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The First Chapter of My Story. Hope you enjoy.

The air in the night sky was cold and haunting. The people of the nearby village all flocked to the tavern to get some warmth and company for the long cold night ahead. Inside the atmosphere was one of laughter and cheer, a child was born within the village and each person celebrated the arrival with drink and company. The tavern was small holding no more than twenty people in one sitting. Tables were worn and used with some totally unusable. In the far corner away from the crowd cheering for the new-born sat a hooded man wrapped in seal skin. On his table was a large mug full of the local drink 'farklemuck' it was a horrible mix of grapes and potatoes but one of the few things that could be turned into drink for the villagers. The hooded figure just sat and watched the smiles on the men and women all night. A place of cheer was a good place to be thought the hooded man. A young woman, no more than twenty years of age. Walked nervously towards the strange seal clothed man. Her clothes were that of old rags and cloth nothing as thick or secure as seal.

Her voice fair and gentle. âEUoeExcuse me sir, would you like a refill?âEU

He leaned forward from the chair exposing his face from the shadow of the hood, His skin was ghost white and his eyes a glowing purple. His voice low and thick with an accent witch the girl had never heard. âEUoeNo thank you lass, I am happy enough with this.âEU

She gave a gentle smile back to the stranger before asking more questions. âEUoeIf I may ask, what be your name?âEU

A smirk crossed the ghost face of the man and he replied in the same low voice âEUoeMy name is Espex, How about you?âEU

âEUoeMines is Samth good sirâEU

The smile still on his face he continued to talk more. âEUoeAh Samth is it? Such a nice name. What brings a fine young lady from a party to talk to a hooded figure in the corner?âEU

Samth was taken back; her face turned a scarlet red it took her a moment to build up the courage to respond to such a bold question. âEUoeI find you curious, we donâEUTMt get visitors here often the clothes you wear are of a strange fashion and material I have never seen.âEU

Seeing that the girlâEUTMs eyes were on the brown and Grey clothes he wore he rubbed them a little before replying to the shy girls questions. âEUoeThis I wear is called seal hid. It is a creature that lives in the water but has the face of a dog. As to why I am here is because I am on a great journey to find someone very important.âEU Samth's blue eyes had shown bright by the response of this mysterious man. âEUoeI see it may take a while to kick in. I am from a Tribe many days travel north off here. The weather there is harsh and bitter, it gets so cold that the rain turns to ice and lays the ground white. It is a sight to behold and one I hope one day I shall see again.âEU

Samth stood in wonder to Espex story. She was playing with her long unkempt blonde hair. Shouting started coming from the bar asking for Samth and she bowed to Espex then left a little more open minded to the world. Espex sat back hiding his face once more in the shadow of the hood and continued to watch the people drink themselves into oblivion once more. Hours passed and he nursed the same drink never getting another and never eating just watching the people slowly reduce in number. It came near dawn and a few people still dancing and singing intoxicated out of their minds with farklemuck. Even with a whole night Espex still found it a vile substance to intake. Samth this girl approached Espex once again this time a lot more drowsy and white in the face, too much dancing and singing. Her large blue eyes now dopey just stared at him and his shadowed face. âEUoeYou can stay and sleep here today, just buys another drink and my father wonâEUTMt mind.âEU

Pulling out a hand filled with copper coins Espex splashed them onto the table. âEUoeThank you young lady. I shall like some bread and some water.âEU

She looked down at the coins on the table with widened eyes and a lowered jaw. âEUoeSir that is far too much for what you ask for!âEU

âEUoeCall it a tip for keeping me entertained this long night.âEU She bowed and scooped up the money before disappearing into another room in the tavern. He sat waiting for the girl to return and he watched the last of the party people leave to find their beds. A good ten minutes passed before she returned with a loaf of bread and a large pouch of water. He stood up to meet her and take the water and bread from her frail skinny arms.

âEUoeYou have done enough please go to your bed. I thank you for your company but I must leave now as I have drawn too much attention here.âEU

Her face was tired but saddened she liked the exotic man. She was also confused what attention had he bring to her small desolate village. Then she heard outside the stomping of foots and the trot of horses.

