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It's my birthday today

I donno just thought i'd share that with you

for everyday this isn't submitted

i get cancer...

But seriously not to bug you like some naggy buttface but do you have an idea when this may be submitted?

Just wonderin'

my part is officially finished! Hope it is to your liking gentlemen!

FLA/SWF

Hey guys! Update!

im 99% done my part. Gonna finish it tommorow after school.

But as i was waiting for my lines from Rabid to download (my internet is being slow tonight, and i started on this then finished even after the download was finished) i made this comic:

hey anyone know where i could get a "whoosh" sound effect. You know like something getting thrown at high speeds and it like cuts through the air?

I searched it up on the big Goog but didn't find any good ones. They all either werent the sound i was looking for, were just super shitty quality, or cost money

WAIT WAIT WAIT!!

I just got an idea of how I could fix it. I just need one small line Rabbid. I'll PM you tommorow and I will have the part ready in a jiffy with peanut butter!

God I feel bad, I'm making such a mess for something so simple.

At 3/14/10 11:22 PM, FlashStorm wrote:

something

naw. You can do it :)

and rabbid-animals I'm sorry D:

At 3/14/10 04:34 PM, TieSeiT wrote:

At 3/14/10 04:22 PM, lpfann2 wrote: actually fuck it. Sorry Rabbid-Animals but im not gonna do this part

i just realized it doesn't make sense

waitwut? What was it about, your part? And what did you mean with different scenes?

In flash how you can insert different scenes. Insert>>>Scene. And it is like a second timeline. Know what i mean?

Anyway my part is that there are these two dudes talking. And one says that his drugs are gone. The other one suggests that it may be a blessing in disguise. All of a sudden the first guy cheers up and goes "hey...yeah...your right" and then it cuts to him beating up a guy with the word "blessing" on his shirt

but thats not even a name lol. The joke is suppose to be that there is a guy named "Blessing" and when the second guy suggests that it may be a blessing in disguise, then the guy whos drugs are gone thinks he ment it was blessing (the guy named blessing) in a disguise who took it.

But i donno, it's set up weird and i don't think people will get it :P. It doesn't really matter though i've already got a part and two comics...

actually fuck it. Sorry Rabbid-Animals but im not gonna do this part

i just realized it doesn't make sense

At 3/14/10 02:04 PM, lpfann2 wrote:

At 3/14/10 08:36 AM, TieSeiT wrote:

At 3/13/10 01:46 PM, lpfann2 wrote: is there gonna be like an authors page?

can we see the rough copy of the menu?

No there's no authors page, just a credits list, and ofcourse the usernames are going to be above the parts.

Oh and btw are you still making a 2nd part? :)

Here are some screenshots:

Yup. Just got my lines from Rabbid :D

so ima work on it right now

BTW, just wondering. It's fine to put different scenes in the flash right? that won't screw anything up?

I haven't inserted a new one YET cuz i'm not sure if it's okay...?

At 3/14/10 08:36 AM, TieSeiT wrote:

At 3/13/10 01:46 PM, lpfann2 wrote: is there gonna be like an authors page?

can we see the rough copy of the menu?

No there's no authors page, just a credits list, and ofcourse the usernames are going to be above the parts.

Oh and btw are you still making a 2nd part? :)

Here are some screenshots:

Yup. Just got my lines from Rabbid :D

so ima work on it right now

is there gonna be like an authors page?

can we see the rough copy of the menu?

At 3/9/10 11:10 AM, TieSeiT wrote:

At 3/7/10 10:24 PM, Farza wrote: Calm down people.

It's only been 4 days since his last post. Don't pressure the guy.

It's alright, it's good to have a bit pressure, otherwise I'll get too lazy.

But for the status request, here's some stuff I still have to do:

- Add sounds/music
- Finish my own 2 animation parts
- Fix some other people's parts (a couple of them are not working..)
- Finish the credits list
- Add some finishing-touches

Oh and I still don't know who the makers of the 2 comics I posted before are.

