked from entering this room for a while. [Error Code: 1045]
*Your connection to the server has closed. [Error Code: 1042]

Did you use /kick or /ban?

Also the room is still going btw.

Hello zalecot,

before we go deeper into that topic, which has been discussed here a lot already and always more or less resulted in an argument of some kind.

Could you please A) post an excerpt of the comic's writing, B) tell us about the style you imagine, because 2 cartoons a week seem a lot if you want full fleshed out stuff

I don't want to bother you at all, but we had similar threads sometimes before.

Also be aware that searching an artist can take long and you will probably hear a lot of critique in the meantime.

Anyways good luck for your project!

At 4/18/11 10:23 PM, daGrindokk wrote: it's too late for join?

Deadline is May 15th, so there is still time to join.

You should use the include picture form below the message field to upload your pic into the thread, because it will increase your chance of getting proper feedback.

As for the drawing, it is good. The only things I have to nitpick about is the background, which is not bad but kinda boring. And the white splotches that don't look convincing as light reflections on metal. At first sight I thought there was snow on his shoulders. :P

At 4/18/11 09:54 PM, hugokilla007 wrote: On my art, but i guess i must be scouted, i dont know how that happens, i dont think my art sucks that much ¬¬
Here you have an example ñ.ñ

Read this guide about scouting please.

As for your pic itself, your drawing of the face/mask is pretty good. It looks a little lopsided (the right side is a little higher than the left) and the writing on the background is really horrible and doesn't suit this rather good drawing at all, but apart from that it's a cool piece and a good idea for a pic.

Not much improvement since the last preview (added plank, some nails and resized hammer a little), but I can't think of a proper background. Ideas highly appreciated.

Can someone tell me an about height and width that would be right? The opening post was not very specific and it could be helpful for the progression of my pic, because I would like to cut a bit off on the left and right.

I dunno, but it feels like I like Depth Charge even more than Optimus. Waspinator looks a litlle lopsided because of the eyes, but apart from that they look cool.

You should really finish them sometime, with inking, colours, shading and all the fancy stuff.

Posting this here so you don't forget about finishing them once.

At 4/17/11 10:27 PM, Ashman wrote: surprise, i do still draw, or try to, wip, probably going to change the main colour, doesnt seem to fit

Surprise surprise! It looks pretty cool, The claw on the left seems a little small or if it's supposed to reach further in the back? I agree on the lightblue colour, but I really like the colour on its shoulders and head.

At 4/17/11 07:53 PM, Luwano wrote: Whoever checks out the thread should find the link to our NG_Genital Wart every now and then.

^ FAIL

LINK

Whoever checks out the thread should find the link to our NG_Genital Wart every now and then.

Also Kinsei come in.... you can bring a friend.

At 4/17/11 05:38 PM, Back-From-Purgatory wrote: You should maybe let your camera focus before you take pictures... Just a thought.

And make sure there is enough light. That gets you better results.

At 4/17/11 04:17 PM, J-Rex wrote: Wheres the unscouted section of the art?

When you are scouted, there is a link in the art portal that takes you there.

At 4/17/11 04:01 PM, Larkatosa wrote: I feel so left out ... you have all forgotten about me! :'(

No we haven't.... but.....

At 4/17/11 03:01 PM, Chameneon wrote: Hey guys I just felt like doing the robo ;)
I hope you enjoy this WIP, I know I still have to improve a lot, but please only constructive criticism.
Still to do:
Right Arm,
Textures,
Effects.

That looks pretty cool already actually. The feet look a little small. Nice job though.

Still caught in a huge NG Genital WART....

Hello you didn't read the text file Re2deemer linked you, did you?

Excerpt:

"How to Secure a Copyright
Copyright Secured Automatically upon Creation
The way in which copyright protection is secured is frequently misunderstood. No publication or registration or other action in the Copyright Office is required to secure copyright. (See following note.) There are, however, certain definite advantages to registration. See "Copyright Registration" on page 7."

If your art is copyrighted, it can still be stolen. The only way to protect from art thieves is being able to prove that you created the art and had it first. For example, have it posted somewhere at a earlier date, providing the original workfile, etc.

And actually you don't need to create a new thread for it, if you get responses here already.