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At 9/17/13 01:31 AM, TheInnerScience wrote: You got a really good rhythm going.
It seems though that line 8:

"Now honed, and honest had hauled an hour"

Could maybe be shortened so that it matches the rhythmical flow of line 7.

Maybe like:

"The sky shows red with blazing fire
Honed and Honest, but hauled an hour
Now we wait while volcano tire."

or

"The sky shows red with blazing fire
Honed, Honest, and hauled an hour
Now we wait while volcano fire."

I apologize if my suggestions mess with the idea you were going for. Hope I was able to give useful advice, and I hope to see you work again on the Forum!

Lol dude! I am nowhere near mad at construction! I actually like the idea!!!! Thank you haha, I am always striving to find better ways to write

Among a mountain made in mist
The wails, are well, wild will-o-wisps
being born before and bathe in bliss,

The gale, then gained, and grew in size
My eyes now wide with worn surprise
Now locked and looking at late lit sky,

The sky shows red with blazing fire
Now honed, and honest had hauled an hour
Now we wait while volcano tire.

Sounds about right >.<

He went home and ate some supper. It was good.

The end

I laughed very hard.

Shining down the valley in its constant cosmic Rays.
The light, so bright that shined that night, would have you all amazed.
The scent of sparks that filled the dark, now raining down a shower
Cocooned its soon to take full plume and bloom just like a flower.
The unstable fabled sable sky is the only one thats able
To be parked by marks, no one left stark at watching it be labled.
The vast of cast amass with gasps, gives the moon resolve
but yet sunsets are upset that they cannot get involved.

Thanks Drac

At 11/26/11 09:34 PM, ZurethaMetal wrote: It's really amazing. i write sometimes, but my ca teach hates it- he thinks i'm too dark. wonder what would ahppen if he read your amazing poetry. he'd probably freak have a mental breakdown and then die. Good luck with possibly publishing this stuff

Lmbo, thanks man

-applause-

I likes

It's something.
It truly is astounding.
How hers catches my attention
and nothing else surrounding.

The sweet scented smell she sends
corrodes all whom have smelt
but she is like a shadow
She is cool to everyone else.

I see her in the evening
Sometimes mornings if its clear
But never in the night or noon
She seems to always disappear.

I wish I could know her better
for her warmth is always stealth
for sometimes during the day
She gets ahead of herself.

This is not the woman I know.
I don't love what she has left.
Consumed my money and greed
Shes a shadow of her former self.

Just mild imagination with a child falling asleep outside and dreaming. Though If I have to explain what my poem is about it is probably not as good as I predicted

I give this a 10/10.

Thank you!

I like..... I very like

Were you looking for more alliteration or what?

Chapter 2 incoming.

Sorrow: with pleasure. (Sorroe begins to play Moonlight sonata by Beethoven)
(the screams of people rising as the fire burns down the restaurant, they stay for a moment.
Misery: Sorrow we have to go.
Sorrow: I am almost done.
Misery:We have to go.
Sorrow: almost..... ( he plays the final note and the ceiling falls on the piano as he walks away.
-Bluetooth crackles-
Tek: I am outside in the submarine, you guys have to swim a bit.
Sorrow & Misery: On our way.( they walk through the flaming restaurant and outside. They run towards the peer and jumped into the water, where they are intercepted by a submarine that emerges, they get in)
Tek: so how did it go?
Sorrow: you know damn well how it went.
tek: LaLaLA!!! I cant hear you!!
Sorrow: Childish..
tek: I know you are but what am I?
Sorrow: you little son of a-
Misery:(cuts off) Anyway.. I have the location of an auctioneering service.
Tek: Really? thats awesome! how much cash do we have in the account?
Misery: Tek.....
Tek: Just kidding! Kidding!.. Lets go.(the submarine Submerges)

* * *

The submarine emerges into the middle of some type of chamber, the lid opens and all three get out. They walk through many doors until they arrive in a room with a large decorated table with candles and black tableclothes. there are several people in the seats around the table with a mature woman, lower thirties but had the looks of a sixteen year old, sitting at the far end. Her blonde hair long and untamed. She(Void) Speaks.

