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At 12/5/04 12:33 PM, ImmortalLight wrote: <"You've changed Mina." Zack smirked. "But yet, so have I. I have no more intent to kill, as I found who I was looking for. If you accompany me to Pultude, you can 'close the case' on me. When I find my love, the darkness will fade from my body. And I am a man of honor. Anything I say, I mean." He got up and looked at her one last time, and headed back to his room...>

Mina: Why run from me then? I was ordered to kill you, it doesn't mean i don't have honor as well, i will still help you, but i cannot put our past behind me, i mean comon, you tried to frekin kill me 5 times!! 3 of those i barley got out alive, you are full of tricks i can't figure out, but now i know how u do them.

yes!!! i finally got the links to work in my Sig!!! wOOt!! im happy now! :D

Immortal darkness, i will try to explain, Mina chased three aliens to this planet, two she killed on the surface, the other she killed in space on a ship with her own, i left this one a mystory until now, and i have incorporated u to be tht alien, the Federation wants u on 15 different planets, and everytime i chase u, u getaway, the only person to do so to Mina. So we have had incounters before, and basically Mina hates your guts, lol

Mina (whispering to Karess): He is wanted on over 15 planets, the Federeation does not view this man very well, he escaped off the Space station Galaga. The same one I chased the other aliens. I thought i dystroyed him, remember the "alien" i told u i got from my ship? i guess not.

(Zack, if u don't want my character to know your or have had previous encounters with him, let me know, if this doesn't work we will just say Mina doesn't trust him anyways)

At 12/5/04 12:23 PM, immortaldarkness wrote: <"Look closely... See my black eyes and long hair? And also..." he pulled up his long sleeve (he has a short and loong) and revealed dark stripes on his arm, with a crystal in the center. "Normal man? I think not."...>

Mina looked at the stripes. Thats it!! she thought. I know this man, Zach, a dangerous mutant. She eyes him, giving him a foul look. She leaned in and wispered to Karess.
Mina: I remeber this man, the federeation brought me to him on a space station, i dunno if we should trust him, i am usually very accepting, but this man has murdered many.

At 12/5/04 12:12 PM, immortaldarkness wrote: <"Demons are more like suped up humans. Everything you can do, your demon form can do multiple times better. But the negatives.. Well. Demon slayers chase you, bounty hunters," he looks at Mina, "want your head. And people fear you."...>

That's all I can think of at the moment >_<

Mina glared at him at the comment on bounty hunters. She tried to think, did she remember ever hunting him? How could he have known? She had to have had some encounter with him before, Mina was widely known across the galixy for being one of the most ruthless, in not most dangerous, bounty hunters you could get crossed up with.

At 12/5/04 12:07 PM, Myst_Williams wrote: *Karess looks at the crystal and thinks it over. As the crystal closens he can feel his body heat up. His eyes beginning glaze over a light red tinge, just like when he saw Mina in trouble for the first time. Karess moves back on his seat a little, looking at Zack.*
Karess: I do not think i am. If i become a demon, what would happen to me? I need to understand the positives and negatives of this.
*Karess looks at Mina nd then Karhein before looking back at Zack.*
Karess: I need more information before i can this decision. I am not sure i fully understand the consiquences or purpose of doing this. Why would i want to? Or why wouldn't i want to?

Mina watches as the crystal got closer, his eyes turning a reddish. It statled her.
Mina: I dunno Karess, somthing just doesn't feel right about this, how can we trust this guy? He could turn around and kill all us "non-demons" for all we know. I mean, what is his porpose in doing this, what is his gain? He wouldnt do this if he didn't have some reason.

At 12/5/04 11:21 AM, Myst_Williams wrote: *Bagriv hands Karess his tea and Karess looks at the others.*
Karess: How is everyone? Very big day.

Mina looked at him with her dreary eyes, he knew she hadn't slept agian. Mina pulled a fake smile.
Mina: Fine thanks......when is the party? Am i dressed ok for it?
She siped her tea agian.

