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At 6/14/09 11:28 AM, ForbidMetal wrote:

At 6/14/09 11:03 AM, BoMbLu wrote: Ok, just a very random idea. I like the bullet-shot effect of the anime and i think it can be done. However, what if -

I think that's a better idea, have the credits at the beginning so they don't just hit exit as soon as the anims are over. Starting it with the IKAS?

If that's what will be done, than what will become of the song you made?I'm not sure how it would do just as a part.
I worry of the effectlong(the star trek opening credits are fairly short) opening credits will have. I think they should either be at the end, or we just won't have any.
this isn't an executive order though; it's up for debate.

At 6/14/09 05:43 AM, BoMbLu wrote: Fixing the credits. IF you want me to change any stuff please tell me, i wont continue working on it till i get the ok from flashbound :)

hey bomblu, I like the turning tween that brings in the text like 'animated by,' but I think I found a more interesting looking, more collab related text transition.

please watch this (anime, I know, bleh) at 12:30

At 6/14/09 05:43 AM, BoMbLu wrote: Fixing the credits. IF you want me to change any stuff please tell me, i wont continue working on it till i get the ok from flashbound :)

my only concern is that the song isn't long enough to pack credits in for everyone's parts. Bomblu, It would be just amazing if you could finish the song and make it full length. we need it for the credits, and I'd totally put that shit on my zune!

otherwise, great work! it looks awesome.

At 6/12/09 09:56 PM, RedHarvest wrote: http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/120609/7 5419_RedHarvest_40kcollab1.php

hey, I just noticed also that your tau have noses. there are a lot of dorks out there; if it isn't too much trouble, please try to give them the slit:

also, randys face is really well drawn and shaded, but the tau dancing and singings is really simple. why not just give him randys face?

thanks a whole lot for the compiled list pawn. It has proved extremely helpful.
I'd like to use pawns list to compile suggestions for each part to polish (including my own)

flashbound18
Tower of Skulls

I am going to try an eliminate the bitmap tracing here.

Las Cannon WTF

the same. I will retouch the rhino to eliminate bitmap tracing.

The Emperor of Mankind wants YOU!

pawn has recorded a better suited voice. I will add the echos and insert

Is that a gazelle?

I'm going to do a things to make this just look better. little fancy things, I mean.

The Terminator

I'm going to improve on the Bgs, and make the one behind john conner darker

ForbidMetal
Defiler Rabit Hunt

the backgrounds coul stand for polishing, and send the sounds via msn so I can remove the fuz (bugs)

Specism

do not make pawns voices permanent (make a copy of the file.) personally, i think that 3/4 of the humor is the funny voice. please post both v's and let us compare them.

BuMbLu
Bunny Squish

the physics just seem a little off on the drop pod part, landing and door, aswell as when he gets run over. I have a suggestion about the blood, but I can't really help save for on msn, so log on this morning!

Make love not warhammer

we're going to have to find a way to compress that video. it alone will drag our preloader

Ouch, my ass!

everything's perfect, but on this version the music is a little too quiet. try to make it even with your sound effects.

Orkish luv...

I love this animation. I only suggest making the background darker, and changing it's outlines from black to dark brown to effectively separate it from the characters

Outkasts

you can achieve more emphasis on the Asian guardsmen by placing the captain guardsmen in the closest seat on his row to the viewer, and losing the glasses on the other guy. also, could you add a shadow under there feet?

I kissed a spawn...

this whole thing is great, but there is this one length where he isn't doing anything, between "too sick to deny it" til before "nuuuu-rgleeeeeee-nuuuuur-gleeeee"

micky315
Armour Saves

please make the background outlines for the wall a Grey slightly darker than the base Grey, and the table outlines a slightly darker red than the table red base.

What's with the helmets?

sorry, but please re-animate the guard aspect with the same neatness and line thickness as the eldar, whom look great. Also, when you animate the walking, could you cause the body to move a little with the legs? they look very static. the black guy at the end shouldn't be say, keep the angry expression, but still make his mouth open. when he walks away, either make him shaking his head or muttering to himself, and make him kick a rock. the subtitles for the eldar aren't very legible. put a black bar behind them and make them white to fix this.