Void: Welcome back Sorrow!!!!!!(Drly) and Misery....
Misery: cute.
Sorrow: charmed.
(An effiminate male speaks, his dark wild purple highlighted hair neck length with a pink bowtie in it. He speaks(his name regret)
Regret: Welcome back, darlings.
(Sorrow shudders)
Misery: Yeah, regret the laxatives works quite well.
Regret: Marvelous, and I have made us some clothing also.
Sorrow: Are they required?
Regret: Personal preference honestly.
Void: sorrow you would look cute in them!
Sorrow:(ignores) Where are Pity and Psykosis?
Void:They are... uhhh. ( she looks at her clipboard) Taking out a mob boss in Portugal.(Misery and Sorrow stare)
Misery:(Shocked) You sent Pity alone with that psychopath?
Void: I trust Psyk, He will nto do anything out of the way.
Misery:He kills everything.
Void: Well that is the type of mentaility you need in this business.
Misery: there is a sense of overdoing job@ and Pity is stilla child at heart...
Void: Well Psyk will introduce him to the real world
Regret:Which aint pretty.
Tek:Indeed. (everyone stares) ............What?
Regret: Aren't you suppose to be doing... I do not know... something?
Tek: The feeling is mutual.
Regret: I am on break.
Tek: Still mutual. Oh, Misery! Are you doing to tell Void of the auctioneering Service?
Void: Oh really?
Misery: Yes M'am(She goes into her pocket) Here.
Void: (Studies) So if Tek would not have reminded you... this would be lost information?
Misery: I would've remembered later.
Void: I do not think you would have... which would have been trouble.. Actually I think I will you give. (ina dark tone) a Strike.
(room falls silent)
Regret: Now void, lets not do something so Dras-
Void: Kidding, Kidding!!! I've heard of this one, there are illegally smuggled women sold here. the are shipped from all points and to all points in the world.
Tek: Has anyone requested a hit on the head?
Void: (sighs) thats just it.. no one has, so no money involved.
Misery: though should cash interfere with human morals?
Void: Cash creates and destroys morals.
Misery: and people.
Tek: Burn!

* * * *

Two guys are on a bridge near building, over a dam of water, A tall figure, with long silky black hair with feathers in it, a native american(Psyk), the other, gripping his knee, it is bleeding profusely and his short blonde hair and dreamy blue eyes water-His name Pity)
Psyk:(Kicks the wounded knee.)
Pity: GAHHH!!!!!1( as he grips his knee, blood dripping profusely from the wound)
Psyk: Shh... the pain will fade... the pain will fade..
Pity: What is your problem!?
Psyk: My "bad"
Pity. That was a purpose.
Psyk: No, sire, it wasnt. you were shot during the mission.
Pity: We reported to void 20 minutes ago.
Psyk: you were shot 19 minutes ago.
Pity: she will not believe you.
Psyk: Ehh, Maaayybbbbeeee, whose word will she take, yours or mine?
Pity:(Teary eyed) Grr...
Psyk: We aren't getting maad are we?(Holding gun up)
Pity:.... No sir.
Psyk: Good, now walk, with both legs, and get my hat.
Pity: What h- (Psyk throws his beret in the lake)
Psyk: That one. I'll wait for transportation home.
Pity: No.. How am i supposed to swim with a bullet wounded leg?
Psyk: not sure, you could try with two bullet wounded legs? Tell me how it works out.
Pity: (Sigh) Sir yes sir...( He walks with both legs in pain)
Psyk: (Het gets out a blue tooth) Ello M'am.
Void: Why hello there again, Psyk.
Psyk: things are goign decent btu we had a slight incident... we killed the mob head, but Pity was shot in the process, I just discovered.
Void: ......
Psyk: M'am?
Void: this is his third strike... Psyk. What happened?
Psyk: He foolishly ran in.. I warned him, but he defied my authority.
Void: .....(concerned) You know.. what that means... right?
Psyk:(Pretending to sympathize) Yes M'am.... (He looks at Pity)

