The Enchanted Cave 2
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At 6/9/07 11:17 AM, TheSnakeSkull wrote: This is getting good you should put Volit0 is one of the next chapters.
oh trust me, i've got a plot twist.
At 6/9/07 11:05 AM, TheSnakeSkull wrote: We must desroy it.
okey dokey
another. this might end in one day...
CHAPTER 5: the fight for the bridge part 2
BAM, WIZZ, VZOOM! bullets were flying everywhere. it would seem that the bridge hadn't been destroyed. and orochimaru and crazer weren't there. but there were hundreds of general soldiers. vortex jumped from behind the peice of concrette he was hiding behind and fired. but before she his somebody, a tank from general, rammed from behind the thrad and fired at him, he jumped back behind the concrete, missing the projectile, by inches. a soldier looked at vortex " what do we do sir?? they've got to much ground! we opened a radio signal with-" WWSSHH vortexes radio went off. he picked it up " hello? this is vortex 00." BOOM! " we are under heavy fire from" he ducked, a bullett flew straight throughe the concrete " we are requsting help! I REPEAT!" he screamed the message into the receiver again before it was shot out of his hand. he poked his head above the barricade and blindfired, hopefully his distress signal had made it through.
somewhere else, crazerfish and orochimarus regiments were walking in the countryside. it was so peacefull. birds singing, the sun shining. none of them could beleive that only a hundred miles away. orochimarus radio went off. he heard the message that vortex00 had sent, and plotted a course to help friends in need.
At 6/9/07 10:43 AM, TheSnakeSkull wrote: Laugh out loud.
no! he can't kill em'.
more sucka! oh, yea, i'm sorry snakeskull
CHAPPTER 4: the fight for the bridge.
Thesnakeskull regiment ran full speed throughe the ctities. general helicopter had caught up with them, and were running full speed. there were 15 men left. the helicopters guns were firing like they were dippendant on it..and they were. orochimaru 556 and crazerfish50 regiment combined, created an army of 700 men, well armed, and had high morale. just then, a general forum caiptan, razzac, jumped from the helicopter, gun blazing, and onto the ladder. the helicopter picked up speed untill razzack was dangling right next to snakeskull. snakeskull tried to pull the gun from him, but razzack hit him square in the head, knocked hi out, and shot his unconsiouse body. he was dead.
His men kept running. running like never before. what happened next, was nothing short of a miracle. vortex00 was ontop of a building, shot the helicopter down. it fell from the skie and with an ear shattering crack, it blew up. there was rubbage, and debree everywhere. vortex ran down from the building to meet the soldiers in distress. they told him the story of what had happened, from the search for orochimaru556, and crazerfish, to the death of snakeskull.
vortex and the men walked along, again on there way to get help. theyre was nothing they could do realy. except walk. walk untill they got there.
At 6/9/07 10:26 AM, El-Duego wrote: i Dont like it to be honest, but thats just my opinion
agh, thats that then. some like it, some don't.
due to possitive feedback, heres chapter 3
CHAPTER 3: in the underground
Tommazza woke up in shakkles ouround his legs and neck. His head was spinning, and his arms felt like they were on fire. he looked down at the floor, and there in front of him, were his arms. he wanted to scream, but his throat was so dry, he could only manage a small 'meap' sound. his detaners walked in. they were silhoutes in the dark room. they slid him a plate of food, and left. the food was horrible to even look at. it was a green color with red toppings sprinkled on it. next to it, was a peice of stale bread. he bent down, stuck his face in it, and digged in.
the general forum soldiers had captured and killed many artists. almost none were left. the snakeskull regiment was running around the map with his battalion of soldiers. he was walking along in the cities that use to be grat threads, but were now, brocken relics. " sir, maybe we should give in to them. they came and destroyed half the forum with one wave. i don't know if we can-" shut up! snakeskull yelled at the soldier. he would never give in. he was a veteran of the army of the art forum. he would never give in. " we will make it. listen men, i have a plan. i connected a radio signal with orochimaru and crazerfish. we will meet up with them at fuzz's art thread. there, are men will join up, and attack the enemy". it sounded good on paper, but the problem was, there was a bridge connecting fuzz's arthread to the forum, but the generals soldiers, had blown it up. they would have to find another way when they got to the bridge. IF they made it to the bridge.
Tomazza was still sitting there. he sat, pittifully. he had lost count of how many hours, days, he'd been in that blasted jail. a sillohette walked into the room. tommazza looked up " why did you attack the art thread?" he asked. he wanted to know. the person just stood there, not blinking, not breathing. just standing. " WHY!" he yelled. " WHY DID YOU KILL THOSE ARTISTS! TELL ME!" he yelled, madder than ever. he was fuming, but the person just stood there. " I'LL KILL YOU! I'LL GET OUT OF HERE AND KILL_" the person jumped up, and knocked him out.
1. Where do you hang your towel to dry after showering?
um..shower rack
2. What kind of mouse pad do you have?
cheifs. its my dads
3. Do you brush your hair with a comb or a brush?
brush
4. In your opinion, who do you think is the hottest celebrity?
m..kiera nightley (don't know if i spelled it right)
5. You have a project due tomorrow, do you use tape or glue?
GLUE SUCKAS!
6. Chicken or pork?
chicken. obviousley.
7. By the time you get to school, is it still dark?
nope. well, sorta.
8. If you had a choice to be a unicorn or mermaid which would it be?
mermaide..heehee
9. What color is your underwear?
usually black, red or green
10. What time does the sun usually set?
bout' six thirty
11. What/who do you think of last before you go to sleep?
the end!
