The Enchanted Cave 2
Delve into a strange cave with a seemingly endless supply of treasure, strategically choos
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COMPLETE edition of the interactive "choose next panel" comic
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Response to: self taught artist feedback/work?
Posted March 28th, 2013 in Art
At 3/28/13 12:43 PM, jwaphreak wrote:At 3/28/13 12:42 PM, jwaphreak wrote: did some color lately-"clown eats clown upside down!!!!"-----eh?pastels are awful!!!!---but this was fun---clown and this are 18x24inch--eh?
tri eye demon--18x24---eh!?
Response to: self taught artist feedback/work?
Posted March 28th, 2013 in Art
At 3/28/13 12:42 PM, jwaphreak wrote: did some color lately-"clown eats clown upside down!!!!"-----eh?
pastels are awful!!!!---but this was fun---clown and this are 18x24inch--eh?
Response to: self taught artist feedback/work?
Posted March 28th, 2013 in Art
did some color lately-"clown eats clown upside down!!!!"-----eh?
Response to: self taught artist feedback/work?
Posted March 28th, 2013 in Art
At 3/27/13 10:42 PM, Hyptosis wrote: Yeah, as is I think these are way too busy, but they're really kick ass too. I think you should concentrate on the core elements first, and try using lighter or thinner lines for the interior stuff. The designs are great! They're just overwhelming as is. It's neat stuff regardless. Keep it up, and continue making bold work. Thanks for sharing it!
ty-lol---i get a kick outta feedback---i want to overwhelm!--cant help it--agree with you though--i want to hide detail inside detail and make the viewer puke---lol--
Response to: self taught artist feedback/work?
Posted March 27th, 2013 in Art
At 3/26/13 08:45 PM, Flowers10 wrote: Hey man, good to see another self thought artist like myself in here! I really like the design o f these although they dont really function well and havent been fully thought out they look cool! Also i think your drawings like kinda flat. A good exersice to make ur drawing more 3d is studyig basic shapes and see how they react to light and turn in space, this helped me allot. Als you might want to improve your drapery, folds dont look like that but follow the form underneath it and the cloth folds according to that. Hope this helps!
yeah ty---i think in a flat realm i know--i dont like to do what i should-ha--i just draw...but i consider all ideas thrown at me and ty!---check out my page fr more to critique!
Response to: self taught artist feedback/work?
Posted March 27th, 2013 in Art
At 3/26/13 09:09 PM, BagamCadet wrote: First one seems like enemy concept from quake 4. It would have took me a while to understand it's a samurai if you hadn't mentioned it in the first place.
I noticed you seem to overload your character's concepts with too much stuff. It's hard for someone to look at all the things these guys are carrying and understand something about them. try puting less on them and focus on a few key features.
Like adding the samurai a samurai helmet, an exaggeration of the of the curves from the samurai armor's plates. maybe even a small banner tied to it's back like the one's they used to have on the battlefield.
i agree but cant---i love detail and hate empty space--its a drawing thats 18x24 so the real version is easier to translate and ty fr the feedback!---i strive to overwhelm the viewer--banner i could do though but i honestly like to be vague-misdirection is implied--all feedback is forever welcomed and processed believe me-
Response to: self taught artist feedback/work?
Posted March 26th, 2013 in Art
At 3/26/13 12:23 AM, big-jonny-13 wrote:At 3/25/13 08:26 PM, jwaphreak wrote: 18x24 inch drawing--just a samurai idea--sharpie gold looks more bronze than i liked actually-Some very clean lines here
ty--i try----
self taught artist feedback/work?
Posted March 25th, 2013 in Art
18x24 inch drawing--just a samurai idea--sharpie gold looks more bronze than i liked actually-