At 12/5/04 02:14 AM, G-MAN490 wrote: ok I set up a website through Free webs where we can go and RP, but its in chatroom style and I dont know how to do the forum style, plus I cant create a member form until 7 days, I doubt this website will be any better than the Writers Guild or WOR forums we have on NG, but we can go here as a last resort if we need to, check it out and tell me what you think K? heres the url: http://www.freewebs.com/1591317/

Wow, this is a pretty cool idea, i chcked it out, basically the chat room style is pretty cool. i myself have never tried it, would it keep the hystory of things we've posted? cause if not, we could run into some trouble with people who have missed things, if it does then sweet, myabe i could just notbe lazy and creat a word document of it all or somthing, just a thought.

The sun wakes Mina as she sits there. She opens her eyes.
Mina: Another restless night over....
She had only slept for about 3 hours. She climbed out of bed and pressed the button on her hip. The clothing turned into a green daydress this time, she could never think of anything else to wear. She made her way downstairs to the bar and sat with Karhein.
Mina: Goodmorning....
She said wearily. She asked the bar keeper for some tea and porage. He gave her some.
Mina: Thanx....
She sat in silence as she siped her tea.

Mina finally stops crying and falls asleep. The last thing she see's is the moon shining down on her.

(wraping it up for the night guys, see ya)

At 12/4/04 09:58 PM, Myst_Williams wrote: I fully agree with you. I was only teasing : )
Now for my final post of the night (then i leave, i am sick... i need rest)

Yea, but i felt like ranting my point, and making it clear to the world!!! *jumps in the air for no reason* lol

At 12/4/04 09:36 PM, Myst_Williams wrote: (ya, i kno.. it is kinda creep Haloman bein a guy lol.. no effence... just weird.)

Yea, i REALLY saw before hand that it might seem weird and i was hoping it wouldn't be a problem........but, im really not trying to be a perv, im just experimenting with other character types, cause everyon picks guys, and i thought it would be fun to try somthing different, im not some 43 year old guy in hs basement, lol, im 16 and a writer just trying somthing new *dares to be different!!!* plus it puts new character types for you as writers to interact with, it makes things interesting!!!

At 12/4/04 09:50 PM, Myst_Williams wrote:

lol it is cool... i am just teasing you. I reached my limit too and iwanted to post one last time b4 i leave. GRR! My closing post for the day is kind of imortant to the storyline and development of my charcter.

yea, before i sign off for the night i gota tell everyone off in the WOR too :P, u know, make my point known.

i reached my post limit in WOR (dangit!!!)
but i just wanted to say...

At 12/4/04 09:36 PM, Myst_Williams wrote: (ya, i kno.. it is kinda creep Haloman bein a guy lol.. no effence... just weird.)

Yes sry, im really not trying to be a perv, just experimenting with other character types, cause everyon picks guys, and i thought it would be fun to try somthing different, im not some 43 year old guy in hs basement, lol, im 16 and a writer just trying somthing new *dares to be different!!!*

At 12/4/04 09:30 PM, Myst_Williams wrote: *Karess wraps his arms around her as she weeps.*
Karess: Its okay. Try and get some rest.
*He rubs her shaulder as she begins to calm down and close her eyes.*
Karess: You okay?

She wiped her tears away and stood up.
Mina: I should go, i need some rest...
She left really cause she was crying and Zach saw her. She entered her room and started crying agian. So much had happened in her past, and she alone should bear the blame she decided. She layed on her bed and tryed to go to sleep.

"Well? After you handle your business here will you help me?"
He looked at Mina then the other man. "Or you?"...>

Mina stoped crying when Zach bursted in, she hated showing weakness, and looked to him gathering herself.
Mina: of course, it deals with the elders, since we are dealing with them i can't see y not.

