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Get along with your little activity thread and just do what you were doing, but maybe avoid the perverted stupid teenage boy wet dream bullshit, and stick to the regular realm.

Well, can't argue with public opinion any longer, this is indeed ridiculous, the whole conflict & stuff, though how do you even imagine me continuing this now? ...

I'll start over with an upgrade and see, but I don't expect much else, save further assaults and preaching on me.

At 5/21/14 02:42 PM, TurkeyOnAStick wrote: Jamie Hyneman will now investigate whether you can salvage a trainwreck.

What’s to tell, all this is about disposing of me. Disposing of a thread that the moderator simply doesn’t like or the people involved in it and uses rhetoric to simply put it down, not exactly cause the thread is against the rules of the forum, which is the reason for all the rhetoric and caricature instead of a simple topic close – no questions asked.

Improvement takes time, you can’t expect me to become a master overnight, it takes practice, that practice produces fruits, I post those fruits and thus my gallery contains what it contains. I never, ever said my art is perfect nor do I say it’s better than art of others. Your feedback has not gone unnoticed and will be utilized, like I said, this thread proved educational . And it’s not a shame at all if something takes you more time to produce, everybody has his pace and claiming that somebody is to be ashamed cause he’s slower is simply being offensive.

Now don’t you feel just a little bit hypocritical about having fun drawing something perverted in order to fight off and dispose of something perverted?

Not a fan of PewDiePie, but the guy was right about one thing, haters gonna hate, whether it is me who is the hater here or the moderator that I’d leave to the public to consider.

I'm not gonna get inbetween you and ToaS, but when you say you just posted "a rough/fast sketch that you didn't even bothered [sic] to scrutinize with any accuracy" you kinda take the sting out of your entire argument. Sure, art isn't measurable to absolute standards, sure we should appreciate and stimulate people who are just learning, but that doesn't mean you don't have to try at all.

You know, it's not like I drew stickmen with MS paint here. And even when I see people draw like that I don't go around telling them they're sh..t artists and DIScouraging them, they simply need time and most importantly ENcouraging. As a graduate of a pedagogical university I understand that withoutmotivation you won't get better, but all too often do I see people simply hating and bringing others down just cause they're not on the same level or they simply don't like them. I myself don't like certain types of art... like Milo Moire's eggs but that doesn't entitle me to go fascist about it... even though it's reeeeaaaallly rly rly rly tempting to just stick it to her for what she did to art. It takes a lot of time for me to make something more decent, and what I did and intended to continue in this thread required me to be fast, so I made a strategic decision to simply sacrifice accuracy for time.

At 5/21/14 08:32 AM, TurkeyOnAStick wrote:

At 5/20/14 11:06 PM, Galejro wrote: blurp

I didn't read that.

Mostly because it's a silly continuation of your pointless argument me via PM that I called you creepy (I blocked you because nobody wins in web arguments),
but if you thought this thread was FUN, you've really sucked the life out of it.

So here's Jamie Hyneman.

The picture perfectly suits you, you're being a dick, and everybody can see it.

I guess that's what life is about, we all mean well, but for our efforts we sometimes get served a dick.

At 5/20/14 06:44 PM, TurkeyOnAStick wrote:

At 5/19/14 04:39 PM, rendibsivad wrote: Im just going to be over here..

Stop, just stop posting in this thread.

If there's anything more creepier than a guy talking through an avatar, it's that the only person in this thread is also getting off on it.

I judged you from J. Hyneman, after seeing your freakish creatures, caricatures and "boob"-centipede on in your gallery. Only Jamie is the first thing the public notices as they enter your profile site, on the basis of what do you think they're going to judge you first?

