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guns you're lightening is awesome, i love the horns on that lizard!

Harrah that looks awesome

Say something meaningful? Turkey said pretty much the same thing is me and others have said kid.

art needs work writing needs work text needs fixed

And once again you're a newbie here, if you want anyone to take you seriously don't go about insulting people who have been here much longer than you have

It isn't pointless and useless advice. You need to work on the art for the comic it just isn't that good, and text has way to much of a presence, and the writing isn't all too funny to make up for the large amount of text.

Stop getting all pissy and angry because your comic isn't good, we told you what needs to be fixed, stop being a baby about it and start improving the comic.

At 5/2/09 03:23 PM, julesville wrote: You people need to understand what criticism is. You assume because I ask for your opinion you can say anything you want, and think it's my fault I'm upset by it because I can't take it. But criticism is not opinion, it's impartial judgement. It's using fair and impersonal reasoning to rate something.

You claim I can't take your criticism. You've never once been a critic, you've only insulted me and my work based on your own shallow opinions of what's good. I have a right to defend myself, especialy when people are being unfair. All I want is a fair review, not inflammatory remarks about how it's all worthless because it doesn't appeal to you personaly.

I'm pretty sure i did give you some criticism, but i'll make it a little more clear. There's nothing special about the art style, it looks like it was mostly made using the line tool and paint bucket, and there's entirely too much text and not enough humor, and the font isn't pleasing at all.

And it's impossible to impartially critique someone, everyone has their own opinion of what they like and dislike, and how they think certain things should be. Your opinion will always be a factor in a critique, that's largely what a critique is, asking someone's opinion about your piece and what they THINK you can do to improve it.

You're a newbie here buddy, don't come into the forum and tell us what a critique is, just because we're telling you that your webcomic looks like poo doesn't mean we don't know what we're talking about

At 5/2/09 02:22 PM, julesville wrote: You are just a troll. Admit it. You don't know how to give criticism.

And you have a shitty webcomic and can't take criticism. Admit It.

Yo Johnny where are her nips? Her breasts look a little empty, i'd do something on them.

And Maximus, using a premade brush is the same thing as copy and pasting an image from the internet. It's an image that you did not make yourself and all you did was change the color of it and spam it all over the page.

Hey JKA, as long as i'm not a lazy bitch you'll get my entry on monday or tuesday.

No need for the hostility there buddy, but you did not draw those yourself. There's no way in hell you can convince anyone that, don't lie about it you'll only make a spectacle of yourself, they're obviously taken off the internet or you went through the trouble to scan them yourself.

Bottom line you didn't draw those.

you could always mail it to me, i'll take care of it for you ;)

At 5/1/09 10:30 PM, BlackmarketKraig wrote:

At 5/1/09 10:10 PM, Captain-Ben wrote:
Luis just likes to leave me out of things that's all :-P

Who wouldn't?

Your mom for one!

Your dad for two...

I fucking hate you.

At 5/1/09 09:03 PM, ReNaeNae wrote:

At 5/1/09 08:58 PM, Captain-Ben wrote: What are you talking about Luis? Everyone knows you have no life.

...and you wonder why he didn't let you in!! :P

Luis just likes to leave me out of things that's all :-P

lol for some reasons i think that's mindfuckingly cute Nuttro

What are you talking about Luis? Everyone knows you have no life.

Woah Johnny, feel like i haven't seen you forever. Your linework is getting tight, you should start thinking about jumping to the next step and start coloring :-P

Maximus, you spammed images that you probably got off of google all over the page. That's not considered art in these parts.

ew, why is there so much text?

The Queen has no pupils

I see what you did there!

Lets make things clear, as Renaenae and JKA already have said, you're not allowed just to post a link to your work, you're allowed to link to a higher quality version of your picture, but you MUST post a picture along with the link or else your post may be deleted and you won't make it into the colab.

Follow the rules children!

that means you MX2000 and Blazer133!

I'm not at all a fan of anime, but you seem to have a decent grasp of the style, and i do like your use of lines. There's always of good sense of motion, but the line work needs to be cleaned up a little more. I know they're just sketches, but part of the anime style is clean linework, and i think your style would greatly benefit from some good clean, bold lines to really help make them pop. Play with curves and thicknesses, i think it will help.

Not completely sure what your asking me Flea, but it's just how I taught myself to draw. I'm trying to get better at more traditional observational work, it's just difficult for me to do so without getting distracted and doing my own thing XD

Thanks Lundsy! I was just talking to Nae about how i haven't seen you around in a while.

why not Sphincter?

towards monkey, forgot to mention that you also might want to add in a light tone, not to bright you don't want him to look shiny, but some parts of his skin will be lighter than others, and it will help make your darks look darker

At 4/27/09 09:29 PM, reality-monkey wrote: I just want some criticism, things I may be overlooking, anatomy off that I might be missing, things in a nutshell I'm not paying much attention to, but a few things first. I will polish it later, I will add hair later, I will do the background later, I will make the face better later, and I will do the spear later. Right now just focus on the guy (but if you have suggestions that could benefit me later on in the process, they wouldn't be overlooked, they would be appreciated). Thanks.

Also, ReNaeNae is a hell of a good mod...Fast anyway...

Man RM that is sick, since it's still rough i won't be to nit picky, but the shading in this fingers on the hand closest to us could be a little stronger, to make the foreshortening in his fingers a little more obvious. Also something seems off about his chest/neck area, i want to say his neck is a bit too thick but i really can't put my finger on it, i think it's that the bottom of the neck needs to curve inwards not outwords. Also like you said he's a naked guy, so give him some manhood!

Don't be shy

Last one, just a drawing of my hand. Once again i got bored towards the end and took a few liberties.

Quick observational drawing, it's the back of a skeletons foot.

Thanks sven!

And now for some crappy still lifes! I'm sill trying to get better at drawing from observation, but unfortunately i have a short attention span and get easily distracted, i pretty much made up the bag XD