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Mina sat sleeping, a peacful night for once, the air warm, and the sun growing ready to rise. Dirk sat right near Mina, meditating, he was at peace as well. Dirk sat there for a few more moments, and decided medatating was done. He gazed at Mina agian, her breathing steadily and heavily. The sun broke the mountians to the east (that is where the sun rises is it not? lol) and woke Mina. She found Dirk gazing at her. A quizzical look appeared on her face. "What? Somthing wrong?" She teased. Dirk smiled.
"Nothing i can see, all perfect to me...." he replyed. Mina blushed and sat up. She rolled her bed up, and packed. She sat her pack aside and went to a rock, sat on it, and let the sun sooth her. She layed on the rock, it was warm. Dirk joined her.
"Where are we?" she asked him. He jumped down, pulled the map, and went back up, gracfully and swiftly.
"Umm......about...here," he said, pointing to a small city called Fusia, "and we want to get....her..." he pointed, to a small road that led the rest of the Way to Pura. "Only about 50 miles, we can make it there by this evening maybe." He told her. It was good news, both were tired, and the trip was beginning to wear on both. Mina's and Dirk's stomachs growled at the same time, each looked down at thier empty tummies, they hadn't eaten last night, only slept, and then to each other, and broke out laughing. Thy hopped down off the rock, got thier things, and raced each other to the town cavern for some delicieous breakfast!

Kilen sat in his ship cursing, the land was desolate and dark, and there was nothing. "Maybe we shoul-" the AI started, but Kilen was agrivated.
"Shut up for just 5 seconds ok!" he retorted. The AI went silent. He sat in silence for a few moments, what were they to do next? He pushed a button, a program started, he also booted the archives. "Give me a layout on cities on this side of the planet before the geo cencro orbit dysaster," he told it. The layout came up, Histra was the closest city, and they were only 4 miles from it. "Take us there" he ordered, the thrusters activated. He used the program, uploaded Reve's DNA to it, and waited as it responded. They arrived above the cities ruins, 2000 EA, but it was still enormou, and giant sky scrapers still stood. "We will start here," he said, and exicuted the program, the snetanal bots flew out of the ship, 3 of them, dangerous hunting machiens, armed with lightsabers of course, and had a flyin mode. They zoomed off, Kilen set the program to alert him when he was found, and decided to have a rest, he went to his quarters and took off the helmet. The air swooped out of it and depressurized. His long black hair, with fire red stripes came down. His grey eyes stared at the celing. He layed on his bed.

(as for mina's post, i will wait for others to post, Turan mainly.)

{{hhy everyone, sry for the long absence Captin t, lets see what i can do for our story}}

Mina sat under the tree, pondering thier placement, and the events that had just happened. This druid, why his involvement? Why his interest in us? A connection from Dirk's past maybe? There was no way to know at this moment but to ask.
"This druid seems to know you dirk, or his involvement would be abscure, do you remember any of your past?" She asked him softly. Dirk lay before her on the ground, his arm covering his eyes, waking him from a catnap, they decided to stay at this spot until they felt better, each feeling weak after the druid. He sat in silence, thinking, trying to remember. Mina looked at her hands agian, scarred ?(sp?) She had not seen this marking on them before. "Let me see your hand...." She said to him, picking it up, Dirk sat up with a quizzical look on his face. She looked, the same marking? The druid maybe? "We.....have the same thing on our hand." She said. Dirk looked at his hand as well.
"Seems we do!" He said. Both looked at eachother and "telepathically" (without words) decided sleeping was good. Each rolled out thier mat, tomorrow they would start back to Pura, and hopfully find thier crew agian. It seemed that Kares (sp on his name? lol) had lead them all this way, and suddenly, Dirk and Mina had been dumped. Things would have definatly been easier if she had gotten on that damn boat. She looked at Dirk as she thought this, his eyes closed, she had gone back for him. She didn't know why, somthing just came over her. She looked up at the stars, the idols of fate. Night time had come fast, no fire either, the night was warm though. She layed her head back agian., and stared at the stars until she fell asleep. It was still a weeks walk to Pura, and what would await them there? Karess hopefully.