But this is not about art criticism, the lvl of art and skillfulness with which it's made (which you seem to be overly sensitive about, and again, seemingly fascist, what? NG now promotes master-race art that's supposed to represent a certain "level", despite most of NG art being boobs, abstraction and despite probably the most important principle of art as not being a subject to "leveling"), especially over a rough/ fast comic sketch that I didn't even bothered to scrutinize with any accuracy. (Just cause someone can't draw a photo-realistic human doesn't make him a sh..t artist, it either makes him not skilled enough or working in a different medium, mine is comicbook/ manga)

This is about our conversation via PM. You can talk about that thread on that thread, you did, anyone else can, but not me, the structure and requirements of this comedy restrict me to speak through an avatar, if I suddenly broke the pattern I would take that comedy seriously and you don't take comedy seriously, cause then it stops being comedy. Now I break it, a sacrifice I willingly make that I hope won’t go for nothing. Would you rather if I responded to you on that thread using a drawn lady? You wanted me to be serious, here, I am being serious, or at least I wanted to be. You wanted no drawings, no jokes, no puns & stuff, just honest words, we could talk on a level you apparently preferred.

Hey, it's not like my fault there are only 2 people on this thread according to your opinion. I can't force everyone I responded to to respond to me again, you're being upset about something that's not even in your hands, and one viewer is better than none so like every host with a bit of sense I'm doing what I was supposed to do and stay the course. And I'll keep it as long as I can, that I consider as a mark of a good artist.

And again, you radiate fascism by calling my thread sh..ty, you consider it lower that yourself, you think it's not good enough for you and you. SO FRIGGIN BE IT, I can't change your mind on it and your opinion so simply let others enjoy the thread if you can’t.

Now that I spoke my mind do as you see fit, close this thread, ban me from the forum, you decide, you’re the moderator. But I won’t let authority stand in the way of an honest opinion.

At 5/20/14 06:49 PM, rendibsivad wrote:

At 5/20/14 06:44 PM, TurkeyOnAStick wrote:

At 5/19/14 04:39 PM, rendibsivad wrote: Im just going to be over here..

Stop, just stop posting in this thread.

If there's anything more creepier than a guy talking through an avatar, it's that the only person in this thread is also getting off on it.

I apologize..I was joking lol.. but yeah I did see that's creepy... I will tone down.

http://tempupload.ngfiles.com/4627005.15.jpg

At 5/19/14 04:44 PM, rendibsivad wrote:

At 5/19/14 04:15 PM, Galejro wrote: http://tempupload.ngfiles.com/4626203.13.jpg

btw who is that?

http://tempupload.ngfiles.com/4626838.14.jpg

http://tempupload.ngfiles.com/4626203.13.jpg

At 5/19/14 01:33 PM, rendibsivad wrote: kkkkkkkkk..Sorry bout that... I have only one question then I leave...

Just asking... How old are you? Does your creator allow you age?

http://tempupload.ngfiles.com/4626164.12.jpg

At 5/19/14 05:45 AM, ThePsychoSheep wrote: Hey Radka,I've been willing to ask - Why don't you have pupils?

http://tempupload.ngfiles.com/4626102.11.jpg

At 5/18/14 08:55 PM, rendibsivad wrote: So... Do you like shadbase?...

http://tempupload.ngfiles.com/4626095.10.jpg

At 5/18/14 11:08 PM, Daker777NG wrote: What up?

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At 5/16/14 10:31 PM, Galejro wrote: I made this forum topic a home for my character Radoslava (Radka for short). Talk to her, ask her questions do as you like. This is an interactive "self-conscious" artwork, she kinda rebelled against me and insisted I gave her freedom... of some sort. But don't expect a higher quality art style than this, for higher quality visit my gallery.

http://tempupload.ngfiles.com/4625340.8.jpg

http://tempupload.ngfiles.com/4624973.7.jpg

At 5/17/14 07:30 PM, rendibsivad wrote: So.. How is your sex life? Do you think you are smarter than cleverbot?

