1,201 Forum Posts by "BanglaBoy96"
Saw it in cinema for 10 euro IN 3D!!!
3D Sucks, I never really understood it, It'd be freaky to watch a 3D Porno film where the guys jizz blows all over your face or something :L
It was a good movie, The fighting was pretty cool and Dogtanian was like a boss!
Watched a documentary on Pregnant women in Jail.
The story is...
If they commit a basic crime and is not punishable by death they are still sent to jail, However yes they are treated better BUT only until the child is born, the child is then given to a relative (who is able to breast feed if possible) and the mother deals out her sentence unless granted parole. Besides it's the mother's sentence not the childs right?
However if they're put on deathrow? I'm sure it goes that when the child has reached a certain age like 12-14 months the mother's sentence is carried out.
Which isn't exactly nice now is it? :(
All in all, getting knocked up doesn't make a crime less severe or should have any rules to help the mother only the developing child.
At 10/11/11 08:31 PM, TheGrim wrote: Haha, stupid OP can't spell "Total"
Could have easily been a typo and most likely is.
@ OP, True, I honestly don't care what people believe/ don't believe in, religion isn't something you go around telling people is right or wrong, It's up to the individual to make the choice of faith. Anyone else who thinks otherwise is stupid or just a plain dick... (Or most likely both)
I actually laughed my ass off at this passage of bullshit below... Not a fave of mine but if you have seen bigger bullshit than this then... I dunno...
A girl meets a boy on her yahoo messenger:
crazy1 86: hey baby!!!
... ... ...
h0tNsPiCy91: who is this???
...
crazy1 86: ur secret admirer!!!!!
h0tNsPiCy91: oh really.... quit lyin! who is this???
crazy1 86: i loved u the first time a stared in your eyes...
crazy1 86: i think about u everyday... you are my dream come true.
crazy1 86: we met once! i dont think u remember tho.
crazy1 86: i cut myself because the pain takes away my feelings of u.
crazy1 86: u will see me sometime tonight....
h0tNsPiCy91: ..WHO IS THIS!?!?!?
crazy1 86:dont worry.... ill take very good care of you...
crazy1 86 had signed off.
The girl was so scared she locked all her doors and windows. She made sure her room was secured. She wasn't sure if it was a joke or for real. She didn't know when he was going to come. The girl was so frightened she decided to sleep with her little sister. The girl dozed off quickly.
Then she heard a knock on the window. The girl slowly walked to the window. It started knocking louder. The girl looked through the windows and saw nothing... just some of the tree branches. The girl went back to bed with her sister. The bed was wet and had a pretty horrid smell. Maybe her sister wet the bed... the girl checked and found blood everywhere. The girl panicked. She didn't know what to do. She ran and hid in the closet in case the killer was there for her. While looking through the cracks of the closet the girl saw a shadow. It was dark, so she couldn't figure out who it was. She started to get more frightened. The shadow crept closer to the closet. The girl closed her eyes as if it was a dream. Then suddenly he opened the closet door and pulled her out.
Her parents found her dead the next morning. She was completely skinned and hanging in her sister's closet. The younger sister was also found skinned and dead.
PART 2...
Two years after the Smith sisters deaths, the parents had a baby boy. The girl's room became a guest room and the little sister's room where the murder took place became the baby's room. The baby grew up to be a successful kid.
One night he was on the computer and received an instant messege.
h0tNsPiCy91: Hey lil bro!!!
2seXay4u: Who is this?
h0tNsPiCy91: It's your big sis.
2seXay4u: I never had a sister. I'm an only child.
2seXay4u: This is some kinda joke, huh?
h0tNsPiCy91: Mom and dad never told you?
h0tNsPiCy91: I died 15 years ago with your other older sister.
h0tNsPiCy91: We were murdered in your room which was once my little sister's room. She was killed in bed when I was sleeping. I was killed in the closet and skinned to death.
2seXay4u: Quit lying. I never had a sister. If I did my parents would have told me. Whatever. Your stupid.
h0tNsPiCy91: You don't believe me? Well if you wanna look in your closet floor.
h0tNsPiCy91: I carved my name and the time and date I was being murdered. Then I carved my little sister's name.
h0tNsPiCy91: If you don't believe me little brother check the internet. Google on ''Smith sisters murdered anonymously''.
h0tNsPiCy91: I gtg little brother. I love you and mom and dad soo much. I can't believe they kept us a secret from you. They should burn in hell.
