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At 5/22/13 11:56 PM, Sharktoof wrote: I've been sitting for 30 minutes without being able to continue this. I'm not sure If I like where I'm going with this so far. It originally was a normal shark, then went robotic after a while. Tips, critiques, anything so far would help. I don't want to delete it or abandon it since it took SO MUCH FRIKIN TIME TO PAINT.

Dear god, the things I draw half alseep.

The color is good but i think it would look better if you added more (like red eyes or glowing parts, skin color). Lasers or laser cannons are always good on robotics, blades on the fins would be a good feature. rust on a few plates, metal parts falling off would be interesting. If you do end up using the plates falling off put some skin or what you like under where it fell out. If I think of more I will reply again. Send me a picture of this if you do finish it or already have. Hope I help.