i seee a couple of the things u mentioned like the chest and the bum/ thigh being to small n such but alot of others not really like the arm being double jointed infact im holding my arm like that right now its easy anyone can n the body being riped apart i hardly see why i need to confine myself to what most people do it was my choice as an artist to have one singularly visible large tear in the body i relize ur just trying to critique but at the same time a proper critque is not a list of mistakes or things u dont like its a few comments on what you feel is lacking or needs work a few comments on what you like and feel were well done and then a over all opinion on the content of the piece and how u feel about it
not trying to be a ass just saying thx 4 the comment ^^