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At 5/17/14 03:25 PM, Seriousle wrote:

At 5/17/14 02:25 PM, Galejro wrote:

At 5/17/14 01:34 PM, bigjonny13 wrote: Dear Strongbad,

How do you type with boxing gloves on?

http://tempupload.ngfiles.com/4624784.4.jpg

and reuse the same image from before too aparently :P

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At 5/17/14 01:34 PM, bigjonny13 wrote: Dear Strongbad,

How do you type with boxing gloves on?

http://tempupload.ngfiles.com/4624784.4.jpg

At 5/17/14 12:59 PM, Rhunyc wrote: TELL ME, what is your favorite aspect of being a drawing?

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At 5/16/14 11:31 PM, Lintire wrote: Hey Radka, which is the best clan and why? Failed mage cults need not apply.

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At 5/16/14 11:31 PM, Lintire wrote: Hey Radka, which is the best clan and why? Failed mage cults need not apply.

http://tempupload.ngfiles.com/4624698.1.jpg

I made this forum topic a home for my character Radoslava (Radka for short). Talk to her, ask her questions do as you like. This is an interactive "self-conscious" artwork, she kinda rebelled against me and insisted I gave her freedom... of some sort. But don't expect a higher quality art style than this, for higher quality visit my gallery.

It is a fragment from my vampire epistolatory novel (a small fragment of the intro).

Warsaw Newspaper Article July 11th 1924 pg. 13

Yesterday in the evening hours a decision was made about the renovation of the northern sewers in Warsaw. The task was supposed to be staffed with 400 sewer workers, engineers, masons and plumbers in order to completely renovate the cities XIXth century sewer system built by the Russian occupants. The official report is that the project was canceled due to lack of funds, labor force, meant to be used in the metro system.

For Warsaw Newspaper, Piotr Kamilewski

Diary of Janusz Kowalski August 12th 1944

The battle has begun! The fight against the Nazi occupant was started and for now we are winning. Hitler will soon understand that Poland will not fall easily, HE WILL NOT HAVE WARSAW! It is 11 days and two hours from "W" hour, but it is only now that I can write my memoirs. My bag got shot and this diary received a heavy blow, I had to rip half the pages off and I will have to conserve the words. Who knows how long will the fight take and if I will be able to find a notebook on the way. I am being reassigned to Zoliboz district.

Diary of Janusz Kowalski August 14th 1944

The fight continues and the Nazis don't give up, I killed a couple this morning, one of them form SS, I'm proud, cause these fuckers deserve their fate most. I'm in Zoliboz, to which I got via sewers with my squad. Though so far Nazis don't know of our way of transportation I have the feeling we're being watched. These tunnels are masoned and tight, they carry sounds for miles and perhaps it was a different squad.

Diary of Janusz Kowalski August 20th 1944

The nightmare continues, many of us died, the bombings continue and there is no sign of help from outside. Germans figured out about the sewers and attack us there. Sometimes we sent a party to flush these rats out. The parties either return with German dog tags, sometimes not at all. Now some strange sounds appear and are louder, but that I can understand, we fight on land and under it. Yesterday while guarding the hose entry I saw something in the channels. It was big and swift, what's more disturbing is that it is completely silent. It's too bad I don't have a flashlight.

Diary of Janusz Kowalski August 25th 1944

Things got serious, we're slowly loosing, but I won't let that stop me. Day by day the sewers get more dangerous. Cave-ins, Bombings and Germans are one, but what I saw today at the patrol was horrible. Normally I see 4, 10 corpses a day, but that one takes the pie. Imagine a grenade blowing from inside someone. Only it wasn't a grenade ... jaws. Someone or something ate him alive, claw and toothmarks, the torso was emptied. Something lives down here and is carnivorous, that's it I'm putting a request for transfer.

Diary of Janusz Kowalski August 26th 1944

Those dogs! They denied my request! Worse still I was ordered to go on a patrol into the old northern sewers. I don't get it, we should be clearing communication with downtown not some backwater tunnels which are not even on the maps. I'm to leave tomorrow.