Kilen entered the vastness of plaines they called the dark side of the planet. It was desolete, abandoned. No one really knew y, becuae all who ventured here never came back to tell a story. He sat back in his ship. scanning for heat trails. None, it was too cold here for them to last long. "Damn it!" He yelled, pounding his fist on the dash. She sat back.
"Im not picking up ANY heat trails," the AI said. Its name was Damil. (ya, im gona name them now).
"Well, i guess we are screwed. Any info on this side of the planet?" He asked Damil.
"Yes, not good new either, there is a point in every cycle of this planet around the sun that this place turned to a desolite place of ice. That time is soon approching. Temperatures have laready begun to drop, this will make hunting her even more difficult!"
"Great, just great!" He yelled, got up, and went to the com room to report to his master. The room turned on as he stood on the petastle kneeling.
"Stand my apprentice," he said. Kilen stood, and began.
"My lord, the girl has gotten away, i tried my best to capture, but Mina and another being got in the way, the being took her to the dark side of the planet where i am on its perimiter right now, the great cold of this planet is coming. I cannot face Mina without an advantage, she is the same as me now. She overpowered me in our last battle. What be your bidding my lord?" The dark lords face screwed up in hidden anger.
"Find this being, get Reve, and kill Mina and any that oppose you. I want Reve ALIVE my young padawan. You do have and advantage, use the force, Mina does not have it! You do, now be gone." He said as his face flickered away. Kilen stood and made his way back to the cockpit. Where to start?

Mina, Turan and the jedi exited the elevator to the 1st floor. Turan still stood in silence pondering this offer. Suddenly a ship roared into view. The jedi master smiled. "will this ship be sufficient enough?" The ship decended, landing. The hatch opened, and the lift went down, Dirk appeared.

omg, sry for the double post
Dark:
Turan (a main character)- Manic street.......
Kilen (side character)- Haloman
Also Charles Reeves (side character), control as well by umm.....who? i don't know, i think Coop.
hope that clears things up....

We are on Thebes, the planet with a geo-central orbit, meaning one side is always light, another always dark, dark characters include Turan, and Kilen is also an evil character. turan is the mind reader who is currently with Mina, and Kilen is the dark metroid hunter who is chasing Reeves to the dark side of the planet. hope that helps, i am going to wait to post until more who are with me post.

Mina stood in front of the jedi. "Yes sir, we have a deal, as always, also, please note, a rogue metroid is out too." The jedi nodded. Turan stood. Still not knowing why they needed her. Mina turned to him. "I can assure you that i do not know why of the sorts they need her, my concern is the mission, now, are you willing to help me? We both need Reve, and hopfully we can take out this rogue jedi easier this way, lets put aside our differences and just work together." She offered. Turan thought hevaly and concidered the option. "Mina turned back to the jedi master. "I will require a bigger ship fit for a crew bigger than me." She smiled at Turan, she knew he had really no chioce but to accept, he might as well. The elevator continued to decend.

Kilen suddenly felt a jolt, and then, falling? What the hell? he thought. He looked out the window, he was indeed falling. At least he was not far from the building, he ran to the engine room. Everything was shut down. He inserted the AI. "Get me close to the building!"
"Yes Sir" it responded, the engines flared, and power was low, he grabed the AI as they plumetted tword earth. Closer....closer.....the engines died, he jumped, and grabbed onto the side of the buidling. The part of the edjected speeder chrashed into the earth below. Too close he thought. Reve was gone!
"There goes our bargoning ship...." He whipsered. He began to slid down the buidling, he reached the bottom quickly. He ran and the power turned on, he was gone in a flash of color and light, a blur. He arrived at the docking bay, jumped into his ship and took off. "Follow that ship." He told the AI, it picked up a single heat trail.

{{don't worry, he will get away}}

At 12/30/04 12:55 PM, Captain-T wrote: No, that's alright, you did great. I was getting big-headed back there. I saw this in the Portal I thought Haloman would get a kick out of it. Metroid Confusion: Part Two

LOLROTF!!!! i was about to die watching that!!!! hahahaha!! where whaling on the moon....that was so great! thanks for that!

Mina stood in silence smiling to herself as Tura got flustered. Down they went. "Orders form the Jedi Council of course," she todl him. He eyed her and took a deep breath. What the HELL could they want her for? he asked himself. Mina probably didnt even know either, she just follows orders....Down they went.

Minewhile....
Kilen grabed onto the speeder like ship, the electomagneti effect activated and his hangs grabbed hold. How to get through the hull... he asked himself smiling. Beam sword it was. He took one hand off as it formed into his hand. He stabbed it thorugh the hull ad moved it into a circle. The ship dropped in atmopshperic pressure and began to desend. He jumped into it. A dark room, probably a cargo bay. Night vision came on as he shoved the piece he had carved back in, the pressure stabalizing, hopfully no one had noticed. Reve....where are you.... he thought. If he got Reve, he knew for sure Mina would come to him. He found a hatch, locked form the outside. No matter, he turned on the arm cannon, and blasted it open, people knew of him now. Maybe Reve had gone for a laydown in the quarters? Myabe she was still on the cockpit, hell, maybe she was on the wing jugling coconuts, Kilen didn't know. Looks like its silent time for me... he thought as his armour melded into nothingness, on silent mode. He crept through the ship, closing the cargo bay before leaving of course, he headed to the quarters first.

