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draw my evil self

and here he is. evil in a man. critics anyone?

he is the representation of my evil side. quite possibly (or more like definitively) the villian in my world to make. also im starting on ilustrations. critics anyone?

evil in 15 minutes

just a pic from a cd cover i did as a favor for my brother. critique anyone?

At 2/28/11 02:47 PM, Kakashi1930 wrote:

Those are cool. Do you have a step by step pic? That may be helpful.

i could make one but be specific, for since i find it simple i dont know what you are looking for.

i could sum it.
1.- choose your wing position. this is crucial to the correct anatomy on the feathers extended or folded, start with the top part, the wing's feathers are usually bound by the "finger that is the top part. as i told before, this is two parts, the small and the big one -big one can be articulated.
2.- make the furry feathers following the entire finger, with a curve being bigger near the articulation
3.- once youre done with the furry feathers choose, start with the feathers on the small part. they usually point all in one direction, and they go by layers.
4.-go to the big part feathers, the direction the feathers point follow the curvature in the finger. and they grow gradually to the very end of the wing.

At 2/28/11 01:33 AM, Kakashi1930 wrote: I like how you didn't draw that.
Its easy enough to say that, well, its easy enough. Like all things, especially those art related, it is easier said than done.
I say that it takes more time and patience than anything.

ok. heres a sketch done in 5 minutes. easy stuff.

kinda looks like a logo now, so the sketchy look could work. if you like that stile just make it work, keep the pencil like marks while keeping it understandable and eye appealing. dont get me wrong other than the cartoonish ambient that has going on, it has nothing outstanding for it, so it really has no look yet. work it a little more so we can give you a little more detailed revew to your work.

its quite easy actually, you just need to remember that wings (angel in this case) have two parts, one small in the beguining and one big at the end, its articulated to separate this parts, the small one is moved up and down to flap, while the big one extends and folds to flap the air. when flying, remember, the smallone is usualy with small feathers and keeps the same shape, and the big part is curved with midle size ings in the begining, and big size in the midle and end. also, remember that near the articulation there are tiny almost furry lyke feathers. that is the most detail way to draw wings.

At 2/27/11 10:50 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote: But Tetsuo doesn't wear saiyan armour.....

how cute you noted! -perky nerdiness aproaching- though its freezer armor-perky nerdiness finished- I picked the stile of the armor on the back, but the front of the armor its not that much alike, but i wanna show it first, i have yet to draw it on photoshop. the hair is just a crappy hair cut to be referenced in the story, the gloves are my inability to draw hands and i like black boots. they are very kick ass. and the cape is for dramatic propouse. i show a pick on the face, but its not exactly him.... its a teaser of something yet to be clarified

At 2/27/11 11:47 PM, Abbyka wrote: Stick with reds and oranges and paint the world being consumed by lava. The background reminds me of the scenes from DBZ where the planet Namek is being destroyed.

funny thing that the background was suposed to be lava like with energy surges, but its quite a crappy pre-model.

THIS IS THE GOOD GUY IN EARLY SKETCH STAGES

At 2/27/11 09:23 PM, Luwano wrote: Apart from his resemblance to a blonde Tetsuo I would say, if anything he looks more futuristic.

If you intentionally wanted him to look futuristic or medieval, you should make it more clear to the viewer. But I'm not saying it's really necessary, because I like the actual design.

ill be posting the front look couse its still missing that for a clear opinion from the foruk. im going with a little fantasy/future -yet not to much future, just a few advances-, but mostly because it fits the history im putting together

At 2/27/11 08:55 PM, BlackmarketKraig wrote:

At 2/27/11 06:18 AM, Smorsh wrote:

At 2/25/11 03:36 PM, Juantopo wrote: the character is the important element in here, he is evil.

Tetsuoooooooo!!

That's what I thought too!
Must be the hair + red cape combo.

This is a Tetsuo, one of the greatest characters in 20th century literature v

its actually a character i made a few years back but finnally nknow im putting the history together. thanks for the image, luckily the front design doesnt looks a lot like him, ill post it soon

At 2/27/11 08:12 PM, Kakashi1930 wrote:

At 2/27/11 08:10 PM, Juantopo wrote: damn it i wanna eat a tetsuo.

it means dick

i walked right in to that one.

At 2/27/11 06:18 AM, Smorsh wrote:

At 2/25/11 03:36 PM, Juantopo wrote: the character is the important element in here, he is evil.

