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Response to: help me name it is all i can say. Posted October 22nd, 2011 in Writing

any tips to help to make it better or for future refrence's for another would help lots yall.

help me name it is all i can say. Posted October 21st, 2011 in Writing

Ight lets go.
Back to the same show its getin fuckin old.
It's goin to be hard to let go.
ohh no.

I'll always remember what i was told.
said you'd never lieve me.
But now I cant believe.
because there ya go out the door.
fall to my knees and hit the floor.

you said I was your one.
and now your all done.
but I dont understand.
thought you wanted me to yo man.

standin here tryin to figure out why.
to turn time just to rewind.
help it feels like im diein.
tell the truth was ya liein.

the words from yo lips had me think you was mine.
I was high flyin never thought about cryin.
thinkin I was always on yo mind.
but I'm always blind.

could never open up my eyes.
I just hope you realize.
No matter how time goes bye.
That I'll love you to the end.
even if ya jus wanna be friends.
You'll always hold my heart in yo hands.

Response to: my new pome i'd like to share Posted January 26th, 2011 in Writing

**I mean poem**

my new pome i'd like to share Posted January 26th, 2011 in Writing

"If you only knew and now you do"
By: John

If you only knew how I felt maybe things would be simpler
That change is best some people may guess.
Promises are meant to be broken so I'm told,
even though I didn't brake not a one on my soul.

If only you knew how I loved you and still do.
That I worry if your change was for the good or worst.
How I want the old days back,
to feel those true feelings once again.

True friends are there till the end,
that I could be.
I wounder if I should stay with you,
or just be friends before we can't stand it.

If you only knew why I can't sleep at anymore.
That I'm afraid to lose you even as the friend you could be.
I wounder why you don't look at me anymore,
when I talk to you it makes me think if you really care.

I know you wounder whats on my mind.
Now you know, so what can we do?
Do you just wanna be friends,
or much more.
A couple takes two, and with that I need help
from you.
Just always know I'll always love you.

Response to: "Searching for my Vamperis Posted January 27th, 2010 in Writing

thank you i'm not all to good in spelling and grammer though thats on thing my teachers could never
tech me i am ashamed to say

"Searching for my Vamperis Posted January 27th, 2010 in Writing

Darkness as the full moon rises
with bloody cries romeing into the night as people die
my puls slowens as my heart races
eyes turing black lake the world around me

Callin up my friends to find what it's about
they look at me with fear in their eyes
I ask whats the matter
they dont even try to hide it

I don't belive it but it's the bitter truth
even so just cause i'm not human doesn't make me a demon
and yet its the holy half blood of the wolf in me they see

I look at the moon and feel a rage burning with in me
its just anger for the passed wars in my life
im just a holy hybrid of a wolf and people
But how can this be?

To fight is my only reason to be
I take my blade and travel the night
they see me comeing and run away
yet my blade is true but only because of you

I said i'd kill for you my holy vamperis lady of my dreams
the one i lone for so my blade goes deep
I've killed so many and yet we can not be
so i stain in blood alleys and road ways

How many more lives will i have to take
before I can take you as my bride to be
ten more bodies hit the ground
and still your not to be found
so I travile to the next town
in search of my vamperis
huming to myself how many more lives will I have to take

Response to: my pome Posted January 26th, 2010 in Writing

lol yeah im not really good with grammer and i will work on it.
thank you for the help i'll write some more tmr, but i gotta go to bed i've got school tmr i'm still
in (high school)..... lol 11th grade you've helped me alot thank you and im gonna get better i'll be on tmr
round 4 or 5 pm

Response to: my pome Posted January 26th, 2010 in Writing

i tried to put it in stanza form but it didnt work well there suposed to be like 6

enter things lol

Response to: my pome Posted January 26th, 2010 in Writing

"Your My World"

You my world your my every thing
i'm so happy your in my life
yet some times i wke up crying because i miss you
Oh baby i need you.

I want to be in your life forever
to hold you in my arms every night
and to kiss you evry morning of my life
baby your my every thing.

