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Hey your song is good but personally, I think you should lose this line:
"A rose by any other name just wouldn't smell as sweet,"
I know that your trying to include some shalespeare in here but it doesnt go trying adding something similar or at least around that idea :)
Like :
"A rose by any other name would mean that I wont have be alone
A rose by any other name means I can call you my own"

Hope thats helpful!

Tasmin

I would take them on a mental bender by asking them if it would satisfy the thoughts finally destroying whats left of themselves proving that they have lost the battle becoming their thoughts bitch drawing orders whenever they please :) not forgetting to smile before they shoot me haha

Would you prefer to be friends with a Goth or an Emo? If you had to choose;like a life-death situation.

I think Emos cos they're cool and plus some dnt cut themselves os that's a bonus really.

Hi im not fully emo, but I really dnt mind them. I know some emos and their not SUICIDAL like people say they are so, people shuld stop whining!