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At 2/18/10 06:06 PM, Version2 wrote: Not much activity in the forums today it seems.

Yeah. Im starting to get worried that maybe this forum wont be popular, since i love it.

This looks incredibly interesting. I understand that i have barely over 300 posts, and am 14-years old, but i promise i would check on your story everyday. Also, my nick isnt that bad, i suppose. Please, just consider this.

It reads wave to me.

This should be interesting. Ill be sure to check every once in a while. Unless of course ive been challenged and writing my epic story.

Ill be hard since i have school, but ill take you anytime!

I have an HTC touch, but the ooooold one. It does all the stuff i want it to do, so its all rite.

I forgot to mention that we never actually described Robert, Tonya, Jason, or Gustav. I suggest:

Robert: Jet Black Hair, slightly tanned skin, blue sapphire eyes, and a morning beard. Slender, yet a bit muscular body
Tonya: Smoking voluptuos body, almond eyes, light brown hair, and white skin.
Gustav: Black hair, green eyes, weak body, very tanned skin.
Jason: Blue eyes, blonde hair, slender yet muscular body, slightly pale skin.

SirTom93 APPROVES.
His parents wish you were their kid.

" Yo Bonnie im just gonna take a piss, alright?"
" Sure ba-"
" SHOOT THOSE TWO MOTHERFUCKERS DOWN"

Needless to say, it woulve been awesome.

This is sooooooooo not a blank post.(OR IS IT?)

Also, id be nice to rate mah face

Suiicide is a very broad matter. For one thing, all religions dissparove of suicide. Suicide is a very selfish thing to do. Leaving your family memebers and friends alone, with the thought that they may have caused it is not nice. Yet, if anywhere you go you are prosecuted or jusged, to a point where you cry every day and night, then i believe you should kill yourself, if you have the audacity and brevery to do so. For myself, i dont believe i would be able to do so, i dont think i have the balls. It take to be very brave or stupid to kill yourself.

At 2/7/10 10:21 PM, Oobeedoopskadoobie wrote:

:"Brotherly Smokes"?

Hmmm. Thats actually a pretty good title. I was thinking something like: Brothers, Monsters, and Smokes. It kinds sumarizes the story. Anybody like it?

At 2/7/10 01:41 PM, homor wrote:

At 2/7/10 01:23 PM, HeroDan wrote: This was an amazing experience, thanks guys. I suggest we make a New Never Ending Story after HollowedPumkinz gives the finishing touches to this one. Now we gotta work on a title, lol.

i got a One:

-Cancer Sticks

Interesting, it actually sounds pretty good, but in that case well need to change the ending a little to include the cancer sticks, for example: Instead of when Tonya tells him he wont foereget his wife, she tells him that hell never smoke those cancer sticks

Very good suggestion homor.

Although unhappy, i must agree with HollowedPumkinz. I will have the honor to make the epilogue, if you think it is adequate for this epic story.
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Epilogue

" Breath depply Tonya, dont feel the pain! " Robert said as Tonya was rushed thorugh the hospital.
1 year had passed since the events of Jason/Gustav, and Tonya was about to give birth.
Behind them were James and Daniel, and Daniel's fiance Alexis who he had meet after the ordeal.
They finally stopped Robert and the team, and the doctors took Tonya into the operating room.
" I guess we aren`t to late to the party huh!" Said James with a smirk on his face
Robert said nothing, but his expression of happiness said everything.
"Have you thought of any names?" asked Daniel
Robert though of it for a moment. He didnt know wheter it would be a boy or a girl, but if it was a boy, he certainly knew the name for him.
" I dont-" Robert was cut off by the screams of his wife.
A doctor came out of the room, smiling, and he said the owrds Robert wanted the most.
" Its a boy!"
Robert and the others rushed inside the OR and looked at his beautiful son. He had Roberts blue eyes and Tonyas Jet black hair. Tears fell from Robert cheeks as he looked at the miracle of life.
He truned around and said " Look at little boy Daniel "
Daniel, certainly confused asked " You named him after me?"
Robert explained himself, he thought he could name him Jason, but he thought it was inadequate, James came to mind, but he thought Daniel was the nicest name.
" Also," he continued," how you thrust yourself in danger for us, and risked yourself, was amazing. We owe you it"
Dan was grateful about it and gave Robert a big hug, asnd then put his arm around Alexis.
" What about James?" Alexis whispered into Daniel's ear.
" He's a big boy, he can handle himself."
Finished talking, they all walked over to see baby Dan and Tonya. James got close to her.
" Youll name the next one after me right?" whispered a doubtful James to Tonya
" Sure." Said Tonya, letting out a little laugh
Robert got Tonya into a wheelcahir after she was discharged, and carried baby Daniel into the car.
" I guess now you wont be forgetting about your wife:" said Tonya
"Not even if i wanted". Said Robert.