A voice loud and familiar to all boomed. âEUoeCome out! Come out Demon Walker! We know you are here! I command you to show yourself!âEU

âEUoeThatâEUTMs Lord Bore,âEU The girl explained. Bore as a fat man who had a horrible attitude to all. He owned the land as far as the eye could see and was appointed the Lord of South Sound by The King himself. Espex grabbed the girl and dragged her to the floor with him before he whispered into her small blonde covered ear. âEUoeStay here and donâEUTMt move, Also you never saw me and we never talked.âEU

The girl could not believe what she was hearing but listened none the less. She watched as he got up from the dusty old floor. He stood large from her view and she noticed he was carrying a small dagger on his left side. It was en-scribed with letters and symbols she had never seen. Espex turned to the girl and took his hood off to reveal his long scruffy hair. It was a bright purple and his eyes shown more. He put his seal gloved hands to his mouth and simple hushed to her. His other hand started to glow and the area around him almost floated and the air around them was almost gone. Dust gathered around his feet like a small twister and went up and up to his hands forming a small twirling ball of wind and dust. Samth couldnâEUTMt believe her eyes a user of the way of magic in her village. She always thought they were a myth or a bed time fairy tale but one stood forming magic in front of her eyes. The ball formed in his hand Espex burst forth into the door and outside. Samth could here men scream and a loud bang that felt like it happened in her head. She couldnâEUTMt stay on the ground this was a once in a life time event she needed to see. She pushed herself up the floor with the small thin arms of hers and ran to the door. She got a view of the outside and had missed all the action. A large hole in the ground and bodies of the Lords servants lay on the ground moaning and groaning. Some trying to get up but the chain-mail weighted them down. Swords and shields littered the ground and in the distance a large brown horse ran with a fat circle that was Lord Bore. In the other direction waking slowly was Espex. He pulled his hood up once again hiding his purple hair and face. Samth was saddened and joyful at the same time. Then by chance he turned and looked at her.

âEUoeWant to come with me?âEU

An invite the young woman could not refuse.

Immediately a Heth punched at the masked man's face, not even trying to dodge or flinch the man stood there calm and cool. The Heths fist went right through him and connected with the wall behind his opponent. The other Heth watching all tilted their heads to the side ever so slightly. A ring went off and the man touched his left ear.

A voice screamed "Deox what's the situation? Report!"

Deox sighed and replied "I was too late to save the man but he put up one hell of a fight. Sorry Voice that's all I have for ya."

All the while during the conversation the Heth were trying to punch, stab and grasp Deox all with the same result nothing they went right through him. The Voice disconnected from the call and let Deox back to the fight. Deox threw a punch at the first Heth he saw his hand went into its head when he pulled back he was holding what can only be described as gunge. The Heth he punched hit the ground like a ton of bricks. A Heth behind him and in front of him both tried to punch his face and instead of hitting him he ducked and they smashed each other in the face. A large crunch followed and both hit the ground killing each other. The only Heth left was the one that killed Barry it went for a slash with the blade. The air rippled and distorted and Deox was sucked into a small hole in the blink of an eye. The blade smashed into the ground only swiping air, behind the Heth the same happened and the air distorted and Deox came out of a small hole insantly putting his hand through its head.
Inside the cupboard Barry's wife was shaking as outside she could hear the Heth looking for her they were destroying the room and house for her. She didn't know what to do she had thought about running for it but she put that out her mind when she heard one enter the room. She hoped they were dumb and didn't think to look inside the cupboard but she knew she was lying to herself. The air in the room suddenly got very cold fast even for Barry's wife and she wondered why was it one of the Heths tricks, what she heard next gave her great happiness.
Deox was in a small room maybe about the size of a prison cell, he was standing on a double bed a door in front of him a window to his left a walk in cupboard to his right and a Heth less than a arms distant in front of him. Deox booted the Heth in the head knocking it to the floor and before it could get up he stomped on its head getting black goo on his red trainers.

"Ewww Heth brains, now I better find a survivor."

Deox looked around he walked towards the cupboard and listened for movement he knew it wasn't a Heth their not that smart enough to hide.

Deox put his head to the cupboard and whispered
"Hello anyone in there its half safe, kind of out here."

A shaken woman's voice came out in response "How do I know you aren't one of them tricking me?"

Deox replied "Because you would be dead by now if I was a Heth."

Before the woman could reply Deox starting talking "Don't get out of there it still isn't safe wait until T.H.R.U is here."