The boy checked the closet. He saw the carvings. Was it true? He surfed the internet and information was there about the anonymous murder in the house. The next morning the boy went downstairs. It was so quiet. Maybe his parents were sleeping. Hours later the boy found his parents in their closet skinned and hung. Then he found more carvings on the ground. They said ''I TOLD YOU I WASN'T LYING LITTLE BROTHER, I LOVED MOM AND DAD.... BUT THEY KEPT ME A SECRET. I CAN'T BELIEVE IT. WELL I'M FREE FROM THIS COLD WORLD, I WON'T HURT YOU LIKE I HURT THEM. I LOVE YOU!"
This is a death chain letter. If you don't repost this in the next hour, the parents will kill you at night. They will kill you!
DONT BELEIVE ME? LOOK IT UP IN GOOGLE
i hate these things. but i feel like i have to post
At 10/4/11 11:55 AM, MikeyS9607 wrote: I have a ribbon and a fab aura.
That's nice, I might make a new sig later
-_- just do one thing and rid your banner of the pony trash
Depends... If I was hungry I'd join in the fun and get my belleh full :3
I'm irish... but seeing how my Dad's from Bangladesh (and I like it way more than this freezing, scumbag infested, floating piece of shit) I got the "Bangla" part off that.
Boy... do I really need to explain?
and 96 is the year I was born (1996)
At 3/2/11 07:51 PM, BumFodder wrote: What are your opinions on citizens owning guns?
Everyone has the right to protect themselves but nobody has the right to take another human's life.
At 10/1/11 11:11 PM, MrPercie wrote: gaddafi was a tyrant, no doubt about that but we cant risk a extremist islamic goverment take over libya, we have enough trouble as it is with the arab world
Gaddafi was a fine president, The only problem was he didn't want to leave rule because he was there too long (I have to admit) but if he was doing the job right why leave?
I mean don't fix what ain't broken! but then you got these jumpy towel heads trying to start a rebellion in Libya destroying a beautiful country just to get a man who made a fine president out of power? I just cannot get over how the USA and EU Nations supported "rebels" who are clearly terrorists into leading a rebellion in their own country -_- (Answer= Oil, and lots of it)
Believing everything the mass media throws at you Is being "Media smart" and no matter if you had all the intellect in the world, being media smart really sums up in one word that you're stupid
(Not calling you stupid of course)
I wished I breathed out of my ass...
At 9/29/11 05:42 PM, mizzjuicyflava wrote: I have four users in mind.
I was one of those right? right... :(
*Checks calender
OMG HE'S RIGHT! D:
At 9/29/11 03:11 AM, InvasiveInsomniac wrote: sign up with the dodgiest username,
Ummm.....
Sometimes my nose begins to bleed in the shower, must be something to do with the steam, I dunno. I peed in the shower once cos the toilet was a further walk -_-
I like my girls the way I like my strawberries.
SWEET :3
At 9/27/11 05:26 PM, DeftAndEvil wrote: Then why are you posting it? >:O The whole point of the Writing Forum is so that writers can get together, share works, and get feedback (and talk about writing in general blah, blah, blah). If you are not going to take feedback into consideration, make it very clear, so we don't waste time reviewing it.
Sorry about that :P I wasn't expecting a detailed reviewer such as yourself to come along and do this, thanks for the time though :)
Hm. You shoulda made that more obvious. I would say don't give it to her, take your time to make it better so that the poem you give reflects the quality of the affection you feel. But....
Thanks! :D Thats all I needed to know :)
At 9/26/11 07:58 PM, DeftAndEvil wrote: Rhyming gives a euphonic ring to lines, but it should never take priority to flow, phrasing, or material. The best poets rhyme naturally, smoothly, and subtly.
Just as some of so called "GREATEST" poems ever written in history can have no rhyme whatsoever, seem bland to people, while others get enchanting by the flow of the poem, It really depends on HOW! you interpret the poem or stanzas in the poem.