Karess looked confused.
Mina: im sorry, i should get into detail, when i was a young girl i grew up on a different planet, unfortunatly it doesn;t exist anymore. They came......no one knew who they were, and my parents put me in an escape ship and sent me off, 3 hours later the planet was dystroyed.....i ended up on a Galactic federal planet, they took me in, trianed me into their military prgogram, but saw i had more potential than any, and placed me in a new experimental "special unit." There they surgically enhanced me, and appyed the suit u saw to me. I am in a sense a super human. And you know who the first people i went after as a bounty hunter were when i was done? The race that dystroyed my entire planet, all those innocence gone forever. So, i in turn wiped out their entire race.....they were savages....all in the military, no home planet, i dystroed their space station compound.....everyone of them dead.....they are an extinct species now....all because of me.
She had never told anyone any of this, and she went to tears as she said it. It felt better to tell someone though, for someone to understand.

At 12/4/04 09:09 PM, Myst_Williams wrote: (Taking too long)

*The man agrees to meet Karess before the campaign to furthur dicuss matters. Karess turns back to Mina closing the door.*
Karess: So, whats bothering you tonight?
*Kareess lays back o nthe bed beside her.*

Mina: This place is so new to me...its almost like going back in time, im used to there being a galixy view, not just a planet view. Plus everything that happened, everything that gotten me here, you know, before i was stuck here, a bounty hunter, i just did it looked for a way to rid evil of the galixy, but now i see, evil will always be there no matter how many aliens who break the law i kill. And sitting in cryosleep going to the next planet isn't always fun.
She smiled as she said the last comment.
Mina: The thing with the painting, i still can;t belive what happened to her, and then i show up? Its all so abnormal, but likely at the same time....

At 12/4/04 08:57 PM, Myst_Williams wrote: The Doctor is banned, so all know.
I told him we wont go far, we will just say Harold is taking care of Roland in the inn until he gets back and awakes.

Just telling everyone so they know not to try and wake him up or claim hi mdead like one guy wanted to do. lol.

Cheers,

Dang, banned? but he is improtant in the Immortals RP too, dang, thats gona hurt

At 12/4/04 08:50 PM, Myst_Williams wrote:
(Hey Haloman.. is there a specific reason you chose to be a girl? I am glad you did considering there isnt any.. but wh ydid you?)

(yes ther is, i have never had a girl character and wanted to experiment, and also most people choose guy characters and i wanted to see how it would go if i chose a girl)

(sry bout that, we will just say this happens after u are done visting him or, we can say i am in the room and sliped in earlier, doesn't matter, up to you myst)

(HOLY CRAP I LEAVE FOR LIKE 5 HOURS AND 2 PAGES OF CRAP I JUST HAD TO READ THROUGH LOL jk, im gona catch up now starting from where Karess walks in on Mina)

Mina was startled as Karess rushed into her closet where she was putting on the legs on her armour.
Mina: Karess!! Ummm, what are you doing?
She said with a blushed smile. He told her to go and he would stash the Armour.
Mina: Well, if they won't find it i guess its ok....promise me they won't though. She quickly unattached the legs and pressed the button on the shorts. The clothing morphed back into her Blue day dress. Karess stood there amazed.
Karess: Wow! that amazing!
Mina: Yea i know, lets go.
She went to the room and threw the man over her shoulders and walked out the back door. She made her way up the street with the man, people giving her strange looks, one kid couldn't stop laughing. Se reached the inn and sat in the corner, proping the man up in a seat to make him look like he was sleeping. She waited for Karess. One by one the men showed up sitting at the table, they conversed for a while until Karess showed up and payed for their rooms.
Mina: I was so worried!
She threw her arms around Karess, happy to see him agian. She had been nervous the whole time. They all talked and joked for a while, then Karess excused himself. Mina did the same, she was in room #16.
Mina: Night guys, im tired.
She made her way to her room, hearing nothing from Karess's room, she asumed he was studying as usual or sleeping. She pushed the button once agian and the clothing changed to a nightgown, pink. She lay there on her bed, her muscles sore from carrying the guy up the hill to the inn. She didn't have the violin and she couldn't sleep, thinking of the painting once more, she thought of visiting Karess, he ususally couldn't sleep either. She didn't want to disturb him though. she waited about an hour, and decided to visit him. She got up and snuck her way to his door, slipping in surprising him.
Mina: Hey i couldn't sleep, i guess u can't either, maybe we could keep eachother company?
She said quietly. She went and sat next to him laying on the bed.