Void: But Psyk, Are you sure that is all that happened? There must be some excuse
Psyk: None M'am.
Void: So when are you going to do it?
Psyk: Can I now? He is intensely vulnerable.
Void: Let us not kick a dog when he is down, let him sleep at least one more night.
Psyk:You are too nice, Void.
Void: Sometimes... Tek is on the way, he should be there momentarily in the sub.
Psyk: Yes mam.(stares at Pity, who is now getting out of the pond with the hat.)
(bluetooth ends)
Pity: Your hat... Sir.
Psyk.: Thanks, (Throws it on top of a building)
Good luck.
* * *
(Pity and Psyk arrive at the base, Misery and Regret are alarmed at the sight of Pity)
Misery: Pity!!!!! Are you okay!?!
Regret: Darling what happened!!!?
Pity: Oh... Nothing....
Sorrow: -Glares at Psyk-
Psyk: What is that look in your eyes boy?
Misery: What did you do?
Psyk: What are you trying to say?
Void:(Sadly) Misery......
Misery: No, Pity, what did he do!?
Pity: Nothing.... he did.... nto do anything.
Misery: You are lying!
Sorrow: You are loud.
Misery: IT is clear that he had something to do with this.
Void: MISERY! He said he did not do anything, from his own mouth.
(Walking over and consoling pity)
There There... go and get freshened up... okay (Smiles)
Pity: Yes mam.
(cody walks off)
Void: so.... Who is it going to be?
(Everyone gets up and leaves except psyk.)
-sigh- I guess.... since you were there...
Psyk: Mam, it would be an honor.
Void: -Walks away looking disgusted-
* * *

The next day.

(Pity is in his quarters, he has been fully medically treated and are taking pain killers, he is laying on his bed staring at the ceiling)
Void walks in)
Void: Pity....
Pity: It is fine (smiling) Trust me.
Void: I know but...
Pity: Void, You have been like a mother to me the whole time I have been here, Its fine.
Void: (Smiles)
Pity: Well I am going to the training quarters to get my new assignment.
Void: Alright... See you soon.
(She leaves, Pity goes in the side of his bed and gets two undistinguished objects)
(Pity goes into the training quarters to his personal assignment screen, as he walks up to it, a tomahawk is thrown and he sidesteps is barely.)
Pity: It is ashame, when someone of your stature is jealous.
Psyk: whats really sad is punks like you comng in and thinking they run this place, thinking they are the best.
Pity: Thats simple "Sir", its because I AM the best.
Psyk:You arrogant little shit.Finally dropping a pair huh?
Pitt:I am done talking, All I have to say now is (Pulls out the two objects, which are bloody worn gloves, and the gun he was shot with)
Good Luck.

End of Chapter one.

Chapter One: Into the Depths.

Pianist playing Beethovens "Fur Elise" in the background lightly in a busy high classed restaurant. Waiters and waitresses going in and out the kitchen doorsm tthough the chef's are in plain sight so customers can see how their food is prepared. Each table houses wealthy individuals. Two figures enter from the side door, a lady and a man, both dressed in proper emplyee attire.His tinted glasses positioned perfectly on his nose and dreaded hair tied following his spine over his dark brown skin. She dark golden hair straight and lain down until the tips, which curl outward. They both walk towards the Kitchen where he stops and listens to the pianist.He(Sorrow) begins to speak with his proper accent and she(Misery) responds in her australian accent.

Sorrow: His fingering is off.
Misery:(Looking annoyed):Why is it everytime you see a musician you point out flaws unseen to everyone else....?
Sorrow: Because if no one else knows it is a flaw, they consider it perfect, when nothing is.
Misery:So why ruin that for everyone else? Ignorance if Bliss.
Sorrow: It's one of my few interest.(looks around)
Misery: You act as if your world revolves around it.... its sickening and distasteful.
Caleb: (Gaze now locked on the Pianist) Whats truly sickening and distasteful-(Eyes closing as the pieanist keys the final notes) Is that my world ysed to revolve around you.
Celeste:(Clearly hurt and angry) Well- (she is cut off by the applause of the restaurant, given to the pianist)
Sorrow: Let us continue....(opens eyes).