And with that, they rode into the sunset. Forgetting about their past, making a new future.

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This was an amazing experience, thanks guys. I suggest we make a New Never Ending Story after HollowedPumkinz gives the finishing touches to this one. Now we gotta work on a title, lol.
Any suggestions?

You sir, are an amzingly dumb idiotic motherfucker. I hope you burn

9 inches! That way to small!

Jason Disappeared into the shadows as Gustav went into a screaming rage.

"GET THE HELL OUTTA HERE!!" SHouted James, as he brought his shotgun up to his shoulder and fired. His shot hit Gustav's kneecap, and the monster fell down. Robert watched in horror as its blood hardened, the acid flowed into it, and the knee was re-formed. "Oh shit.." Daniel said in an awestruck tone. Gustav got up, and ran towards James, faster than before.

James fired again, this time, hitting the creature's shoulder. It didn't miss a step. Daniel joined in the fire, his twin SMGs putting 10 bullets a second into Gustav's torso, but the monster never stopped. monster leaped, and used it's long, deformed hand to swipe away James' shotgun. Despite the continuing fire from Daniel, Gustav hit James in the stomach, knocking him back seven feet, into a wall.

"JAMES!" Tonya screamed, as she pulled out a 12-inch Bowie knife, and ran at Gustav. Gustav turned to face her, raising a hand to strike, when Daniel Hit the monster over the head with James' shotgun. The Stunned monster swung his body around, his arm knocking Daniel out in the process. While Gustav began to leap on Daniel, Tonya cried out, and plunged her knife into the creature's back.

Gustav screeched in pain, and agony, and it turned to face Tonya with rage and fury eminating from its eyes. Tonya began backing up, trying to find her AK-47, but it wasn't there. Realizing she would have to fight, Tonya stopped, assumed a fighting position, and sent a flying kick towards Gustav's head.

The kicked would have broken the neck of any normal person, but since Gustav was 11 feet tall, it hit his stomach, and caused him to double over. Tonya then kneed him in the face, causing blood and acid from his broken nose to spurt everywhere. Gustav stumbled back, and in a rage of fury, ran towards Tonya.

Robert realized Tonya couldn't hold him off forever. He looked at James, then at Daniel, and then at James' shotgun. Then an Idea popped into his head. He ran towards the shotgun, just as Tonya sent a well placed kick to Gustav's sternum. Robert grabbed the shotgun, and walked over to where the two were fighting. He put the barrel of the shotgun a foot away from Gustav's head and whistled.

Gustav's eyes were filled with surprise and terror, as Robert calmly said, "Go back to the hell from which you belong, Bitch!" and pulled the trigger, blowing Gustav's brains across the hallway.

Just when his brain started to regenrate, Robert shot another bullet. Gustav fell to the floor, making a what seemed to be a little earthquake all around them. His body twitched, and it appeared his brain started to regenerate. Robert reloaded the gun, jumped on top of Gustav. His "face" was now nothing but a bloody pupl, but Robert could still see a hint of what was Gustav. A tear fell from his cheeks, knowing that the thing was partially his brother. He shot the two other bullets straight to the brain remains, and the twitching stopped. Robert got off the monster and woke Dan and Jmaes up. They were both incredibly surprised.

"You... did this all by yourself?" asked Dan
"Of course not, you all helped. But Im afraid our biggest worry now is Jason. We must get to the vault ASAP." said Robert

The team dissapeared into the shadows Jason had gotten into, when Daniel took his shirt off. All that was beneath was a tank top and a bullet proof vest over it.

