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Look, the point is that a lot of the people posting here feel that it's weird that they're freakin' 10 and they're already questioning their sexuality and having a romantic relationship. Although some people here don't find it weird, remember that she wants to get this comic published; if the publishers don't feel uncomfortable about it, a lot of the readers would. She'd be given hell if she sold the comic as it is now. You can agree with at least that, right?

If you haven't noticed, neither is she. I don't think you should listen to advice given from someone who doesn't have a clue how to use the program. :P

Oh, believe me, I noticed. I just didn't want to be rude, but I don't actually care now because it's obvious she won't listen to any sort of advice. I have Sai, so I couldn't care less if I'm horrible using MS Paint.

The only good part about this thread is everything but this thread. I find that hilarious.

The parodies everyone's posted are, indeed, epic. :D

Haven't you met any ten year olds? When I was ten, I was questioning myself as to whether I was bi or les or straight all the time. It's normal, and so is it to have a romantic relationship (personal experience)

I have a tip if you want to make the outline less rough. Use the curve tool

Yes, of course I've met 10 year olds. I've been 10 before. When I was 10, I think only 1 person in my grade actually went on a date. Once. I hate to repeat myself, but I don't know what kind of 10 year olds you're hanging out with. I mean, most people in my grade still thought everyone had cooties, so you must have been an odd 10 year old (no offense).
By the way, I'm well aware of the curve tool. It looks even worse when I use that, as I'm not exactly a pro at MS Paint. I was using my tablet, and my tablet only really works on there when I make it one continuous line. I really recommend you get Gimp or Sai.
Did you listen to any of the advice I had included in the picture? Or the things I posted about anatomy, panel structure, etc?

In the hope of helping you out, I made a horrible, little picture thing. Sorry the art sucks, I tried to do it in MS paint for reasons that I'll never be able to explain. Horrible shading is horrible OTL
But really, the story could use a few changes. It really doesn't make sense that they're 10. 10 year olds, despite what you seem to think, do not have romantic relationships. They have relationships, sure, but they're just cutesy, little dates about 99.99% of the time. I've certainly never seen a 10 year old seriously questioning their sexuality before. In my opinion, they should be at least 15. Also, it would help if you organized your panels more clearly.
You should work on your anatomy as well if you are seriously thinking about getting this comic published. I'm not one to be giving tips on anatomy, though. You should also consider saving for either a tablet or a scanner, because it is extremely difficult to make art look good when you're working with a mouse, especially when you're using MS paint!
I mean no disrespect in any way, shape or form, just thought I'd try and give you some tips. :D