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{{hey everyone, im gona be gone for all of tomorrow, in the car goin to my grandmothers, they have interenet there, but its slow dial up, so Mysty Dragon, you have permission over my character, no one else, maybe Captin-T, but right now, Msyty, just don;t kill her while im gone, lol, i trust you, i wil make a post tonight to get you started.}}

Rêve flew in the air into T'Pau's arms. She scremed as he caught her. "Noooo!!!"
"Great move" The AI muttered. Mina immediatly turned and saw only a speeder 5 feet from her. Time seemed to slow, she looked as the driver had a wild look of murder in his eyes. everything was slow. She lifted her arms out, it mattered not, she grabed a hold of the front of the vehicle, and it still forced her hands back, the front smashing into the chest of her suit. WARNING!!!! PLATE BREACH!!! A diagram on her veiw screen flew up with the damaged areas. She braced her feet, the car slowed, but Mina did not, to Rêve, she was being hit by a speeder going 160 miles an hour, but to Mina, it was different, slower. She skidded across the street with the car still moving. ALL POWER REVERTED, ARMOUR STRENGHT INCREASED, MUSCLE STRENGHT INCREASED, NEURAL SENSES INCREASED. The neural increase explained the slowness in time to Mina. She and the car skidded about 25 feet, before the Speeder came to a stop. Mina had just stoped a moving vehicle in almost the lenght of a small truck. The ground was smoking, and the driver had a paralized look in his eyes, only gripping the sterring wheel, shocked. Mina let loose of the hood she had just bent in the shape of her hands, and limped to the sidewalk where T'Pau stood with Rêve in his arms. Rêve's eyes were wide, as shocked as the driver, T'Pau was surprisingly not impressed (sarcasim, lol).
"How zid you..." Rêve began, but she couldn't finish. Mina smiled weakly.
"Hey, iv been through worse," she said grasping her aching arm, it was shattered in three places. SYSTEM RECALL, DISAGNOSING.................INJURIES MINAMAL, BEGINING REPAIR. The system sent out its nanobots to repair and mend her bones, and all damaged tissue. "I'll feel better in about an hour." She said like it was no big deal. "Shall we?" She said, limping past them.

{{alright mysty, there is your cue, do whatever you think my character, and yours would do, remember, i will not be on all tomorrow, i will try my best to get an internet hook up tomorrow night, ta ta, hope you all enjoied reading my little crash.}}

as far as im concerned, i imagined us in like, the capital city of the Light side, like, in the middle of the light side of the planet, no where near the dark side, sry

{{its only mina, T"pau, and Rêve, Dirk is in a store}}
Mina grabed Rêve, putting her over her shoulder, she looked at her surprised face, "Zis iz so noot a good izea."
"I know," she quickly responded, "but we should stick together." Mina looked at her motion screen as well, the dot labeld Turan was inth immdediate area. "OK, WE ARE MOVING NOW, maybe we can lose him in the traffic." T'Pau was already halfway across the street, Mina and Rêve were both looking for an opening. A red speeder whisked through, and there was an opening. "Hold on," Mina said.
"Wha-," Rêve started, and ended with a squeel as Mina jumped into the street.
"Multiple moving-" the AI started.
"Ok, i know, shut up for a minute!" Mina retorted, she was getting frustrated.
She jumped the gaurd rail into the next lane as a blue speeder sped by where they used to be standing. A red speeder came down there lane, Mina jumped into the air. Just in time too, the speeders back nicked her foot's armour, skinning the paint. "Four lanes to go..." Mina thought to herself. She darted into the next lane, stoping as another grey speeder passed in the lane before, and darting into it as a green speeder almost hit her from the lane she used to be standing in. Two lanes left. A red speeder came from the left of where she was, it sped up. "Damn it, not good. You will be ok," She asured Rêve as she threw her across the in the air, T'Pau catching her on the other side. Mina braced for impact....

Dumbldor for sure, one of the teachers

Mina haeard a voice talking to her from inside her mind agian, a warning, and this time, her head hurt like no other afterwards. Sweat driped down her face. The cooling system activated in her suit, temperature going over normal.
"Thats not a good sign M'lady, he will come after you."
"yes yes, i know i know, we need to find somewhere to stash the girl, i still don't know who the senator is he is talking about, lets go find T'Pau and Dirk."
She looked around, an abnormal blaster shot was heard around the corner, on the other side of the street, she was Dirk, but only for a moment, turning the corner.
"Damnit, we can't be in two places at once!"
"humm....M'lady, lets just go get T'Pau and try to follow the Jedi.
"Alright."
The cleared the corner where the gang war was going, "Stay," she told Rêve. She ran, faster, faster, faster. SYSTEM SPEED ENGAGED, She was a blur of colors. She grabed T'Pau, and ran back to the corner where Rêve was. "Alright, comon." The chase was on. The traffic was heavy, and the street packed, cars on the ground flying by around 120 mph and in the air even faster than that. "Damnit, we hav to fin ze way arround," Rêve said.
"Right, follow your lead." Mina motioned.
"Track her," she ordered the AI. Her thoughts agian went to Turan, hw easily he broke through to her mind, nothing had ever happened like that before, nothing had damaged her suit past critical damage, and here, he could get to the source so easy. She didn't like it one bit.