Nuttro
Green Skins...

the only criticism I have for this piece is that the cards aren't obviously card's at first glance. If you make them typical playing cards with a slightly thinner outline, it will be more obvious.

globdecitus
The Pains of War

the physics on the swingin penis are rather off, and it swings for too long. please add explosion sound effects for the background, and use easing on all of the relevant tweens. if you don't know what that is or need help, please msn me: hajimejo@hotmail.com

RedHarvest
Livin' Together

(I saw the completed, this is for that) I loved everything, save for the line where the side table meets the ground, (it's a little chewed up) the space wolfs laugh mouth w/ teeth (the lines are too thick) and bitmap tracing. the voices are excellent, but at parts with the dark eldar, it's hard to tell what he's saying. just add subtitles for this.

Tau Restructuring

(I saw the completed, this is for that) the only things about this movie are the opening fire warriors sleeves, (the shoulder pads should be above them) the mouth that tweens to a ridiculous size during the singing (the lines get too thick) and the bitmap tracing.
please, it's totally acceptable even, to trace you're bitmap traced backgrounds to make not-bitmap traced bs, but please get rid of bitmap tracing! everyone that used it! (myself included)

I think thats all of them....

update:

(scrn shot on next part)

fobid, once completed, I would like to show this movie to fulp. I only need a few days.

At 6/10/09 01:29 PM, ForbidMetal wrote: Well FlashBound hath decreed that the bio questions suck, therefore they must be changed to something more....bio-ie?

like

Name

Location

Gender

How long have you been animating?

What made you start animating?

Why the warhammer collab?

Sorry for wasting your time people....

though you may vote as to which one you want.

gosh Damn it! Mutiny! MUTINY!

I didn't say the 'suck,' I said I didn't like the TWO on NG collabs and th SF collab!
stop trying to turn them against me!

(purposely being overly dramatic, please know this)

Pawn and Bomblu, I think your just making a joke, but just in case, 'sex' refers to 'gender.'
having, 'so how's the sex life?' for a bio question would be sort of stupid.

forbid, newgrounds said you spelled 'deamons' wrong (<-spelled like that) so in the relative response, I typed 'demons'

some of these questions are a little questionable.

pawn, thank you thank you thank you for the recording. I'm working on slipping it in now.

Name?

Don

Location?

Maryland, United States

Sex?

male

Why do you think there arn't any black space marines?

who ever said there weren't? you haven't gone racist on me forbid, have you?

Who do you feel in the WH40k universe shares your physical attributes and why?

Tau fire warriors. I admire their cooperation and attitude, even as military personnel.

If you could be in the shoes of one chaos God for a whole day, what sick/funny mutations would you give the demons?

I'd give em wacom cintiq's built into their torsos, than unleash them upon newgrounds users. The worthy would be able to kill them, and everyone else would die. Then, the survivors could use their demon corpses to improve the quality of their work!

What makes this Collab more awesome than the street fighter collab?

well i just hope it IS more awesome... but here on newgrounds a collabs 'awesomeness' is judged by either the choice of music, or the concentration of dick, gay, and sex jokes. (I guess we had ought to throw some of themz in)

Do you think the fact we don't have The-Swain, Johnny Utah....Egoraptor...Tom Fulp affects our ability to get to front page?

Those guys are on the inside man.... it's all a big conspiracy man! it like..... shit...... man..... you know what I'm a' talkn about man?????

Is there anything you'd like to say about anything, go on, this is your last chance?

nope. I've run out of witty lies and bluffs.

Its just perfect except for the fact that most space marines have an english accent...

says you. that's assuming England dominates the world over the next 38000 years. space marines, realistically and suiting to the fans, are as divided by accents as people are today (though languages will have certainly changed)

I don't mean to start a domestic flame war, but I'm tired of this British superiority thing when it comes to warhammer. the hobby is practiced in many countries, with many languages.