Tetsuoooooooo!!

what is a tetsuo? is it a joke? insult? name? food? damn it i wanna eat a tetsuo.

At 2/25/11 11:18 PM, Lintire wrote: You see this and this thread?

They're unnessecary. Try and make yourself one big thread to post all your stuff in, and ask for critiques there. It's easier for the likes of me to critique multiple pictures that way, see how you're managing your skill from piece to piece.

ok. very well. how do i do that here? is there an explanation in the newgrounds nooby text? if so just point it out and i shall.

At 2/25/11 06:56 PM, Luwano wrote: Interesting character you have here. Too me, the pose suggests that he is kinda idle, like he is observing and something. Maybe you should draw something very busy. Since he is evil it could be a busy city he is planning to destroy or view of a world/planet he wants to conquer.

you are very much correct in there
in my original ideas he is either about to destroy a city, or take control of a mistical power, you see this character is part of a story i am working on....
one clue if i may ask, does he looks futuristic or medieval to you? perhaps from another dimmension? i havent really seen a cleer timestream yet.

seriously and to everyone, does he looks medieval or futuristic to you? or perhaps neithar and just from a different dimension? i take critics

At 2/25/11 08:07 PM, homojesus wrote: get rid of the liquifed color balls and pain in some destroyed buildings./

very nice idea. one point of clue. does he looks futuristic or medieval to you?

At 2/25/11 08:00 PM, Fifty-50 wrote: I see you caused some conflict in the Art Forum.

conflict perhaps, but not really my intention. i just take the critic and try to improve myself. i really hope no one is offended tho. anything on the picture on this particular post?

the character is the important element in here, he is evil. however i was so tired after modeling him that i ran out of ideas for the background, so if anyone can throw ideas on what he is looking at, or perhaps even throw your version of it, would be very apreciated. its charity, so i wont offer cash, sorry.

ideas are enough.

At 2/25/11 02:37 PM, Abbyka wrote: Really I would do it just for fun too, but I really need the money. :/ Badly.

oh then feel free to do it, i have other stuff to do

id do it for the fun if credit is given.

ok there are a few things wrong with it that im going to point out. its obvious that you filter raped it and when you use too many filters then your piece in general will show that and will look terrible to the viewer. show us the original figure you did in illustrator so that we can help you out. oh and one last thing you should make the background dark amongst the figure to better distinguish the two.

HERE IT IS! YES I KNOW I USE TO MUCH FILTERS, ILL TRY TO TONE DOWN A BIT, HERES THE ORIGINAL PIC

At 2/24/11 11:05 PM, ornery wrote: A small trick to making it look a bit better, use colors that appear in the original picture. If there are slight tints of blue highlights on the trees, stick them on the sword somewhere. The highlights on an object suggest the hue and temperature of the light source which effects all elements in a composition. so putting equivalent or slightly tinted highlights and reflected colors on an object makes it seem more part of a piece, rather than something pasted on afterward.

THANKS A LOT FOR THE TIP. IM NOOBY, I DIDNT NOTEST, I DID ONE PART OF THE FOREST BRIGHT AND THE OTHER DARK. THE SWORD WORK WAS SHAMELESS, Y USED PEN TO MARK THE SHAPES AND THEN STICK THE REGULAR SHADOWS, THEN COLORS, THEN JUST PUTTING RANDOM SHADOWS. I DID USE FILTERS, MOSTLY FOR THE LACK OF 3D LOOKS. IT WAS TOO CARTOONISH (AS YOU SEE IN PIC ABOVE)

I HATED HOW I LOOKED IN THE PIC, SINCE IM FATTER THAN WHAT I ACTUALLY AM IN REAL LIFE, BUT O WELL. SAD PAINTING. ANY TIPS ON MAKING REAL LOOKING PERSONS?

im more of a cartoonish man. this was made actually in ilustrator and then photoshop. i dont mind critics so go nuts and tell me how to improve

At 2/24/11 05:33 PM, Gumburd wrote: You must be one of the greatest painters of the world! I've never seen this photo-realistic work before!

you kiddin? it be sucking big time! so much it makes mah grammar die!

At 2/24/11 05:45 PM, DemocracyFTW wrote: Would you care to tell us how you could achieve such photorealism. I think I speak for the art community as a whole when I say, you have much talent.

really i have no way to tell. just gonna post a pic of the progress i show to a friend. i dont think im talented, couse i DID use a filter because it was looking too cartoonish. i dont know how to aply texture so it looks real.

im bored now
bye

you are stupid autor juantopo. look how its done!