Sorrow walks off to the bathroom, but is intervened by which seems to be the manager for the night.
Manager: Who are you and what are you doing?
Sorrow:(Smiling) Hello sir! I am the replacement Valet for this evening(shows I.D. Card)
Manager: hmm(studies card) Marcus Taylor.. Why couldn't Mr.Hynes make it this evening?
Sorrow: there was an unexpected death in his family.
Manager:This is a bit too sudden to actually pay you.
Sorrow: Hynes is a very good friend of mine, so it is voluntary until he gets back on his feet.
Manager: Wish more workers were like you.
Caleb: As do I, now excuse me, I have a bathroom to attend.
Sorrow continues on into the bathroom and takes his valet post next to the towels and colognes. After a few moments someone walks through the door.
Guy: Hey, erhm.... Can you spray some of the Drakkar Noir on me?
Sorrow:(Not looking in the mans direction) Get and spray it your damned self.

* * * *

Misery walks into the kitchen where the chefs set trays on the counter so the waiters and waitresses can take to tables.
Cook: Hey, you. Yes you, This dish is for table six. Make sure it gets there.
Misery: I am not assigned to that table sir, only three.
Cook: I could care less, this is the only instance where a woman doesn't belong in a kitchen, so just take the food.
Random Waiter: Thats my Table, sorry, I was refilling wine glasses.
Cook: Less talk, more mobility. Take this dish and fresh rolls to six.(Now looking at Misery) Make yourself useful by either refilling glasses or kissing the left of my ass, if you're nothing to do get out of my sight and kitchen.(He turns and continues cooking, another cook brings a plate to her)
Cook #2. Hey, these are the plates for table three(He sees the hurt in her eyes) Dont worry about the Head Chef, he has always been that way, you'll learn to get used to him.
(she racks a smile)
Misery: Thanks, that really helps.
Cook #2: Don't mention it, but that foods getting cold, so you might want to take it to the table(chuckles)
Misery smiles and picks up the plates with one hand and heads to the table; at the table sits a rather large man and two younger females, about the edge of twenty. Blonde.
Misery: Here you are sir, your meal.( she places the plate on the table) and ladies, yours(places their plates on the table also)
Large Man: Well, Well Well, aren't you a lovely piece of lady( he looks her up and down) Are you being auctioned off tonight also?
Girl #1: I hope not
Girl #2:(Echoes) Yeah I hope not.
Large man: (looking puzzled) Why is that ladies?
Girl #1: I mean look at her
Girl #2: Yeah look at her
girl #1: she is just so.... so unattractive.
girl #2: Very unattractive.
Girl #1: Would you buy her? You shouldn't buy her, I would not buy her.
Large man: Girls.....
girl #1: and curls at the ends of her hair? sorry, we were born in 1986.(both Laugh)
Large Man: ENOUGH!(They halt their laughter immediately) I apologize for the childish act of these.... inbreds.
(both girls are silent, but show spite in their eyes)
Large Man: now, May we have another glass of wine?
Celeste:(hurt) I thought you'd never ask, let me fetch that for you sir.( She goes into the kitchen and gets a bottle of wine, she takes off the cork and throws a mixture in the drink, shakes it lightly, and returns to the table).
Exquisite wine, from the 1920's, one of the msot expensive in the restaurant.May I have your glasses?
Girl #1: Why is it open? (Misery shoots a quick glance to her)
Large Man: Did I not tell you to shut up? I am sorry dear, fill our glasses.
(She fills them.
Thank you young lady(goes into pocket) This is a one night only deal.. the auction will be held at this location tonight, please come, it could use someone like you.
Misery(smiling very hard): I am flattered sir.
-Girl 1 and 2 Scoff-
Large Man: A toast.. to an attractive and hardworking young lady.
(He holds up his glass anticipating the two girls to clang theirs against his... they do not)
Ugh.....(the table drinks and Misery walks off)
Misery:(whispering to herself) I'm... attractive...? (she takes out a bluetooth and puts it in her ear) Sorrow? Sorrow you there?
Sorrow: Yes.
Misery: do we have to dispose of him?
Sorrow: Yes.
Misery: Why? He's... different.. and he called me attractive....
Sorrow: so did your father, though you still killed him.
Misery: This is different.
Sorrow: How is it different? Exactly.
Misery: UGHH.!!! you are just so inconsiderate of peoples feelings!!
Sorrow: ...go according to plan.
Misery: Okay....( the table is now backign away from it)
The High powered laxatives Regret made are taking affect on them all.
Sorrow: them all? they were to be used on Bernard only.
Misery:(Pitch changes) Change of plans. ( She see's the girls walk quickly into the bathroom)
Excuse me, Sorrow. I have to use the little girls room.
Sorrow: Mise-(static) -sigh- (Presses a button on the bluetooth) Tek? Tek?
the sound of a young boy, about the age of 14 speaks, with a british accent
Tek: Yessir?
Sorrow: How will these charges go off?
Tek: When he opens the toilet lid, it'll detonate: Blowing ever ass he has to smithereens!
Sorrow: you sure? Is it subtle?
Tek: 100% sure it won't attract any unwanted attention.
Sorrow: Alright(Disconnects)