"What are you doing?" asked James
" Im not sure Gustav is dead, so im taking him ut for good" He said, as he took about 3 grenades from his belt and bagged them inside the shirt.
Once they were all through the door that was in the shadows, Dan pulled the cap off al three grenades, and with intense speed, he threw the grenade-filled shirt inside the room, quickly closing the heavy iron door and running to the other end of the room. Thankfully the door was strong enough to hold the explosion, and all that happened was the door becoming a little crooked. Once they were calm enough, they looked around, and saw that they were finally in the chemichal room.

ME. i really want to be a celebrity. I ave a celebrity name too!

I havent read your "Blood of the Damned" story, but i like horror, so i should like it. I read your unfinished zombie story, and to me that appears an amazing plot. I suggest you contine on it.
Unless of course i was a total idiot and actually the zombie story and "Blood of the Damned" are the same story. In which case i would say it is fantastic.

Alright. Gimme a nickname, mabe ill help.

@HollowPumpkinz

I really like your suggestion about making it serious and non-contradictory, as i have revised it and some parts are. The suggestion about making it in adobe or pdf is also very good, as it IS too long to post normally. If you need any help with either spelling mistakes or revision ill be happy to help.
Also, have you taken my suggestion about making a second neverending story thread? This story seems close to its end, so i think it would be more convinient that after it ends, we make yet another interactive story thread. Ill be happy to be part of it.

Well.... i Hvent appeared in any movies, vbut ive been in some ads.

