Newgrounds.com — Everything, By Everyone.

Thanks for the critiques. I appreciate how everyone took the time out to actually show me what I needed to work on. All the advice given has been extremely helpful. x]

@Tomsan Thanks for the critique. Lol as for it being slightly feminine...I usually tend to draw males intentionally feminine, so when I try to draw them masculine they still turm out kinda girly. x]

@HiryuGouki Lol, yeah its finished. I wouldn't really call it a sketch..but it's just a quick thing I did.

@JackDGreatest Thanks :] oops...I usually add shine to the eyes, I don't know why I didn't for this one. As for sharpening the edges, I'd prefer a softer look..I dunno that's just me. But cropping it more, and fixing the collar I agree with.

Umm so yeah, I don't really ask for critique because I'm usually sensitive to it.. but here I go anyway.
Submited a picture, got a really low rating lol. So I'm just wondering what is it I need to work on? I know the hat and part of the shirt is solid black, it's not that I'm lazy about making it detailed, it's just that I personally like the way it looks. So does it look bad because it's plain? or sloppy? Or I need to work on the face? I need some serious feedback though...don't say something mean like "that really sucks" >.>

Hopefully this counts......

I'll join. c:

I like the 8th picture you posted, I like the distorted features.