The Speeder blasted thorugh the wall, and T'Pau grabed Reve and made a jump for it, Mina would have followed, but leavong one, Turan here, and two, Kilen here would be suicide later. He was half unfrozen, Turan looked at Mina. He gave her a What now? look. Mina had known the ice would affct Kilen alot, being a metroid. She thouhgt quickly, no more confrentations. "Give me a lay out of the floor above us," She ordered the AI. The scematics apeared, "target those 6 support beams now!" It was done, she turned on the missles and fired 6 times, once for each one. Kilen broke out of the ice, it flew everywhere, he looked up.
"Not this time," he whispered. he activated his beam sword and cut a whole in the ground. The rockets hit, the celine collapsed above him. He fell through the hole and did a fake salute as he did, a sign of Until next time . Mina knew she didn't get him, and turned to Turan. Kilen fell about 20 stories through the rubble following him through the hole, he grabed onto a legde and pulled himself up. (keep in mind about half of the building is collapsing) the rubble passed. He could not get to Mina now, and if he fled, the dark Lord would not be happy with him..... he reached to a control panel and grabbed his AI. suddenly a ship passed him. He had seen the girl get on there, and T'Pau, maybe if he got the girl....Mina would come to him! He jumped onto the hull as it took off.....
Mina stood there, and walked past Turan to the elevator, she said nothing. Turan was speechless as well. "Well, comon then...." she told him sighing. He followed her to the elevator. She put he AI in. "Power" she said. And the power came on agian, she grabbed the AI out, and they entered the elevator on the half of the building not dystoried by thier escape.

wow, things are moving quickly in the Trapped RP, everyone in one place, chaos, maddnes, i love it, hehehe

The missle rocketed tword Kilen, he quickly covered his body and got low, as soon as the impact hit, he doved out, the explosion throwing him agianst the wall, his polymer suit was damaged in many places, the places glowing a sliver thanks to the polymers attributes, and slowely, they closed up, leaving him good as new. "Hehehe, you think you can get rid of me that easlily?" He looked in back of him he was close to the door, and saw Turan and Reve make a break for it. Him agian? Why does he keep popping up in my buisness!! he thought. He turned and Mina came at him with the plamsa sword. She slashed over and over, him dogding back and forth making their way into the hall way, the slashes healing themselves. "heh, your really somthing," he said. He grabed her by her neck and threw her across the room hitting Turan and Reve, they stumbled into a heap. "Hehehe, two bireds with one stone.." he chuckled. Mina got up and broght her hand out to help another. It was Turan!! Her hand immedtialy drew back. Turan fell agian.
"What was that-" he looked up too, seeing the new Mina. "Ahh...."
"Comon, what are you waiting for!! Kill him!!" Reve ordered Mina. She turned and Kilen was walking tword them.
"Any bright ideas?" She asked her AI.
"Your systems are wonderful!!! so intact and-"
"Weapons please"
"Right M'lady sry." The AI said. Mina's hand turned into the arm cannon agian, the ammo, ice beam. Kilen ran tword them, but Mina swiched it on, the brilliant blue araura came out, freezing him in place. Kilen saw the blue beam come towrd him, but it was too late, before he could move, it enveloped him. Kilens arm cannon began to charge, melting his hand.
"Lets go...." She motioned tword Reve and T'Pau. Reve came to her side, but T'Pau didn;t, he raised his blaster.
"Don't move" he told them.
"What? are you nuts, lets go" mina told him.
"He zis zerious....." Reve told him. Damnit not this now, he will be out of that ice any second now Mina thought. Turan was in back of them, maybe he could pull somthing. They were cornered, but maybe he could buy them some time. Kilens whole hand was unfrozen, he began shooting his feet unfreezing them......
{{go for it everyone}}

{{ ahhh, seems we were writing at the same time Msyty, we will say the power does go out, but adjust everythin so T'Pau is included, sry bout that}}