A quite ok came out of the cupboard and Deox took his face away from the cupboard and walked towards the bedroom door. In the hallway there was a Heth to the right and left of Deox, the Heth to the right of Deox tried to smash his face with its right fist but went right through him and got its fist stuck in the wall. The other Heth morphed its hands into hammers and swung them towards Deox's chest. Deox disappeared again and reappeared behind the hammer Heth. The other Heth unlodged its hand and turned to face the hammer Heth and Deox it swung again this time punching through the hammer Heth to get to Deox. Black Heth blood splattered into Deox's eye and blinded him; he didn't have enough time to dodge the Heths punch. The punch connected perfectly cracking Deox's mask and knocking him through the door at the end of the corridor into the spare bedroom. The Heth began to move to the area he had just launched Deox morphing its hands into a blades.
Luckily for Deox he landed on a bed, he groaned a little rubbing his eye before getting up to see the Heth at the door. His cracked mask crumbled to bits leaving his face exposed, his left eye was heavily scared so was all his left side of the face his bright red hair drooped down a little to hide some of the scars. The Heth burst towards Deox going right through him landing on the bed face first. Deox disappeared and reappeared a couple of feet above the bed and dropped slamming into its head splattering black goo all over the white sheets.
Deox looked down at his black and red trainers then moved his attention to the window. Outside was a scene of complete panic people in the street fighting the Heth and people getting killed by the Heth. Deox clicked on the phone in his ear.

"Hello Voice, We have a problem this entire village is compromised get T.H.R.U to wipe it clean."

"Ok Deox get out of there and go to your apprentice. Voice out."

Deox clicked the phone off and went back to the bedroom with the woman.

"You can come out now it's safe,"

The woman came out slowly shaking eye's looking everywhere. Deox went to help her then stopped and sighed in disappointment. The woman looked at her hands. They were pitch black before she had time to look back at Deox, he was next to her. The last thing she remember seeing is her face rapidly nearing a wall. The Blood splattered everywhere, Deox face was one of smile was now a frown, he took her face out of the wall and carried her body over to the bed and let her lay there a final resting place.

"At least you died a human not a Heth am sorry."

Deox disappeared once again. In his wake he left two dead civilians, seven dead Heth, and a destroyed house and he still had a whole village to save.

First Sorry its kinda longish so its broken into 2 parts please leave feedback and enjoy

THE HETH

The sky is cloudy and gray full of clouds ready to unleash a blizzard of snow on anything below them. The ground is smothered in a blanket of snow and odd footprints of village people. A couple are taking in there washing chatting away at each other discussing the weather and what they are going to do for the rest of the evening. One of the couple turns to look up to the sky and sees a floating black mass coming towards them. Immediately he turns to his wife and screams and points towards the house, she drops everything she is holding and sprints towards the door not turning back to look once. The black floating mass begins to drop smaller masses to the ground about the size of people. The man watching this is beginning to sweat rapidly looks towards his open back door lunges towards it and shouts in

"Call for T.H.R.U. hurry ill hold them off as much as I can!"

The woman in the small dark sitting room frantically roams the room looking for the phone in her panic she has lost all sense. In the corner of her eye she spots it on the window ledge she grasps it like she's possessed and dials in the number. She roams the room frantic waiting for a response. After a minute of hell a voice on the phone asks what the trouble is.

"There here we need help!"

Outside the man is watching the growing number of black masses hitting the ground and running towards his home. The sweat is pouring down his face and he is shaking franticly clenching his fist knowing what is coming to get him. All that is going through his mind is how they're going to kill him and his wife. He can see them clearly now he had only ever seen them on television but in real life the featureless creatures looked more disturbing, they were pitch black head to toe and their eyes were white and empty void of any life.
"God dam Heth why do they have to attack here? Now or never Barry c'mon man you can do it"
Barry lifts both hands so they are perfectly in front of him, his vain's around his hands turn bright red and spread closer to his finger tips giving a bright glow he lowers his hands into a neutral fighting stance and ready's himself. The Heth are now Jumping over his garden fence and lunging themselves at Barry. One Heth go's face on into Barry's glowing fist, an explosion follows, Barry doesn't move back or falter in anyway but the Heth he hit is blown meters away and is missing its head. The other Heth doesn't even look back at their dead comrade they continue forward with no sense of fear. Another Heth coming from his right side swipes for his face Barry ducks and follows with a counter and upper cuts the Heth, same as last time and explosion follows and the Heth goes flying into the air.
Inside the house Barry's wife is in the bedroom hiding inside the walk in cupboard. She is crying but forcing herself to stop by pinching her arm. Outside she can hear the explosions of her husband's fight she hates herself for not helping but what could she do, she wished she had an offensive ability but all she could do was hover a little not very useful in a fight. She was going through different scenarios of how she will live or die.

