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At 2/22/08 01:59 AM, Sparki29 wrote: I like the one with the planes but the other one has too many small images . I don't think U can put images like that on a Sk8board .

Skateboard? I though they were Snowboards, oh wait.. They are.

At 2/21/08 09:43 PM, LordAdon wrote: anyone else?

Maybe I can do some voices for ya. Im not a pro though.

At 2/22/08 12:19 PM, salted-tator-tot wrote: http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/220208/4 4253_cod4_menu.php

Here is the preview for the menu, it is based off of the multiplayer menu. This will take a while to load because I put in the music just for this preview.

Whoa. That's great, STT!

At 2/22/08 06:12 AM, Temariix wrote: Oh teh noes! Not only does Davey have a freakish clump of hair growing in a circle on his shoulder, but he's wearing too tight pants!

Haha, :). Thats supposed to look like a tatoo, o well.

I like the character design you have chosen. I'm in agreeance, the abs were kind of... off, and the bald one seemed like a character who would represent the adverage joe shmoe.

Thanks. Yeah I'll drop the abs on my future drawings of.. what should i call them? Haha, I'll figure that out later.

It's an interesting style you've developed. I'm not really going to compare it to anyone else's, since every style is based on something, whether conciously or not. To me personally, the characters look like a mix between a marsupial and a man, obviously more man. It's cute :3 (and yes, I'm allowed to say the word "cute" because I'm a girl ;D)

I really didnt think of anything when I made these characters. It was spontaneous.
You think they're cute too? Haha, well I guess they are then.

You have a good amount of detail, but I think that the problem remains in that the characters are too small. Maybe they are bigger, but you've resized them for the forum, but either way, I'd like to see what they look like enlarged (and not just scaled up, I mean redrawn, in a sense, so we all can see what details might turn out to look like that way).

I really didnt resize them but in Flash I used the magnifier tool alot.

I'd like to see some more, hopefully my wish will be granted ;D

Of course I'll make more of them. I'll try to make them bigger too :).

And thanks for your awesome comment!

At 2/22/08 01:39 AM, livEvl wrote: Err.. What the hell??

Holy shit!

Meet Petie's cousin, Davey!

At 2/21/08 08:45 PM, ChaosCrunchy wrote: Inaccuracies aside, I like this. It has a nice cartoony look, and for muscles in a not-serious cartoon it's great!

Thanks, :). Yeah it was meant to be not-serious and kinda wacky.

At 2/22/08 01:55 AM, Sparki29 wrote: Not bad. I like the head but my god how much veins does that guy have ... Also the lower part of the body is a little out of course a.k.a. it should go to the left a bit .

I kinda rushed the veins as you might notice.

At 2/22/08 03:32 AM, Cyberdevil wrote:
In less than 10 minutes?! Holy shit you're fast, hehe, looks great. Nice colors, nice form, nice details, everything looks good!

Thanks man, :D.

The muscles just seemed out of place, they were kinda boxy. And since the character is mostly curvy, the muscles clashed with the look. And the bald one without hair on his chest lacks personality.

You're probably right.

The hair and details like that give your character personality, But now im just rambling. It looks great!

Thanks for the feedback!

Comparison:

Oops, sorry for the double post, but this is the correct one:

At 2/21/08 04:40 PM, DarkSytze wrote: theres nothing wrong with the drawing, but you might want to experiment with different brushes in flash. as of right now (just with me when i started using flash) flash-strokes change in measurements and the strokes can become wider or more narrow. if you want really smooth strokes you might want to dick around with the brush options.

Thanks for the tip. Yeah I am kinda new to drawing in flash.

At 2/21/08 04:56 PM, ZekeySpaceyLizard wrote: I like it. It is very cute in a vermin like way.
I think the muscles kinda kill it though. Maybe if he just had a bush of chest hair.

Thanks, :). Do you really think its cute? Haha. Well, I made a version without muscles but with hair and another version without muscles and without any kind of hair.