Kilen finally got to the top floor. "Turn out the generators." He told the AI.
"Right away." The lights flikered, and died, the AI manually opened the door, and he waled out. The visor turned to automatic night vision. He exited, his orange visor glowing. It slowely tinted as he sulked down the hallways. He went down a hall. He stoped, two beings, a short female and...Turan? Damnit he thought, both were confused the lights had gone out.
"uh oh, not good," Reve said. Kilen burst into a run, jumping right over Reve, she shrieked as he did.
"What?" Turan asked, but as he said it he knew. A small light formed, and the doors were blasted open to the operations room. Both ducked as Kilen blew them open, his hand now an arm cannon. He slowely walked inside, two scientist were busy at work, the power to the room still on thanks to the backup generators, used in emergancy only. They stared at him, the monitor shown to 99%.
"Wha-" one of them started but Kilen immediatly send a missle to him, the exploision dystorying the far side of the lab, fortunatly well away from where Mina sat in the pod. 99.5%. He turned on the elbow plasma blades, and the blue glow shot out acroos his forarm. he made his way to the power generator in the room. 100%. He cut the power, the lights went out. The pod Mina was in stood still, it had to be opened with the power on, now out. The other scientist quivered in fear as the being made its way tword him.
"W-what are y-you?" He asked cowering.
"The hunter," he responded, decapatating him. Turan had made his way to the door investigating. Reve behind him. Kilen made his way to the pod. "So, this is the great Mina trun, humph, you don't look like her....then agian, surgery does alot to people.....nevertheless, you are in my way, and the way of the empire, you must die......" he said, the elbow blades turned and went into his hand, a plasma blade. The blade made its way to the pod screen. Slowely.....then, Mina's hand shot out of the screen grabing his hand Kilen looked up and saw Mina's eyes open, she burst through it, hodling his arm throwing him across the room. She made her way out of the glass, all was dark, and her attacker was getting up. Wait, no AI? damn, she ducked behind one of the lab counters, she didn;t know the systems, she was dead meat if she couldn't find the AI agian. she crawled to the other counter, the AI? Where was it? She stumbled through the systems, somthing for night vision, anything....a light flikered to the screen. she could see! Finally....she cralwed to the counter, found the AI compartment, ejected it, and inserted her into the Helmet. She immediatly ordered it.
"I need wepons, NOW"
"Yes M'lady." Her left hand, it shape shifted to an arm cannon. "I see we have new tricks, lets use em." she turned and her attacker was right there, arm cannon aiming at her face, it glowed and shot, Mina doged to one side. The beam hit the pod, lighting the room for a second. Kilen activated his missles agian. If she was going to fight, he would need them. Mina ran acroos the counters, and shot. She had an advantage of an AI, his was still in the system. One two one two she shot, he dogding all and rushing at her, elbow blades coming on agian. The AI immediatly activated hers as well.
"Seems we have the same tricks" The AI said. Kilen sent a blade clashing agiasnt hers, sparking and lighting the room for another second. The began skillfully trading blows, not hitting eachother only the others blade, Mina sent a roundhouse kick into him as he came to strick her, he flew across the room agian into the pod. Mina activated her Arm cannon and firsed a missle into the pod....
Kilen watched as the missle flew tword him...."Damn it" he whispered.

Kilen stood in the elevator, waiting for an answer from his AI. "I found her, she's....in surgery!"
"Interesting.....lets go visit her." The AI sat there, trying to get tyhe systems to work. The elevator started tword the top floor.....
"Kinchiy do good, kinchy do good!" Kinchy said running down the hall to the elevator Kilen had gone up. The doors were closed. He ripped them open with telekinisis and closed them back, and sarted climbing up the elevator shaft, trailing the elevator.

Minewhile....
The aormour was on, the new rubber like subsatce gleemed, it was a tighter fit, but moved and streched according to her body. Her systems were now being updated, the AI was done. New weapons, new systems, it would be new for her yet agian. Still sadated she lay quitetly in slumber.....SUGERY COMPLETION: 70%

ya, sry about the wait on that, im diliberatin on what to write, lol

{{sry for the duoble post, Captin if you could put kilen in Dark i woul appereciat it
Dark Kilen the hunter

{{this is going to manily be a Kilen post}}
Kilen walked up the steps to the building, passing turan as he made his way to the steps. Turan paused and was shocked, Mina? he thought. He turned and walked to him. Kilen stoped and turned before he could talk. "If you want to die i suggest you tap me on the shoulder like you were going to do," he threatened. Turan drew his hand back. He reached out to Kilen with his mind, blocked, this hardware was extremly suffisticated. Kilen walked away to the steps. The gaurd greeted him.
"Hello sir, do you have a pass card?"
"No." He asnwered simply.
"Well, umm...your not alow-" he stoped. Kilens arm hand grabed his neck, he effortlessly drug him around the corner and slammed him into a wall, no more gaurd. He entered the slid doors and into the elevator. Turan rushed to it but Kilen waved his finger.
"No no, this is my ride." He told him, doors closing. Kilen turned, the AI apeared.
"Hello-" it started. But Kilen went to the control panel and egjected his AI.
"Im in." the AI said.
"Find Mina!" He ordered it.