Bernard bursts through the door, appearing to be in a rush.

Sorrow: Hello sir, How may I-
Bernard:(reads the stall "Out of Order") son, Which stall is open.
Sorrow: all are down until the plumber comes, except for the one on the end I apologize for the inconvenience.
Bernard: Thanks son! ( He rushes to the bathroom)
Sorrow: I think I will get myself some water... (he goes outside the bathroom door to the water fountain next to it)
(He hears static from the bluetooth)
Tek: Oh right, Sorrow.
(As sorrow bends over there is a huge explosion from the bathroom, the door flies of and the gusts of winds blow his hair sideways, he continues to sip)
Tek: I lied (Disconnect),

Misery walks out from the ladies room and stands next to him, they both stare on as the whole restaurant is evacuating.
Sorrow: What was all that about?
Misery: (Pitch of voice still the same) Ditto.
Sorrow: tek at his best.
Misery: (voice lighting up in pitch) Me at my worst.
Sorrow: I see...
-He walks through the frantic crowd to the piano and takes a seat.-
Misery: Are you really......?
Sorrow: shut up. this is a mood I will never be able to capture.
Misyer:(Frustrated) Fine, fine. do whatever the hell you want.

Well... In those few lines you explained how everyones life will be lol, in those few lines...

Story of my life: I like.

Has it really come to this?
Is it the last resort?
Is it the end of me as I know it
Due to ignorant offensive retort?

The chandeliers laugh and glisten
the floors anticipate creaks
The cause is no one listens
though what truly labels a freak?

Is it the we carry one's self?
Or is it the way we act?
Recluse I guess, that leaves one left
At the end of opinionated facts

So has it really come to this?
No use in turning back
the rope I grasp with gentle fist
Two steps, my world's now black.

Thanks, Did not bother to revise it and just typed as I went. That and I do not have Microsoft word and are using notepad in its place

All the while riding home with her I seemed as if.... I knew her for a long time, there was something
about her that seemed like I grew up around her.Oh well I didn't really look into it, my objective
was about to be set into action in a few.
-skip alot of stuff-
I walk into her house and it seemed like it belonged to that of an old couple. Rocking chairs, furniture wrapped in plastic
,and of course, pictures of family.I tried to be nice
"nice house, this yours?
"No, it belongs to my grandparents"
"Are they around?"
"Nope, I sent them on vacation yesterday"
"Haha thats sweet of you"
She did not say anything. Right then I got a very strange Vibe from her.I ignored it.
She lead me into the master bedroom, an old distressed Bed and furniture, mahogany,
with a door leading to the closet and another to a bathroom. The smell of moth balls fill
my nose.Damn.
She giggled."I'll go and get ready", she pointed at the bed,"you wait there."In a highly sexual voice.
I sit on the bed and the springs creaked along with the drywood floor, man this place was old.Was like
people havent been here in months. I see a picture on the night stand and pick it up."these
must be here grandparents and father", I thought to myself,"She doesnt look like either of them, must
take after her mother."
Mother I thought. Then thoughts of my mom swept over me, about the incident.

