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2 Forum Posts by "DaRKBlAde001"

Response to: The Arch Angel's Insanity. Posted June 22nd, 2012 in Writing

Wow, Thanks, Blade. I really didnt expect that... I was just wandering through here when I found "The Arch Angel", I didnt see the Insanity part, and I just had to look. Then I noticed that "BladeBasher" Wrote the topic, and I went ahead and looked at your more recent stories. I gotta say I am impressed. You still got some of the old problems, but you've gotten much better.

Going back, filling in plot holes, covering up mistakes and correcting grammar. Truthfully, I'd like to believe that you could do better... but I dont see how!

Thanks again for letting me use your character...

Response to: The Story Of The Arch Angel Posted May 9th, 2012 in Writing

Woah! Those stories of yours are absolutely AWESOME! In my form of critique, I will say that they are slightly depressing, but kickass in the correct areas! I'd say the first act is my favourite, but the rest are almost as good. I think every time you made made a story, There were some parts in it called "Fillers" Where there really isnt much to do, So you put in backstory or future plans, Which is rather brilliant.

When you do get to the action, I've noticed you put alot of detail into fight scenes. I would have to say my favourite is the one you did on the third story. That was bloody awesome. I would have to say that my favourite quote from all of your stories is one that is catchy and sticks perfectly to your story is the Code of Angels, As featured in your drawing!

Now onto the stuff that was kind of unlikable. You have a tendancy to change your story lore ALOT, but I guess that just means that you are still developing it alot. It isnt exactly a bad thing, but it is kind of annoying. In a few of your stories, You seem to do or say stuff that isnt related to the story at all. Again, Not a bad thing... If you do it right.

I find that your stories have a very dark atmosphere to them, Extremely sad, Depressing or angering... But they also have moments when I just couldnt help myself but burst into laughter. The stories also have moments where I am just so damn happy that I cry.

I would say, in my opinion, 9/10. Thanks for the wonderful stories!