DAMN THIS STORY IS LONG

"Back to what I was saying, Robert, "James began. "It all started with that dousche-bag Gustav. "He began secretly experimenting on Jason for awhile. He did all sorts of painful and terrible things, Robert, and he made Jason into a monster. But Gustav was afraid of Jason. Gustav genetically modified Jason so that he would have powers and abilities you could never dream of. So Gustav made him to fearful and stupid to ever use them. but he locked up all those chemicals in a vault deep in his lab. The only way to open them is with his DNA, or something similar. You, being Gustav's brother, have the DNA needed to unlock the vault. Once that happens, you can take the chemicals, and whoop his ass for good."
"Me?" Robert groaned "Why the hell do I have to take the chemicals? You're the guy dressed and built like an '80s Arnold Schwarzenegger!"
"I really don't have to answer that, Robert. You will be cooperating with this plan, you have no choice in the matter," James said, and he placed a stained cloth over Robert's nose and mouth. A sickly sweet smell assaulted Robert before he blacked out.
Robert came to, to see a man shaking him. Robert could barely understand the words coming from his mouth in his sleep like state but he could make out something that sounded like "we're here."
Robert grabbed hold of reality and attempted to take in as much of the surroundings as possible. He concluded that he, as well as Tonya, were surrounded by woods, they were still tied up but as Robert could see they allowed Tonya the privilege to speak as well as see as they had not covered her mouth nor eyes, the same was for Robert, he also saw that there was a rather large rustic old van sitting vacant but a few yards away from a fire centered in the middle of their make-shift camp, it was still night, but out of all the things he took in, Robert noticed most of all the large man named James who had awoken him from his slumber still trying to get him fully conscious.
"Hey, Robert. we're here.", James repeated. "Where's here?" , Robert asked half-consciously. "'here' is where were going to spend the rest of the night at. Now I don't have the time to answer all your questions. What you need to get is that in a minute, my partner is going to come over here and we're going to loosen up those ropes. You try to be a hero and your gonna get a bullet in your skull. Understand?", replied James. Robert nodded and waited for his ropes to be cut. While waiting, Robert strained to find Tonya again. He found her asleep in a some what fetal position that the ropes forced her to make. James thought how all this had happened so quickly and thought of how his life was so placid and pitiful just a day ago. And now had turned into a adventure of his wildest nightmares.
There was a strange cooing noise off in the distance. James replied to it with a similar sound. Then out of the darkness a slim figure slithered out from the bushes. James looked at Robert and said, " Robert this is Daniel, Daniel this is Robert." At this particular moment Roberts only thought was how ironic it was that the introductions had been so formal as if they met on equal terms under different circumstances instead of a captive being introduced to his kidnapper. But then Robert broke the silence with another nod to show he was responsive. Daniel nodded back and the introductions ended as awkwardly as they began. " And this is his wife Tonya, the one sleeping over there.", James said finishing introductions.
Daniel was a slim character wearing jeans, boots and a leather jacket that wasn't as long as James' but still quite cumbersome. He was white although very tan with thick brown hair and greenish blue eyes that sorrowfully into the fire. He seemed quite taciturn and unwilling to speak. Almost furtive if you had seen him in a different light. In a way he was quite the opposite to James. Being how small and skinny he was compared to how large and bulky James was built. He also seemed quiet and docile compared to James' audacity and pugnaciousness. From a sight such as Robert's they were quite the odd ball looking pair.
James, now having done the intros, now had awoken Tonya and untied us both for our twilight meeting in this damp woods. "Right",said James, " I think we all got off on the wrong foot here. Us and you, want the same thing. You want Gustav dead, we want Gustav dead. So we should just work together for a common purpose." At this point Tonya was ready to protest such an alliance but saw James had his shotgun laying just a few feet from him and piped down. "So", James continued, "Me and Daniel have looked through all your things and found a map leading to a Weapons storage. I assume this was where you your going and we decided we should go as well. From there we can get what we need and head on to find Jason and the monstrosity of a man Gustav. Obviously, bullets would bounce right off of Gustav or else we wouldn't need you Robert, so we are going to take you to the chemical vault in order to get what you need to take down Gustav so we can get to Jason."
Robert broke in, " Ok. Seems simple enough, go to the vault, get the chemicals, Kill Gustav, Gun down Jason. Right?"
"Well...It won't be that easy.", Replied James, " Daniel recently went back to the lab you and Gustav worked at, where the Vault also happens to be, and found that Jason had transformed it into a fortress to be reckoned with. While we have been running about, Jason has been making more minions ones more horrible than the last, to guard this vault. This is why we need to stock up on weapons, because unlike Gustav, these ones can be killed. Daniel would know, one went after him and he shot it straight down. Though no easy task I can assure you.", Daniel nodded to confirm the story," If he keeps making these minions at this rate Jason might take his rage out on the world. And I will NOT let that happen. But IF we can get to that vault and not be killed. Then Jason might as well shit his pants good night because then we can kill his sorry ass as well as Gustav.
At this point, Tonya, despite her fears of his shotgun, broke in and said, " Wait. well this is all fine and dandy but even if we manage to kill Gustav and Jason, we still have to worry about the US government breathing down our necks to get Robert to make those horrible things to weapons."
To which James replied, as if anticipating the question. "No worries. Being part of the Marines for 15 years wasn't for shit. I can get every last one of us new identities and relocate us without any problems. However, until then, we need to go low profile."
Tonya said," Well, it looks like we have no choice. It's this or certain death one way or another." We all nodded in agreement.
All things being said, the mission was clear and our determination unshakable. With this we all stared into the fire waiting for the sun to come up.
At the break of dawn everyone was up and moving. Daniel had started the rustic old van up and it gave a whirl and other metal clanking noises as it started. "Right, today we're going off to the Weapons storage to pick out some guns to kill the minions with.", exclaimed an excited James at the thought of being able to gun down a whole lot of minions.
The ride went smoother than thought and they got there with no trouble.They opened up the storage with a key that Tonya just so happen to be carrying. Once open, they could see a massive arrangement of weaponry. Everyone but Tonya was extremely surprised at this. And Tonya said,"Welcome to my little bit of paradise, boys."

I MAY NOY HAVE ENOUGH POSTS TO CONTINUE..