Here's a screenie for the (work in progress) menu for y'all

Great to know this collab is rollin'! :D

is it possible for me to do another part? As much as i need to work on a personal project, asdf cartoons are just so much fun to do :)

At 3/7/10 05:34 PM, FlashStorm wrote:

At 3/7/10 01:30 PM, Cantdoright wrote:

At 3/5/10 09:54 PM, Rabid-Animals wrote:

At 3/3/10 12:42 AM, TieSeiT wrote: Sorry guys it's taking so long, it will be submitted but it's taking time!

Requesting status update!

I second that request!!!

I third that request!!

I fourth that request! Come on Tie, it's about time you uploaded the collab.

At 3/2/10 09:49 PM, MaliciousAngel wrote: Since you asked for criticism I'll be honest, I didn't like it. For me it had three major problems, the first being the rushed tone.

It felt like you were blazing through everything, with not as much detail as you should have when you needed it. It all seemed fast paced, which isn't always a bad thing, but in your case you just went to fast. It's a major problem my writing had when I was younger. It should take a couple pages for your charecters to get from one place to another, I used to make them do it in a paragraph. I feel you have sortof the same thing going on, just spread it out a bit and don't rush through it.

The second problem I had was the flow of the story. Sometimes you just didn't use the right words and the story just didn't flow. I feel, that when I read a story, it should sortof make a flowing pattern in the writing style. Your style seems random, jumpy and unorganized.

The third is the randomness, you didn't explain enough. It isn't always a bad thing to not explain what's happening, but in your case you barely explained anything. So it seemed like it was just a pile of random events, and with no reason or explanation. It starts off to fast pace to not explain anything, and all you did was add more questions.

Hope I helped,
(The rare occurence of) MaliciousAngel

Thanks alot for your honesty

Okay so i need to slow shit down next time, get things to flow more and be less...retarded sounding.

but for the last part, are you saying that because you didn't understand what was happening? Cuz i stated in the original post that its at the end of the story so the storyline won't make sense

im guessing your confused about the grampa lolz...

Anyway, thanks alot. I olviously need to improve a lot, and still have quite a long way to go till i write an actual book =/.

Yet again, thank you, this helped :D

At 3/2/10 09:25 PM, lpfann2 wrote: Hey! So i really want some feedback on my writing skills. Personally, i think i'm decent, but i can't exactly rate my own stories so im going to turn to you, people of newgrounds.


What did i do wrong, what did i do right? Can't wait to here from you guys! I really wanna get better

Just reading it over again...there are quite a few spelling mistakes =/ and some grammatical errors. I can already see that. So maybe comment on the structure and whatnot of the paragraphs. Not things that are too obvious

Hey! So i really want some feedback on my writing skills. Personally, i think i'm decent, but i can't exactly rate my own stories so im going to turn to you, people of newgrounds.

So quite a while ago our class all had to write a short horror story to be read aloud. I love writing, (want to write a book once i think im ready to) so i tried pretty damn hard to make this story awesome. That was a while ago, and looking back on it now, it doesn't seem as good as it did when i wrote it.

Anyway, mine was really long so, im just going to put the end here. Don't critisize the storyline, for it will probably be confusing without all the other parts of the story. But yeah...here it is:

I trudge up the stairs again, open the door to the bedroom and collaspe on the bed. My grandpa is asleep, or atleast it looks like it. I turn over onto my back, pull up the blankets, close my eyes and drift off to sleep.
A loud bang. I awake in a panic, sweating and terrified. But I don't know why. Rubbing my face, I turn on the light and glace at the other bed. Then I freeze. Its empty.