Yes, it is cheesy. If you didn't see that, you are being oblivious, or this is the first two poems you've read. "Who thought love could be so sad?" I mean, I understand that he hasn't been writing long, but c'mon!
I don't see why you keep on simply picking on that one line and giving very little criticism on anything else, Ok! I'll give an example, only because something is "overused" a lot doesn't make it automatically cheesy, You seem to have a knowledge of literature yes? So you must know the poem "Shall I compare thee?" by William Shakespeare? The opening line "Shall I compare thee to a Summer's day?" Now to be fair I think nobody is not familiar with that quote, if so, shame on them.
So well known... yet now considered "cheesy" ? The man was seen as the father of English literature although I am not a fan of his plays his poems show absolute amazing use of the English language. Only because lines, phrases, quotes etc. Are used over and over does give them a sense of cheesyness (if that is a word?! :P ) but doesn't make William's poems cheesy am I right? Now I am not comparing my rushed works just to make my special girl smile but It's an example, an example doesn't have to be 100% related to the context of which is being pointed out
Age doesn't matter to me. If you are a toddler and writing poetry, then that is fantastic. However, I will never give anyone a sugarcoated and shallow review or feedback. This poetry can definitely be technically, as well as artistically, superior; and, that's what I want: writers to be writing at their potential. Pedanticism is bad. So is nihilism. The best way to write poetry is to understand it and read it all the time. Then you find something in life that inspires you to write--it's actually quite easy then.
Yeah I am not going to take up writing poems as some sort of hobby, I really just wanted to know would the poem be good enough to make her smile? What do you think? Would a teenage girl find it flattering? or just think "what am I reading? and dump it" :/ My classmates said it was sweet and I should give it to her and I did.
Ten minutes? Wow. That's a shame, really, but no excuse.
Yeah I know, Rome wasn't built in a day but I only write these to fill in the gaps of boredom otherwise I get bad ideas in my head
"An Idle mind the the Devil's Playground" so they say. Thank you anyway for such feedback anyway but I only wanted a simple "yeah it's good, give it to her" or a "SUCKS RIP IT, LEARN POETRY AND LEAVE HER ALONE"
Day by Day, Night by night,
I keep you close, I keep you tight,
Lips so perfect like sunkist fruit,
Eyes so pretty on a face so cute,
A voice so soft, a mind set free,
A mind... A soul... Which wants to flee,
We laugh, we cry, time after time,
Only love could be so fine,
Such innocence found in a child,
A mind so young but a heart so wild,
A speechless sight in awe and wonder,
My heart screams aloud like rolling thunder,
So funny yet shy you're still the same,
so calm, so sweet, so lovely and tame,
My heart beats fast from then I knew...
It longed for ages to be with you.
Same layout as before, took me around 5-7mins max. Let me know what you guys thinks good/bad :) thanks,
NOTE: I am not doing this to be a poet or anything just to show my GF I LOVE HER :3
At 9/26/11 06:10 PM, MikeyS9607 wrote: I saw this thread yesterday,
The poem sounds very DEEP
Yeah, I suck ass at poems.
This one is good though. YOU COULD BE THE NEXT SHAKESPEARE!
*I fixed your response :3
At 9/26/11 05:22 PM, DeftAndEvil wrote: First of all, love poems are extremely banal. It's difficult writing one that sets it apart from the rest.
I'm no expert on love poems trust me, It's fine what you think of them really I don't mind, I am only 15 right? besides I guess I enjoy it :)
Not each line has to rhyme.
I love rhyming poems because they just seem easier to read right? :D Besides they usually sound nicer read aloud correct?
The second poem is a bit more somber, but suffers from the same problems. You are trying too hard to rhyme. Not rhyming is sometimes the better choice, because at least the lines flow freely (usually). For example, lines 3-4 and 7-8 are really awkward to read.
Yeah but you need to read them in a certain way to capture the tone I was trying to give out, It's fine, poems are how the reader feels about them anyway :)
Sorry to rip into your poems, but I've seen a million of these.