CONTINUED YET AGAIN

Opening the back of the van, he threw the strip immediately at the ground and watched as it quickly flew from his sight.
Watching the unfortunate vehicle that lay behind him, he saw it drive directly over it and all four tires popped instantly.As expected of the spikes, they forced the vehicle to swerve out into the dividing wall and light on fire.
"Well, that stopped 'em, eh?" said Robert excitedly knowing that what he did caused such destruction, such a rush.
"Don't get to giddy Robert, we got company.", replied Tonya. The chopper from before seemed to have noticed the crashing car and turned to investigate.
"We need to get out of sight quick. Wait until the heat cools off, and then make our way to the weapon storage site.", stated Robert. They then turned off into the crackling gravel of a parking lot to a nearby motel far from main roads to spend the night.
Once settling into the nights rest stop, Robert's curiosity from the days events got hold of him. Causing him to ask Tonya, "So, why did you come back for me?".
Tonya replied "Hmph. Why are you asking me that? You think about it..."
She stood up, "I'm going for a walk. You need some time for yourself."
Snapping out of his thought, he exclaimed "ARE YOU NUTS!? There's a damn good chance you'll-"
"Pfft, don't worry." Tonya said calmly as she headed out.
Robert called back as she left the room, "Yeah well it's not like I care anyways!" Robert felt very confused inside. He thought to himself, "Why should I care, I barely remember this broad. Yeah...I only need her to get me to safety so I can go after my brother.", he continued to lie to himself, "I don't want that bitch anyhow." He then lied his head on the bed knowing all the while what the real truth was. He slept with his feelings of confusion and mangled emotions.
In the meanwhile Tonya was still walking about the motel looking for some smokes. She knew why she left the room without answer. Although she never wanted to admit it to her self. She finally managed to lay hands on a smoke, it was as she was pulling one out that the emotions she felt that day had caught up with her. A tear of realization rolled upon her face. "Who am I kidding? Say all I want I can't escape the fact of why I chose to look him up, why can't face his questions, why I betrayed my husband and ran off..." It was at this point that she was forced to break thought as a cop car came rolling in onto the gravel parking lot. "Shit!" she thought to herself.
Tonya burst into the dingy motel room, shouting "The cops are coming!" at a dismayed Robert.
"Jesus, did I not tell you?" Robert sighed "I told you not to go outside, and now look what happened!"
"Not much we can do about it now, is there, Robert? The least you can do now is help get us out of this mess,"
Tonya said, upturning the nearby nightstand and snapping a leg off of it. She weighed it briefly in her hands before sidling up to the door frame, makeshift club raised. Robert followed her actions carefully, unsure of what would come from her thoughtless actions. He examined her carefully as she made an aggresive, yet graceful stride out the hotel door. He thought about how she was his wife, and yet, had no clue of it. He thought about how much he wanted to escape the situation he was in and make love to her in some abandoned warehouse, surrounded by weapons. The thought aroused him, just as Tonya stormed through the door.
"Are you fucking coming or not? We've got three black and whites out front and a stolen armored van, and all you can do is daydream with a fucking hard-on?"
She scoffed and ran out, slamming the door.
"Yeah.." He though, "Yes, that's exactly what. Bitch..."
