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Please review Deadly Abduction 1-3
Aliens abduct a serial killer that gets loose.
Finished first 3 parts and started parts 4 & 5, but didn't get much feedback. Someone said part 2, the voices were not clear but didn't clarify if that was static noise or the spoken plot not making sense. Originally a 16 part comic strip, I remade while learning flash.
Deadly Abduction Part 1

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  Deadly Abduction: Part1 by grimview

  Ever wonder what happens if a Serial Killer gets abducted by aliens & then escapes?

  Score

  2.59 / 5.00

  Type

  Movie

  Popularity

  478 Views

  Rated

  Everyone

Deadly Abduction Part 2

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  Deadly Abduction: Part2 by grimview

  Aliens have abducted a killer but what happens if the killer gets lose?

  Score

  2.57 / 5.00

  Type

  Movie

  Popularity

  382 Views

  Rated

  Ages 13+

Deadly Abduction Part 3

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  Deadly Abduction: Part3 by grimview

  Alien ask a serial killer to givem the sharp thing so he does

  Score

  Under Judgment

  Type

  Movie

  Popularity

  340 Views

  Rated

  Ages 13+

Thanks

At 8/10/13 08:01 AM, Grub517 wrote: I've never drawn anything anime related either, so if something's NQR...

Complete alternate (anime style) character:

The left guys circle eyes look more like glasses. The right guy look younger but that may be due to being thinner in the face. I try a hybrid model buy taking the fatter face from the left combined with the eyes & hair from the right to left guy.

At 5/26/13 11:17 AM, Asandir wrote:

At 5/26/13 10:53 AM, grimview wrote: I go thru the trouble of creating & uploading a movie icon; however, when I search for the film, look on my main page or look in under judgement; instead of seeing the icon I uploaded, I see some random clip from my film?

Icons at the moment (I said the same 2 months ago too... well) are not getting uploaded correctly, means they get lost somewhere and then an icon moderator makes an icon for those flashes. What you can do is give me a link to your icon and I will gladly change it for you.

Its hard to believe they get lost, as I can see the icon in the project "publication details" page. It's not a big deal, as knowing a person is choosing the image is better then having a computer randomly pic the image. Its also good to know there is a process to change the image, if I feel the need to. Honestly, I'm just taking a screen shot myself, that I then need to open photoshop to get the pixel sizes correct before uploading it, but the project says its required to publish. You may be able to add some of this info to the "icon" section "publication details" page, where the help text currently says "Icon must be at least 140px wide and 90px tall. " so that you don't need to repeat the answer to others.

I go thru the trouble of creating & uploading a movie icon; however, when I search for the film, look on my main page or look in under judgement; instead of seeing the icon I uploaded, I see some random clip from my film?

At 5/23/13 01:56 AM, Howarth17 wrote:

At 5/23/13 01:39 AM, Sub-vibe wrote: If you're using flash, find the Onion Skin - it's under the frames. It will help you out from the last frame to draw the next frame. It will appear as gray if you're in the next frame. Just draw the character slowly moving from the gray part.

Thanks for the reply! You know how if you make a symbol it saves it in the library so you can use it again if you want? If I draw like a guys arm or leg bent and then straight can I save that in the library to use it again? Or symbols only?

If your using Graphic symbols will help keep size consistent. A best practice is to break everything up and to line up with the "+" as your pivot point. So you can draw single line in one graphic symbol [ +--------- ] then create a figure graphic where each piece of the arm is a layer, using the "+" at the joints[ elbow, shoulder, knee, etc] { o-----+------O-----+------o]. Now you can select one or more layers [Upper Arm Right, Lower Arm Right, etc] and rotate on the pivots [+]. At this point you can, as other said, use the onion skin, but now you can also use tweening. Tweening works best with one graphic per layer. You can also change the color of the graphic you add to movies so you can reuse a sequence for several different colored people. Additionally you can combine animated graphic, like bottom [run, walk, stand] loops, with different top [arms in air, arms with different weapons, swinging arms] loops.