At 12/21/04 10:59 AM, Frozen_Fox wrote: Captain i when I was talking abut a jedi senator I wasnt actually talking about Dirk. We can run it like I was if you want. ITs a good idea and Im annoyed I didnt think of it :-\

Thats how i took it, lets just roll with it, its a great idea, creats friction, hehehe

At 12/21/04 12:22 AM, Haloman wrote: Mina was enterested in the girl, a smooth talker, she could know somthing. She walked back into the Casino, the gun fire still going on outside. She made her way to the back of the casino and saw her come out the door. "Excuse me," Mina said, "you know, its not safe outside, specialy unarmed like you, i was thinking, maybe you should stick with me for a while, we could...help eachother out." Mina was desperate, and it seemed the jedi was not helping her, Tarun and this girl had more value to her. She would go on her own for a while, maybe exscort this girl wherrever she needed to go. She just needed an edge. Her eyes looked at her from the visor, gleeming.

Rêve eyed her suspiciouly. "Whats in it for me agian bab?" Mina loked over Rêve's shoulder.
"Proctection from THAT." Mina motioned with her head. Rêve turned and saw Turan and Org looking around. Mina knew exactly who they were looking for, "Up to you, you can come with me, and we can figure things out together, or....." she eyed the two agian, "you can go with them and see what his boss has in store for you." Mina had been listening in on Turans conversation thanks to the DNA sample givin to her, she could once again, "tap him" in a sense. She knew they were going to kill the senator, thing is, the person they need the most didn't know, Rêve. If she could just get her away from them, maybe the jedi would have a shot. "If we don't leave soon....those two will take you away, with or agianst your will, it doesn't matter to them, up to you my darling," mina paused. "Put a genetic lock on her like we did Turan, if she doesn't decide to go WITH us, at least we will know where she is," Mina said in her helmet.
"Yes M'lady, done."
"Good, did the genetic info on her clear up any of the data base?"
"A little M'lady, we got another source on the archive, it too has been corrupted."
"Scan the data and sort it out."
"Yes M'lady."
Someone is hiding somthing....... Mina thought.

Thanks so much you two!!! these are awesome!!!!

Cam

At 12/21/04 12:22 AM, Haloman wrote: {{Captin t, you may want to switch my character to Dark for a while, iv come up with an interesting angle for Mina
Mina Trun: Dark

EX THAT, NVM, DON'T

Mina was enterested in the girl, a smooth talker, she could know somthing. She walked back into the Casino, the gun fire still going on outside. She made her way to the back of the casino and saw her come out the door. "Excuse me," Mina said, "you know, its not safe outside, specialy unarmed like you, i was thinking, maybe you should stick with me for a while, we could...help eachother out." Mina was desperate, and it seemed the jedi was not helping her, Tarun and this girl had more value to her. She would go on her own for a while, maybe exscort this girl wherrever she needed to go. She just needed an edge. Her eyes looked at her from the visor, gleeming.

{{Captin t, you may want to switch my character to Dark for a while, iv come up with an interesting angle for Mina
Mina Trun: Dark

Everyone was talking to Mina all at once, her head still hurt from the break in of her mind. the voice paterns were being recorded.
"I need that data sorted for the girl," she told th AI in her helmet.
"Right away Me'lady, its a bit complicated, everything is incripted and broken, someone must have hacked a system. She turned to Turan.
"As much as i would like to "get rid of the suit" its genetically attached to me in alot of ways, unless im in hypersleep, i can't be without it for more than a couple days, and im not going to get into details with you, i can see we are just going to disagree, so don't go telling anyone anything, or, i might have to kill you." She smiled, her faint eyes could be seen in the visor. She offered her hand to him as she was leaving, he eyed her and took it. "Activate the profile, get me a sample of blood and a hand print," Mina said in her helmet. The microscopic needle on one of her gloves fingers got a sample without any harm, and the glove scanned his hand and got the prints. "I look forward to our next meeting...." She said as she let loose. Before leaving she eyed the vomit, went over, and touched it with one hand. "Humm....blood. " She said in her helmet. The program scaned and added the sample to the profile as well. "Comon T'Pau, Dirk, lets go. They exited the casino and went back onto the street, a battle going on. Shots were fired close to the casino and Mina ducked as three bullet shots went into the wall where she was once standing. "Ok, not good," she said to the others. A small mini map uploaded onto the screen, alot of red dots on her motion sensor.