He broke a couple more legs off the nightstand, duct taped them together, and made his way to the door after Tonya.
meanwhile, The Shadowy Figure watched on from a hidden camera, knowing that they had to stay at that hotel, as it was the only one in town.
the mangled corpse that was once Jason that now held the lobotmized mind of Gustav let out an awful gurggle vaugely sounding like a sentence.
"i know little Friend, i know. but we cannot strike yet, the police are chasing them, if they see us we gain too much attention."
the Zombie let out a dissapointed sigh.
"by the way," said the Shadowy figure. "what do you suppose my name should be now? i have all of Jason's memories, but Gustav's goals and personality, and by now the genetic alterations to me have probably washed all of that away anyway."
the corspe let another terrible gurggle.
"you're right, I'll stick with Jason, since you still hold most of Gustav's mind anyway, little Gustav."
Jason petted Gustav on the head and ordered him away.
Robert crept out the motel door. There was a small overhang, and a railing that was half-rotted. It was obvious nobody cared about the state of the motel. But Robert didn't care much about that. He walked to the left, searching for Tonya. She was no where to be found. He was just about to call out to her, when a hand was clamped over his mouth, and he was pulled into darkness.
"Say nothing and do nothing if you want to live", a rough voice whispered in his ear. Robert relazed some, and the man dragged him off into a motel room.
The room was disgusting, like every other room in the motel. There were stains on the wallpaper, cockroaches scampering all over the floor, dirty sex-puns written on the wall, and the whole placed smelled of semen and blood.
In the far left corner, Robert saw Tonya, tied up with duck tape, glaring at the man who was behind, and still holding Robert.
The voice whispered in his ear again, "Will I have to tie you up like your little friend, or will you be a good boy, and sit quietly?"
Robert managed to nod somewhat, and his captor shoved him towards Tonya. Robert turned around, and got a good look at the man.
He was a tall, heavy man, with muscular arms, and a haircut short like a marine. He was wearing jeans, and a long overcoat, which looked to be made of leather. Her was wearing black leather gloves on both hands, and a pair of sturdy leather steel-toe boots. "I wonder how many cows died for this man's outfit", Robert thought, but before he could ponder the question, the man turned around.
"Now, you are probably wondering who the hell I am, and why I haven't killed you yet", the mean said in a loud, horse voice. Robert could see that his teeth were brown with age, though the man only seemed to be about 30.
"My name is James R Donnovan, and you can call me James. Robert, I worked with your brother, Jason, and he was a good man. We were good friends, and when Jason was killed, or whatever you call what was done to him, I realized that I needed to help him the best way I can. That way involves finding you, Robert."
Robert's eyes widened in surprise. The adrenaline was still pumping in his body, and he said, rather harshly, "Why the hell do you need ME?"
James looked him in the eyes, and said, "Robert, you're Jason's brother. That's more important than you think."
Robert tried to say something back, but Tonya had somehow broken free, and she lunged at James. James was quicker, and reached into his overcoat, pulled out a shotgun, and held it at Tonya's head, saying, "You try anything like that, bitch, and I will blow your fucking brains out. got it?" Tonya nodded, ad sat back down. Robert could see the defeat in her eyes, and knew that James was a force to be reckoned with.

