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Response to: Stuff I'm working on... Posted February 20th, 2012 in Art

At 2 days ago, z28ump wrote: And here it is finished.

All your work is beautiful and wonderfully detailed. The cars are perfectly detailed and wonderfully coloured/shaded.

The only minor critique here is that I think her facial features are a bit too small on the face. If you improve just a tad on the proportions, you have a wonderful piece (keep in mind that many have said that the human face is the most difficult thing to recreate)

Response to: Ehh...uhh... hey there Posted February 20th, 2012 in Art

I love the way you shade things, and you have a really good eye at capturing the shapes (human features are by far the most complicated to reproduce on paper, I know)

BUT, like most others might have said, you may want to show more definitive outlines for the darker areas, and light/barely visible lines for the bright areas. By this I mean that the light shining on an object (for your example, the face), will diminish any distinct lines, while as in the dark, and object's outline has a more stronger border, so try to input that.
This is what my art teacher tried to force into my work, and it seems to make things look more realistic (although your drawings are very realistic on it's own, this may help it improve)

I'm not a great explainer, but hopefully I helped.
All in all, your work is great; It's far better than what I hope to accomplish~