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At 2/21/08 05:50 PM, SardonicSamurai wrote:

At 2/21/08 05:40 PM, ChillyCheese wrote:

At 2/21/08 05:35 PM, GrayJovial wrote: A little experimental thingy I made in less than 10 minutes.

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It's got style, but those dont look much like muscles, more like woogley arms

I'm gonna have to agree with this. He looks like something from Sponge Bob. Have you tried looking up some reference pictures? The squiggly lines everywhere don't give off the image of being bulky much; more of a chubby wobbly figure.

Thanks for the comment. Nope I didn't use any reference picture. Now that I look back at it I have to agree. Lol, It does look like something from Sponge Bob.

A little experimental thingy I made in less than 10 minutes.

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At 2/21/08 02:58 PM, Hawkaron wrote: I don't like it. I've seen this (or a similar) style too many times here on NG, seriously... but that doesn't mean it's badly drawn. At least decent details.

Too bad you don't like it, :(. From who have you seen a similar style?

At 2/21/08 02:02 PM, Lorkas wrote: Nice stylisation dude! I love that lighting on his eyes...Reminds me of BME pain olympics (take that as a compliment).

Thanks alot, :).

This is a character I drew in Flash.

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At 2/21/08 12:19 PM, ZekeySpaceyLizard wrote: Wow GrayJovial.
I was clearly referring to Cani in my earlier post. But you were too busy scratching your dick.

Thats right.

Meet Davey. One of my wacky characters, :).

At 2/21/08 10:35 AM, test-object wrote:

At 2/21/08 09:43 AM, GrayJovial wrote: My brain? No.. You must be mistaking mine with your own.

This childish attempt to win a fight is only supporting Zekeys assumption.

He cant assume anything with his walnut sized brain.

At 2/20/08 08:17 PM, ZekeySpaceyLizard wrote:

At 2/20/08 07:44 PM, GrayJovial wrote:
Great.. Now you look like an ass. It's pretty obvious that Revolation was reffering to James..

You'll have to forgive, Cani.
He was born with a brain the size of a walnut.

My brain? No.. You must be mistaking mine with your own.

At 2/20/08 07:31 PM, Cani wrote: Woah buddy, I followed tuts from pixel 2 life.com fourms.

Noone wants to use your shitty background anyways.

Great.. Now you look like an ass. It's pretty obvious that Revolation was reffering to James..

At 2/20/08 07:30 PM, Remousamavi wrote: I've been trying to make something good. Finaly, I think I've gotten it. What do you think?

Its looks good and the textures are nice but needs some smoothing and where is the light? By the way, what program did you use?

233. Not bad, IMO.

At 2/19/08 05:06 PM, iinky8 wrote:
yea i dnt like it

Why dont you like it? Besides .. can you do it better? Your comment was useless.

At 2/19/08 04:41 PM, KittyKat87 wrote:

At 2/19/08 04:36 PM, Mushroomboy5 wrote: His shoulders are very round, they need more shape. It's a pretty boring picture though. Just Link... standing there... existing...

Could you give me an idea of something interesting then?

His neck should also start on the top of his shoulders. The way you have it makes it either look like he's got a hunchback or his head is sliding of his body.

I agree. I will edit that later tomoroow.

At 2/19/08 01:30 PM, DrSalvadork wrote: Yeah what he said arms and details and ewok.
Also the darker side of the bear is a bit too big. It looks kinda like someone is holding a flashlight towards the bear.

Yeah I agree. Thanks for the help.

It's not like I could do any better though...

Just practice and you will be good at drawing. You got an eye for improvements thats a good thing to have.

Detail? Like what? Help me get in a direction please, :).

A little update:

This is a drawing of link I made in flash 2 days ago. It took me 2 hours to finish it completely. I left out shading on most of the picture intentionally.

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At 2/19/08 12:52 PM, Bothcamo wrote: Dont delete this pleeeeease

Why should it be deleted?

It looks good to me.

Something I made in a couple minutes..

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Awesome, Kygore. It works now! Thanks for the help.