Diary of Janusz Kowalski August 27th 1944

6:12 P.M. This place is wrong. We're in some strange old tunnels. Sometimes they bind with the new ones, sometimes we must squeeze through some ancient, stone-made ones. Slime, filth and spiderwebs, they weren't used for decades at least. What's worse, there is no life here. All spiders long dead, slime rotting for many years, no rats, not even a mouse. Usually I like this sight, but now I miss it. No Nazis ... only these sounds I heard, when I saw that thing.

8:00 P.M. Mariusz is gone! There were only three of us down here and now one of us just disappeared. We checked all previously seen tunnels and nothing. Now we watch our backs, I have little time to wr....

0:00 A.M. THIS IS A NIGHTMARE! Adrian is gone too! We set ourselves at a tunnel crossroads. Sounds of strange creatures were coming from everywhere. We were scared but we had to keep it together. I don't know what happened, I just closed my eyes for a moment when leaning on Adrian's back and then I get woken up by falling on a cold, wet ground. These sounds approach, COSER! IT'S OVER, I'm GOING BACK TO BASE!

Diary of Janusz Kowalski August 28th 1944

2:35 A.M. FUCK! FUCK! FUUUUUUUUCK!!! I'm lost! These tunnels are cursed! They go only downwards like as if to hell! And even if I go up, they soon turn down. FUCK IT!!! I'm going just about anywhere, there must be an exit anywhere!

3:11 A.M. Our Father, Who art in Heaven; Hallowed be Thy name; Thy kingdom come; Thy will be done on earth as it is in Heaven. Give us this day our daily br... (Here the writing is stopped by a rapid and large scratch of the pen)

5:30 A.M. If anyone found and now reads this, RUN!!! This is Hell. It's Satan's work, don't you see what's happening here. Devil himself ripped the stone walls of this tunnel and digit them like a mole into a chamber, which he decorated with bones and flesh. Oh my god these roots are alive and move!!! The grow into a web, it moves towards m... (an unrecognizable sudden sign breaks the writing)... and those sounds! they are roars, screams! It's here, I can't write any long... (Here the writing ends with a scratched unrecognizable pen made line, finishing with a whole made by a pen, the page is sprinkled with brownish-reddish spots).

(A thin and sharp lined writing follows. Made apparently with a knife or a claw which almost slices the paper with an ink apparently made of the same thing as the droplets sprinkling the page

TiBurrum Achsdaalum BertaloriSHI

Well I could gie you A LOT of explanation for many details you don't seem to like. But I'll go through the most important ones as shrotly as I can.

Faces
- I'm an AMATEUR, this is my first ever comicbook, like what do you exp... ok I guess there is no excuse from lack of skill and practice.
- This is not exactly a comicbook, nor a manga. I'm not skilled enought to make a comicbook, and after watching my sister watch all those animes and mangas I was apalled by the irrealism of that style, the gay-ification of males, the eyes that would take more space in the skull than the brain and the everpresent question of "Who the f is a boy or a girl!?" So I mixed the styles. Males and females are distinguished from each other, the eyes are in a believable scale and somewhat shape.

Expression of emotions and texts:
- This is a horror/ action/ MYSTERY genre, mystery must surround the characters and this reflects on both their faces and the storytelling. Our main red-eyed character Caine lacks emotional expressions both because of his history and the fact that all vampires must share a degree of secrecy.
- I decided to tell the story of the female in text because I chose a realistic 3rd person view of narration. You don't get insight into the minds and thaughts of the characters, FILL THESE GAPS YOURSELF as the reader, don't just blindly consume my work, shape it and adapt it to your own mind.

Some of the confusion you get is probably caused by the fact you have just read these pages. There's a whole 78 page chapter preceeding them. It explains for instance the woman and gun confusion (BTW that scene correlates greatly to the last scene of "the coup in Call of Duty 4", yeah I'ma copycat :( ).

But you are right, I can't be there everytime someone asks questions about my comicbook to lend a hand in explaining, even though their confusion is many a time an expected, planned outcome.