I love you with all my heart
and i'll be doing my part
to keep you here beside me
baby your my wold.

Baby I love you, I need you, I want you
I want to be with you every day till the end of time
you mean every thing to me
and your the only one for me
baby your my life.

And baby when we get to gether
i'm gonna put my arms around you
and hold you close to my heart
then im going to kiss your sweet lips
then touch you with my finger tips
baby you my world.

You feel that space in my heart
your my love and the only one for me
I thank god were together
and the way you are with me
baby your my every thing my life my world
ohhhh yes my world

Response to: my pome Posted January 26th, 2010 in Writing

lol ok

Response to: my pome Posted January 26th, 2010 in Writing

thank you for the tips man i'll work on it

Response to: my pome Posted January 26th, 2010 in Writing

"A Bad Night"

Blood wrenched and crying I can't help but feel

that im not dieing some say i cut myself

to wach it bleed but really it eases the pain

My blood gives way to tears for the pain

is so hard to bare, another cut and still im not there

I wounder if I die would anyone greve over me or

evern be sad would they cry and be lonley and

miss me very bad or would they be happy and glad

would they have more fun would any thing be

diffrent or would it all stay the same

Openly I bleed tears rolling down my face

I guess it was never ment to be I love her

but all we are is friends I'm happy for her

Though my frined said he was sorry and

thats alright with me but why do I feel

so sad I just have this pain in my heart

Another cut and more blood is speeled I wipe

my eyes and cover my head thinking its just

a dream I light up two more cigarets

to stop my shakeing hands but something doesn't

feel right I'm no were near seeing the light

and Death dosen't seem to come he just

seems to be afright

My friends want to help as we talk i try not

to cry I give no hint of killing myself this night

she tells me its all true over the chat screen

I'm already crying so all i can do is another cut

she dosen't feel my pain in the words. I say

dose she realy or did she even try

I cant help but think I want to die

she said she loved me but was that a lie?

I guess I'll never know in my life

she says i might still have a chance but

only the timeless futrur will tell

I'm stell hopeinig she would be mine

but i can just keep dreaming

so I cut myself one more time I leve the room

get something to drink come back

I dont grow faint i dont even fall

I cut myself one last time hateing my life

just wanting to end it all

but shes lucky i love her or els I would go

I tell god i love her wipe off the blood and

clear and close my eyes tell him one more time then I say good night

Response to: My newist poem "Give Me" Posted January 26th, 2010 in Writing

thank you i'm not good at writing poems all that much but it does help me express my feelings

Response to: My newist poem "Give Me" Posted January 26th, 2010 in Writing

it dont bother me that you think its begnnerish people use diff schemes like their diff opiouns like yous
im just writein the way i feel about my girl

My newist poem "Give Me" Posted January 26th, 2010 in Writing

"Give me"

give me your heart

give me you laughter

give me happy ending with a ever after

give me a smile that makes me go wild

give me your love and i'll give you my heart

give me a hug and let me love you even more

give me the world so i can give you the stars

give me the sign that you'll always be mine

give me forever to make you happy

give me a no if i have to go

give me your hand and say its ok when i don't get to see you

but most of all give me you trust so that

i could never leave and forever i could say

Response to: my pome Posted January 26th, 2010 in Writing

why think you i got more i'm thinkin about posting to see if any body likes or not "lol"

Response to: my pome Posted January 26th, 2010 in Writing

poem* sorry i was typing faster then i was thinkin

my pome Posted January 26th, 2010 in Writing

We say"

you say your scary but I say your beautiful

you say your not pretty but I say you are

you say you love me and I say I love you more

you say you'll never leave me and I pray you don't

I say I want to hold you and you say that sounds great

I say I miss you and you say you do too

I say I want you forever and you say I probably will

I say I want your bell amd you i'll give it to you

you say your cold and I say i'll warm you

I say im going to get you a star pillow and you say you'll like
that

and would sleep with it every night

you say your lonely and I say I want to be there

I say i'll draw you a picture and you say what you want

you say you love stars and I say I want to give them to you

I say i want to give you the world and you say that sounds nice