At 12/4/04 02:55 PM, Myst_Williams wrote: Karess: You got get Roland out the back. Drag him or something. I will secure your suit in an area they will never find. Please, go get Roland out of here. After i hide your suit i will come help you carry him somewhere safe. Okay?!?

Mina was startled at him walking in. (i have to go to swim meet eee ya guys)

(i will wait to see what Mina's actions are, since we are split and mina will do whatever Karess does)

At 12/4/04 02:44 PM, Myst_Williams wrote: *Karess grabs Roland and drags him into the other room. He doesnt seemt owant to wake up yet. He lifts Roland onto the fine living rooms couch. He closes the double doors to make sure nothing goes wrong.*
Karess: HE WONT WAKE. WE STAY HERE.
Unless you have some ingenious way of getting us ALL out of here., Karess thinks,
what about the campaign party tomorrow? I can't leave. They ELders will be here tomorrow. It is too important a chance to pass up.
*Karess looks at Mina.*
Karess: Wait here and keep an eye on him.
*Karess follows Karhien upstairs jumping two steps at a time.*
Karess: Where are you going?

(sry my fault skip mina's panic since she will stay with Karess.)
Mina sits next to the man. He is out in a chair. She sits there thinking.
Mina: Wow, a gunslinger, well, i guess i shouldn't be surprised, there are other bounty hunters out there than me. She sits and waits for Karess to return.

Mina looked at Karheinat his request ot go. She was next to Karess and whispered.
Mina: What about my power suit! if i am every to have any hopes of getting out of here at all, i need it, plus, we CANNOT let them take it when they come! If we are to get it out of here, i must put it on and go in silent mode, hopfuly that stil works too, i will be under camo, but we can't let them have it or find it whatever we do!
Mina was worried, she had an obligation not to let that fall into the wrong hands. She rushed up the stairs to her room, kicked open the once locked closet and pushed the button on her side, her clothing returned to the blue shorts and sportlike bra. She took the legs and began putting it all on, a 1 hour process.

At 12/4/04 02:05 PM, -TheDoctor- wrote: *Roland blinks, and his breathing slows slightly, he still keeps the guns raised though*
I am a Gunslinger, I was crossing a great desert, where am I now? What devilry has brought me here?

Mina: Please, there is no need for the guns....
She had seen guns before, these were primitive compared to her arm cannon on the broken Power suit, but he could still kill.
Mina looked at Karess.
Mina: any deserts around here?

At 12/4/04 01:52 PM, -TheDoctor- wrote: *Roland slams open the door of the house the characters seem to be gathered in, looking dazed he randomly points his guns at the people assembled there*
Who are you! How did I end up here!?

Mina jumps as the door is smashed in and falls to the ground. The man's dark figure apears out of the dust. He points one gun as Mina. She grows nervous, without the power suit, if he fired in a fit of rage, she would be good as dead. She tryed to calm him down.
Mina: I-i am Mina, its ok, we can figure things out....please, don't shoot.
She said this nervously and softly.

Mina in her half listening state heard the comment about the dream and turned half startled by the comment, giving him a glare. She then couldn;t help but laugh at the comment on the cheese.
Mina: You guys have the strangest dreams....
She said, knowing her too dreamed strange things. She turned back to the window as she said this. The warm sun filled her body. She just stood and smiled at the birds going by. /she turned away from the window and walked to Karess, standing next to him, she loved his company.
Mina: Well, whats the game plan guys? We gona stay and fight or run like little girls.
She said playfully. She knew what the answer would be.