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At 6/16/14 02:49 AM, Cairos wrote: As neat and silly an idea can be, you need to be sure you can execute it with equal effort.

There are many elements that are lacking purpose and leave too many questions.
Does the torch emit light? Is that the moon? Why is he angry?
Your job as an illustrator is to provide as much clarity as possible for the viewer to understand the message.
Sometimes an idea will need to simplified enough so that it can be more impactful and memorable.

wow.. your image just show what i have missed in mine one.. thank you a lot for that.. i really appreciate your help.. (sorry for my english)

At 6/15/14 01:38 PM, M-Maher wrote:

At 6/15/14 12:41 PM, HaroldTheConqueror wrote: http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/haroldtheconqueror/theharold

you know some things, but your application of those things is off, I say practice like a motherfucker, paint more, you've got a handle on things, now get a feel for things, really push what you can do with these techniques you're trying out, its all down to you.

thanks a lot.. im glad that you spend your time to look at it. im not happy with this work at all.. but i were stuck , i didnt know what to do. so i post it here to see what someone thinks about it.. i will be very happy if you can say to may what is wrong (for example shading or coloring or linework) thanks a lot for everything :) (also sorry again for my english -_-)

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  theHarold by HaroldTheConqueror

  Hi.. so , this is my first drawning on PC, first thing i made in Photoshop. Every single move I did by myself and every singl...

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