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At 2/21/10 02:29 PM, Luxembourg wrote: Now that you've explained it, I can make out the hand reaching for the mask, and it actually looks pretty good. The hand's fingers and armor look good. The problem, though, is that it isn't very clear and, without an explanation, how are people going to make it out? Maybe it would be more clear if you put more space between the hand and the mask, instead of having the hand, with gray fingers, over the mask, which has a gray area as well.

You give a really good point, the problem for me though that i can't really pull that space between the hand and mask but i thinking of maybe giving the hand color being darker but not too dark or else the background sketch won't be see-able at all. For the explanation problem maybe this would help, Fun Fact #4: "That's a hand and that's a mask, make out of the picture or else you won't get the picture". And that is all i could figure out so far.

At 2/21/10 12:54 PM, zooominsh wrote: My review about some drawings.

I like both of your drawings.
But where is the background of paper wich were given in this collab.

And second drawing is so similar to Ultrapitchfork drawing.
I think your braisn saved the information of that drawing and you made something similar.
Or you just made copy :D

Luxembourg - Nice, but it looks really simple, maybe you can add something more.

lukashaftstorm- awseome body and style is good too.
I like it, but maybe those texts next to him could be something more.
I dunno, like this, it is good too.

The Autocrat- Ok idea is good , but maybe you can draw with one line, clean your drawing !

EF-x Awesome, similar but looks good. It have everything what it needs.
And I like that all paper is blue, and this art work really shows atmosphere.

heavyrain- Nice style you have and I think it should be accepted.

ZaneZansorrow- Sry dude, I think you have tried to make some kind a surrealistic drawing or just some kind a good looking object, but in my opinion it looks strange.
sry.

Good luck team.

Lol y u saying sry for? I understand that probably alot of people think it's strange or really that they can't tell what it is but hey, i set up a simple comparison of the picture. Any who let's just say that thing on the top is a hand and it's leaning to grab the mask (well half of it, my mask designs are pretty different but that's how i attended it to be) and the background of the faded lines of the character is what i hoping for people to use to hope understand the picture. It's kinda hard to see with the jpg picture but the png link should help a little, if not here a sketch of the original picture (hoping to later color it and give it a background).

At 2/20/10 10:26 PM, flamefingers wrote: Im so psyched!!! gonna see what i can come up with during my boring classes on monday :)
class doodles always turn up to be so awesome :P

true that

At 2/20/10 09:59 PM, Luxembourg wrote: I've felt pretty confident about my previous three submissions, but this one, I'd like some thoughts on. Is it too simple? Too happy? Should I add more?
Count it as WIP; this isn't my final fourth submission.

I'll like to call that emo but a more jolly version lol

At 2/20/10 09:34 PM, WetWOLF11 wrote: Im gunna join.. xD

the more the merrier

heh heh, it glows...well that's a real nice understanding how shading goes, i should draw more pictures based on that, a light source to give off a good spot to shade

At 2/20/10 04:28 AM, TheAutocrat wrote: Heres another one of mine.
Momentarily Lost in Space.

I was listening to that song while drawing.. don't know if it'll be good enough but i plan on doing more anyway.

I wonder what sort of effects you'll put on those lines that are coming out of the mouth.....dark matter, vomit, or.......rainbows. For a moment there i thought that hand on his chest was the little girl's but it's just his right hand lol.

At 2/20/10 02:55 PM, lukashafstrom wrote: hey just wanted some feedback on a piece im thinking about submitting to the collab, well here it is

That art reminds me of salad fingers but instead of a rusty spoon, it's kittens......being written everywhere on the note

Title: Picking Up The Mask

PNG link is here

What else do I even have to say about this drawing other than the fact that I use one of my scanned sketch as part of the notepad background.

At 2/19/10 01:09 AM, JKAmovies wrote:
NOTE: DO NOT submit pieces to the Art portal until at least the collab has started and is submitted.
NOTE2: People are starting to NOT name their submissions correctly, make sure to name your piece NDC_"YOUR-USERNAME".png.
NOTE3: Some people are also forgetting to fill out a fun fact, if you do not write one for yourself, I am ok with that as I can do one for you. . .

Like this? NDC_"ZaneZansorrow".png btw fun fact#3: I ate at least 9 bags of instant noodles a day.

Title: Noodles

Awww CRAP!!!.....I spilled my noodles :P

Soooooo.....is this a post for people to show off their chinese dragon or for u to show off ur chinese dragon?

jagundodo got my vote

BTW Bullonier, when i saw that art i thought u mis-fire on ur paint bucket n left big gap on that proportion problem u got there.