My mom was crazy, I know most of you say this but I really mean it. She was mentally unstable and was
placed in the nuthouse on numerous ocassions due to lack of medicine and stability.I always remember having to remidn her
to take her medicine as i brought her the near-empty bottle.
She would rampage breaking things and hurting my father and I. One day it all changed, one day the medicinewasn't
strong enough.She came home in a frenzy, breaking things and yelling randoms things accusing my
father of cheating the previous day, when in fact he was with both she and I shopping that day.
All day.she was becomnig unstable and unruly, cursing and my father was trying to calm her, but
it wasnt working. She went to the kitchen and pulled out a knife was a cabinet, and came charging
into the room, my father urged her to put the knife down, she threatened to take her own life.
I said "mom?" she turned around and my father lunged for the knife, her reflexes enabled her
to turn around and stab my father in the chest, once, twice, thrice. Down he went, his wail carried for 7 seconds
before he dropped down to the ground, dead in warm blood. She looked over at me
"You cheated on me also",she whispered,"didn't you Nick..........?" I was scared, I did not and could
not say anything due to the fear that deadly whisper put into my heart, she eased slowly to where
I was behind the couch and right before she was 5 steps away I heard a gunshot, and my mother fell to the ground.
I look into the doorway and see my neighbors, Caleb's father, holding his pistols shakingly, in his hand pointed
at the now dead body of my mother.

I snap back to reality, a sudden tear drop flowing from my eye and she comes out of the bathroom
with this black lacy lingerie. Seemed customly made by Victoia's secret, the smell of Japanese cherry blossom
now filled the room as she took steps to the bed, putting one foot ahead of the other.
I was so ready for her, my cell phone rang. I threw it aside because i was in deep anticipation for
what was about to go down(preferably her).Then I thought, "I am not going to screw this up"
"Hold, let me use your bathroom, let me prepare also girl"
"okay, don't keep me waiting" she said as she bit her bottom lip.
Trust me, I wasn't.
I rush into the bathroom and close the door, I lift the toilet seat up and began draining the main vein.
I look around while I do my business, eerie bathroom.Shower curtains had the designs of dolphins
and the mats were horses. I finish draining and begin to flush the toilet,then look into the trash can
and see a medicine bottle, I thought "Haha, she must be on birth control", I picked it up and a sudden
chill ran down my body.
This was the same prescription my mother used.

hapter: 1

"Hey how about her? She is sort of cute." My friend Caleb said then took a sip from his cup.
"Nah", I replied, "She's kind of fat, and did u check out her ass? You can go surfing on her back"
As shallow as ever.
"You are extremely picky, you need to loosen up or you will never find anyone"he stated.
Truth is he cannot really talk himself, seeing as though he has gone through three divorce and are only
23.Then again, it seems I can never really disagree with his logic.
Caleb and I go way back to elementery school, we've always been there for each other He and his
Family were the ones to take me in after the incident when I had no where else to go.
"You're right" I said as I in return took a sip from the cup, the strength from the "Patrone" forced me
Close my eyes for a moment as I tried to regain my train of thought. I can be shallow though, because what I am after tonight
tonight there won't be much to remember about. Yeah you guessed it, I'm in this club for a one night stand.
I continue to look around, the song "Temperature" by Sean Paul blasting in the background, inebriated people falling down
and passing out on the floor. Some guy sprinkling something in this girls drink while she was turned around.
Wasn't my business, if asked I am just going to say crushed Advil.
"Well I am done trying to help you tonight, going to get up on some on my own"said Caleb, now walking away
"shiiiiid, do your thang then man"I said trying to do a ghetto impersonation.He continued walking.
I just stare into my drink, the vibration from the stereo making ripples in the liquid, I take the shot
and pull out my wallet to buy another and mistakingly hit the belt clip containing my phone, causing it to crash on
the concrete club floor.
"Awww shit." I exclaimed then shook my head. I dismount the chair and kneel to pick it up, but my
hand is intercepted by something smooth and soft. I look leveled to my face and were speechless for
a moment. In front of me was this ....eeriely beautiful lady; her green eyes pierced mine as if they
were trying to send me a subtle message while strands of her long dark orange/red hair draped over her left eye
It was silky, her somewhat pale skin was still lit regardless of the limited light the club had itself.
Only thing that was wrong was her outfit though... she wore a similiary colored Dress as her hair, spaghetti strap;
a line of thick ggreen bracelets, and necklace. Her fingernails were also green and her footwear
was....flip-flops, beige, toes painted green also. I was thinking to myself, like literally "lol".
She smiles.
"You always on your knees?"
"Huh"
"are you always on your knees?" She repeated, still keeping her smile.
Realizing I was still on my knee getting my phone.
"haha you got jokes? are you? seeing as though she was in same position."
"sometimes" still smiling.
That was my subtle hint.
I get back to my feet standing up and she did the same, her purse on her shoulder blade just hanging
I lean on the counter trying to look cool, "so you have a name?"
"Amber", she quickly replied, "Amber Moss"
"cool my name is David." Fake name.For one night stands I always give fake names.I don't care about
their feelings, its only one thing I am after.
"So uhhh, I kno its sudden and all but you wanna he-"
"I'd love to take you back to MY place" she interupted.
This was easier than I thought.

