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This should totally be a child's book, like "K is for knifeball"

What can I say? *claps*

Don't fuck with Argentina, else he'll messi your ass.

At 10/8/14 09:06 PM, WahyaRanger wrote: A short tribute poem to my best childhood friend; An Australian Sheppard mix named Angel whom I lost this August. I might make art to go along with this at some point if it receives positive feedback.

"It’s my last night on Earth,
But you already felt the sting in your heart
Before you even heard the bitter news;
That we’d be torn apart

It’s my last night on Earth,
I know you feel of blame,
But don’t be sad, remember our happiness,
And the paths we overcame.

It’s my last night on Earth,
You can’t sleep and nor can I,
This pain we share, it keeps up awake,
Hoping that it’ll stop time.

It’s my last morning on Earth,
But please child, don’t you cry.
Because I know in my heart, if you’re a good boy,
This won’t be our last goodbye."

There's a lot of feelings in this, it's easy to get involved. I know that this poem is very personal but I have one Idea: It’s my last month on Earth, It’s my last week on Earth, It’s my last night on Earth, It’s my last morning on Earth.

Seems to be intersting, I would love to read your text, but I really can't do it. Use some paragraphs please.

What you have there could be a greatscript, with a major plot twist. But what you gave us is too damn vague. I think we could help you to build your story, but you need to specify the character, the plot, the era, etc.

The gentlemen above said everything. You can do as some classic musicians did in the past: "something #"

good, but I would not use " a super-biological weapon", it sounds, I don't know, maybe too silly

Ripped a loud laugh out of me, but are you sure you aren't using acids? because that seems to be something I would write if I was on acids... like everyday

1° messing with photoshop and writing are ways to vent my creativity.
2° hmmm... I know how to bake cupcakes?

You know what would be aweasome?You filling the conspiracy theories plot holes with Skasorn.

So let's begin with the Half God perception. First, you need to establish how close the character is for being a god. That defines it's powers, duties and freedom. If the character is 95% human, it can't flee from the human problems. If it's 50%, the character doesn't need to obey any kind of human rules, far from thata, it can be the ruler.
You can define the characters as we do in RPG: alignments. Those alignments are a great way to comprehend the character's behavior over critical circumstances.
A hint for you: My mentor took 17 years to publish his second poetry book, and everybody said "why all that time?", and he answered: "all that wasted time, as you call it, I like to think it's the amount of virtue in my texts. You shouldn't care about the time, but the quality of the book."

I figure a group of friends that have been through some shit together could tell a story without doing so.

Ok. You need at least a very basic cahracters idea. What kind of things they would do in the same situtation? Then we can begin to evolve each one's background.

you mean a first person perspective? First of all: will that ruin surprises or plot twists?

At 8/10/14 12:23 PM, Darkcursing wrote:

At 8/9/14 09:01 PM, Kofra wrote: some paragraphs please?

for some reason it happen to stick together when paste on

try to do it
manually

some paragraphs please?

Your picture is a Japanese drawing- What the fuck is that?
You like anime? Heres a good pat on your back-
You probably fantasize of girls that were drawn by other men
But secretly you want those Japanese dicks inside of your pen-thouse
You're a mouse go scurry for your cheese
You think you could outsmart me? N***A Please!
You're just a BBS fag who thinks he can rap battle, son
Do me a favor, mow the lawn when you're done
So I can fuck your mother without a thought
Of what I have to do today, which I thought
I'd have to smack you around, and call you a lady
Cause you're crying like one, or perhaps a baby?

He says "no cursing" so here is something for you:
avada kedavra bitch, welcome to the auschwitz of newb
Crushing bones and reputations, the big boss is here,
bitch slapping lil kids since 2 thousand fucking 3
Hey Cronizone, stop bullying greggy,
come face off your real daddy

thank you both :D, and Troisnyx, I first wrote it in portuguese... The latin languages (in my opinion) are very, very poetic, so some stuff in english can't express exactly the same values, and some expressions may sound strange ;)

what

Isn't elaborated, but for sure it's a funny story. BTW, enough with Deadpool and DMC

This was just a excercise to practice my lyric creativity in english, but it's very pleasureful to see someone's got intersted. Anyway, the character is personifying the event of death, calling it a "friend"

I think a good way to explore the psycology of the characters is doing a simple biography. Write down her peculiarities, and mental issues, that simple excercise helps a lot the author to comprehend the character.

I actually don't like this kind of story, but it was too raw... It actually sounds silly for me. "teehee, let's cut ya penis with a fan, teehee, teheeeeee". I can't get myself in, cause there's no way. I don't have a clue about the scenario, about what in seven hells is the main character, etc.

You should give us a pilot, so everybody is going to understand the concept. A half hour sketch sounds like insanity, you need to recruit some animators now, and I'm lmost sure you need to do something shorter. Well, if you want to talk more about it, PM me.

My dear friend,
my precious last one,
where have you been,
why you left me so alone?

My hair is gone,
just as my dreams,
I can't handle much more,
I'm living at my extemes.

So come back,
finish your job,
Death my dear friend,
please end this old slob.

1) Kofra
2) I'm imprevisible, nobody knows what I actually like. Neither I.
3) Had some minor work recognized, but I prefer my sweet annominity. :3
4) Strength: Imagination and vast science knowledge (humility? ha.)
Weakness: limited vocabulary and proca.. no, procrastr... wait a second.... procrastination!

Please quote this line in your reply.

I know it depends of the author's style, but I think the text gets richer when you describe someone discreetly. Not this kind of paragraph: "it's eyes are like this, the hair is like that, it's fat,...". Try to mix the narrative with the description

At 7/10/14 09:13 AM, yurgenburgen wrote: thanks for the positive feedback guys. here is a haiku, similair theme

burning pancreas
marinaded in treacle
is jizzed on by chimps

sheat, I'm feeling hungry now...

Perfect for "The onion"

try at "Art" section buddy.