I started a death metal with a few friends of mine, and we take turns writing lyrics, unfortunately I don't write to any sort of structure and sort of just write what comes to mind.
Well I came up with some lyrics but my friends didn't really like them for some reason, so I wanted to post them here to ask your guys what I could add, or take away from them.
The lyrics don't actually lack meaning, but I'm still trying to work out myself what i mean by them;
You Reside here,
A morbid imagination in a fucked up reality,
I can't come clean to you,
Youre the one who knocked me from this height.
So what now?
You plead it was all in good faith,
but you're the one whose pockets are lined thicker than a cocktail of blood & oil;
You've failed.
Rip the bone from the flesh,
You may find clarity in your torure,
or cleanse your mind of your own loss;
The chip on your shoulder is wearing fucking thin.
Tell me what you think,
cheers.