this is so bad it approaches good from the other side, bolts past it and into "complete and utter shit", even if you were to be a troll, you're a really bad troll.

the raven and the warrior look ok, for sketches. The inbetween stages look like crap.

Repetitive, there's more to abstract than this. I'm not even sure this IS abstract.

this is really bugging me, the road should have straghter edges and be wider at the bottom.

At 9/15/09 12:12 PM, EchoRun wrote:

At 9/15/09 10:52 AM, CosmicDebris wrote: your anatomy and shading also need work, anatomy more so.

Um so going by a couple of pencil study dragons, a serpent with arms, a trio of dragon cartoons and a fractal, you say my anatomy needs work? It's not that I mind the criticism per say, it's just I could understand more if I had posted a humanoid - but these are dragons and a serpent! If you had mentioned a couple of the images on my gallery I could understand better - I have a 6 year old fairy and a 5 year old demon up there, both with anatomy issues.

Shading, yeah, I'll agree with that, many of my images, older ones particularly, need work with their shading.

Guys, if you want to give criticism, no more one sentence comments, please gave examples and suggestions!

I just thought the arms were no at all very well drawn, nor the heads they're just unnatural, even for fairytale creatures.
The proprtions are not quite right, and perhaps you have just some small issues with perspective.

At 9/19/09 12:00 PM, Godliest wrote:

At 9/19/09 11:18 AM, CosmicDebris wrote: oh wow, that's truly terrible.

But not even close to as terrible as your comment.

and yet you agree?

I like the style, and the texture and shading was good, you have some problems with anatomy, mainly in the first picture, the heads are too oblong, and seem flat.

oh wow, that's truly terrible.

At 9/19/09 08:11 AM, ashman112 wrote: only tips
spend some time on your work instead of doing random doodles, you wont get anywhere with them
improve in anatomy and perspective, even cartoons have them
add more detail and shading
if you improve on these youll do good it has promise but you just act like a 3 year old and thats what lets you down

im tryin to help so dont spam everyone

I disagree, I find that doodling improves ones skill tremendously.
the anatomy is not all that bad, believe me I've seen FAR worse.

your anatomy and shading also need work, anatomy more so.

ALthough you've definitely improved, your anatomy still needs some work.

I can't say I like what I see.

it's ok, simple is good, the line of her face round the left eye is a bit off thoug. the cheekbone is right under the eye, and then the face should go in a bit at the eyes

it's the front window, the it's too much to the right

I hate that thing you do with the sleeves, srsly, it looks horrible.

proportions, work on them

anatomy's a little off, also, revolvers don't look like that.

Oh, GOD!

you're 15 and you can't come up with anything better?
This is CRAP!!!

At 8/9/09 03:38 PM, Fleshlight wrote: JPG. You can only submit jpegs and gifs, but gifs aren't as good when you have a static image.
Please read the rules before posting in this forum again

you CAN submit pngs to the art portal, retard

anatomy?
I see none

At 8/8/09 02:14 PM, Jarvid wrote: 4 COLORS AND 2 MINUTES IN MS PAINT THATS COOL!!!!!!!!!1111 For realz fawg.

well, it's well over average for newgrounds

meh, they're ok, boring.

lolIamsofunnyja?

laugh

At 7/15/09 12:37 AM, Revtarget wrote: 1. You assume I spent more than 15 minutes on the sketch.
2. I already said it wasn't good I was just praticing the shading.
3. No constructive comment at all?
4. Like I said it was all in flash and with my mouse, not a scan, not a tablet, A MOUSE, it was purely for shading purposes...

well the shading pretty much sucks too, and using a mouse is no excuse.

At 7/14/09 06:38 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote: May I present to you... the OCTOCOCK.
With 8 slippery penis limbs and a ball-sack head.

I wouldn't want to be around when it gets excited

Cocktopussy would of been better

Hai guise!!!

Here you go.

At 7/10/09 08:29 PM, LynchedJohNNY wrote: I would not hit any of them. I have more respect for people who knew enough to even get the damn job. It's like all you punks mock people smarter than you just like picking on the smart kids in high school.

Get a life losers.

Oh yes, haha! Cuz Bush was a fucking genious right?

I really feel this isn't the kind of stuf you should post on the internet.