No problem but they ain't terrible right? I mean they're not great but If you were a girl and you got these you'd be flattered somewhat right?
thanks I'll post more later (Just don't want to double post)
At 9/25/11 02:39 PM, fusioner wrote: Bro, its great! and honestly girls love any poem/note/song written about them no mater how cheesy. Trust me. If a girl laughs in your face after you hand her something you spent your time and emotion on than they're not worth that poem at all.
I used to wrote poems for another girl until I realised she was just giving them to her guy friend so he could use them on his girl or just ripping them up when i wasn't looking... Hurts...
Here's a poem I actually wrote to her when I thought I upset her...
My face is grim, My head sank down,
Like a King who has lost his crown,
Such utter shame was brought on me,
I'd beg for mercy on one knee,
A grin as wicked as a demon's face,
I am nothing now, with such disgrace,
So many hearts you had to break,
But with it now my soul you take,
For I am nothing without this heart,
This feeling inside tears me apart,
A midnight slumber, A morning's rest,
I still can't take it off my chest,
A plague of guilt so strong so bad,
Who thought love could be so sad?
What I am still trying to say...
I still love you, day... by day...
Well I wrote this poem for my GF, I am afraid to send it to her cos I think it sucks, I showed some friends and they thought it was the cutest thing they ever read -_- It's pretty much describing her appearance but it's kinda sweet but cheesy :/
What do you guys think?
Eyes like autumn, so brightly brown,
Picks me up when I am feeling down,
such hazel sparkles in the trees,
such wilted leaves caressed by a breeze,
Hair so bright it lights my world,
Such radiance, such beauty,so straight not curled,
Like an afternoon sunset such a beautiful sight,
Makes me breathless within it's might,
A face so perfect it makes me say...
"I remember why I got up today"
All these words I say to you,
Is simply my way of saying I love you.
A heart so gentle a smile so sweet,
Such a sweet laugh I skip a heart beat,
Such inner beauty is beyond seeing,
amongst any other human being,
My bitch Bella was gone into heat a month ago, my job for the last few weeks of the holidays was to stop her from getting humped by Bradley (A male goldie like herself)
I am a deadly fast runner but after losing sight of Bella I ran up a small country road to find them Shagging in a pond -_-
"HOLY SHIT"
At 9/21/11 01:38 PM, MushookieMan wrote: So this homeless man was looking at me like he wanted some cash or something, right? Well I turn around and do a roundhouse kick to his face and knock him out in one move! Like a boss.
You sound like an asshole
I wouldn't lay a finger on one of them. I'd keep the world in a better shape it is now for sure and let God decide what happens to the trouble makers
Before I clicked the link I knew he was gonna be black, not being racist but it's a typical thing in the US to execute a innocent black man, I watched loads of programmes and docs. on it.
I also saw a story about a white 50 yr old paedophile who pulled down his pants in a neighbourhood full of children playing basket ball, a Neighbour went out and gave out to the man to put his pants back on, When the man retrieved his pants from the van he took out a rifle and shot the 19yr old man, he stubled into his garage as his mom was crying and calling 911. The man came into the garage and the mom begged not to kill her son. the bastard shot him anyway (I got really upset over this) the mom was crying (I got pissed off watching it) the man got arrested and pretty much got 18 months for it.
I saw it on "Unsolved Mysteries" and I felt like tracking down the cunt and murdering him myself.
Horrible world we live in
At 9/21/11 07:40 AM, Cootie wrote: What the fuck is this shit? This new layout blows ass.
How in the fuck do I just look at status updates on their own separate page with no photos and shit added? I used to be able to just click a "status updates" button but now I don't see it.
I completely agree -_-
The voting system is slightly broken but there is nothing we can do about that.
however reviews are fine, I see nothing wrong with that system
(although deleting your own reviews would be handy)
At 9/18/11 10:46 AM, MrPercie wrote: you should convert to islam
thatll show her
Fun fact, most people who lose faith in Christianity and search for a new religion 90% of the time they covert to islam, If you actually get to know the religion it's pretty interesting and as a plus side actually makes some sense.
After all these years of hearing "Jesus is the son of God" and next minute he is our lord, our savior! Our god?! I mean does that mean he is his own dad? (doubt it) or what is with that really?
No offence to catholics of course, A lot of my relatives are catholic too, I am just pointing out what I thought needed saying :/ So REMEMBER NO OFFENCE
