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At 3/6/10 04:15 PM, Dubbi wrote:

The link won't work....

Both links work fine for me. Which one's not working for you?

I guess we let the voting commence.

Try to think of mine as having a blues type rhythm to it.

Where is tomorrow
Time never comes
Where is tomorrow
For now I'll sleep with the bums

Why do I have to
Go out drinking every night
Why do I have to
Go to the bar and get in a fight

Wonder to my home now
Empty bottles in my hands
Wonder to my home now
To do whatever that bitch demands

Why am I still here
Why am I not asleep in bed
Why am I still here
Why am I not on the ground dead

Where is tomorrow
Time never comes
Where is tomorrow
For now I'll sleep with the bums

Song: Where is Tomorrow

Why does it have to be jazz. I hate jazz.
this is gonna suck

Doesn't happen to me.

I'll face someone else if anyone is up to it.

At 3/4/10 04:35 PM, stimcrab wrote:

Submissions are due 5:00 p.m. Eastern time.

You do mean 5:00 p.m. tomorrow right?

At 3/4/10 06:17 AM, Aleque wrote:

At 3/4/10 06:14 AM, Retardead wrote: I was going to say "B" but then at quallity you got me...

ok forget quality then..

must be short and popular

these guys' shorts are very popular

Dear Mr. Fulp,
I would like to file a complaint against the audio section of your website "Newgrounds.com". I personally have found that your genre section lacks in variety. It would be greatly appreciated if you would increase in the variety of it.
Thank you,
fire118

The day turns dark
as the birds flock
My love is no more
dead at the door

he shot her in the back
then ran back to his shack
I know I must avenge her
her love I would kill for

I grab my gun from my room
and take off to his tomb
He was ready though
hit me with a hard blow

My gun hit the ground
and out came one round
by luck it settled the score
for he too was dead at the door

lock yourself in a room with only a pen and paper and don't let yourself out until your done.

I keep getting Data Retrieval Failure.

You should really ask the experts over at the art forum.

At 2/27/10 05:00 PM, TrevorW wrote:

Next battle will be:

Dubbi, Zachdamacman, and Earthshine

Damn, I was really hoping to face you. Oh well... maybe next time.

Here's my entry

The day turns dark
as the birds flock
My love is no more
dead at the door

he shot her in the back
then ran back to his shack
I know I must avenge her
her love I would kill for

I grab my gun from my room
and take off to his tomb
He was ready though
hit me with a hard blow

My gun hit the ground
and out came one round
by luck it settled the score
for he too was dead at the door

At 2/27/10 04:01 PM, megakill wrote: ...I'm sorry, but, what exactly possesed you to post a complaint about the audio portal, in the writting forum?

I think he wants us to write a complaint for him.

At 2/27/10 04:20 PM, TrevorW wrote:

Seriously though...I will make a legitimate topic later.

All right, I'll wait.

At 2/27/10 03:29 PM, TrevorW wrote: The topic is: whips, chains, and blood.

this might just be a joke...

So basically weapon violence

At 2/27/10 03:13 PM, TheSubject666 wrote:

The small grenade lands by the private's feet; the sergeant jumps, grabbing the grenade . . .

He throws it back and it explodes they start to run again and soon reach a swamp...

A group of soldiers are running, trying to get away from the enemy soldiers who are about to over run them, until they hear a huge explosion....

A small plane has just crashed behind them killing the enemy. They go and see if the pilot's okay when something comes out of the wreckage and flies right past them...

How about a three man battle. TrevorW vs. Dubbi vs. Earthshine.

If it was on a closed course with the police supervising and knowing what's happening, it's not illegal.

The story was pretty okay. It missed a lot of major and minor parts. You forgot to include a setting and how old the kids are. It also would have been nice if you increased on some detail like why he called ed "inbred" or why the cat beach idea failed. With a little more effort i think it could turn out to be a good short story.

At 2/25/10 05:05 PM, TrevorW wrote: An epic is a 100,000 word poem. GET TO WORK ON THE NEXT 99,940 or so words! :P

Although epic poems are usually long, they are not necessarily 100,000 words. To be considered an epic poem, it has to be about a hero who is Brave, selfless, strong, unsuccessful at one point, and clever.

The grass is greener
on the other side
The world is cleaner

The days are longer
on the other side
The sun is stronger

With friends surrounding
on the other side
There will be less pounding

The colors shine
on the other side
A beautiful design

The grass is greener
on the other side
the world is cleaner

Darkside of the moon - pink floyd
Fragile - yes
90125 - yes
moving pictures - rush
2112 - rush

I thought 4 was A.

Either Mike or bob

Why would you do it in the first place?