At 11/20/09 05:55 PM, RydiaLockheart wrote:
The zombie market is beginning to flourish, though, so I assume they'll continue buying zombie books...until that market gets saturated and the readers move on to the next thing.
Speaking about zombie literature...
my latest rejection letter from pseudopod...
Thank you for sending us "ASSIMILATE OR DIE". I've reviewed the story
and decided not to purchase it. I like the central idea (the zombie
apocalypse from the POV of illegal immigrants and symbolic/cultural
resonances of same) but I feel there needs to be a stronger story than
just "hard won survival and then a trip to the store in zombie mufti"
(I would also imagine the chance of being shot when pretending to be a
zombie would be very high, but this also ties in with your theme so
you might want to mention it in passing).
The writing in general could be tightened up a bit. For example, the
first paragraph ends in a sentence that uses thirst twice in the same
sentence, and the next paragraph's "Sometimes they abandoned packed in
trucks were they roasted alive until the flesh melted off their faces
and piles of meaty pieces pooled on their chests and laps" seems to
missing some words or something..
Finally, the point is too clearly stated in the end, which is tough, I
know, but you should think about referencing the earlier moment
without spelling out to us why it's important.
To tell you truth, we've been absolutely swamped with zombie stories
recently so we're being a bit choosy and only considering the one's
completely unlike anything we've seen before. This was close, but I
did want to repeat that I think the central idea of the story is aces,
it just needs some work.
Thanks for submitting, and I hope my comments have been at least a
tiny bit helpful.
Sincerely,
Shawn Garrett <submit@pseudopod.org>
PSEUDOPOD - The Horror Podcast Magazine
http://pseudopod.org