At 12/20/04 03:08 PM, Frozen_Fox wrote: Turan turns his back on Mina and fce Reve.
Turan " Now then my dear where were we?"

Mina grew angry with him. "lying basterd...." she whispered in her helmet. She turned to the others. "Any ideas? this isn't working."

oops, the pic is gone, oh well, thanks a bunch anyways!

alrght, im looking for an update on my sig, change the black background, put in a cool high tech looking one, with a pic of Ridley or somthing, i dunno, be creative, and use the symbol im posting on the very end, make "mina trun" smaller, that deal, thanks everyone, just use the symbol on the end, not the grey background.

She motioned tword the jedi and T'Pau, lets go to the casino. She made her way through the alley, O'Shava approched them. "Selling somthing?" He asked.
"No," she gave him a stern and quick reply, not wanting to get distracted, and wanting to approch Turan before he left. They crossed the street, and made there way into the casino, to the bar, the last memory the AI had downloaded. She saw Turan and a lady. "Excuse me miss, i have some busieness with this one." The dancer (is that what u are?) gasped at the site of Mina, she knew who Mina was, and her reputation. "Sorry to barge in on you like this, but im not so sure someone with your powers should be nussling in on my information, i have top secret data in me, what did you see?" She threatened tword Turan. "I downloaded your memeories as well, thanks to my AI, you have a very interesting past my friend. I don't respond well to people barging in on my data. Explain yourself."

{{im kinda stuck right here, i thought a confrentation would make things flow, if anyone has any ideas on what to do next, go for it.}}

At 12/20/04 12:05 PM, captain-t wrote: He went to the surface under the waterfall and climbed out. He waited for Mina to take the inevitable bait and jumped over her, flipping through the waterfall and landing hands first. He swam over to the other side of the splash pool and got up onto the shore, sitting on another boulder. "I like that boulder, that's a nice boulder," Mina said as she came to the surface in the center of the pool. "Get back in here, I'm not finished with you."

{{yea, when i was writting last night, it was like, 2 in the mornining, so ya}}

Mina swa mover to the shore, and grabbed Dirks hand like she needed help up, he grapsped it, but instead she pulled him in. She swam to the bottom, Dirk chasing her. Dirk grabed Mina's foot, and pulled himself, giving him a boost up to the waters edge. Mina came back up to the surface, and saw Dirk sitting on his rock agian. "Your new special place?" She teased, splashing a handful of water on him. She looked at the sky, it was almost 10 and it was getting hot. "Dang it, we gotta make some ground before lunch." She frowned, gettong out of the watter and pushing the button, the clothes dried themselves out, and tuerned back into her kakie pants and a green button up shirt. She grabbed her pack, both were packed. "Shall we?" She motioned.

soooo....anyone gona do my sig? i asked a little bit ago....*whistles to self...*

At 12/20/04 05:23 AM, Coop83 wrote: 'This twitch. Now put the gun down {{and give me a packet of tropical fruit bubblicious}} and maybe we can talk about this like civilised people.'

Mina laughed in her helmet at the threat. "Now now my friend, no need for guns, that puny blaster couldn't penetrate eve my visor. Now please, lets DO talk like civilized people, i am not interested in fighting you two, i am interested in, a team? Dirk is right, we will get farther here working together. Now, like i said, lets give our "new friend" a visit in that bar.

if you guys make sigs around here, please, update my sig, i want a background worthy of samus (thats the girl) and probably that cool metriod lightning symbol like this one on the end, and like, a cool pic of ridley, make ridley move if u can, i dunno, use your imagination, if u got better ideas, go for it! thanks everone!!! just use the symbol, not the grey background.

alright, see ya, im not quite sure in understand whats happeneding, so i will see u tomorrow and just make a post to clear things up for me, im confused, lol

yea im good, i think we shoul name it.......Haleo, haha, random names are great arn't they? lol

At 12/19/04 11:28 PM, captain-t wrote: Dirk grinned and stripped his shirt. He dove backwards into the pool and swam to the bottom with a deep breath. He grabbed onto a large boulder and waited...

Mina was not ammused at all, she playfully threw a rock at him after he dove into the pool agian. "I don;t know what u were thinking Dirk, but that wasn't funny!!" She pressed the button nad her clothes transformed into her bathing suit. She dive in after him. She eyed him in the water, giving him a nasty look. He only smiled back, she swam near him, to the boulder.