Minewhile....
Mina's armour was all off, and the new substance was being put on, it was newer, smlimer, lighter, and much more durable. It was colored mainly red on the legs, yellow on the torso, and moved to a little red for th chest plate, and a newer helmet. The mecanical arms busily attached the suit to Mina. Her AI had been taken out, and was being updated as well. SURGERY COMPLETION: 50%

ahhh, im back from alabama now, don't worry about Turan, he's got a nice bad buddy now, Kilen, he is out to kick ass

{{ok, cool, no one's posted, i guess everyone is indiposed or doesn't know where to go, but fear not, 13 hours in a car gives you alot of time to think, sry if this post is uber long}}

The three waited in the elevator, they reached the 40th floor, and doors swung open and light finally emitted through. All three covered there eyes, stumbled out from the elevator and found they were in a circular room, windows for walls. "Ah, yes, Mina, you have arived!" A msyteriuos voice said. The windows tinted and the room became darker, the three could see. 7 council members sat. The middle was master Yendi.
"Yes, pleased to see you made your way fine over," another said.
"We have little time, so lets get right to buisness," Master Yendi said, he was a human, and sat calmly on his chair. "You see, usually we would have contacted you on yout ship giving you your orders, but you see, somthing has come to our attention, and must be acted upon immediatly." The three stood at attention in the room, waiting for an explaination, the master took a deep breath and continued. "The dark side, it is rising agian, an imbalance.....somthing has started that cannot be undone Mina, recently, we have detected a hack into the system, deleted files were recovered, the program.......we have reason to belive it was stolen and recreated and enhanced, your job, to hunt this program down, and stop it before it gets out of hand, we have called you in for.....some upgrades, you suit is lacking in everything, it is outdated agianst this program, so, we have worked a many 6 months with out science facility, the updates on your suit, systems, and AI, and weapons are all ready for you, you will be put into surgery immediatly, we are short on time, as for your friends, they may either sit through the surgery, or retire to their dorm." All was silent, all dumped on them at once. The doors opened, "You are dimissed." A group of scientists came through, and escorted Mina to the top floor, the science and technology labs. Soon enough, they emerged onto the floor, Mina was put into a surgical capsul, machien hands would perform the surgery and the scienists would oversee it. She was knocked out, and the procedure began, her armour was removed, the hands using lasers, and arms to cut and remove armour. Soon, she would be a new being once agian........PROCEDURE COMPLETION: 30%

Minewhile.....
Kilen exited the transport, and entered the elevator.....
{thats all for now}}

Mina stoped the vehicle, they were in front of the Federation Jedi council palace, a spectacular facility indeed. It towered about 300 stories up, and was very wide. Mina ejected the AI and put her back into the slot in her helmet. "Ahh, good to be back M'lady."
"Likewise," Mina said in her helmet. Reve woke.
"Zer already?" She joked. It had been a couple hours and all were tired. They all hopped out of the speeder, and onto the palace grounds. They walked up a sidewalk, to the entereance.
"So, this is it?" T'Pau said jokingly, eying ther emourmous complex. They walked to the doors, opening quickly. They closed behind them, sealing them into a small elevator. Another AI appeared.
"Hello, i am the 56-A3, desined to accomidate you while you are here, i run all systems for this building, how may i help you this evening?" It asked. Mina walked forward.
"Yes, we are here reporting to the Jedi council, classified im sure, we would like to meet with them asap, of course i have bneen told accomidations would be ready once we areived, i am Mina Trun."
"Ah! Yes, heloo M'lady, glad to have you here, accomidations of course have been provided, i see we have one more than expected, an extra room will be prepared. Master Yendi is expecting yopu, i will take you to the Jedi council chamber right away, you will meet and report to them before retiring to youre rooms." The AI replyed. The elevator immdeitadtly statred trowr the 40th floor, the Jedi chamber. It was Dark, and Reve fidgited, hitting Mina's armour.
"Zorry." She said. It was quite, none new what to expect. Even Mina grew a little nervous. So much was about to unfold on them all.....

Minewhile....

Kilen exited the ship, onto the docking bays. A droid came to greet him. "Hello sir!! welcom to Thebes!! We are pleased at your arival and i am programmed to help you in any way possible with questions about this planet."
"Yes...i am looking for the Jedi council building." Kilen told it.
"Yes sir, it is only a few blocks away, would you like a transport courtisy of this facility?"
"Yes, get it now" He told it.
"Right away sir!" It said enthusiastically.
"Humm....." The AI said, reading mina's data files, combat logs, and security clearences, "Sir!! Mina shas just been cleared for the Jedi council!! She is already there! How will we get her now?"
"Hum....trhat couilsd prove difficult, we will take care of her, letsd just get to the building first..." He hopped into the transport vehicle and would arrive in a few moments to the Building....

