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Ok last update me sleepy ^_^ G'night all.

Yeah cause we can see that...upload it elsewhere and link, but show 1 frame as you have to start a topic with an image.

Started the re-colour looking ok i guess ^_^

Ignore the white just a rip from flash cba to photoshop it .

Ok i decided that the 1st peice was good enough as scrap material for the animation so i decided to sketch another up this i what i got. same character minus the wings.

Oh and i know the chair is HELLA wrong that will be changed in the re-colour ^_^. Feedback please:P

Bumpadoodle..thought this is a more important topic than most at the top of the list =P

Hope your still workin on it >: {

lol thanks althought this is a learning phase with the critique from other users the posotive feedback is always a huge confidence booster ^_^ So i just wanna thank you all :P

Cheers.

I know you had the best in mind but start a new topic in general or start an "art critique" Club in the clubs and crews forum.

goodluck

Aint really a good topic to post in an art forum as the rules state start a topic with an image.

WUZ IT? NA WAIII, EYE CUNT BELIEF DAT.

It's alright

Wow thanks for all the reply's =P i guess i should take into consideration althought the wings don't have a mind of there own if someone is depressed or sad there not gonna be all tight and stirdy kinda like the muscles on a character, the wings SHOULD be alot more relaxed.

On that note i'll go back and correct the wings asap ^_^, oh and i am workin on more of the same character as i will hopefully be bringing him into a flash animation once i've storyboarded it all and drew more characters.

Ill update soon ^^. Thanks

At 8/11/07 12:52 PM, Dudeinc wrote: The art wasn't great, but that was pretty Funny.

In comics something easy you can do to make your work better is just add borders to each panel. Another is put the title at the top. I made a simplistic example for you. Using you work.

Practice your drawing skills, because you have some talent in making people laugh.

Also dont be afraid to let things come out of the boxes....e.g if a speechbubble needs to be big to let the words being said to fit in, let the bubble overlap the box it just adds more effect and lets it be unique.

Dude that wasn'r directed at you =P Your landed it perfect. I was talking to the kid who posted below you ^^^

For an MS paint drawing i like it :P, all i can say is ease off on the sharp edges. i think you'll find even the sharpest of edges if zoom'd right in are curved ^_^

Wow, nice work =P.

+ on the comment earlier it isn't that hard to portray a child from an adult. Smaller limbs and enlarge the eyes.

Jesus dude how sexy is your line art :P.

Oh and good luck on the re-colour i'll keep checkin for that update xP

Update =p

In fucking deed' they should ;o... i was thinking he was twisted a little thus the perspective of the wings would be out.. Thanks ^^

Yeah with a total of 20 posts noone noticed.

+ this is more of a general forum topic...but i reccomend you dont post it in there either THANKSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS.

<3

Here is the re-colour hopefully know the arms and hands dont look as sloppy. Just feedback wanted like before rly =P

Thanks

so you draw a blinfolded furry with tits bulging out the bra..YOUR SUCH A LIAR =[

:O BET SOMEONES FEELING GUILTY.

/caps..your work is extremely good, s'just the idea of morphing animals and humans is weeeeeeird :P

Ahhh now i can see his eyes and mouth, no matter what colour or adjustments you do there still really good . MAWWWWWR!

Them fingers look so lifelike, dam dude thats so awsome =P.

Backtoreality: Yeah it just looks that little bit basic but least you storyboard unlike most people :P

1) the bottom edge of the wings could be drawn better
2) the arm and hand have very little detail
3) wtf is he sitting on?
not too impressive

Yeah i was trying to think of the wings perspective thus the scrappyness.
Posistioning was changed midway thus the over biro'd arms and hands.
It's a re-inforced seat de-dicated to his dad (Animation storyline in mah head)

Thanks for the feedback

i second that notion...not a wise move ^_^.

Run for the hills>?!

What the hell is the question>?

Bet you looked up that skirt before you finished it dent yah...DIRTY BOY! ^^

If it's a cape someone has took a pair of scissors to it ^_^ i think it's a scarf :P

lol customised.... Nice re-colour job ( ! )

Yet you bump a 10 minute old topic complaining. Leave it!

Oh and get over yourself your's was the first i saw if anything you should feel special.