The Enchanted Cave 2
Delve into a strange cave with a seemingly endless supply of treasure, strategically choos
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COMPLETE edition of the interactive "choose next panel" comic
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Response to: Requesting Critique
Posted January 2nd, 2013 in Art
"However, I would recommend a reflection either being more generic or using a foreground element or even something out of view of our perspective."
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I like that idea of seeing something else in the sword that we cannot. I might play with that some more. Thanks!
Response to: Requesting Critique
Posted January 2nd, 2013 in Art
Okay, so give the man some more manliness, got it. Thanks!
Response to: Requesting Critique
Posted January 2nd, 2013 in Art
At 1/2/13 04:26 AM, Pirakaboss wrote: The choice of color used is pleasing to the eye. One of the things you may want to consider is that this is an armed fighter. That implies that this person has had prior experience with swords due to the stance. If you want to achieve true realism, you may want to bulk up the warrior's body build. Other than that and the above mentioned hair issue, I see this as a fine work.
OH, I see what you're talking about. It's the pony tail in the back! It does give that illusion of a coned head. Hehe, thanks for pointing that out.
Response to: Requesting Critique
Posted January 2nd, 2013 in Art
At 1/2/13 02:55 AM, maficmelody wrote: Agreed. The momentum of the curves of the hair and the unique positioning of the sword, I believe, are creating the illusion of a coned head of a sort.
At 1/2/13 02:21 AM, hochpoch wrote: Something about the hair seems off to me.
So... narrow the face in a bit??
Response to: I'm Writing a Novel - Help!
Posted January 2nd, 2013 in Writing
This short story has chapters? Sounds more like a chap-book than short story. What exactly is your story going to be about? I've written several novels and short stories, and I've helped critique multiple manuscripts (throughout different websites and over time). So maybe I can help you.
Response to: Reference for artwork
Posted January 2nd, 2013 in Art
I've seen several body reference books in the stores. One type is published by Impact. I really like their materials because it comes with CD's to pull images onto your computer to work with. Maybe you could look into that.
Requesting Critique
Posted January 2nd, 2013 in Art
I am planning to submit this illustration to the "Spectrum" art contest, due January 25, 2013. I've been working on it over time and was interested in any suggestions that could make it better.
It's painted from scratch in Photoshop using several models, brushes and photo textures.
Response to: Looking for background artist
Posted January 2nd, 2013 in Art
What type of game are you designing?