CHAPTER 5: THE SACRIFICE

For a second I'm in disbelief, his wheelchair is gone and the sheets are thrown all over the place, as if he was snatched up right from his bed. How could he have gotten out himself, hes so weak in his current state and he can't move his legs. Another loud bang from outside the room. I slowly and carefully get out of bed. Shuffle to the door, and reveal madness.
It's insane, the house is literatly twisting every which way. The roof is bouncing up and down and furniture is sliding everywhere. What the hell is going on. Suddenly the staircase begins to shake, I run down and it collapses behind me. A maniacal laughter echoes through the coridors. I'm starting to freak out, it's a struggle to move my legs, my whole body is wrapped in fear. But i press on, trying desperatly to figure out where my grandpa could be in this now psysco funhouse. As i creep down the hall another echo of laughter vibrates through the area i'm in. I stop. The laugh sounded closer this time. Too close. I start to turn slowly, what will be behind me, I almost don't want to see. I just want to shut my eyes and die without seeing what messed up thing lies behind me in wait. But i do turn, out of curiousity.
I see the ghostly figure standing in front of me, more dark, and detailed than before. It's body is like a bundle of shadowy flames, burning at all time, it's not much taller than me, and I can just barely see it's bones behind the dark fire. It has dark gray circles for eyes, with glowing white pupils. The demon opens its mouth and grins with jagged teeth as it tilts his head sideways. Now I know why curiousity killed the cat.
He slowly stretches a ghoulish hand towards me, I back away, terrified out of my mind. But i can't run. I try as hard as i can but the fear around me has grasped me tighter. It steps forward, hand still out, trying to touch me. When I deny his company, his grin shifts into a disapointed frown, almost as if he thought i would just give myself away, no questions asked. He edges closer, now looking angry with me. With each step he takes, he moves quicker. Getting closer. I just stand there, wide - eyed. This is it, death is approaching me, my life is now going to end. He asserts himself, than suddenly leaps at me. He grabs me mid-air and we land hard, hes pinning me too the ground. Growling at me, he shoves his face closer. He begins to open his mouth.
Goodbye world. Goodbye life. Goodbye parents, friends, and school. This is it. I am going to die. I close my eyes and turn my head, not wanting to feel the pain. Suddenly, his grab releases. And i hear the door close. I take a chance and open my eyes. The house is back to normal, the walls and ceilings stopped twisting, everything is back to normal. But standing by the door, with an excited face, looking around curiously...is Matt. He spots me on the floor trembling.
"Oh! Hey dude! I found my way to the mansion, I brought my xbox and I was hopeing we could totally have like a party or something here. Would you be okay with that? Wait, dude, what are you doing on the floor" he floods me with ideas and questions. But I just get angry and jump back up and run to him.
"You idiot! Get out of here! He's going to kill you! Run! Go!" I'm trying to make him go out the door but he's resisting, yelling stuff about me acting weird. Suddenly he stops mid sentence and just stands there, with a blank face. Oh no. A black hand bursts through his chest, gallons of blood and veins coming out with it. I back up screaming and the house starts to twist and turn again. Matt's body goes limp and he falls, behind him is the shadow creature. He pounces on Matt's body and rips off an arm, then proceeds to bit into it. He holds it with his mouth and than starts scratching at Matt's face, ripping skin and shredding his eyeballs up. Theres an immense puddle of blood surrounding them. He swallows the arm whole and then grabs both legs. He turns his head completley around with a crazed look. Staring at me. Then rips the body in half from crouch to head. Organs explode out and it showers him, he's loving this. Dancing in the blood rain and licking blood off of his hands. Than he suddenly stops, looks at me again, and struts proudly toward me.
All i can do is stand there. I'm starting to cry. Matt wasn't a part of this, he was so innocent. I always messed with him but he was my best friend and now hes dead. This cruel demon has ripped him up like a chicken dinner. I stare at his dead, destroyed body. Anger builds up inside me and I charge the demon but I stop, right in front of him, restrained in the air. He simply laughs at my pathetic attempt to attack him and stretches out a gray tounge. He licks me than whispers.
"Delicious..."
I fall to the floor, he doesn't want me anymore, he's had his fill with Matt. I stare helplessly as a black hole forms in front of him. Seeming to be made from the same shadowy material as him. He grunts at me than turns and walks through it, it engulfs him, shrinks, than hes gone. He's left me here with my dead friend inches away. I start to cry again. Than look up and see something crawling out of a room. It's my grandpa, he's lost his chair and is probably attempting to get out as fast as he can. I want to get up and help him, but i don't want to move. I just want to mourn the death of my good friend and forget about this strange tragedy. But nonetheless, I wipe my tears off my face, and get up to help my grandfather.
"Thank god your still alive" he says in a perfect sentence.
"You..you can talk?" I ask bewildered
"Of course, that was not a real illness you know...". I blink, confused at the calmness in his voice. Does he not see my dead best friend across the hall. Is he not terrified out of mind like I am?!
"I'll explain this tragedy later" he says as I help him up and try and find his wheelchair.