{{ah, im tired, Mysty, you have control over my cvhartacter and Kilen for tomorrow, im driving back to Virginia, i will be back tomorrow evening, hjope everything runs smoothly, gave you a few runs to go on, see ya!!!}}

Mina sat up in the speeder, and manually turned on her scope programs. zooming in she saw a few raiders. Too bad i don't have that missle dowloand yet... Mina thought. "Stay down everyone!" Mina told them. She charged and fired, the shot rang throught the hills and hit a Radier square in the head. The other raiders stared, and got angry. Over and pver shots rang out, hitting many places on the speeder, and one flying through the wind sheild thorugh the hologram of the AI.
"Well then," the AI said. It had truely been a long time since Mina had opperated manually. She remmebered her training and even first waking up from the surgery. (thanks for the idea Mysty). Things had been rocky off start, luckly she had had enought time to learn all programs and fight with them, she had stolen the AI from the station before leaving. the AI was not "awoken" yet, so she activated it, it was actually ment for her. The AI had grown to know her systems inside and out, even manipulating them at times to Mina's benifit. Mina had never had data dowloades either, the missle data she would recive at the palace would be the first. She had realized she had been out of it for a sec, Reve shouting at her.
"Vat are you doing!! Zoot damn it!!" She screamed. Mina shot. Hitting another raider. A bullet cam hitting her shoulder armour.
"Damn it!" She shouted.
"be carful M'lady!!" the AI sassed. thre raiders kept shooting, Mina shot agian, missing. She charged full, aiming for the rigde belowe the raiders. She fired, the bright light flashed, and the full beam charged its way to the rigde, dytroying it. The entire cliff was blow out, and the over hang a couple were standing on fell out, some jumping to safty, others falling to perish. Miona sat back down as the AI sped up to get away.
"I think its ok now...." Mina said. It felt good to be in control agian, but she liked having to worry only about her, and not the systems. "When we get there, your going right back..." She mused. the AI laughed hard. T'Pau looked at the AI.
"It wasn't that funny..." The rodian told her, drifting back to sleep.
"M'lady, we are getting close, only a cxouple more hours till we arive," the AI told her.
"Good, I can;t wait to see the upgrades and dowloads the council will provide for me," Mina said.
"Zou are almoz like a computer, upgrades, hehehehe," Reve mused. Mina sat back, and agian remembered waking up to the horrors from the surgery....somthing that had haunted her for a many years. Her body carved out....replaced with machienery parts, muscle and bone enhancments....and a suit on her. She had paniced....left alone to heal. She shook her head, trying to ignor it. She looked at the senery, the ever lasting sun scorching the earth on this side of the planet, and abandoning the other side. Reve dozed off. T'Pau was alseep as well, she figured one would have to stay awake in case somthing happened, so she sat up, and talked with the AI.

Minewhile....
Kilen's ship burned into the atmosphere. "Wake up danmit!! We are here!" The AI yelled at him. He awoke with a start, the atmosphere passed, and into the clouds on the sun side of the planet they went.
"Land us near the capitol....Mina is supposed to meet with the council, we will have a better chance close to her." He sat up, and moved to the communication room. a hologram ofg the dark Lord apeared.
"What?" The dark lord said.
"We have arrived..." He told him.....
{{OOHHH!! the susspense!!! YAY!!}}

Mina walked around to switch to drive the air speeder. She jamed herself into the drivers set, too small, she adjusted the seat back, her legs barely fit. "Good god I hate speeders," Mina joked. She then reached for the back of her helmet, pressed a small button, and edjected her AI. "Im not exactly going to be the one driving guys, my AI will," Mina told them. They both stared at her, a little confused and a little scared. She inserted it into its hard drive, and the AI apeared on the display screen.
"Hello everyone, i belive we've meet before, or at least, i know you. We will be headed to the main Federation compound," the AI told them in her feminen voice. They only stared at her, then Mina with disbelief.
"Zou are going to zet this.....zing drive uz?"
"As long as we get there, i don't care," T'Pau said laying back down. No sooner had he said that, an explosion hit.
"Ok. GO" Mina ordered. The speeder took off.
"What ze hell waz zat?" The rodian stood upright, spooked and not sleepy anymore.
"Damn it, this is why i hate driving, so,thing bad always happens when im driving," Mina whispered.

Minewhile....
{{i am going to act like this new hunter is a character only i can control, i hope no one really has a problem with this. he is a dark character by the way, i will fill out a bio for him if need be}}
Kilen rounded the corner, his dark Power suit gleemed in the lights. (think the phazon suit but like, slimmer.) He was to head to Thebes. His armour was a new additiom to the secert program, he was the only experiment, the program was secretly picked up by the dark lord. He was superior to the old units in the old program, he would kill Mina and hunt each Jedi on the planet. His master would be pleased when he was done. His arm cannon was a new technology, not set to just a gun, but able to tranform into his hand agian. State of the art programs, and an new advanced AI. His weapons systems were supirior, and he would not hesatate to dystroy anything in his path. The orange visor gleemed as he crawled into his ship. (i will reviel what planet he is coming from later, i have a dial up connection at the moment, so i will look it up later) He injected the AI into the sytem.
"Ah, Thebes, you better get to adjust your new systems, we will be there in a few hours, about 36," the AI's dark feminen voice rang out.
"Yes, i will be ready, you worry about getting me there thanks," His voive responded, dark. His new systems were still be diagnosed and accepted by the Suit, and he would be ready soon. "i will tear you apart Mina, you are only a stepping stone to my greatness, when i kill you, the Council will fall, along with its domain. There all powerful hunter will be no more!!"