Barry's hands were back to normal and he was out of breath and panting ferociously. Heth bodies were littered around his garden he had managed to get about seven of them but there were closing in now. The Heth in front of him pointed its hand towards Barry and morphed it into a crude blade. Barry knew this was the end of him but he had to keep fighting to save his wife, he lunged forward cracking the bladed Heth in the face. It stumbled back a little but Barry didn't waste time he followed up with a barrage of punches towards the Heth but he got gripped by the Heth around him and they pinned him to the ground with ease. The bladed Heth looked down at Barry with its cold eyes and gorged its blade into his throat. He couldn't even scream.

At the corner of the garden the air rippled and distorted. In the middle of this anomaly a small circle appeared about the size of an eye and vastly became bigger fast. From where there was nothing a masked man stood, his mask covered most his face but his right eye, He had bright red hair and he wore a long black overcoat buttoned up all the way also he had dark blue jeans on with red trainers. The Heth continued on ignoring him apart from a few that stayed and watched him. The masked man looked at the scene poor Barry had left behind. He looked up at the Heth waved like he was greeting friends

"Hello ladies I see you have been naughty that's bad, am going to have to punish you."

Its seven o'clock in the morning and the alarm clock is ringing. A hand comes crashing down on the snooze button on the alarm followed by a grunt. A figure rises from the black covers and grunts some more then proceeds to slowly slide of the bed. With a large thump the figure lands on the floor now in full view. The boy gets up scans the room for clothes and grasps the nearest clean looking ones from the floor. It takes the boy about one minute to get fully clothed and ready to move onward. He leaves his small prison sized room to enter the hallway, he starts to walk towards the furthest door at the end of the hallway all the while trying to dodge toys scattered around the blue carpet.
The boy enters the room to be greeted by a table full of food, a man in his forties with a shiny bald head and a brown goatee, wearing a striped blue and green shirt with blue jeans. A little girl around 6 years old with blond pony tail and wearing a white summer dress playing with a doll. At the corner a short woman with red curly hair wearing a purple shirt and blue jeans under her red apron by the cooker making some eggs.
"Morning ginge. I am amazed that you got out your hole." Barked the man as soon as he saw the boy
"Oi how many times have I said it now stop calling me that and use my name it's not that hard ere ill say it for you DEOX!" snapped back Deox
The woman at the cooker turned around with a face of fury "hey quite you two it's too early to have a argument you should know what he is like in the morning James." Deox and James both put their heads down but kept eye contact with cheeky smirks on their faces. She then pointed towards the table with a frying pan in hand "Sit down Deox next to Shaz"
"Yes listen to Shell, be a good mommy's boy." Just as James finished speaking a hand cracked the back of his head
"Enough of that! You sit there and be quite!"
Everyone did as Shelly said and without a noise Deox sat next to his ten year old little sister who was making copies of the doll she had in her hand.
Deox watched his sister copy her doll ten times before speaking "Does she have to use her ability all the time am sick of tripping over the crap."
Shelly placed some eggs on Deox plate and replied "You were the same at that age always using your abilities such a hand full."
"Least all I did was destroy stuff and screw up a few people's minds I didn't trip everyone up with crappy dolls"
"Shusup Deox my powers rule woos." Shaz said while making another copy of her doll
Deox changed his view from his little sister to James "could you at least burn them James because it is beginning to annoy me."
"No can do ginge no burning rule as of yesterday because I accidently burned the cat" James laughed after replying
Shelly sat down to her breakfast and turned to Deox "is that what your wearing abit scruffy isn't it am sick of you always wearing black tops with no design and black jeans don't you have any style"
Immediately James jumped in "Yea you scruffy tramp. Doesn't suit someone with such pale skin you look like death warmed up"
Deox pointed his hand towards James clinched his fist and then released it as if he were letting something he was holding go. All the breakfast that was on the table went flying in the direction Deox was pointing with James towards the other side of the room. Immediately Shelly got up and screamed
"What are you playing at? Stop this at once!!!"
Deox with a face of annoyance lowered his hand and James and the food were dropped from the flight towards the wall. Deox turned around to his mother "relax it was only an illusion."
As if nothing happened the room got sucked into Deox shining purple left eye and everyone was sitting at the table again like they had before the fight.
"I got you good James no match for me as I am a god." Deox said while flexing

thanks for the feedback a real help i felt the same about the beginning that it was the middle of a noval rather than the beginning. am glad you still likeit even with a few minor set backs i wil keep uploade#ing more =)