Bored and Threw this together in I would say.... 3 minutes give or take. No more than 5, was bored.

Everyone still has it
Why can't I?
It wasn't meant for me
I think that would suffice

Everyone exploits it,
May I try?
Though mine was somewhat valuable
I'd have never risked it twice.

Once I had my doubts
That once I learned my lesson
...But once was only once
Life was good, and twas a Blessing.

no one? honestly?

Setting: Inside of a Local Bar,2 guys are sitting at the counter holding their glasses full of alcohol in their hand
and seem to be having a conversation: There is an overturned upside-down stool beside them

Green: Yeah , I didn't mean to hit her though, her face was just in the way of my fist y'kno?
Purple: ....... uhhh not sure I do
Green: Its not like I MEANT to put her in a coma.... the sex is Horrible now.
Purple: wait you havent taken her to the hos-
(A guy walsk in with a pink shirt and interupts the sentence.)
Pink: Hai guys, Fancy seeing u here.
Both:(weakly) hey..... quinton...
Quinton: bartender I'll have a Sprite on the Rocks,(quint tries to sit down next to purple)
Purple: I think.... your... seat is over there.(points to an upside down stool)
Quinton: Thanx Fella (brings stool over and sits down on)
Green and purple just stare.
Quinton: So what have u guys gotten into lately?
Green: (Deep and lowly)Nothing as much as that stool......
Quinton: hmm?
Purple:(Quickly)We just... came back From Amy's party.
Quinton: Oh knock on wood I did also!!!
Green: I'm sure you do.
Quinton: Me and My girlfriend go to alll the current parties.
(cell phone rings"its raining men")
Quinton: Oh hold on- Hey girl..... really...... he went that far inside? That store? Hold I have a beep.
Hello, Oh hi guy, she did? Haha boy u r so silly. Ill call u back.-clicks over- ll call u back hun- kisses-
Quinton: back boys.
Purple: yeah we were just about to head home.
Quinton: Mind If I hang with you guys?
Green:No panties allowed.
Quinton: Heelllo? I wear boxers!
Green: Are they backwards?
Purple: (Clearly aggravated)Stop, both of you, quinton we walked up here.
Quinton: Oh thats... such a looong way,I know how far it is you stay from
here so ll let u borrow my vehicle, ill just ride my bike back to my apartment.
Green: Does it have a seat?
Quinton:Motorcycle, duh, Ryan u can drive My truck home ill get the bike off the back
Purple: Wooow, thanx man
Green: I need a ride, ryan mind If ride with ya?
Purple: Sure, go warm up the car.
Green gets keys and goes to the car
Purple looks around.
Purple: (in gay voice); Thanx quint
Quinton: (In deep voice) No problem dude.

And ty keioss :)

That was actually inspiring, thanx block

Hmm, i'll Look into it then.