{{banned agian? lol, dang girl, well, i don't know exactly what you are trying to do, so ya}}

{{Sry for the duoble post, but no one's on and i feel like writing}}

Mina awoke agian, the AI talking to her. "M'lady, your suit is 95% repaired, you are pretty much fully functional, the only things being repaired are the links to youir mind Turan broke, you are battle ready once agian. The blaster system is back, and the Federation sent another download!! You will br happy to hear that a missle downlaod is ready at the Jedi council building, we will get it as soon as we are there," the AI exlaimed. Mina's eyes adjusted to the light.
"Er...thanks," she said still drowzy, "at least they are busy agian, my basic programs are getting old, i need new ones, we should get the armour and system upgrades when we get there, we will speak to the council about providing me with more weapons when we appear before them," Mina said in her helmet. Reve was sitting in silence. She turned at the sound of Mina moving.
"Ah, zo you are avake, good, i would like to get to know zou more," She said.
"Yea, sorry about earlier, my suit is dangerous even to me when its damaged, one wrong move and somthing could happen, my apoligies," Mina said.
"Ah, no problem, zo, why iz the Jedi council so interested in me?" She asked.
"Hell if i know, they don't provide details, im only to bring you in alive," Mina said.
"I zee, well, tell me about yourself then, you are zo.....mysterious, a shell around you, wraps you in mystory, i have heard horrible things about you to be honest, rumors sweep the galizy of your deeds and "crimes".....the jedi send you on all zese missions, you are only their puppet?" Shge asked inocently. Mina paused, puppet? She had never thought of it before, she knew she was....well, different and effiecent, but the council had never really supported her with data until now with the missle upgrades. Was somthing in motion? Would they send her on a mission so immpossible she would not come back?

Menwhile....
A Jedi stood in a dark room, the doors sealed as another approched. "Thank you for coming on such short notice my friend," the mysterious voice said.
"Yes....why would you call me at this time, eyes are everywhere, we said there would be NO communication for a while, you have the...."item" you need, dytroy her and be done with it!!" The other voice said with anger.
"Yes, he will take care of the job, the bounty hunter will fall soon," the other replyed.
"Good, i want no messups!! This man is from the sdame program as the Metroid correct?"
"Yes, he is a metroid in fact, and he WILL killl her, he never fails."
"Good!! The council will fall without her!! And we will control the republic!! Hahaha!!"
"And what of this.....new hunter? Kilen? He is....good?"
"Better than good, he will kill Mina, he is headed to the planet as we speack, he will arive, and hunt her, and kill her, her systems are supperiour to hers, she hads no chance."
"Good, good now leave me, you are reassured, get out."
"Yes my lord..."

Mina sat in the back of the newly aquired speeder, she dozed off spedding the process of repair. Her arm was better now, the system was repaiuring her blaster program, and the chest plate had been sealed and temperature systems were online agian. Her soft eyes were closed from the view of the visor, glowinbg a lumenecent green, to a person, she would be sleeping, but Mina never truely slept, she wouldn't be able to even if she could with her past, the computers scaned the area around her, in a sense, her dreams were that of what was around her. She could see everything without being concious of it. A movement nearby would "wake" her. She had slept once before when she had just gotten the surgery of the suit, but it was only bits and peices of an erased past and the horrors of the surgery. Reve reached her hand out to the visor, whispering somthing, the suit reacted and caught her hand. Reve jumped startled. (insert past talking here.)
Mina dozed back to sleep, her head fell agienst the rests on the side her her helmet, Reve was facinated by her suit, and watched as Mina's breath hit her visor and was cooled by the systems, "defoging" it. The speeder sped through the streets (i will let T'Pau control the car since he is the one driving.) Soon she would meet with the Jedi council, she had removed scum for them for many years, no longer a freelancer, but a "permenate" hunter for the Jedi council, sending her places where no Jedi could survive. After she had escaped the military base so many years ago, the Jedi Consulate, a crusier for the republic, had found her drifting in space, almost half alive in hyper space, unkonw to her that her ship was almost dystroyed, going no where in particular. They had found her, and "employed" her. Hopfully her newest find of Reve would intrege them....