Well if you look into my signature you can view the rest of the comicbook on my blog: galejro.blogspot.com. And if you are intersted in artworks and non-comicbook related stuff you can check out my deviantart account.

Anyways, the sad and happy news is that what I've created so far is just the tip of the iceberg. 1 full chapter and some 20% of the 2nd chapter of a 3 chapter episode ... of a trilogy. The sad news is that each chapter is planned for some 80 pages a piece. It takes me a full year to produce a single chapter. The first episode is FAR from over and soon it will celebrate it's first anniversary.

Slowly I'm more enticed by the thaught that I would be A LOT faster when working on it as a prose book.

I think you might be a bit better off poppin over to the Writting Forum, you know, where mastery of the written language is kid of their thing?

Than Again I'm in a troublesome spot since this is a comic book/Manga. It's both graphics AND writing, Either requires feedback. So both art and writing forums would have the same reaction, unfortunately.

I work on my comicbook and so far the second chapter is like 20% complete (16 pages out of 80). By my account it nic... ok its crappy, but what one might expect from an amateur XD

Anyways, for the purposes of self-improvement I need you to give me feedback on the finished pages THE PROOF READING OF MY ENGLISH IS PRIORITY since I am no native English speaker. Then I can enrich the list of grievences about my style to be used in 2nd episode, as well as implement some improvements for these pages' graphics. The chapter IS NOT YET RELEASED and is still subject to any modifications, panel redrawing etc.

Before I give you the link where you can download them I need to give you a WARNING: The pages contain Adault Language a tiny bit of gore and a little bit of erotism.

The pages are here, sory for an external rar download, it's more practical.

At 4/26/13 11:17 PM, argile wrote:

At 4/26/13 07:47 PM, Breaktroll wrote:

At 4/26/13 04:10 PM, argile wrote:
What exactly happened that character ,she seems barely recognizable in the matter that does not look like the demon I saw in the original example. Was She amputated by him, it looks as if she were dead.

I guess that's why this thread is called "my style", and not "slightly different".
I find it fairly obvious that the character in front is the demon, the body in the back is just a random dead person.

oh yeah now I recognize her but I think it was cute how it was originally, It almost seemed like a extreme transition to see It "Grown Up"

The character is the same, I just don't do cartoonish stuff. The only thing I thaught I needed to implement even though it doesn't fit to the seriousness is the bow. So the demon just killed a random 5-year-old and took the bow >:D

At 4/24/13 04:45 AM, encasedcase wrote: Anyone wanna try this?

Here you go, not perfect nor finished but hey, its something at least :)

And maybe someone can try to tackle this one.
Lacene Riderguerre's Malkavian ASSpect page XD

At 4/16/13 11:21 AM, kakalxlax wrote:

At 4/14/13 01:25 AM, Zombiepile wrote:

At 4/13/13 08:08 PM, Galejro wrote: Try her, them ... her ... dammit why did I made a vampire gollum >, ,<

Smile for the camera!

thats now creepy at all

Hmmm ... Well Actually the author did a great job based on some things from my picture. In fact both of the authors did. When I said Gollum I did that to express the closest thing that my character Lacene Riderguerre resambles. They just expressed the inner truth about the evil side that my design hides behind a singular face.

The left one is the human/ nice/ shy/ girly and emotional woman. The one on the right is a cruel/ evil/ psychopathic monsterous apparition with a psychological profile of a 8-9 thausand year old vampire, but also a symbol of sexual promiscuity (that I guess is the last thing you might think of Gollum XD) and indeed this is not a Gollum thing).

The only difference (and the femaleness/ sexieness XD) is that Gollum was a psychopath who split his personality. While Lacene is a Body that is haunted with a spirit, a body that holds 2 souls, one of which can manifest itself as a halucination (therefore, in my comicbook/ manga they can be seen conversing face to face).

I do like how you do inks.

I don't do inks, this is a pen and marker.