12. AC or fan?
AC
13. Do you wear braces?
nope. i gotted bornded with good teeths.
14. Can you do a hand stand?
a little
15. If you were the opposite sex, how would you style your hair?
short, flat, with spring at the bottom
16. What level English are you in?
...i dunno
17. Jessica Simpson or Alba?
alba. definitley
18. Which subject is worse, English or Math?
math! i hate math!
19. What's one thing you really want to do this very moment?
..............get a hot girl friend with a good attitude
20. What movie are you embarrassed to admit you've watched
X men, the last stand. it was so bad i'm inbarresed.
21. CD player or iPOD?
CD
22. Would you rather spin upside down going 30 miles or drop 400 ft. into water?
400 ft. in water
23. Whats your favorite shape?
sphere
24. What do you have planned for the weekend?
sitting here doing this
25. Have you ever gone ice skating?
nope.
26. If you were put in a room with nothing except for a pencil and paper, what would you do?
draw a naruto comic
27. Is it always easy finding your remote every time you want to watch TV?
..mostly
28. How was your day?
meh
29. Do you grow your nails, bite or cut them?
bite. my nails are short!
30. Describe your handwriting:
meh
31. Do you consider yourself a stalker?
nope.
32. Do you bruise easily?
not at all
33. There`s nothing on TV except Barney and Japanese news what do you do?
japan. i love japan
34. Do you know more then 3 myspace codes?
no myspace for me
35. You got a essay due, you either can type or write in pen, which will it be?
type.
36. Do you wear jeans to relax at home?
nah
37. Describe yourself using three words:
..artistic, imaginitive nerd....
38. Do you use deodorant?
no
39. Do you like ice in your drink?
nope.
i hope this taught you a bit about me.
At 6/9/07 08:04 AM, SenorPresidente wrote: Nice story
thanx =)
.....O.M.G......
hardcore.
At 6/9/07 09:47 AM, Winned wrote: Need to work on spelling, and use capitals. Also, make each chapter a little longer.
okay. did you like it thoughe?
At 6/9/07 09:14 AM, dreaming-loudly wrote: dont get me wrong i like story art , but i dont like how , ya dont include other ppls characters , so its more like , watch what we make , not what u make , only 4 pplz characters are included , rather excluding in my opinion
i know. flameflame controls his, i control mine, and the reason we haven't included the guy with good scetches..well, we'll use him now.
haem.
CHAPTER 2: the middle of the fightin'
in the weeks following weeks after that skrimish, now named 'the crossing' the war between the art forums andd the general forums became a bloody conflict. with the reinforcements of tom fulp being indifferant, and wades army fighting on the side of the general, things looked grim for the art forums.
" so, this is what my BBS has become?" tom said, walking in a dimly lit room. " yes sir. the general forum felt that it could become the ultimatum of the NG BBS. it had beeen making raids on the audio and flash portals all year. no dout recruiting new members." tom looked up from the view screen " why the flash portal? are they trying to turn the entire site into chaos?!" tom was mad at the general forums. althoughe he knew he would never get it back if he joined the art forums. his men were eager to fight, not to mention he would have to take out wade. " who is leading the art forums?" tom asked the general. " we don't know. test-objects main base of operation was attacked. he is probbably dead. tommazza is fighting to restore peace in many forums...and vortex...he has been missing for days" he said grimly."
desser 4:56 P.M
" keep an eye out. general scouts could attack anytime" tommazza said, slowly walking forward with his gun. " theres nothing on my radar sir. it seems its all clear." another soldier said. a soldier looked back at tomazza, " but we should encounter them soon."
this is the bbs story, the great conflict. it's what will prolly happen when general forum invades art forum. this is a true story. cuz it's gonna happen soon. real newgrounds users are in this. if you're not in it. PM me.
CHAPTER 1: a normal day at art.
it was a normal day on the art forum. most old threads being renewed over and over and over again, with the ocasional spinnoff. minimal flamewar skrimishes were dotted across the map. killer cake was sitting there at his post, looking for intruders to the art forum, when he saw something reach up from the horizon of the great dessert. " what in the world?" he said and got up.
he put his binouculars to his eyes, what he saw, would change the face of the bbs, forever. an entire army of general forum henchman were making there way across the great dessert. killercake didn't know what do do. he called upon a genaral of his post, vortex00. He stared at the many men coming. there were were too many. so many. as some know, art forum has never had as many men as general. but they were good, persistant men. hegathered all those in his regimant. and fought one of the greatest skrimishes ever fought. and it was just the beggining.
britney spears race sux.
okay. he lost his arm. jpmz, if you wanna be in the story thoughe, post a bit more often. K.
were sorry jpmz. the reason i didn't include you in my pictures is i made them before you posted. okey doke, you're a member of story art.
dude, its one thing to steal art, but to steal it, and put it into the same type of crap it was in?
please die.
At 6/8/07 07:45 PM, Dr34m3r wrote:At 6/8/07 07:44 PM, crazerfish50 wrote: i whant to kill all those who oppose the nation of crazerfishania!Where's that?
next to norway.
how can you say such horrible things to such a pretty face?
...what were you doing watching it young man?
no more bashing naruto!
it is the source of my power!
if you do, i will eat you're soul!
i whant to kill all those who oppose the nation of crazerfishania!
who said it wasn't cool?
>>>>>:(
okey doke. then. creepy.
anyway, back too real. snakeskull, i can't post tonight. scanner aint working.
At 6/8/07 05:21 PM, katfleas wrote: how do you delete a picture?
you have to be a mod.
no. naruto is awesome. who cares if he's loud. he makes big booms.
i hope you choke on cake.