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At 6/8/12 10:18 AM, PatBest22 wrote:

Good luck! I hope it's nothing too serious. If it is, remember to crush it with all your might.

Thanks :D means a lot to me.

I'll be taking a short break from updating this thread. I have some personal problems that have, kind of, taken up all of my time as of late.

I'll still be checking up on newgrounds but my stays will be short.

Sorry guys, and wish me all the luck in the world.

At 6/6/12 02:39 PM, Flowers10 wrote: This thread lack nude men!
http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/flowers10/son-of-neptune

YES!
FINALLY A NAKKIES MAN!

Oh wow :O
That's awesome so far!
As for Criticism, the face seems to come out too much (place your finger/thumb over half of it, it could look amazing!)
The ..........Ahem, VAGINA! lololol.. sorry O_o *serious mode* looks too high up, if you think about it, the leg would most likely hide it from view.

At 6/5/12 09:15 PM, PatBest22 wrote:

Thanks!
I half expected someone to tell me the hands would look too small, I'll try and make them slightly larger to see the result.

As for the legs and waist, could you elaborate on what looks wrong to you? Right now the waist, where the upper body merges with the lower body, is what I'm having the most trouble with.

I'm the same, so it's hard to explain. It might actually just be the line coming down from the end of her rips to her stomach. I think it comes too far down.

The hair and the beard is good. The shading and light that is.
But the face is off. The nose is shaded wrong. Hands are different sizes (A mistake I often make myself). I recommend you should try drawing from references and develop your art skills a lot more rather than try and work on a unique style. If you practice enough (draw everyday, draw from memory, draw from life/photos) you will develop a style without even thinking about it. It shouldn't be forced. These things come with time, and every good artist has gone through it. Just remember that art is hard work.

But yes, try practicing anatomy, find a photo with a good pose, draw it, and post it here. People on the art forum are great at giving criticism and pointing out what you need to work on.

Good luck, and I look forward to seeing more work :)

At 6/5/12 08:08 PM, PatBest22 wrote: This is a WIP, to be part of a larger drawing. I'd really appreciate anyone pointing out flaws in the current anatomy before I put any more work into it, like put clothes, hair and color over it all and it becomes much more difficult to fix.

Fucking awesome xD
Only crit i can really give is the hands look a lil small. And the legs/waist. But it's a good style like that xD so it's not really crit haha.

I've had quite a few nasty comments about my entry :(.
I'm actually embarrassed I entered now.

At 6/4/12 06:39 PM, J-qb wrote:

At 6/4/12 06:34 PM, BeckyRawr wrote:

At 6/4/12 06:32 PM, Kinsei01 wrote: or.... not?

you need to post the url on it's own line

HERE IS MINE (HOPEFULLY)

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  Lyra by BeckyRawr

  This is my entry for the M&A contest. I have no chance in hell of winning but, It's made me draw something different so in a ...

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At 6/4/12 06:32 PM, Kinsei01 wrote:

At 6/4/12 06:30 PM, BeckyRawr wrote: Well....
Here it is http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/beckyrawr/lyra

or.... not?
maybe you have to be scouted?

I have been scouted :3

Well....
Here it is http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/beckyrawr/lyra

How do you post the picture up on the fourms? Like the previous posts? :(

At 6/4/12 04:42 PM, Ashman wrote:

At 6/4/12 04:36 PM, BeckyRawr wrote: I think the main point of this competition is for the anatomy, I don't think much focus will go into backgrounds and faces. :3

Also! I'M FINISHED! :O
I'll post it when it is time.

backgrounds no, faces, probably, its part of anatomy i guess, hence its easier to do a post where you can ignore the face

that said im ready to go

Well I've cropped half off my face, since Ornery said I could just leave the face out altogether if I wanted.
Hopefully it won't effect my chances too much :(

Sneak peek for my M&A Entry :33

At 6/4/12 04:24 PM, ZombieMonkey wrote: I'm in the middle of colouring my piece. Do I lose points if I can't finish my background in time?

I think the main point of this competition is for the anatomy, I don't think much focus will go into backgrounds and faces. :3

Also! I'M FINISHED! :O
I'll post it when it is time.

At 6/3/12 07:34 PM, Decky wrote:

At 6/3/12 07:19 PM, BeckyRawr wrote: As always I'm leaving stuff till the last minute. How long till people are flooding the portal?

It's tomorrow at 11pm (GMT)

Ah awesome! More time :33
Thanks

As always I'm leaving stuff till the last minute. How long till people are flooding the portal?

At 6/2/12 05:52 PM, blueridgeasset wrote: Like I said I wasn't insulting you. Art is tough, I know that, and I'm sorry if I sounded like an asshole. I give you credit for trying and what I said wasn't aimed directly at you. Anime Is full of sexuality, so I'm just saying I wish people that choose to make anime pics would go for something creative.

Yeah, sorry, I've had a bad day so I took offensive for no reason. I draw anime because that is what I started off drawing, It's a style i'm trying to grow out of but it's all I can really draw at the moment. I just need to start drawing things out of my comfort zone.

At 6/2/12 03:05 PM, blueridgeasset wrote:

:Most are just pics of scantily clad females and that to me is just pointless.

If you don't like my art. Don't look at it. I'm still trynig to create my own style. I'm just a beginner even though i've been drawing for 4 years. Art is hard work and I know that. But please don't insult me. I'm trying, give me credit for that at lest.

At 6/2/12 01:37 AM, Spac3case916 wrote:

At 6/1/12 09:14 AM, BeckyRawr wrote: Still working on it -.-

lookin good

be sure you dont miss the shading in the palm. Also i think the shading for the folds is off a bit. shouldn't the shading by closer to the actual crease?

I haven't started The rest yet. Just based coloured. I work top to bottom haha. :33

At 6/1/12 11:16 AM, Klik wrote:

At 5/31/12 05:39 PM, BeckyRawr wrote: Any requests that are Homestuck related ? :D

Only thing I can suggest is something with Kanaya, don't care what.

When I finish my new nepeta picture I will draw her :33
You can see my WIP's in my art thread (link in my sig)

Still working on it -.-

Lil work in progress.
Need to do line art again.

ALL HAIL CAPTAIN MORGANS!

I'm working on some fanart for Homestuck :33
Already done Nepeta here http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/beckyrawr/nepeta

Any requests that are Homestuck related ? :D

Random practise.

Yay! Thank you <3
I'm Still catching up with Homestuck so I'm trying not to read any spoilers :33

1. What is your favorite adventure? (inb4 this is a stupid and obvious question for everyone)
HOMESTUCK :D
2. Who is your favorite character?
Karkat
3. Who is your patron troll? ( If you have no idea)
Aradia
4. What is your favorite panel/quote?
EQUIUS: D --> Is this where we embrace jocularly, as if we are "bros"
EQUIUS: D --> I will be as gentle as possible
KARKAT: DON'T TOUCH ME.

5. and what is your favorite song from homestuck?
Showtime (Imp Strife Mix)

Thanks very much :33
Awesome sigs btw~ Is it possible I could get the same one with Nepeta? :33

:33 < *p33rs around the corner to investigate pawsible threats*

I like it :D
I'm thinking about making a game but I have no idea how to xD haha.