At 12/19/04 10:30 PM, captain-t wrote: {{You know what the stupid thing is? I forgot that it was perpetual daylight, thank you Misty_Dragon for pointing that out. We were just in a dark alleyway somehow, lol. Lets say that it was an alleyway that was covered from the sunlight, therefor it was incredibly dark. Sorry about long dialogue.}}

Dirk sat down beside the mechSuit that contained Mina. "Of course I'm a Jedi, I'm surprised that you couldn't tell that as soon as I had known you were listening."
"You didn't seem the type, crawling out of a back window and all." Mina said distantly between thoughts.
"I know, I know. So what happened to you?" Dirk asked.
"What makes you my friend all of a sudden?" Mina demended, standing and aiming her beam-weapon once again.
"I was never your enemy in the beginning." Dirk put up his hands in defence.
"How can I get off of this rock?" Mina asked, not letting down her guard, "What is going on here?"
"I know less than you, I was stranded here when my ship was damaged and crashed. I woke up in that hospital," Dirk pointed. "We will get a lot more accomplished, if we work together."

"Well, jedi arn't exactly common where i come from." She stated.
She stood next to him. "I don;t know what happened to me, don't worry about it, i'll tell you later, right now, lets focus on the task at hand young jedi. so your ship crashed? Hum, not much better than me, the warphole picked me on the way here, i was told to go here and find out what is wrong with sapce around here, the planet is on lock-down, because of this warmhold im sure, someone is hiding somtihng, i can feel it, when i collasped, a person was trying to read my mind, he unlocked some of my previous memories, i will explain later, but, when doing so, my AI got some info from him as well, his name is Tarun, he is sitting in the bar right where u came out of, we need him, we must capture him. He has valuable info for us."

Mina had soon felt dirty from sitting there, and thirsty as well. She eyed a waterfall only a couple yards away, the roar of the waterfall atracted her attention, she ran back down the hill, grabed her pack, as to not wake Dirk, and went to the waterfall. She layed her things down next to the pool side, filled her canteen on the waterfall, and drank. She felt better with her thirst quenched, and looked at the beautiful waterfall. She had not bathed since her visit to the mansion. She felt dirty, Dirk was still asleep, so she decided it was safe to take a quick rinse. She looked around, making sure Dirk was not around. The coast was clear. She removed her clothes, and set them under the backpack out of view. She quickly made her way into the cavern-like opening behind the waterfall, a room almost. She went under the waterfall, it was cool to her skin, the dirt ran off her, she felt cleaner. She stood under the waterfall not looking at the opening until she heard a noise, she got scared, she turned quickly and saw it was Dirk!! "Dirk!!! What are you doing!!" She yelled, covering herself. Dirk paniked and put his paw over his eyes.
"Im sorry, im so sorry!" he said backed out form under that waterfall blindly. He triped over some rocks and fell right into the pool of water. She ran and grabed her clothing, Dirk still fumbling in the water, trying not to look. She sliped her clothes on, and helped Dirk from the water. He stood there ashamed, dripping water from his fur. Mina gave a sigh.

{{LOL, i couldn't help but laugh while writing this, a scene of confusion and panic, lol, Captin, tell me if i assumed right on all this, i thought it was a good lead to what Dirk did droping the canteen in your post.}}

this has always been a mystory to me, please, someone tell me how to make them, what programs to use ect.

-thanks
Cam

i know this is random, but how DO you make sigs? gota learn somtime right? can somone tell me?

At 12/19/04 09:05 PM, api667 wrote:

hey everyone, i havn;t heard anyone talk about the sig i would like made, please, if anyone is doing this, post and let it be known

well here ya go, but this is only done in a rush, so dont blame me

thanks alot!!

Mina still sat on her hands and knees, huffing and puffing, out of energy, she had only used will power to get him out of her mind. It had taken a large toll on her. She had a metal suit, made of the strongest metal known to man, but it perplexed her on how she could be attacked on the inside. she sat there, gonig through her memories, the day her father put her in an escape pod only hours from the planets disruction. How she had begged him not to, not knowing her fate if he hadn't. How alone she had been in deep space, having to watch as her planet was dystroyed. How the military on that unkown space station had genetically enhanced her, and trained her, and how she had escaped and the station also dystroyed. It suddenly clicked, that race now thought to be extinct must have been after her, what else, coinsidence? she guessed not. The AI logged her thought on this and she collected herself, stumbling to stand up, the others gave her a strange and worried looks, compasion in their eyes. "Im fine..." she reashured them.

At 12/19/04 08:50 PM, Frozen_Fox wrote: Whats creepy is that I kind of guessed that you were gonna lead up , in the long run, was something to do with her past :S

Im glad it actually helped you I suddenly thoguht after ID hit the post button that it might have been a small infringement of the rules to automatically allow Turan to read your mind as it could count as me controlling your charcter in a weird way.

I know, there are only two writers to have ever read my mind on what im actually doing, you, and captin-t, i thought i was awesome, great post, really lead up some things