At 6/8/09 09:42 AM, BoMbLu wrote: Popping in again to say, even though i'm not the collab leader, i'm proud to be part of this collab as it's shaping up nicely :)

I also fixed the basics of AS3 so what i'm doing now is designing the author bios, fallen page, medals page etc. I'm hoping to complete the entire menu by the end of the week so next sat we'll send the samples embedded in the menu to Tom Fulp.

Like the idea Flashbound18?

Indeed sir!
If you'd rather someone else do it, I can embed the movies.
the best way to do it is by using scenes.

At 6/8/09 07:53 AM, RedHarvest wrote: i guess this joke kinda explains itself...haha..

almost done!!

haha, looks good! though space wolves, regardless of being a little off, are still good guys, bare in mind.
anyway, I can't wait to see it! it's always refreshing watching a completed part.

At 6/7/09 06:30 PM, RedHarvest wrote: is anyone doing any dick jokes? haha....lets be honest, newgrounds loves dick jokes...

they will come... they will come

Okay, for the Powerthirst commercial... if you want it synched I will need the original audio file you used... so I can see the timing... I have no control over the flash version.... (if you don't have it then i could rip the audio out of the flash, but my ears would prefer something a little higher quality than that)

I'll send you the audio tomorrow. thanks

mm... sorry for the double post, but I forgot to mention: could you please do the same voice for the 'offer only applies' part too? I'd prefer that to the sort of nerd voice

thanks, sorry for the trouble

http://www.mediafire.com/?lyionkn2i4r

I did then recordings as complete runs through the script... if you would like to do record line by line just ask.

It sounds great, It's the right voice, but could you use the same timing as heard in the flash? I mean like, saying 'big badass space marine' just as slowly, with the same tone and tone changes?

At 6/7/09 02:59 PM, Pawn007 wrote:

by the way, I've finished the terminator skit

I decided to go with christian bale quotes from the trailer, but I left the rest the same save for echo effects.

That was fucking awesome!!! I would have made the background behind 'John' a little darker... but that looked awesome!

thankyou! I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the recording!

below I made a few corrections; you were very close! corrections are in bold

Join the imperial army

become a big bad ass space marine!

You'll get privileges!

you can ride in a thunder hawk!

free airfare across the universe!

You'll get to kill the bad guys!

you'll get to kill the good guys!

you'll get all the ladies, but no fornication!

thats prohibited!

offer only applies to persons 16 years or under

currently living on a barbaric world

Otherwise you could Join the slightly less bad ass imperial guard!

: Get slaughtered, with all your buddies!

:get a free, standard issue imperial flashlight!

Get shot if you try to run away you pussy!

: Possibly, no guarantees, drive a tank!

by the way, I've finished the terminator skit

I decided to go with christian bale quotes from the trailer, but I left the rest the same save for echo effects.

At 6/7/09 08:45 AM, ForbidMetal wrote: there is one Tyranid animation, I have a deathwatch animation which is about tyranids, I also have a Chaos animation and am making imperial guard animation and a pre heresy animation.

DON!!!!! FLASHBOUND!!!!! LOOK WHAT I FOUND, I SENT IT TO BOMBLU AND HE RIPPED IT!!! WE HAVE ONE OF YOUR FILES BACK!!! YAY!!!!

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/160209/4 1012_DOH.php

hey pawn? my undeveloped 16 year old voice wasn't exactly suited to make a power thirst esque commercial.

could you watch the movie forbid just linked, and 'power thirst' on youtube, than re-record the dialogue for my flash so it syncs up and I can just pop it in? don't worry about echos, I'll do those.

At 6/7/09 01:54 AM, Pawn007 wrote: Sorry about the double post.... but at least I have some new content...

Here is a rough cut of the Terminator thing...
http://www.mediafire.com/?mij4zz24ohd

that's great! I think I'll take on that project

At 6/6/09 11:41 PM, Pawn007 wrote: Are there currently any armies which are underrepresented in the collab.... I was going through what I have seen and it looks like a lot of marines and imperial guard as well as some tau... a little eldar and dark eldar... I have heard whispers of orks...