DAMN THIS STORY IS LONG DAN

CONTINUED...
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At this point, Robert had enough of it, he was done mourning, he was done regretting, but more than anything he was done with being Gustav's bitch.
"bastard kills my brother, ruins my career, and to top it all off: he stole my smokes.
this son of a bitch is dead."
Applauses were heard, and Robert turned to see who it was. It was Gustav, and right by his side, the mutated, blood curling version of Jason.
"adorable, simply adorable Robbie, looks like the "cancer sticks" haven't taken too much of your vigor."
"Gustav, you're fucking dead." said Robert, with great anger in his heart.
"you seem to be confused, Gustav is dead."
"than who are you? are you the artist formally known as Gustav?"
The Shadowy, now unnamed figure let out a laugh.
"you always were the funny one in the house, brother."
"NO!" Robert yelled in denial. "Explain Jason's body there then?"
"You see brother, Gustav is in my decimated body."
"You don't mean?" Robert stuttered.
"Yes. He had discovered how to switch most of a persons mind into another vessel. Obviously, being a raw, unrefined practise, I retain some of his original goals. Such as killing you for betraying him." He then chuckled. "Gustav, kill."
What was now Gustav lunged at Robert. Robert tried to dodge, but he was too late. Gustav was now on top of him, with the face of Jason still on. Seeing what had happened to his brother, Robert couldn't take it anymore, and let tears flow through his sides.
"J-Jason!" shouted Robert "you have to stop this! you have to fight Gustav's Influence!"
Jason let out another laugh.
"oh little brother, if i really still cared even the slightest bit about you don't you think i would've already stopped trying to kill you by now?"
Robert was left speechless, his brother, whom he had done nothing but love all his life, looked him straight in the eyes and told him he didn't love him back.
"you could've turned away, refused to fund Gustav's project, but instead you put the tools in his hands that made me a monster. to be quite frank, the Jason part of me resents you just as much as the Gustav part."
Pushing Gustav off of himself, Robert quickly stood up. "You're wrong!" Robert exclaimed, "Even though Jason an I have had our tussles, he would never resent me! He's my brother, and always will be! We're family, and that means we love each other no matter what!" spat Robert, "but I guess something like that is too much for Gustav to understand..." Robert said bitterly as he gazed as at Gustav.
However, Robert didn't get to look too long. Suddenly he heard a Military helicopter fly by. He quickly ducked as a torrent of bullets fell down from the heavens. Quickly saying, "Damn.", he ran as fast he could away from Gustav. When Robert got to an old abandoned workshop he looked back at his former brother.
Once inside of the workshop, he laid down on the floor, hoping that he wouldn't be found. There he was, on the floor, huffing and puffing the heavy dust in the air as he wiped the sweat off of his brow. He turned, only to find an incredibly beautiful woman beside. She was holding a fresh pack of cigarettes...
"Get those cancer sticks outta my face..." as Robert fades back into a deep sleep. In a half awake daze, he saw the woman fade back into a faint silhouette of Jason from a few years ago. "J..Jason..? Is that you?"
Suddenly, the silhouette shouts, "No, you tool! It's me, Tonya, your wife!"
"What? I have a wife?" asks Robert.
"tshh. It figures you wouldn't remember me at all.", said Tonya as she walked over to help him up from the blood streaked floor of the work shop, " I WAS your wife, back before....before you left one day and never came back."
Robert looked extremely puzzled."I have...a wife?" he said to himself more than to anyone else. Then he remembered, the day he left with Gustav to work on the abomination formally known as his brother, who is now in Gustav's body, it was the day that he told his wife he'd be back after he got done with working with his "partner" on a science experiment promised to make there lives easy.
He now looked back at his new wife, "I suppose I forgot all those years I was gone.", said Robert. "FORGOT he says! Well guess what Mr.Science? The Government caught on to your little 'experiments' and are now out there with a helicopter, ready to take you and your little 'partner' off to a base to make you turn your work into a weapon!", Tonya said angrily. Robert just looked off into a distance and replied to the air "Well, looks like Gustav beat 'em to it.", and then, more directly to Tonya now, said " Well what now?"
"i know an old abandoned Weapon storage downtown, if we can make it there we'll have enough protection that it won't matter what the Military throws at us." said Toyna.
"and what are we supposed to do? start a war with them and overthrow the Government? life doesn't work like that!"
"no you idiot, we'll use them to defend ourselves until we're able to make our to South America."
"S-...SOUTH AMERICA?" Robert shouted, astonished.
"Tonya, that's ridiculous! we can't just--"
"i have an Uncle down there, he's a Senator with Cartel ties, they'll never be able to find us."
Robert was baffled, South America? the Cartel? everything was moving so fast.
than he thought about it all, he thought about how the Government refused to fund his research on the grounds that it was "too expensive" and "never really went anywhere", he thought about all the memories he was leaving behind, BAD memories. memories of Gustav, and his brother...
"alright." said Robert. "but before we go, once we get the weapons i have to pay a visit to an old Friend."
and so in the dead of night, they both packed up into Tonya's armored van and made there way to the Weapon Storage.
They jumped in the car, And headed down Williams Rd.
" Oh fuck!" Yelled Tonya
"What's wrong?" Said Robert.
" There is a cop behind us." Replied Tonya
"So?" Said Robert.
"We're in an unlicensed armored vehicle headed towards a stash of illegal weapons,"
Tonya snapped, jerking the steering wheel to the right. Tires squealed as the car skidded onto 24th Avenue.
"I should think it would be obvious, Robert. Head to the back, drop one of the spike strips onto the road. We'll see if we can't shake them."
"Are you insane?" Robert shouted.
"Quite possibly," said Tonya, "But feel free to leave at any time; the door's right there."
"Ok." said Robert as he grabbed one of the strips she had been pointing at.

