The Enchanted Cave 2
Delve into a strange cave with a seemingly endless supply of treasure, strategically choos
4.38 / 5.00 36,385 ViewsGhostbusters B.I.P.
COMPLETE edition of the interactive "choose next panel" comic
4.07 / 5.00 13,902 Views1 Forum Post by "boblikesoup"
Response to: Monolouge critique wanted
Posted February 25th, 2011 in Writing
Interesting...
but overly compact and a bit preachy, it feels like it could be made better by becoming more brief, but that is just my opinion.
