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Looks a bit like Mr. Potatoehead

Looks blurry. Especially due to a lack of an outline. You can draw an outline, or add more shading and let the darker/lighter colors act as an outline.

Ugly and unoriginal. Theres already so many sonic and other game character drawings.

Nevermind, I see he has no head. I thought all that red was some huge wig instead of a decapitation.

Doesn't looks scary. The guy has no face or fingers, just stubs and a tiny head. If you want a horror look, go for realism and use darker colors.

You're BA is below 3.0, you have no ideas, your only flash has a 1.86, you're 13, and your profile picture shows a retard with a pen up his nose. No thanks.

What do you want us to do? Add onto yours, or make our own?

At 2/13/08 10:18 PM, Demean wrote: For those who like it, I'll try to update Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays.

Of course you can do that, It looks like a comic only takes 5-10 minutes.

At 2/13/08 09:37 PM, brandonkneece wrote: lol horrible death

Just how exactly did my guy die? And why is my guy missing an arm?

The guy in the corner is one creepy son of a bitch.

You just said your style involves no coloring or shading, yet I see both.

Messing around. Didn't try much.

Good for a mouse. Get a tablet.

At 2/3/07 01:29 PM, Truth wrote: Here is an example of one kid who was brainwashed by the Simpsons.

And heres an example of the kid that was brainwashed by the church. I doubt you would even think of the word "god" if you've never heard anything about it. Another example of the church sticking false beliefs into your mind.

What's with all this arguing? Theres a simple solution. Withdraw all troops and send a couple of nukes in. Any other country whines about it, give them a nuke too.

No picture?

Bump. Whenever I have trouble with something, I tend to not finish it or put it off. Right now, it's the clothes fold on his arm.

Your skull looks unnaturally happy.

What's the text on the bottom say? REBK?

Pictures?

I painted the gloves. I still don't like the way the hands are shaped. I didn't even sketch out the office yet, but my plan is to draw windows, and have a sniper rifle sitting against the window. If that won't work, I'll go with a gun display case.

At 2/10/08 12:05 PM, patu1 wrote: WRONG wrong and wrong again
most people on newgrounds arent good animators even the really good ones
hardly par with pros..So most people here are storytellers with medium animation skills or noobs or the 3d kind Luis Adam Philips etc etc they can do both...

Some people here are really good. So what would you say is a pro? I want to know your idea of one. If your cartoon gets on TV you're automatically a pro?

At 2/10/08 11:27 AM, ThePsychoSheep wrote: My friend you should have read the rules.When starting a topic you must start whit a piece of your art.

So this would go in the General board? I wasn't sure, since this is art...

I didn't make this, just wanted to show it.

So this is pretty much my WiP thread. I keep putting it off because I can't draw the hands for shit. My outline sucks too. One of the reasons I like to draw characters with masks/helmets is because I can't draw faces for shit. Anyway, what do you think of the suit texture?

At 2/9/08 09:54 PM, Chag wrote:

At 2/9/08 09:34 PM, icuemma wrote: i tried to add a bigger sack but couldn't bring my self to do it what about this...

and what is cell shading?

Uhm, I'm having trouble thinking of a way to describe it, search for it on google or deviantart and you'll get some good examples. Also think Wind Waker

Isn't cell shading only for 3d things to make them look cartoonish? Viewtiful Joe is a perfect example.

At 2/9/08 09:27 PM, solidusliquisol wrote: Im not trying to defame your work, just as an example, like the shirt is too plain, well, the drawing overall is plain, so to bring life to it, try exagerating something,

You gave him a bulge in the pants!

At 2/7/08 10:40 PM, noleader wrote:
Definately. Or you could go Suda 51 and do it Killer 7 style. That'd be sick.

And you should really do something for it. I have theme song ideas bombarding me from that sketch alone.

Those theme songs better be metal...

Anyway, I've never made a flash. I have little experience. My only flash was some incomplete piece of crap, and this guy if my first drawing with a tablet. The colored one that I gave a link to in the beginning of the thread was done with a mouse.

My flash idea with this guy:
Make it into an interactive movie.
He would be the CEO of a gun company. It would start out with him getting a call from a secretary mentioning that his company wouldn't receive any coffee from a coffee company because he killed several of their workers. My ideas him assaulting the coffee company. The interaction would be something like mashing space bar to get him to open an elevator door. Another would be scaling the side of a building (Got the idea from Kane & Lynch) and then breaking the window and throwing office workers out of the building.

I'm horrible at making up a plot. Anyway, heres a 100% shot.

Drawing? Work on your handwriting first.

At 2/9/08 04:25 PM, mranarchy wrote: Is he yellow due to casual racism or your skin colouring technique?

That made me laugh.