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Response to: Writing Forum Lounge Posted January 26th, 2010 in Writing

At 1/26/10 06:28 PM, Alex12345269 wrote: The worst part about writing for me is that I have absolutely no creativity.

Everybody has some creativity. You just have to be able to know how to find it.

Response to: Poetry by Earthshine Posted January 26th, 2010 in Writing

Here is a quick sonnet. For those of you that do not know, a sonnet is a 14-line poem.

they stalks in the shadows
in the still of the night
they hunts in the meadows
while his prey waits for the light
they crawls and they creep
while the little prey sleep
then they pounce
they attack
until there is not even an ounce
of life in the motionless sack
of skin left on the ground
for their family to feast
then they turns around
ready to attack again like a beast

Poetry by Earthshine Posted January 26th, 2010 in Writing

Every now and then I write some poems. So I guess I'll post them here. Comments and criticism will be appreciated.

the sky is torn
the world is broke
the women's scorn
is nothing but a joke

the children cry
people in tears
the sick die
they hide in fear

the world was nice
happiness was all you could see
but with a roll of the dice
it turned to misery

they knocked down walls
they attacked the meek
they shot you in the balls
in this world, a hero we seek

one who will save us
one who will protect us
one who will care for us
one who will save us

he did not come though
every town was haunted by a wraith
everyone overtaken by woe
all because we had no faith.

Response to: I need help with writing. Posted January 26th, 2010 in Writing

Lay down and close your eyes. What ever the first thing that pops into your head is, write it down and make a plot from it, then make a story.

Response to: The Battle of the Final Crumpet Posted January 26th, 2010 in Writing

Good poem. Nice job sticking to the rhyme scheme the whole time.

Response to: The boy! Posted January 26th, 2010 in Writing

At 1/26/10 04:47 PM, Joshsouza wrote:
At 1/26/10 04:26 PM, Earthshine wrote: I'm guessing this is a story about yourself.
You silly! he would not have posted it if he is DEAD!

It's called a hyperbole. He could have used it to express how he felt when he saw that the Edit button was not created.

Response to: Writing Forum Lounge Posted January 26th, 2010 in Writing

A good book that I've read is Ghost Rider by Neil Peart. It's the story of his ride from Canada down to Mexico city that he took after his wife and daughter died.

Response to: Writing Forum Lounge Posted January 26th, 2010 in Writing

At 1/26/10 04:29 PM, DumbassDude wrote:

You think song lyrics could work here?

I don't see why not.

Anyway, I'm starting to write a story right now about a guy fighting in a war. Any ideas would be helpful.

Response to: The boy! Posted January 26th, 2010 in Writing

I'm guessing this is a story about yourself.

Response to: Writing Forum Lounge Posted January 26th, 2010 in Writing

It's about time they come out with the writing forum.
Also hi others.

Response to: Google is racist Posted January 26th, 2010 in General

At 1/26/10 03:05 PM, MrReaper wrote:
At 1/26/10 02:59 PM, GodsBitch wrote: Well, what the hell were you expecting when you searched that? A tall, white non-actor?
If you notice in the search result, no where in it does it say the n-word but for some strange reason it is associated with Gary Coleman, how does that happen?

Well Gary is Black.

Response to: Newgrounds Haikus! Posted January 25th, 2010 in General

This is a haiku
It is about Newgrounds
This is the end.

I probably did it wrong.

Response to: 2010 NFL Playoffs Posted January 24th, 2010 in General

At 1/24/10 03:18 PM, Wyatt2012 wrote: Packers lost to the Cardinals.

You're about a week late.

Anyway. Feeley missed a field goal so the game is still 0-0. Can't wait for Vikings Vs. Saints.

Response to: I don't get this...at all... Posted January 24th, 2010 in General

most are scams.

Response to: Dear Tom Fulp! Posted January 23rd, 2010 in General

At 1/23/10 07:53 PM, speeling wrote: Somebody sign for me, I give permission, it's hard as hell to draw on a laptop mousepad.

done

Dear Tom Fulp!

Response to: Virtual Haircut Posted January 23rd, 2010 in General

You'll never get me to cut my hair.

Response to: Dear Tom Fulp! Posted January 23rd, 2010 in General

I signed

Dear Tom Fulp!

Response to: Who do you look like? Posted January 22nd, 2010 in General

Apparently I look like a short-haired Geddy Lee.

Response to: art piece gets 6.87? Posted January 21st, 2010 in General

It's a glitch. It has happened to many pieces of art.

Response to: Tom Bunk's The Zit Posted January 20th, 2010 in General

post all videos here.

Response to: Newgrounds Football Team Posted January 18th, 2010 in General

I'll be an ROLB

Response to: What fictional charcter would you.. Posted January 18th, 2010 in General

I would be Barf, so I could be half man and half dog.

What fictional charcter would you..

Response to: General Forum? Posted January 18th, 2010 in General

Major Asshole here.

General Forum?

Response to: General Forum? Posted January 18th, 2010 in General

Colonel Sanders?

General Forum?

Response to: What's in your Wallet? Posted January 17th, 2010 in General

My wallet's upstairs right now and I'm to lazy. But right now I have $7.21 in my pocket.

Response to: 16 drug busts at my school Posted January 17th, 2010 in General

That's just crazy. There has only been 1 kid caught alcohol at my school and that was last year.

Response to: Partnering with a Animator. Posted January 17th, 2010 in General

You should go lurk around the flash forum and ask around there.

Response to: 2010 NFL Playoffs Posted January 17th, 2010 in General

At 1/17/10 04:32 PM, Head-Full-Of-Acid wrote: Jets will win

I disagree. Your logic may make sense, but I personally hate the Jets. Therefor i think that the Chargers will win. In the long run though, neither team will make it to the Superbowl and it will be the Vikings beating the Colts 28-24.

Response to: Stuff on T.V. that pisses you off Posted January 17th, 2010 in General

What really pisses me off is the way that Fox News suddenly changed from siding with the office while bush was president to becoming the people's voice now that we have a new Democratic leader. I'm all for supporting your side, but if your suppose to be giving people the news, you cannot be just one sided every time.
On another note, It fucking pisses me off that parents are trying to get shows like "Family Guy" off the air all the time because they think that their kids will become to influenced by it and do stupid things that they see the retarded main character or the drunken dog or the sex addicted friend do. If you don't want your kids to watch a show, block it on the T.V. there is no reason to take it to a much higher extreme.
Lastly, As most of you know, there is going to be an election on Tuesday to see who gets to fill Ted Kennedy's now vacant seat in the senate. What's pissing me of now is that ever fucking commercial seems to be Martha Coakly (D) bashing Scott Brown (R) or Scott Brown driving around in a truck. Also I've gotten 3 fucking calls today from Martha Coaky saying why I should vote for her. Every website I go on I see a vote for Scott Brown ad. FUCKING ENOUGH.
For those of you that actually took the time to read this whole thing, thank you. For the rest of you, TL;DR I rant about crap on the T.V.

Response to: Nyj Vs Sd Posted January 17th, 2010 in General

At 1/17/10 03:38 PM, ZOMGALIENS wrote: NYJ?
SD?

Who?

New York Jets and San Diego Chargers. It's the NFL post season.