As Ammon is fighting the Heth on the hill a lone man suddenly appears on top. He is wearing a trench coat much like Ammons but with a few differences, his has red lined on his sleeves and has a badge with a number on it. Ammon seeing him stops fighting and the Heth retreat to the top of the hill where the man is standing.
Ammon mutters "Rimmon..."
In better view of the man, he is about 6foot has black hair and his eyes are tired and blood shot with his skin being a light orange.
"Ahh its you again Ammon your beginning to be a thorn in our plan , you know."
"Whats one of the twelve seats doing here! Answer me Rimmon!"
"now now calm down." just after rimmons sentence he appears in front of Ammon in a eye blink "am not here to fight am here to offer you something."
Ammon not even flinching replies "What is this offer then?"
"Good it seems you have a little in the way of manners, very well am here to offer you a partnership, Join us Ammon. You are one of the very few extremely powerful fighters in the army , so much infact that you have your own name be it a little cheesy for my liking 'Ammon the hidden one' i mean blah"
"Here was me thinking you were going to offer a truce. shame."
Rimmons smug grin turned into a fowl scowl "Sarcasms is the lowest form of wit you know,"
"Really! Anyway I always thought there was only meant to be twelve seats if I did accept wouldn't there be thirteen or would I have to kill one of you, If I accept doI get to kill you Rimmon?"
"Very funny you are on the right lines Ammon but not me as you see from my badge number am number six, you would fight with number twelve our weakest member, and that's only if you want to join of course."
"What if i say no?"
"Easy everyone here dies same for you."
"Dam you put up a good argument, hmmm join you guys or die, join you guys or die. well am going to have to go for option number three."
With a smirk on Rimmons face replies "and that's?"
"oh didn't i say silly me. I kill you kill the remaining Heth and then kill your boss."
Rimmon bursts into laughter "you are a funny one I like you as a reward I will show you something cool"
Rimmon Disappears from sight then reappears on top of the hill. He does not reappear alone he comes back with a giant Heth about twenty to twenty-five foot high.
"I Call this big guy 'Daddy Heth' I made him with hundreds of Baby Heth"

Pretty nice short story liek how it ends nice twist maybe a little too short but its good didnt see any spelling mistakes but then again i can barely spell lol keep up the work

God i love this i love the way it starts of all weird and that the character slowly turns insane did feel it kinda went dantes inferno fast from limbo to middle of hell lol but it kept me reading cant wait for part 2

This is half of chapter one i wanted feedback if it was going fast enough and was keeping attention please leave feedback thanks.

On a planet called Earth not to different from the one that your on, well there is one difference everyone has super powers. From space you would never know, it all looks peaceful and happy but the reality is that on this planet there is a war. The world is at war with a Organization called TEO (The Exiled Ones). Right now a great battle is happening in a county called Scotland and that's is where this story begins.

A man in a green and muddy army uniform pointing towards a hills screams "Here comes another Wave of Heth!"
screaming and shouting more than 20 samely dressed men charge towards the hill all throwing flames,ice,earth and ripples of air from there bodies towards hundreds of black faceless men. Boom the first volley of attacks hit the faceless men, the ones hit just explode and vaporize. The Heth do not even move they just watch as the soldiers run towards them screaming and throwing more powers at them.
"Tell your men to fall back cant you see its a trap General." Instructed the voice behind the general.
The general spun round to look at a man who was around five foot ten. He had bright red hair and his face was covered with a mask which had only had one right eye hole there was no left one. His huge black trench coat covered him from neck to shoes and with his hands in his pockets he was just this floating tench coat and head.
"WHAT! YOU! what are you doing here?"
The masked man walking past the general looking towards the chaos at the hill simple replied " I was send here by headquarters to check the area good thing too the Heth have never been one's for plans yet, the last 4 battles I have been in they had a plan. This worries me looks like their leader is making moves and we don't know what it is." he turns to look at the general "this worries me. Oh and yes didn't I say pull your men back I will deal with this."
The general in a sweat looks down and stutters "Y Y Yes Sir!"