...is there no necron or tyranid stuff??

...what about the forces of chaos??

Just trying to figure out what would be best to ponder for inspiration...

hey, why don't you record a terminator salvation ad with 40k terms. t'would be fun to animate.
just copy the commercial and rip the music

i was curious if we are going to be doing anything similar to some of the stuff they had (ex: credits, hidden animation, anything else creative that we can think of)...just curious...

If the medals system shines through, we'll have hidden buttons that unlock medals like the click the dick from the street fighter collab

I think we'll make a part or too menu Easter eggs, as well.

I've had this idea running through my brain... a unit of Imperial Guard attempting to fend off a unit of Slaneesh Daemonetes... the Daemonettes 'bounce' across the field and tear the Imp Guard appart... the camera pulls back to find the Imp Guard Commissar masterbating (don't need to see a dick here, sounds and a shot from behind would be sufficient)... then maybe some comment about the real reason behind this Crusade...

sound good. this is after all, NEWGROUNDS. they'll eat that shit up, and we all know it!

glad you like media fire! after I posted it, I felt I was being a little overly controlling and bossy... so if I came off that way I'm sorry

also, you may have noticed I accidentally only typed 2 W's, and that the first post on this page says '100th post!' when indeed it was the 900th.

we all make mistakes, shit happens

by the way, that comment "the short timers" was referring to a book. I never knew they made a movie about it! hard to find for "short timers" 'fans,' because it's called "full metal jacket." anyway, cool stuff!

http://www.sendspace.com/file/zjgsnl

'you have 30 seconds to comply'

I listened to your other clips, and they were very good; but firefox is a little temperative with that site you host the clips on. sometimes it works (before) and other times it doesn't. I can't go via internet explorer, I uninstalled it a long while ago.

please use ww.mediafire.com/, No registration required, works on any browser, works fast without pay offers, and no registration necessary (uploader or downloader, though as an uploader it is helpful to do so because you can keep track of and organize files)

aside, I think you'll like it!

and Fullgrim

All pre-heresy

I've always thought of fulgrim's voice and appearance a sort of Labyrinth David bowie. If I was casting a movie, It would have been David Bowie and next in line Orlando bloom (thousand sons are pretty boys)

http://www.sendspace.com/file/mdvps2

HOLY
FUCKING
SHIT

"the short timers"

RedHarvest, I like both of your new parts, and they're really funny! However:

-If at all possible, please avoid bitmap tracing and draw all of your backgrounds
-the lip syncing for the helmet-less tau singing looks a little half arsed. It isn't too bad until the end, when he goes from the long 'o' to neutral, and you can see his normal mouith under the 'o.'

I present PRE-HERESY ANGRON =D

That's really impressive looking and well drawn,
but this is a funny cartoon we're talking! please consider:
-much smaller legs, smaller head and hunched, torso and arms remain the same.
-also, the warpaint makes him look sort of like a Mexican wrestler; it isn't obvious at first.
-give him space marine shoulder pads and a back pack strapped on to his bare torso

I'm sorry to criticize your work forbid. please don't take it as immaturely as I have in the past :(

I just needed to snag it...

1000th post!

At 6/4/09 05:59 PM, micky315 wrote: heres what i have so far. suggestions?

the frame by frame animation you've done so far looks very good, but please consider the following:

shadows, and neaten everything up. It all looks kind of sloppy.

color the white rocks to a light red, and change the BG outline color to a dark red

polish the character model; it just looks sloppy is all

Update, to show you guys I'm still working:

At 6/4/09 08:40 AM, micky315 wrote: well, some people have disagreed with my original idea, so im gunna wait for flashbound to apporve it.

stick with your normal idea, but scratch the actual talking from the black guy. it's at that point you've become racist. just have him like pause and they stare at each other... put some emphasis on the white cone heads by having a close up shot, than just have the black guy drop his rifle and walk away shaking his head.