CONTINUED YET AGAIN.. DAN

I have the need to record our progress so far. Every two pages of the story i will post our progress.
My next complete story post will be on page 6(if it gets there)

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Robert had decided to step out of his house for a moment. The weather was extremely muggy and stepping out into the stiff air made it hard to breath at first. The damp air soon flooded into his lungs, as he wearily dragged his feet down the road. Realizing he forgot his smokes, the very reason why he went outside, he turned around and started to walk back into his house and retrieve them. only to see a man hidden in the shadows clad in a Fedora Hat and a Trench coat was stranding there, waiting for him. The man carried a breifcase and held his smokes in his hand, he had a smirk on his face.
"you really though you could us from us, didn't you Robbie?" said the shadowy figure.
Robert panicked, he had known the man for a while, but never thought hed come all the way just to get him. Quickly he tried to run back into his house only for the man to grab him on the pants and start to unbuckle his belt. Five minutes later, he was locked in his room and the door creaked as a man screamed.Robert was completely naked, and the man had been torturing him for over an hour. As Kanye West's butchering of Daft Punk's Harder, Better, Faster, Stronger began again for the hundredth or so time through the speakers (The man's ingenious torture device), Robert blissfully fell into a deep coma. When he came to, the shadowy figure was holding the greatest torture device the world has ever known.
The tickle me Elmo doll that he clutched in his hands brought upon a flash of pure terror into Robert's soul. Immediately, Robert's body unwillingly went into a shock, as the shadowy figure snickered at his convulsing body. As he lay on the rough dark blue carpet, Robert tried to remember the reason why the shadowy figure would torture him in this inhumane way. Suddenly, Robert remembered last Tuesday when he was at the grocery store. Don't buy any old Canadian booze.
As dread trickled into him just as the musty gin previously had, he had an idea! He darted at a rather large plank of wood sitting in the corner of the room. He knew what he had to do. As Robert reached the plank, he noticed that one end had a rather rusty looking nail sticking out of it. "Perfect", he said with a huge grin on his tear stricken face. He chuckled, "It reminds me of myself as a level 18 Newgrounder. Anyways...". Robert lunged forward with his weapon and struck his foe on the side of his face, spouting blood everywhere.
Then, all of the sudden, the blood spewing figure had turned into smoke as a voice came over an intercom installed in the room, "Now now Robby, you didn't think it would be that easy, did you? No. Were going to have fun Robby. Oh, yes. We will have fun because of what you did to me.", the figures' voice over the intercom faded away with his maddening laughter as Robby all of the sudden remembered what he had tried to suppress out of his memory all of his life, what he did to the shadowy figure.
[Flash Back]
The year is 1984, we see a vision of Robert as a young man at the peak of the human physical condition, a time when a man could offer him a cigerrete and his response would be "get those Cancer sticks out of my face, douchebag." indeed, Robert is the very essence of a hot blooded American male. He is about to go to a bar to met a friend, when suddenly a man in a large trenchcoat, bald, and with several scars on his face appears. He speaks:
"Tell me, Robbie, what are you going to do with your life?"
"Do I know you?" Robert growled.
"Oh no, you don't Robbie. But i'm sure we're going to become great friends. See, I know about your research. I too am interesting in fusing animals with the human form. However, my experiments are somewhat... More sinister than yours." The man chuckled, a malevolent grin growing over his face; he swept and arm out, and guided Robert towards a thick collection of trees. Robert looked around. There wasn't a soul in miles. He began hearing loud screams. Shaking, He asked
"You buddy, Where are we going?"
"the holding cell." said the man.
Robert followed the man into a strange hanger like area, the screams growing louder and louder. the man lifted the door open, inside of the hanger were several disgusting Human-Animal hybrids, crawling around on the ground in pain.
"oh GOD, what is this?!" asked Robert, "don't worry Robert, these aren't mutated people, these creatures were born this way, i cloned them myself." replied the man "don't you think that's a little...wrong?" said Robert, "of course it's wrong, but also farther than you've ever gotten."
Robert knew what the man was saying was true, and over the next few days they formed an uneasy Alliance. Robert and the Man, who asked to be called Gustav made astounding discoveries, their research rapidly increasing. "Robert, this is what we've been working towards!" Gustav screamed with passion, in his strong, Germanic accent, pulling a large sheet off of a cage with a flourish. In the shadows of the cell, not much could be seen, aside from two, glaring red eyes, and a violent wretching sound. Robert's face paled. He could clearly see the face of the... thing. It was his younger brother, Jason. Gustav had done an experiment on him.
Robert tried to run, But Gustav held him back.
" This is going to be the biggest discovery ever. I just wish... I could share the fame with you."
"YOU TWISTED SON OF A BITCH, I'LL END YOU!"
Robert immediately unlocked the cage. The creature pounced on Gustav. His face was nothing more than a pile of flesh, And goo. Robert ran as fast as he could. Jumped out the window, And ran for the nearest hotel. Robert quickly checked in, handing over $100 and not bothering with change. He locked himself in the bathroom and breathed heavily. He found a box of cigarettes lying on the floor with 'Stress gone instantly!' printed on the front. Robert lit one and stuffed it into his mouth, his heart racing, smoke raggedly puffing in out out of the cig. Robert's eyes became wet, and he sobbed. What had he done? Fueling that bastard's research; and for what? For his brother to be turned into an abomination of nature?
Robert never was the same after that day. He became a lazy, haunted man, addicted to cigarettes.
Robert's eyes snapped open as he came to.

CONTINUED IN NEXT POST... DAN

You have nice GRAMMER MAN.

Im gonna get it for mah PlayStationz 3. I hope its nice, some sonic games in the past have disspaointed me.

I heard theyre making a TV series abou it. Its called "The Beautiful Love: Man Fucks Horse"

I heard its about a man fucking a horse

Yeah, i miss him too.

By the way Jamoke, if you read this, i want my bike back. And my lawnmower. and im pretty sure you owe me about 10 buckets of KFC.

In any case, good night, sweet prince....

Nice Soap. Although it looks more like a shoe then Jabba the Hut.