Mina had side steped the speeder T'Pau had solen, it ran into Turan head on, He slammed into a wall and lay there. "Thanks, lets get to the building," Mina thanked. She opened the door almost as if a drive by get away, hopping in.
"hehehe, these thingas are sweet!" T'Pau exlaimed.
"Zis is crazy, we are going to be kilzed..." Reve whispered. Mina looked out the back as they drove away, seeing a unconsiuous Turan. Her thoughts entered and haunted his dream like state, a fake mina entered his thoughts. "Maybe next time....you better worjk on your stuff, cause next time you get in my way, it will be your last moments..." She whipsered in his dreams, haunting his every move in his dream-like state. wherever he turned Mina's words echoed in his head. T'Pau slammed his foot on the acellerator, and they screeched out into the street.
"We need to get you cleaned up," T'Pau chuckled.
"Yea....lets head to the Federation building, the jedi council here will be alerted of my coming and will see us as soon as we are rested," Mina said, "and Reve, get ready to meet your destiny, the council had been quite interested in you these past couple days....reasons unkown to me, the council will make your destiny clear, now lets go."
"Another tight spot you squeezed through there, stoping a speeder with brute force, dogding a speed bike, escaping in mide battle to escape to live, he is not likely happy with you, and we have made yet another enemy on this planet," the AI said.
"Yea, nothing new," Mina smiled. The car drove off.

Turan entered Mina's mind agian, warning her. "Ha, if you think i am going to hand her over just like that, your the crazy one, so piss off!" She thought back to him. She kept running. "We gota get to a federation building for my parts, the only onw i know of around here would be the jedi council building, funny thing is, i was summoned her by Master yoda himself, he has interest in the girl, potential!! So, if we ever want to stay alive, then we have to make a break for the federation building, NOW!" She exlaimed. All three of them took off.
"Iv put a marker on your map M'lady, ETA 3 minutes to get there, i suggest you move, we have company...." Turan apeared around the corner they had just cleared, they rounbded another corner, moving throuyght the alley ways tword the Federation building, fortunatly one block ahead of Turan. They rounded the final alley corner, and into the street. Turan was in fgull sprint cahsing them, he knew if they got to the building there would be little he could do about it.
"Comon! We have to cross!!" Mina yelled at the trailing T'Pau, draging Reve pratically by her hand. Mina waved them in. Unfortunaly, this was one of the busiest intersections on the whole planet. "You first." She told T'Pau. He gave her a look of worry, he knew what she was doing. "Dont question me, just move!!" He grabed Reve and started into the intersection. Mina turned as Turan entered the alley way.
"I told you to hand her over.....now you will be the one to suffer for it...." Turan said. He attempted to enter he mind agian.
"No way.......not agian...." she said struggling, "if you wana fight we are gona do it the old fasioned way. Both struggled with their minds.
"Don't resist....it will be much easier this way..." Turan spoke in her mind.
"Im getting penatration attempts M'lady, switching to secondary incriptioon locks, that should give you enough time to fight, it won't keep him out forver though, make this quick," the AI said.
"Damnit, i didn;t think she couild incript her mind....she is part machien i guess." Turan thought. "FINE, we will do this your way.....for now."
"I thought you'd agree." Mina smirked. At least the nanobots had repaired enought so she could move her other arm, no cannon fire yet though. the AI bosted armour strenght and muscle activity, her heart beated faster, blood pumping. Mina lunged with full fled speed at Turan.....

T'Pau made his way across the 10 lane speed way.,....traffic heavy....

Mina jogged holding her arm, her legs tendants aching as well. When she talked, her voice had jolts of pain. "Turan is his name, planning to do somthing with a senator on this planet, problem is, he can read minds, and probably knows exactly where we are at this very moment. He has hacked into my mind a couple times already, and trust me when i say, it doesn't feel good. only reason he is following us is.....her....." she muttered out of breath. WARNING, SUIT HEAT, SYSTEM TEMP. 120 DEGREES. 300 degrees is all the suit can take before overheating. "He needs her for some reaason, god knows what, but, i plan NOT to find out." The problem was, they were running, if he came, it would not be a fight for Mina, but a massacer, the arm that was hurt and offline was her blaster arm....

Mina looked at her radar, the blib labeld Turan was waiting for an opening iun the traffic. She looked at T'Pau, "Im fine," She muttered her arm screaming at her brain, the nanobots had begun their work, and it wasn't exactly palesent to feel. The dent in her chest plate shot sparks out and her view screen flikered a little.
"You know, that was actually pretty heroic," The AI complemented.
"Thanks, but you've been with me forever, i know you know that," Mina said in her hemlet.
"Comon, Turan isn't going to wait for a red light just to move, lets get going, we can find a place to rest after we have re-grouped. I can repair there, lets get moving," Mina suggested.
"I agree, lez go befor they caze up," Reve said.