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What did i do wrong, what did i do right? Can't wait to here from you guys! I really wanna get better

At 3/1/10 05:44 PM, Cantdoright wrote:

At 3/1/10 05:39 PM, lpfann2 wrote: hey Tie, did you ever figure out the reason my part wasn't working.

Or wait did i ever send you the FLA or SWF again, i can't remember =/

better hope its not too late becuase he is finishing soon

No wait it's fine I remember re sending him the fla and swf. :)

Man I can't wait for it to be done

hey Tie, did you ever figure out the reason my part wasn't working.

Or wait did i ever send you the FLA or SWF again, i can't remember =/

Hey there, I need to put some special effects on a video me and my friends are working on and as cheesy as it would look, I wanna use flash.

However every time I import a video, it puts some flv player on and I can't put shiz on the vid, I can only watch it.

How do I import it so that I can draw and animate on the video? I know it's possible because of the "My Newgrounds" vids here. Any specific things I need to do when importing the video?

Any help would be appreciated. Thanks in advance.

:( I wanted CC to be an xbox exclusive but oh well I understand. Its about the money lol

PM me when the collab is released :D

also, am I still co-authored? Just wondering

im a n00by n00b with certain things on NG...

the buddy request isnt in my inbox, where is it? How do i accept?

At 2/7/10 12:14 PM, TieSeiT wrote:

At 2/7/10 10:43 AM, FlashfireEX wrote: Anything new here?

No not really..

Sad face

At 2/3/10 10:10 PM, lpfann2 wrote:

At 2/3/10 03:20 PM, jakex09 wrote: The ZAP! collab

That collab would be boring, stupid and repetitive. Not to mention it's unoriginal, to me sounds like the lazed collab...only worse

Lazer*

:: double post, sorry D:

At 2/3/10 03:20 PM, jakex09 wrote: The ZAP! collab. EX. A guy standing next to another guy, and he touches him and basically shocks him!
EX.2 a Robber robbing a bank running down street with money, a police officer runs up to him and says your going to jail! zap, (they turn into ashes at the end) :3 Dont i just make up the best ideas?! I know right!

That collab would be boring, stupid and repetitive. Not to mention it's unoriginal, to me sounds like the lazed collab...only worse

So when's th due date for this?

At 1/27/10 07:21 PM, FatKidWitAJetPak wrote:

At 1/27/10 07:11 PM, lpfann2 wrote: ha done my part. MIGHT make another one but not sure yet

SWF
FLA

P

YO BOY RE UPLOAD THAT SWF. :)

:O OH SNAP!

when i get the B.A./Get good enough i'm thinking of doing an "apocolypse collab" but it won't be exactly what you think. I want it to be set after the apocolypse, its a dark age, everything is ruined, the trees are dying and whatnot.

And theres a whole bunch of mutant creatures

What my idea is, is that everyone who joins will make a creature, then a bio, and finally an animation showing what its doing after the apocolypse (hunting for humans, maybe some humans stumble into its cave and then it devours them) or something like that

olviously i want it to be ALL serious lol. Too bad the day i'll actually make this is soooooo far off

Great lounge idea btw FNR

ha done my part. MIGHT make another one but not sure yet

SWF
FLA

:P