As the general starts screaming into his walkie talkie the masked man starts walking calmly towards the hill were the battle still continues. He continues to walk untill he is at the bottom of the hill and all the men are running back swishing past him. The masked man turns to look at where he has come from and shouts "Are all your men back?"
a shout replays "Yes"
The masked man turns back towards the hill and notices the army of Heth are slowly walking towards him. There is no sense of panic or urgency when he pulls out his right hand from his coat he does it calmly and abit lazily and points towards the heth open palmed.
BOOM a huge explosion in the middle of the Heth army. Dusk everywhere and black bits and pieces go flying past the masked man. It takes a few seconds but the dust settles and in its place is a huge crater where the Heth used to be.Some Heth are still standing others are getting up but only about a handfull are left.
"Dam i was hoping that would waste them all and i cant do it again looks like am doing this the long way. Dammit!"
He pulls out his other hand and like a bullet shoots towards them. The Heth notice him and for the first time in the battle get ready, they all morph their black hands into black weapons swords, hammers and scythes all ready to kill him.

"General who is that masked man?"
"Dont you know? Thats Ammon the hidden one."
"What the real Ammon the Ammon who took down a entire Heth Headquarters by himself, Ammon the war hero!"
"The very one son today we witness a monster at work."

Hope you enjoy this short story.

It's weird I know it's there and it knows I know it's there. I am in my room under my covers with a small gap in the covers so I can see what it's doing. It's just sittings there watching not moving not blinking just watching. Am trying to control my breathing hoping that it may go away. No such Luck. The thing is starting to move closer to me. Its pale skinny white legs are scraping as they move, I can here its bones crack. Am starting to smell it, smells like rust, oil and blood. Its claw hands are covered in red dripping on my carpet. Its slowly moves its head towards the crack in my duvet shell. His eyes are like midnight. As he reaches closer he whispers something to me.
"Time to play."

I loved it start to finish liked the ending even tho there was no meaning for the devil to be there you made some in a weird way keep up the work

mine did the same thing it was horrible i had to phone sony and they gave me a new one a week later but i was still gutted that it would not play games

that is a very cool picture dude would love to see some more of the stuff to see if it is ur best or ur lucky picture lol

At 6/4/08 08:49 PM, jairovarela wrote: again, i was at math class, theres no much creativity there, is it???
anyway, i didnt colour because I just suck at coloring, I preffer black and white.

same for me i never colour it takes too much time and the drawings i do i dont really have colours to put to them but lets se some more work for ya

there pretty good to bad no colour that would make hem alot better keep up the work try somethin else to like ur own art work rather than a copy

i am scottish and stuff and everyone goes on about how they won over us well its not really a big deal our country sucks at sports and alot of us have dealt with that but please dont let me stop you go ahead

your stuff rocks i would love to draw like you keep up the work

i like them they are really god keep it up good luck doing all 100

here is another pic please rate

yea i like it nice timing with the bee and everything

here is a dude i drawed

i like your stuff its great original i think keep up the work

i like your new one its gooood i wish i could make the image look more 3d i cant do that yet but keep up the work

i did thisone to show i sont just do the monster pictures ( but i prefer doing them )

i like this one i call it cloaked angel

At 10/15/07 11:32 AM, mario-dude wrote: i really like your art but...

its a bit obscure dont you think?

yea i did them on paper and scanned them but i will edit them now if people are saying its hard to see

heres a old picture but i like it

can anyone make me a sig please i dont care what is in it all i want in it is my username con782 please pm me if u want to do it or have done it

dude look at my hand to pratise doing good hands draw your own on paper like in primary and try and draw it again not with hand thats what helped me got to admit hands are hard to draw but there easy when you get the hang of them

At 10/15/07 09:28 AM, SkySausage wrote: wow thats some nice art. perhaps make the tentacles hanging down a little bit more perpendicular to the ground so it really looks like its hanging. just a suggestion. keep up the terrific work.

thanks i will do that next time