At 2/15/10 05:10 PM, Captain-Ben wrote: eewgames: no
eewgames: no
eewgames: no
eewgames: no
eewgames: no
eewgames: no

Looks like that's all for now.

lol eewgames went passed 5 pieces XD

At 2/15/10 01:35 PM, Bullonier wrote: no one can help me? D=
i'm still missing where the dump thing is, please look in my profile and see some drawings I did...since its so selective, I not going to bother to try if i'm not that good. xP

Well i think it's good, maybe simple but good, all u gotta do now is to put it in the notepad backgrounds that the first page links show and post it here for it to be judge by JKAmovie and Captain Ben. Go to "my account" on the top right of ur screen, the dumping grounds should be on the left column saying free file upload.

Yay chibi ^,^d

At 2/13/10 06:52 PM, JKAmovies wrote: @TieSeiT: I like the overall design, but the tentacles look a little off. Some are larger than others and some extend thicker and smaller so it makes it look a little weird.

@ZaneZansorrow: I made a comment on your piece some pages ago, it didn't make it in, sorry.

darn, well then time to try art try no.3 then

At 2/13/10 08:04 AM, JKAmovies wrote: @Luxembourg: Looks cool man, I don't see much problems with it, the background is a little simple but I don't really give a damn about that. Good job.

@Posca: I've accepted your pixel piece, but not the flying one.

looking good so far. Can't wait to see what you add to it.

yo JKA, is my 2nd piece in pg.5 passable or does it need work?

I keep forgetting to use this lol

Hmmm, im craving boom ba wai, it just tasty u know what i mean, o n i probably should figure out what else to add along on this pic.

At 2/11/10 01:08 AM, JKAmovies wrote:

At 2/10/10 07:49 PM, Artist-Lost wrote:

@ZaneZansorrow: This concept is a little simple, the drawing is kinda sub-par, that doesn't mean it's bad though. I'm just looking for a little more than this.

K, well then attempt no.2 then

I'm planning to fix up the quality on this.

O yea, i forgot about using this,

At 2/10/10 09:06 PM, Captain-Ben wrote:

ZaneZansorrow: You have to make your piece on one of the 3 preset backgrounds supplied in the first post, or on a piece on lined paper that is the same size as the 3 preset backgrounds.

k then i've just done what i can do so far, any advice?

At 2/10/10 05:26 PM, ZaneZansorrow wrote: Yo N Peace
by Joshua Nguyen
17 year old
From Georgia
I like to say yo and I'm as peaceful as peace can come and go.

I'm gonna try to fit this pic into one of the backgrounds 4 the collab.

plus give it darker lines and color

Yo N Peace
by Joshua Nguyen
17 year old
From Georgia
I like to say yo and I'm as peaceful as peace can come and go.

I'm gonna try to fit this pic into one of the backgrounds 4 the collab.

Nice, can i join cause im planning to make myself a nice original piece.

At 2/3/10 01:51 AM, PrinceFlea wrote:

At 2/2/10 10:55 PM, ZaneZansorrow wrote: glover for the n64 was my fave

Never had the game but It seemed good enough to play

it was a fun game when i was a kid, unfortunately i was stuck facing the Frankenstein lol.

At 2/5/10 11:22 PM, faggotss wrote:

At 2/5/10 11:15 PM, ZaneZansorrow wrote:

At 2/5/10 11:10 PM, faggotss wrote:

At 2/5/10 10:51 PM, ZaneZansorrow wrote: try this

Whoa This looks like a very interesting , The Detailing on that does not look all that busy and yet it's still have complex design behind. You've got the time to wait for a rendition?

srry dude but i really dont have a scanner n sooo yea, i scan my pics at school. U could tell the difference between my scan pics n painted pics on my arts.

That's fine I don't exactly remember mentioning about how light the lineart appeared to be but Does your school have like an Hewlettes Packerd all in one's?

idk, i cant be sure exactly but i do know i scan the pics in the tech lab

The painted ones which you've done of the computer right.

yup

What program do you usually scan you're pictures on at school?

i think it was called hp 4100 scanner or something like that

At 2/5/10 11:10 PM, faggotss wrote:

At 2/5/10 10:51 PM, ZaneZansorrow wrote: try this

Whoa This looks like a very interesting , The Detailing on that does not look all that busy and yet it's still have complex design behind. You've got the time to wait for a rendition?

srry dude but i really dont have a scanner n sooo yea, i scan my pics at school. U could tell the difference between my scan pics n painted pics on my arts.